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議最近考題分析—應(yīng)不應(yīng)該在電視上審判（crimetrials）畫面？好處—1對(duì)青少年haveadeterringeffect/actasdeterrent關(guān)于的普及教育generationaboutequal壞處—1privacy被在整個(gè)審判過程聽他的名字他的都會(huì)成為人們討論對(duì)象即使出獄后也會(huì)unfairtosandtheirfamiliesMaketheirlivesoutof 增加捕捉罪犯的難度，因?yàn)榧?xì)節(jié)會(huì)被`先寫大作文，如果小作文沒有結(jié)尾或者沒有寫完，也可以得6分，甚至6.5·從明天開始，每天一個(gè)ideaandsupport下面打卡名雅思寫作真經(jīng)保分班（具體在群公告有寫）Idea+一篇 1.2.3.4.用Ideaidea要句型簡單，簡單，清晰，明不怕idea簡單允許學(xué)生給老師打分—ideaSupport來生的反饋（feedback），（comint）可以讓老師知道（realize/beawareof/getawareof）他們哪里做的不好，比如講的太快，講的太用Support如何寫好壞/原因類1.Workingathomemakesiteasytotakecareoffamily2.HomeschoolingallowschildrentomoveattheirownAllowsbtodo替換makesbtodo讓人做一件好事情Enable3.Librariesshouldnotdisappearbecauseitprovidesreaderswithaquietatmospheresothattheycanfocusonwhattheyarereading.quiet很值得解釋館沒有大聲的交談沒有的零食不像咖啡館把sothat去掉也可以做好的idea4.OneoftheargumentsinfavorofrestrictingmediaisthatviewersmaycopythetheytheyhaveseeninamovieorTVdrama.5.Oneofthereasonswhyyoungpeopledonotwanttobeateacheristhatteaching increasinglydifficult.解釋寫工資低就跑題了很多孩子都是獨(dú)生很有可能被慣壞在學(xué)校不尊重老師從管理年輕人不原因現(xiàn)在人有途徑獲得知識(shí)比如互聯(lián)網(wǎng)會(huì)向老師發(fā)起很多年輕人害怕面對(duì)ThefirstreasonfortheriseofcrimerateisthatmanypeoplearefacedwithhardeconomicIdea不要太多復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)，出現(xiàn)在support就夠每一個(gè)ideasupport的片段都是為了解釋清楚一個(gè)想法，不要嘗試分析太多內(nèi)容和角在家工資方便而且不適合做一個(gè)idea，切忌在一個(gè)點(diǎn)把所有的東西都寫ideasupport的三種理解邏1.好壞結(jié)果先給出結(jié)果---->過程/內(nèi)容---->盡量對(duì)比/的影 Modernagriculture好處—結(jié)果(大幅提高糧食產(chǎn)量)---過程（pesticide減少損失化fertilizer讓莊稼作物長得更快）--更影響（消除饑荒2.(主體)背景/特征---->過程/內(nèi) >回應(yīng)題目中的現(xiàn)象(換個(gè)說法表達(dá)最好3.idea(找不到分論直接改寫題目中的表達(dá)---->用知識(shí)來作為 >得到和題目相對(duì)應(yīng)的結(jié)1.在分析好壞結(jié)果的時(shí)候，我推薦反推邏輯3例子1?Allowingchildrentomaketheirowndecisionshelpstodevelopacloserrelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren.(中等偏簡單的idea)Ifchildren’sopinionsarerespectedbyparents,thensuggestionsfromparentswillbetakenseriouslyinreturn.Thiscaneffectivelyavoidtypicalproblemsbetweengenerations,like lingliesandhavingHelptodo例子2?Homeschoolingallowschildrentomoveattheirownpace.Childrenwhoobviouslyperformbetterthantheirpeerscanbegivenmorechallengestostudymoredifficultmaterials.Asaresult,talentsofthesechildrencanbeized.與之相反那些反應(yīng)偏慢的孩子可以學(xué)習(xí)基礎(chǔ)的內(nèi)容維持自信。把節(jié)奏限定下來.Support可以把前面講的事物，用名詞修飾的辦法縮小范圍（限定老年人做可以用他們的經(jīng)驗(yàn)幫助公司（經(jīng)驗(yàn)分為成功失敗用成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)成功用Homeschooling不去學(xué)校，在家學(xué)習(xí)moveattheirownpace例子3Oneobviousadvantageofgoingtoschoolatanearlyageisthatchildrendevelopfastersocially.(直接解釋)Theymakefriendsandlearnhowtogetonwithotherchildrenofasimilarage.Thisisoftennotpossibleathomebecausetheyaretheonlychild,orbecausetheirbrothersorsistersareolderoryounger.developfastersocially·Extremesportsallowparticipantstohaveunusualexperiences.Whenpeoplewhoarecrazyaboutskydivingjumpoutofthejetne,theycanhaveabird'seyeviewoverthelandscapesbelowthem.Thisisnotacommonthingforthemajorityofpeople.Librariesshouldnotberecedbecausetheyprovidereaderswithaquietatmospheresothattheycanfocusonwhattheyarereading.Thisisparticularlyimportanttothosewhoneedtodealwithsomesophisticatedmaterials.Universitystudents,forexample,canbemuchlessdistractedbyloudconversationsorphoneringsiftheychoosetoworkontheiressaysinthelibrary.Thedangerandwildernessofsomecessetupabarrierforordinarypeople,whichisthereasonwhyTVprogramslikeManvsWildenjoyagreatpopularity.Therearesomedestinationswheretouristsmaybekidnappedorrobbed.Therearealsoceswheretrekkersarehighlyvulnerabletodiseases,likemalariaorbird成年人為什么Thegreatestbenefitisthatmaturitygivesyougreaterconfidenceinyourownjudgment,inallareasoflife.Whenothersdisagree,youarenotafraidtoexpressyouropinionand,unlikeateenager,youknowwhentoletthingsTheobviousargumentisthatyoungchildrenpickuplanguagesmuchmoreeasilythanteenagers.Thisisbecausetheirbrainsarestillprogrammedtoacquiretheirmothertongue,whichfacilitateslearninganotherlanguage,andunlikeadolescents,theyarenotinhibitedbyself-consciousness.Firstly,parksandsquaresprovidecitizenswithidealceswheretheycouldengageinrelaxingandenjoyableactivities.(直接解釋)Childrenenjoyrollerskating,youngpeoplelovejoggingandelderlypeoplelikewalkingdogsintheparksandsquares.Althoughtheycoulddothesethingsinotherces,itissaferandmorecomfortableatlargeopenpublicTechnologycanpositivelycontributetothekeealiveoftraditionalskillsandwaysoflife.Forexample,thepopulationsofsomeislandsaretoosmalltohavenormalschools.Ratherthanbreakingupfamiliesbysendingchildrentothe,educationhavebeenabletousetheInternettodeliverschoolingonline.2. 每一個(gè)就是一個(gè)自行車特征—慢這意味著他現(xiàn)代人的出行要求，因?yàn)槟康牡卦絹碓竭h(yuǎn)，如果人們堅(jiān)持騎自行車會(huì)耗費(fèi)很多時(shí)間并且會(huì)很累所以越來越多人選擇更輕松的出行方式·人們?yōu)槭裁匆獏⒓訉?duì)健康不好的活動(dòng)—主體是人/主體是活動(dòng)讓人們得到了一種滿足感比如極限運(yùn)動(dòng)讓驗(yàn)刺激，吸煙酗酒（bingedrinking）讓人放松，一整天在電腦面前帶來成就感（asenseofachievement），即使人們知道這些有害，還是抵擋不?。╮esistthetemptation）主體是人—peopleundertremendousstress—普通活動(dòng)不能讓他們釋放壓力，只有特殊活孩子在學(xué)校表現(xiàn)糟糕的原因thebirthratethebirthrateisdecreasingsothatfamilies ingsmallerfewerchildren.Thesechildrenareoftenspoilt.Theyareallowedtohavewhatevertheywantregardlessofpriceandtobehaveastheyplease.Thismeansthatthechildrengrowupwithoutconsiderationforothers.如果想寫某一個(gè)國家，前面要先限定一下。Eg：forexample，insomeOneofthereasonsfortheincreaseintheaverageweightisthatpeoplehaveunhealthyeatinghabits.Inordertosavetimeforhighworkingefficiency,alargenumberofofficeworkerspreferconvenientbutcalorie-richfood,likehamburgersorhotdogsratherthanahealthylunchwhichobviouslytakesmoretime.不運(yùn)動(dòng)sedentary/追求便利wantconvenienceinalmosteverythingtrmedouspressuretheirworksuperbusy工作社交richerthan青少年為什么Thosewhobelieveteenagersarethehappiestpeoplecitetheirlackofresponsibilitiesasasignificantfactor.Theyaresupportedfinanciallyandemotionallybytheirparents,andalthoughtheymaybeincludedinfamilydecisions,theyarenotultima