考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作公開(kāi)課一等獎(jiǎng)?wù)n件省賽課獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)n件

possibleBelikelyto;beaptto;chancesarethatBECAUSEThanksto;Owingto,inthat;BeattributedtoveryExtremely;Highly;dramaticallyenormouslyIMPORTANTcritical;essential;imperative;crucial…詞匯多樣性第1頁(yè)More…think

----believe,argue,claim,insist,maintain,assert,beconvinced,contendharbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,Frommyownperspective,It’suniversallyacknowledgedthat,…

Itcanneverbedenied,…

Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…第2頁(yè)disagree----frownon,disapproveof,objecttosolve----tackle,resolve,address,copewithdevelop----foster,cultivate,nurtureadvantage----merit,privilege,blessingdisadvantage----demerit,defect第3頁(yè)reason----contributeto,resultin,ascribe…to..,attribute…to…,derivefrom..,

so----thus,therefore,asaresult,asaconsequence,consequently,notsurprisingly第4頁(yè)show----depict,describe,reveal,demonstrateGood----fantastic,adorable,amazing,incredible,magnificent,fascinatingspectacular,although----inspiteof,regardlessof,第5頁(yè)Like---beinterestedin,sthappealstosb.,sthexertanfascinationonsb.Payattentionto---captureone’sattentionRemember---bearinmindRich---financiallywell-off第6頁(yè)命題規(guī)律二、話題規(guī)律文化：考過(guò)5次

1、流行文化：考過(guò)3次——93年（電視廣告）、23年（偶像崇敬）、23年（網(wǎng)絡(luò)）

2、文化交流與融合：考過(guò)2次——23年（美國(guó)小女孩穿中國(guó)服裝）、23年（文化火鍋）

青年面向社會(huì)：考過(guò)4次23年（溫室花朵經(jīng)不起風(fēng)雨）、23年（終點(diǎn)又是新起點(diǎn)）、23年（自信）、23年（團(tuán)結(jié)合作）第7頁(yè)兩代關(guān)系：考過(guò)3次92年（代溝問(wèn)題）、23年（溫室花朵經(jīng)不起風(fēng)雨）、23年（養(yǎng)老足球賽）

愛(ài)心：考過(guò)3次95年（希望工程）、23年（希望是一盞燈）、23年小作文（給希望工程寫(xiě)信祈求捐款）

環(huán)境：考過(guò)3次99年圖表作文（保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物）、2023年圖畫(huà)作文（保護(hù)海洋資源）、23年小作文（限制使用塑料袋）健康：考過(guò)2次96年提綱作文（健康）、97年圖表作文（吸煙）命題規(guī)律第8頁(yè)命題規(guī)律規(guī)律總結(jié)：命題側(cè)重于對(duì)青年人價(jià)值觀塑造考題集中于抽象話題貼近日常生活,不會(huì)包括政治或敏感話題第9頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文3句話引出圖畫(huà)（1句）描述圖畫(huà)（1句）小結(jié)（1句）圖畫(huà)出現(xiàn)很自然，不突然盡管圖畫(huà)很簡(jiǎn)單，但其寓意卻是非常深?yuàn)W第一段圖畫(huà)描述段第10頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文引出圖畫(huà)（1句）1.近來(lái)有一場(chǎng)有關(guān)一張圖畫(huà)討論2.當(dāng)談到人們茶余飯后話題，就（無(wú)疑）是

那張圖畫(huà)了3.伴隨時(shí)間流逝，一張有趣圖畫(huà)始終引發(fā)

著各方人士廣泛關(guān)注——直接引出——第11頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文1.伴隨社會(huì)發(fā)展和人們生活變化，…….

問(wèn)題已日益顯著——間接引出——Subsequenttosocialdevelopmentandchangesofpeople’slives,theissueof…….hasincreasinglybecomeobvious.第12頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文自從改革開(kāi)放三十年間，各個(gè)方面都發(fā)生了重大變化，尤其是……..問(wèn)題

Thepastthreedecadeshaswitnessedenormouschangesinvariousaspectssincereformandopeningup,especiallytheissueof…….第13頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文描述圖畫(huà)（1句）正如圖畫(huà)所描述，在(…..)中有……,and它……周?chē)小?.倒裝句(所有倒裝)定語(yǔ)從句伴隨狀語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)：一般目前時(shí)或者目前進(jìn)行時(shí)第14頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023第15頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文AnAmericangirlintraditionalChinesecostume(服裝)2023第16頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023第17頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023第18頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023第19頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023注意：當(dāng)兩副圖畫(huà)時(shí)每一副圖畫(huà)都要描述到

不能將兩幅圖畫(huà)概括描述第20頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023圖一：把崇敬寫(xiě)在臉上圖二：花300元做個(gè)"小貝"頭注：Beckham（貝克漢姆）：英國(guó)足球明星第21頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文第一段3句話引出圖畫(huà)（1句）描述圖畫(huà)（1-2句）小結(jié)（1句）小結(jié)（1句）：承上啟下1.盡管圖畫(huà)很簡(jiǎn)單，但其寓意卻是非常深?yuàn)W.2.作者真實(shí)目標(biāo)不是圖畫(huà)本身，而是要引導(dǎo)我們?nèi)ヌ角笤趫D畫(huà)背后更深刻寓意.第22頁(yè)文化“火鍋”，既美味又營(yíng)養(yǎng)2023圖畫(huà)作文第23頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文

1Withthepassageoftime,aninterestingpicturehasbeenarousingtheattentionofpeoplefromallwalksoflife.2Asisvividlyandadequatelyrevealedinthedrawing,onthegroundstandsahugehotpotwhichcontainsvariousaspectsofChineseandforeigncultures.3Simpleasthedrawingis,itsintendedmeaningisnothingbutsignificantandenlightening.3句話，60

words第24頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023第25頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文

1Whenitcomestopeople’sconcernatleisuretime,itisnothingbutaninterestingpictureinanewspaper.2Asisvividlyandadequatelyrevealedinthecartoon,inseparatedroomssitawidevarietyofindividualswhoaresurfingontheInternet.3Simpleasthedrawingis,itssymbolicimplicationsturnouttobehighlyprofoundandthought-provoking.3句話，59

words第26頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文第27頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Withsocialdevelopmentandchangesofpeople’slives,theissueofhealthhasincreasinglybecomeobviousandsignificant.Asisvividlyandadequatelydepictedinthecartoon,onthestreethappilyrunsayoungmanwhoisdoingexercises,withhisdogjoggingnexttohim.Plainasthepictureis,itssymbolicimplicationsturnouttobefar-reachingandenlightening.3句話，63

words第28頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023年——合作第29頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Currently,therehasbeenanextendedandenthusiasticdisputeatanInternetforumwhichcentersonapicture.Asisvividlyandadequatelydepictedinthedrawing,onawindingpathruntwohandicappedyoungmenwhobindtheirlamelegstogethertosupporteachother,withtheircrutchesleftbehind.Whilethecartoonisplain,itssymbolicconnotationsturnouttobeexceedinglyprofoundandthought-provoking.第30頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文圖一：拼命學(xué)英語(yǔ)圖二：漢語(yǔ)錯(cuò)別字第31頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Currently,therehasbeenanextendedandenthusiasticdiscussiononanInternetforumwhichcentersaroundtwointerestingpictures.Asisvividlyandsufficientlydepictedinthecartoons,inaclassroomsitsayounggirlwhostudiesEnglishcrazilyalldaylongandayoungboyliesaroundbooksthinkingofmanywrongChinesecharacters.Simpleasthedrawingsare,theirsymbolicimplicationsareprofoundandthought-provoking.3句話，67

words第32頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文三段(12句)第一段—描述圖畫(huà)第二段—why?好/不好第三段—how?提倡/約束引出圖畫(huà)1描述圖畫(huà)1-2

小結(jié)1指出寓意1

論證寓意3小結(jié)1承上啟下1提議措施2升華結(jié)尾1圖畫(huà)描述段寓意分析段提議措施段段落模塊-框架第33頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文第二段5句話指出寓意（1句）implicationsinlife寓意分析（3句）好/不好小結(jié)（1句）總結(jié)分析，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)調(diào)寓意分析段第34頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文指出寓意（1句）看到這幅精心制作圖畫(huà)，我們不禁想到現(xiàn)實(shí)中一種主要問(wèn)題通過(guò)畫(huà)這幅圖畫(huà)，作者試圖提醒我們現(xiàn)實(shí)中一種主要問(wèn)題這幅圖畫(huà)讓我們想到現(xiàn)實(shí)中一種主要問(wèn)題

提醒我們第35頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文寓意論證（3句）正面論述：好/不好（1句）支持上述論點(diǎn)：舉例論證

（1句）

事實(shí)論證

因果論證背面論證：（1句）第36頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文正面論述（1句）：好/不好自信能夠有助于我們共同努力、取得進(jìn)步Cofidencecancontributeto

ourconcertedeffortsandgreatprogress.論證主體積極動(dòng)詞影響賓語(yǔ)①掌握兩類動(dòng)詞：有助于

不利于②幾類固定方面第37頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文幾類固定方面(萬(wàn)能思緒)：社會(huì)：經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展和繁華、文化前進(jìn)、文明8提升、社會(huì)形象、社會(huì)進(jìn)步、社會(huì)

友好、社會(huì)穩(wěn)定、社會(huì)風(fēng)氣個(gè)人：個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)、個(gè)人形象和名譽(yù)、素質(zhì)7提升、成績(jī)?nèi)〉谩⒄_人生觀和

價(jià)值觀、良好生活前景、良好意志第38頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文寓意論證（3句）正面論述：好/不好（1句）支持上述論點(diǎn)：舉例論證

（1句）

事實(shí)論證

因果論證背面論證：（1句）第39頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Ontheonehand,cooperationisabletogiveincentivetoagoodsocialethosandgreaterachievements.IcanthinkofnobetterexamplesofthispointthanthefactthateveryoneworkedtogethertomakeBeijingOlympicGamessuccessfullastyear.Ontheotherhand,thosewhofailtohelpeachothersaredoomedtobeinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.寓意論證第40頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文圖一：把崇敬寫(xiě)在臉上圖二：花300元做個(gè)"小貝"頭注：Beckham（貝克漢姆）：英國(guó)足球明星2023第41頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Ontheonehand,toadmireastarisabletointerferewithagoodsocialethosandpersonalgrowth.Noonecandenythefactthatcrazinessaboutafamouspersonmaydoharmtothedevelopmentofrightoutlookonlifeandworld.Ontheotherhand,ifyoungstersallpursuedcelebritiesthroughoutthesociety,wewouldnotmakeoneachievementafteranother.寓意論證第42頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023第43頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Ontheonehand,confidenceiscapableofboostingandcontributingtopersonalgrowthandsocialimage.Oneofmyclassmates,forexample,believeshimselfgreatly,andhehasenoughcouragetoovercomeanything.Ontheotherhand,thosewhoarenotconfidentenougharedoomedtobeinanawkwardsituationindealingwiththeworld.寓意論證第44頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023第45頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Ontheonehand,over-protectionisabletohamperandundermineeconomicdevelopmentandprosperityandpersonalgrowth.Icanthinkofnobetterexamplesthanthefactthatchildrenarespoiledbytheirparentsandcannotdoanythingthemselves.Ontheotherhand,thosewholiveunderover-caringaredoomedtobeleftinanawkwardsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.寓意論證第46頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文雙重方面寓意論證（3句）論述好一面支持上述論點(diǎn)：舉例論證

（1句）

事實(shí)論證

因果論證論述不好一面注意：論述好一面和不好一面中間要加上“一方面、另一方面”連接第47頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023年——網(wǎng)絡(luò)“近”與“遠(yuǎn)”第48頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Ontheonehand,Internetisabletopromoteandgiveimpulsetointerpersonalcommunicationandinformationsharing.IcanthinkofnobetterexamplesofthispointthanthefactthatwecantalkonlinebyMSNorQQeventhoughwearethousandsofmilesaway.Ontheotherhand,addictiontoInternetmayinterferewithone’spersonalgrowthandmakehimdistantfromothers.寓意論證第49頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文困難使人強(qiáng)亦會(huì)使人弱第50頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Ontheonehand,difficultiesareabletoboostandgiveincentivetoone’spersonalgrowthandstrongresolution.Themassiveearthquakelastyear,forinstance,motivatedallChinesepeopletobecomemuchstrongerandbraver.Ontheotherhand,hardshipsmayjeopardizeandspoilone’scourageandoutlookonlifeandworld.寓意論證第51頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文5句話指出寓意（1句）implicationsinlife寓意分析（3句）好/不好小結(jié)（1句）總結(jié)分析，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)調(diào)小結(jié)（1句）看過(guò)上面分析，我們還能夠忽視……主要性/危害嗎？第52頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023年——合作第53頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文1

Thedrawingseekstoprovideuswithinsightsintoasignificantissueinlife:cooperation.Ontheonehand,2

collaborationisabletogiveincentivetoagoodsocialethosandgreaterachievements.3

IcanthinkofnobetterexamplesofthispointthanthefactthateveryoneworkedtogethertomakeBeijingOlympicGamessuccessfullastyear.Ontheotherhand,4

thosewhofailtohelpeachothersaredoomedtobeinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.

5

Afterobservingtheremarksabove,canwestillaffordtoignoretheimportanceofteamwork?第54頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023年——網(wǎng)絡(luò)“近”與“遠(yuǎn)”第55頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Onseeingsuchafinecaricature,wecannotresistthinkingofacriticalissueinreality:thebenefitsandharmsofInternet.Ontheonehand,Internetiscapableofpromotingandgivingimpulsetointerpersonalcommunicationandinformationsharing.Idon’tneedtolistallexamplesbutit’senoughtomentionthatwecantalkonlinebyMSNorQQeventhoughwearethousandsofmilesaway.Ontheotherhand,addictiontoInternetmayinterferewithone’spersonalgrowthandmakehimdistantfromothers.Afterobservingthecommentsabove,canwestillignoretheimportanceofproperuseofInternet?第56頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023第57頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文

Bydrawingthecartoon,thecartooniststrivestoremindusofacriticalissueinlife:love.Ontheonehand,lovecanpromoteandgiveincentivetogoodsocialdevelopmentandpersonalreputation.IcanthinkofnobetterexamplesofthispointthanProjectHopewhereahostofindividualscontributetheirlove.Ontheotherhand,iftherewerenoloveinoursociety,wewouldnotachieveonesuccessafteranother.Afterobservingthewordsabove,canwestillaffordtoignoretheimportanceoflove?第58頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023第59頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Onseeingsuchadelicatecartoon,wecannotrestrainfromassociatingitwithacrucialissueinlife:treatingoldpeoplebadly.Ontheonehand,suchbehaviorisabletoundermineandinterferewithgoodsocialethosandpersonalreputation.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattotakenocareofparentsmaydamageanddoharmtosocialprogressandpersonalmanners.Ontheotherhand,thosewhotreattheiroldparentsinanawfulwayaredoomedtobeinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.Afterobservingthecommentsabove,canwestillneglecttheharmofabusingagedparents?第60頁(yè)文化“火鍋”，既美味又營(yíng)養(yǎng)2023圖畫(huà)作文第61頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Onseeingsuchthepicture,wecannotresistassociatingitwithasignificantissueinsociety:culturalcommunication.Ontheonehand,communicationacrossculturesisabletoboostandgiveimpulsetogoodsocialdevelopmentandprosperityaswellasaperson’sgrowth.Oneofmyfriends,forexample,learnsalotaboutforeignliterature,andhemakesprogressinstudy.Ontheotherhand,thosewholackinlearningfromforeignculturesaredoomedtobeinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.Afterobservingthecommentsabove,canwestillturnablindeyetotheimportanceofculturalcommunication?第62頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文第63頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Onseeingsuchadelicatecartoon,wecannotrefrainfromassociatingitwithasignificantissueinlife:health-consciousness.Ontheonehand,notionofhealthiscapableofboostingandgivingimpulsetogoodsocialethosandpersonalgrowth.Forinstance,supposingapersontakeshealthseriously,hewillbecomehighlystrongandavoidvariousdiseases.Ontheotherhand,thosewhofailtoliveuptohealth-awarenessaredoomedtobeleftinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.Afterobservingthecommentsabove,canweaffordtoignoretheimportanceofhealth-consciousness?第64頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文圖一：拼命學(xué)英語(yǔ)圖二：漢語(yǔ)錯(cuò)別字第65頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文Bydrawingthecartoons,thecartoonistseekstoremindusofasignificantissueinreality:tobecrazyaboutEnglishandignoreChinesestudy.Ontheonehand,suchmalpracticeiscapableofhamperingandcreatinganobstacletogoodsocialdevelopmentandpersonallifeprospect.AgoodcaseinpointisthefactthatahostofEnglishlearnerstendtohavebadscoresonChinesetests.Ontheotherhand,thosewhoarekeenonEnglishregardlessofChinesearedoomedtobeleftinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.Afterobservingthecommentsabove,canweaffordtoignoretheharmofdisregardingChinesestudy?第66頁(yè)趨勢(shì)段1.Werethesituationtocontinue,Oursocietywouldbeboundtosufferahugelossinallaspects/benefitalotinallaspects.2.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,Itwouldcertainlyexertanegative/positiveeffectonoursociety.第67頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文第三段提議措施段

4句話承上啟下1提議措施2宣傳/約束升華結(jié)尾1第68頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文承上啟下（1句）誠(chéng)然/毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，對(duì)問(wèn)題結(jié)識(shí)并不等于行動(dòng)總之，目前該是我們采取某些措施時(shí)候了綜上所述，對(duì)于這個(gè)問(wèn)題，我們有必要采取某些行動(dòng)第69頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文提議措施（2句）

部門(mén)：1.所有有關(guān)部門(mén)必須做到各盡其責(zé)不(社會(huì))能玩忽職守2.有關(guān)部門(mén)應(yīng)當(dāng)制定某些有關(guān)規(guī)

章制度

3.有必要開(kāi)展多種宣傳活動(dòng)來(lái)提倡/制

止…..行為和意識(shí)…..主要性第70頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文

個(gè)人：1.應(yīng)當(dāng)多學(xué)習(xí)和讀書(shū)以更深刻領(lǐng)

會(huì)…..主要性

2.培養(yǎng)自己……正確意識(shí)和做法

避免……不良影響注意：兩個(gè)措施之間要用“另外”連接3.提升個(gè)人素質(zhì)和涵養(yǎng)第71頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文升華結(jié)尾（1句）只有把這些措施付諸于實(shí)際，我們才能普及對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題重視只有我們共同努力，我們才能全面地建立友好社會(huì)只有這樣，我們才能真真正正地實(shí)現(xiàn)可連續(xù)發(fā)展第72頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文2023年——合作第73頁(yè)圖畫(huà)作文

1Undoubtedly,awarenessofanissuecannotbeidentifiedwithactions.2Authoritiesconcernedaresupposedtoundertakevariousadvertisingcampaignssuchasbenefitcommercials,handoutsandlecturestoadvocatetheimportanceofcooperation.Inaddition,3

itisanecessityforeachindividualtocultivateanddeveloprightnotionandpracticeofcooperation.4

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