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高考英語作文得分亮點的訣竅Howtoimproveyourwriting首句亮點化詞匯高級化句式多樣化布局謀篇合理化首句亮點化絕對無誤開門見山先自然再求美詞匯高級化高級詞匯---能給人新穎、特別的感覺使閱卷者對考生的英語功底有一定程度的了解注：并不是越難越好、越長越好，關(guān)鍵在于恰到好處地使用那些符合英美國家習(xí)慣的表達方式，如短語和慣用語等。1.Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.2.Someofmyclassmatesareforthemovie.Someofmyclassmatesareinfavorofthemovie.3.Astrongstormhappenedinourcitylastnight.Astrongstormhit/struckourcitylastnight.⑴Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.

ourjourneywascomfortable.⑵Weallthinkheisagreatman.⑶SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.

Thankstothegoodweather,

Weallthinkhighlyofhim.Agoodideaoccurredtome.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.練一練-學(xué)會使用高級詞匯⑷Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.⑸Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.⑹Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.

shewentpalewithsorrow.⑺ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.ShewenttoAustriaBooksarefreeforthestudentsthere.Theplanturnedout(tobe)afailure.Atthenewsofhisdeath,

for/withthepurposeofstudyingmusic.⑻Aftertheoperation,hefeltbetterandbetter.⑼Inourteam,therearetwenty–sixplayers.⑽Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.Hewasrecoveringaftertheoperation.Ourteamismadeupof/consistsoftwenty–sixplayers.Twenty–sixplayersmakeupourteam.You’llhavenotrouble/difficultyfindingmyhouse.如何打造重量級詞匯過渡詞大出彩表示羅列增加

First,second,third,First,then/next,afterthat/next,finally

Foronething…foranother…,

On(the)onehand…ontheotherhand,

Besides/what’smore/inaddition/furthermore/moreover/another/alsoworsestill,tomakemattersworse表示時間順序now,atpresent,recently,atfirst,inthebeginning,tobeginwithlater,recently,after,afterwards,afterthat,afterawhile,inafewdays,nextfinally,immediately,soon,suddenly,allofasudden,atthatmoment,assoonas,themoment,formnowon,fromthenon,atthesametime,meanwhile,till,not…until,before,after,when,while,as，during表示解釋說明forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,infact,actuallytonameonlyafew，asanexample,anexampleinpointisthat…actually/virtually/asamatteroffact

表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系

but,however,while,or,otherwise,onthecontrary,incontrast,except(for),instead,afterall表示并列關(guān)系or,and,also,too,notonly…butalso,aswellas,both…and,either…or,neither…nor表示因果關(guān)系

because,becauseof,since,nowthat,as,thanksto…,dueto…,therefore,asaresult(of),so…that,such…that表示條件關(guān)系as(so)longas,onconditionthat,if,unless

表示讓步關(guān)系

though,although,as,evenif,eventhough,whether…or…,however,whoever,whatever,whichever,wherever,whenever,nomatterhow(who,what,which,where,when,whom)

表示舉例forexample,forinstance,suchas…,take…forexample,namely,aparticularexampleforthisis…表示比較besimilarto,similarly,thesameas,incontrast,comparedwith(to)…justlike,justas表示目的forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto表示強調(diào)indeed,infact,surely,certainly,nodoubt,withoutanydoubt,truly,obviously,aboveall

表示總結(jié)歸納inaword,inshort,inbrief,onthewhole,generallyspeaking,inmyopinion,ashasbeenstated,asIhaveshown,finally,atlast,inconclusion,allinall,tosumup,insummary,inaword句式多樣化適當運用復(fù)合句和高級句型可以達到句式多樣，句型結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的效果注：寧可平淡，不可犯錯先保正確，再求高級使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu):

1.使用適當?shù)臅r態(tài)2.適當?shù)恼Z態(tài)3.使用不定式4.使用過去分詞5.使用V.+ing形式6.使用名詞性從句7.使用狀語從句8.使用定語從句9.使用虛擬語氣10.使用強調(diào)句,倒裝句,感嘆句

11.使用并列句1.改變時態(tài)Thebellisringingnow.(一般)2.改變語態(tài)Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般)Theregoesthebell.(高級)Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.(高級)3.使用不定式4.使用過去分詞Heissokindthathecanhelpme.(一般)Heissokindastohelpme.(高級)Shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.(一般)Followedbymanystudents,she….(高級)Onceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.(一般)Onceseen,itcan….(高級)5.使用v-ing形式Whenhearrivespleasegivemeane-mail.(一般)Iftheweatherpermits,I’llcometomorrow.(一般)Onhisarriving/arrival,pleasegive….(高級)Weatherpermitting,I’llcometomorrow.(高級)Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers.Theyteach48pupils.(一般)NowourSchoolhasthreeteachers,teaching48pupils.(高級)Hedidn’tturnup.Itdisappointedeverybody.

(一般)Imethimunexpectedly.(一般)6.使用名詞性從句Thefactthathedidn’tturnupdisappointedeverybody./Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn’tturnup.(高級)IthappenedthatImethim./Ihappenedtomeethim.(高級)Thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Itisreallysurprising.(一般)Whatsurprisesusisthatthegirl….

Tooursurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(高級)7.使用狀語從句Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.(一般)Ifyoucomebackbeforesixo’clock,youcangoout.(一般)Themealwasverynice.Weallenjoyeditverymuch.(一般)Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.(高級)Youcangooutonconditionthatyoucomebackbefore….(高級)Themealwassonicethatweall….(高級)8.使用定語從句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(一般)Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenwasspokenhighlyof.(高級)IstudiedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputeratschool.(一般)ThesubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,maths,English….(高級)9.使用虛擬語氣Theshipdidn’tsinkbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain.(一般)Iwasn’tinvitedtotheparty,soIdidn’tattendit.(一般)IfIhadbeeninvitedtotheparty,Iwouldhaveattendedit.(高級)Butfortheeffortsofthecaptain,theshipwouldhavesunk.(高級)10.使用強調(diào)句、倒裝句、感嘆句Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin