讀后續(xù)寫個人成長類-驕兵必敗講義 高考英語作文專題復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫原題Havingheldtheinterschoolstorytellingchampionshipforthepasttwoyears,Iwastheshiningstarofmyschool.Whenitcametochoosingtherightcandidatetoparticipateinsuchcompetitions,Iwasalwaysthefirstchoice.Naturally,Iwasonceagainselectedtorepresentmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.在過去的兩年里，我舉辦了校際講故事錦標(biāo)賽，我是學(xué)校里最耀眼的明星。當(dāng)選擇合適的候選人參加此類比賽時，我總是第一選擇。很自然，我再次被選中代表我的學(xué)校參加今年即將到來的比賽。Uponhearing

thefactthatIwaschosenagain,myclassmatesandfriendsacknowledgedthatIwould

undoubtedly

emergeasthechampionagain.

Consequently,

Ibecameconceited.IwassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.聽到我再次被選中的消息，我的同學(xué)和朋友們都承認(rèn)我毫無疑問會再次成為冠軍。因此，我變得自負(fù)起來。我太驕傲了，以至于忽略了為比賽練習(xí)的重要性。Aweekbeforethecontest,myteacherMs.Saraasked,"Selena,wouldyouliketostandinfrontoftheclasstorehearseforthecontest?"Shehadtutoredmeinthepasttwocompetitionsandknewhowimportantpracticewas."Justimagineyouareonthestage

inthepresenceoftheaudience,"sheadded."I'msorry,Ms.Sara,"Ireplied."Ihaveabitofasorethroat".比賽前一周，我的老師Sara女士問：“Selena，你愿意站在全班同學(xué)面前為比賽排練嗎？”她在過去的兩次比賽中都指導(dǎo)過我，知道練習(xí)有多重要。她補(bǔ)充道：“想象一下，當(dāng)著觀眾的面，你就在舞臺上?！薄！皩Σ黄?，薩拉女士，”我回答?！拔液韲涤悬c痛”。ThiswasusuallythelieIwouldtellwhenevermyteacherrequestedmetopracticeinfrontoftheclass.IalwaysfoundexcusestoavoiddoingitbecauseIbelievedthatIwasthebestandthereforethepracticewasunnecessary.Ononeoccasion,IeventoldMs.SaranottoworrytoomuchasIwaswellpreparedforthecontest.Infact,I

dideverythingbutpractice

my

script.Ionlymanagedto

glancebriefly

throughthestorythedaybeforethecontest.Asthebeststorytelleramongthestudentsofthelocalsecondaryschools,Iwastoo

vain

topracticeandexpectedeverythingtobefine.每當(dāng)老師要求我在全班同學(xué)面前練習(xí)時，我通常都會說這個謊言。我總是找借口避免這樣做，因為我相信我是最好的，因此這種做法是沒有必要的。有一次，我甚至告訴Sara女士不要太擔(dān)心，因為我已經(jīng)為比賽做好了充分準(zhǔn)備。事實上，除了練習(xí)劇本，我什么都做了。比賽前一天，我只是匆匆瀏覽了一下這個故事。作為當(dāng)?shù)刂袑W(xué)學(xué)生中最會講故事的人，我太虛榮了，不敢練習(xí)，希望一切都會好起來。Thecontestwasbeingheldinthelocalcommunityhall.Onthedayofthecontest,thehallwaspacked.Myschoolteachersandprincipalweretherealongwithmanyofmyclassmatesandschoolmates.Iwastheeighthcontestantoutoftwentyintotal.Thosewhospokebeforemedidextremelywell.

Onseeing

theirfascinatingandoutstandingperformance,I

begantoloseconfidenceinmyself.Mypalms

sweatedheavily

andIstartedtofeelnervous.比賽在當(dāng)?shù)厣鐓^(qū)大廳舉行。比賽當(dāng)天，大廳里座無虛席。我的老師和校長以及我的許多同學(xué)都在那里。我是總共二十名參賽者中的第八名。在我之前發(fā)言的人都做得非常好。一看到他們迷人而出色的表現(xiàn)，我開始對自己失去信心。我的手掌大汗淋漓，開始感到緊張。Para1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

Para2:

Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.

第1段：很快，就輪到我說話了第2段：最后，比賽結(jié)束后公布了結(jié)果。

Step1

思考問題Para1：1.我走上舞臺時是什么心情？2.我的表現(xiàn)怎么樣？出了什么問題？3.老師同學(xué)們等的反應(yīng)？我的狀態(tài)？4.我的表演如何結(jié)束的？Para2：5.結(jié)果是什么？6.我的反應(yīng)？老師們的反應(yīng)？7.我的領(lǐng)悟？

Step2構(gòu)思詞塊和句式，連詞成句(文章協(xié)同表達(dá)也很重要）Para1：1.我走上舞臺時是什么心情？2.我的表現(xiàn)怎么樣？出了什么問題？心跳加速+大腦空白+不熟悉演講稿+結(jié)巴+聲音顫抖+演講平淡.(非謂語動詞+獨立主格等)Standing

onstageinthespotlight,Icouldfeel

myheartbeatingfasterthanagallopinghorse

and

mymindgoingutterlyblank.Failingto

familiarizemyselfwith

thespeech,

consequently,I

stammeredafewtimes,

myvoicetrembling,myspeechexpressionless.3.老師同學(xué)們等的反應(yīng)？我的狀態(tài)？驚訝+難以置信+失望(themoment/instant/second...或on/upondoing...）Themoment

myglancemetmyteacher,myclassmates,myprincipal,

onwhosefacesdisappointmentwasclearlywritten,howIwishtofindaholetohidemyselfaway.4.我的表演如何結(jié)束的？（倒裝句)匆匆收尾+逃離舞臺+十分沮喪HardlyhadIfinishedmylastword

when

Imademy

desperateescape

fromthestage,hastily,

myeyesbrimmingwithtears.Para2：5.結(jié)果是什么？6.我的反應(yīng)？老師們的反應(yīng)？7.我的領(lǐng)悟？沒有得獎+被失落籠罩+垂下眼+躲避大家的眼神

(非謂語，獨立主格等）Ididnotwinanyprize--noteven

aconsolationone.

Gloomenvelopingme,I

droopedmyeyes,avoidingthegazearoundme.→老師安慰→看到關(guān)心的眼神→羞愧和悔恨眼淚奪眶而出→老師的教導(dǎo)“驕兵必敗”

→我的感悟

Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMsSara.

Onseeingherconcernedeyes,

tearsofbittershameandregrettrickleddownmyface.“Pridegoesbeforeafall.Neverletarrogance

standinthewayof

yoursuccess”saidMsSara.

Wipingmytearsaway,

Inoddedearnestly,determinedtolearnfromthis

hard-learnedlesson.

Step3連句成篇，書寫優(yōu)美

Para1:

Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

Standing

onstageinthespotlight,Icouldfeel

myheartbeatingfasterthanagallopinghorse

and

mymindgoingutterlyblank.Failingto

familiarizemyselfwith

thespeech,

consequently,I

stammeredafewtimes,

myvoicetrembling,myspeechexpressionless.

Themoment

myglancemetmyteacher,classmates,

principal,

onwhosefacesdisappointmentwasclearlywritten,howIwishtofindaholetohidemyselfaway.

HardlyhadIfinishedmylastword

when

Imademy

desperateescape

fromthestage,hastily,

myeyesbrimmingwithtears.

(約90詞）

Para2:

Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.

Ididnotwinanyprize--noteven

aconsolationone.

Gloomenvelopingme,I

droopedmyeyes,avoidingthegazearoundme.

Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMsSara.

Onseeingherc