讀后續(xù)寫個人成長類-兒子Jordan和貓咪 講義 高考英語專題復(fù)習(xí)

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Myteenageson,Jordan,alwayscomplainedabouthavingtobehomeearlierthanallhisfriends.Hewouldcomplainthathewasalreadyseventeen,butstillhadacurfew(宵禁).Hebelievedhewaspracticallyanadult.Ipointedoutthathewasnotanadultashewasstillinhighschool.“Youdon’ttrustme!”heyelled.BeforeIcontinued,herolledhiseyes,slammedthedoorandwalkedaway.Isighed.HowcouldImakeJordanseethatIonlywantedtokeephimsafe?Idecidedtogoforawalk,hopingtheDecemberairwouldclearmyhead.Iopenedthefrontdoorandnearlysteppedonher:asmallblackcat,justlikeameatball.“Hi,Meatball,”Isaid,bringingherintomyarms.Iwalkedbackin,touchingherneckgently.Meatballseemedhappyenoughtocomeinthehouse,butafteranhourortwo,shesatbythedoor,meowingtogobackoutside.“Whywon’tshejuststayinwithusallthetime?”Nathan,myyoungestsonasked.Iexplainedtohimthatshewashappyherebutshelikedbeingabletocomeandgoasshepleased.“Thatmustbenice,”Jordanmutteredfromtheotherroom,complainingwhythecat,nothim,couldcomeandgo.Meatballbecamearegular.Onenight,temperatureswereunusuallylow.Meatballstoodatthedoor,meowingtogooutside.Ishookmyheadather,afraidthatshemightfreezetodeath.Shestaredatmeandmeowedagain.Ipattedherhead,“Iknowyou’renothappy,butit’sforyourowngood.”“Mom’snotbeingmeantoyou,”Nathantoldthecat.“She’sjusttryingtokeepyoufromturningintoafrozenmeatball.”Webothlaughedathisjoke.Thenextmorning,Icouldn’tfindMeatball.Iaskedthekidsifanyonehadseenher.1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。參考答案：Jordannodded,“Iletheroutlastnight.”

MyjawdroppedwhenIheardthis.“Wassheoutsideallnight?Shecouldbefrozentodeath!”Iraisedmyvoice,asurgeofragestorminginside.“But...”Jordanbitbackhiswords,stunned.Igrabbedmycoatandrushedoutside,prayingthecathadsurvivedthenight.Jordanfollowedwithintenseanxietyonhisface.WelookedintoeveryholeandcornerwhereMeatballpossiblymaygo.Luckily,severalminuteslater,thepoorthingwasfoundshakingandcurlingintoatinyballbeneathacar.Ipickedherupimmediately,unsurewhethershewasaliveordead.Atthesightofthis,Jordanwasclosetotearsandmurmured“Sorry!”allthetimewithguiltandregretgnawinghisheart.“Weneedavet,now!”Iurged.AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehiscoat.

“Ishouldn’thaveletyouout.I’msosorry,buddy!”heapologizedrepeatedlyinasoftvoice.Aswearrivedattheanimalhospital,

Isawhereyesopenabit.“Thankgoodness.”Ithoughttomyself.Givencarefulexaminationandtimelytreatment,thelittlecreaturewasfinallyrescued.Atthesoundofherfamiliar

meowagain,

webreathedasighofrelief.

Onourwayhome,JordanheldMeatballinhisarmstightlyasifafraidoflosingitagain.“Webotharesupposedtoobservethecurfew.It’sforourowngood.”hejokedtothelittlethingashestrokedherback.Atthatmoment,Isuddenlyrealizedthatitwasthisparticularexperiencethatgavemyteenagesonavaluablelessonandenabledhimtounderstandalovingparent’sgoodintention.續(xù)寫精析：Jordannodded,“Iletheroutlastnight.”

Jordan和貓咪一樣渴望自由，所以他才這樣做。接下來要寫媽媽的反應(yīng)，能預(yù)測到媽媽的驚訝和生氣。前文中有很多伏筆，比如天氣冷。媽媽擔(dān)心貓出去會凍死。MyjawdroppedwhenIheardthis.驚訝的表達(dá)很多，還可以用gaspinastonishment;giveacryasurprise.“Wassheoutsideallnight?Shecouldbefrozentodeath!”照應(yīng)了原文中的這句話Ipattedherhead,“Iknowyou’renothappy,butit’sforyourowngood.”Iraisedmyvoice,asurgeofragestorminginside.生氣是肯定的。這里生氣還可以多樣化的表達(dá)，如wasburningwithanger；voicetrembledwithanger

；Therewasaflashofangerinhiseyes“But...”Jordanbitbackhiswords,stunned.媽媽的生氣和擔(dān)心，讓Jordan有所畏懼，無法說出自己的真實(shí)想法。Igrabbedmycoatandrushedoutside,prayingthecathadsurvivedthenight.語言和動作會暗示接下來的行動。還有根據(jù)AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehiscoat.

我們下一步會出去找貓咪。這三個動作一氣呵成，寫出了媽媽急迫的心情。Jordanfollowedwithintenseanxietyonhisface.Jordan此刻也是擔(dān)心貓咪的安危。從第二段開頭得知他和媽媽一起。WelookedintoeveryholeandcornerwhereMeatballpossiblymaygo.描寫尋找地仔細(xì)。Luckily,severalminuteslater,thepoorthingwasfoundshakingandcurlingintoatinyballbeneathacar.shake和curl蜷縮，表明貓咪凍得不輕，為帶去animalhospital鋪墊。Ipickedherupimmediately,unsurewhethershewasaliveordead.查看貓咪的情況。Atthesightofthis,Jordanwasclosetotearsandmurmured“Sorry!”allthetimewithguiltandregretgnawinghisheart.Jordan為自己的錯誤舉動感到內(nèi)疚和傷心?！癢eneedavet,now!”Iurged.我顧不得許多，急迫地想去救治肉球。AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehiscoat.

Jordan在開頭句出現(xiàn)，接下來還是要寫Jordan對小貓的內(nèi)疚的表現(xiàn)?！癐shouldn’thaveletyouout.I’msosorry,buddy!”heapologizedrepeatedlyinasoftvoice.內(nèi)疚的表達(dá)除了用shouldn’thavedone本不應(yīng)該做而做了，還可以用其他表達(dá)如feelextremelyguiltyfordoingsth；withregretfultearsinone'seyes。Aswearrivedattheanimalhospital,

Isawhereyesopenabit.再次查看，發(fā)現(xiàn)貓咪還有救?！癟hankgoodness.”Ithoughttomyself.Givencarefulexaminationandtimelytreatment,thelittlecreaturewasfinallyrescued.精心的檢查和及時的救治，貓咪活了下來。Atthesoundofherfamiliar

meowagain,

webreathedasighofrelief.

我們?nèi)玑屩刎?fù)。Onourwayhome,JordanheldMeatballinhisarmstightlyasifafraidoflosingitagain.倍加珍惜可愛的肉球。“Webotharesupposedtoobservethecurfew.It’sforourowngood.”he