yresponsible.Technologyhasgreatlychangedthewaypeopleentertainandsocialize.BeforetheInternet,peopleactivelyparticipatedincommunityactivitiestohavefunorbuildtheirsocialnetworks.Today,however,neighborsbarelymeetandtalkwitheachother,astheyaremoreaddictedtoonlinesharingofgossipsandpictures.Teenagersaremostlikelytosuccumbtopressuresfrompeers,withthedesiretobepartofagroup.Someadolescentsareleftwithnochoicebuttoallowtheirfriendstoinfluencethemtocommitminorormajoroffensesagainstsociety.Someyoungadultsresorttovariousjuvenilecrimes,likevandalism,drugpossession,assault,andtheft.3.如果題目中的觀點(diǎn)或者說法已經(jīng)很細(xì)節(jié)，讓你無法找出更細(xì)化的idea（找 Somepeoplesay ernmentsshouldgivethehealthcarethefirstpriority.Someothersbelievethattherearemoreimportantprioritiestospendthetaxpayers’money.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.–我們來看第一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)：應(yīng)該優(yōu)先投資醫(yī)療健康。這已Ontheonehand,spendingmoneyonhealthcareisvitallyimportanttothesocietyaswhole(改寫原題的句子).Ifmorevaccinesareavailabletoyoungchildren,therateofchildmortalitycouldberemarkablyreduced.Ifmorecommunityhospitalsarebuiltandmoredoctorsareemployed,peoplewouldgetpropermedicaltreatmentbeforeminordiseasesturnintoItisundeniablethatvegetarianfoodpositivelycontributestopreventionofdiseases.Welowerourriskofcancerbychoosingpredominantlynt-baseddietsrichinavarietyofvegetablesandfruits,legumesandprocessedstarchystaplefoods,andtolimittheintakeofgrilled,curedandsmokedmeatsandItistruethatthereissuchastrongconnectionbetweenhappinessandmoney.Beingrichenoughtoaffordwhateveronedesiresmustproduceagreatsenseofsatisfaction.Also,ifoneisfinanciallyabletohelpothersoutoftrouble,heorshemustbehappyaboutwhattheycandotomakethisworldabetterce.Itisundeniablethatadvancesinscienceandtechnologyhavesignificantlyreducedhuman’srelianceonotheranimalsforacquisitionofresources.Itisundeniablethatuniversitygraduatescanrichlybenefitfromhighereducationinseveral如何的idea降下來有更具體的作If........,Allowingchildrentomaketheirowndecisionshelpstodevelopacloserbetweenparentsandchildren.Ifchildren’sopinionsarerespectedbyparents,thensuggestionsfromparentswillbetakenseriouslyinreturn.Thiscaneffectivelyavoidtypicalproblemsbetweengenerations,like lingliesandhavingquarrelsWhen.......,Extremesportsallowparticipantstohaveunusualexperiences.Whenpeoplewhoarecrazyaboutskydivingjumpoutofthejetne,theycanhaveabird'seyeviewoverthelandscapesbelowthem.Thisisnotacommonthingforthemajorityofpeople.When展現(xiàn)場(chǎng)景Inorderto..讓游客更容易了解.這些風(fēng)俗表演，所以就會(huì)修改內(nèi)容嗎，讓它變得不一Inorderto讓游客更接受當(dāng)?shù)孛朗?，食材和烹飪方法都?huì)被改變Oneofthereasonsfortheincreaseintheaverageweightisthatpeoplehaveunhealthyeatinghabits.Inordertosavetimeforhighworkingefficiency,alargenumberofofficeworkerspreferconvenientbutcalorie-richfood,likehamburgersorhotdogsratherthanahealthylunchwhichobviouslytakesmoretime.InorderTherebeThedangerandwildernessofsomecessetupabarrierforordinarypeople,whichisthereasonwhyTVprogramslikeManvsWildenjoyagreatpopularity.Therearesomedestinationswheretouristsmaybekidnappedorrobbed.Therearealsoceswheretrekkersarehighlyvulnerabletodiseases,likemalariaorbirdflu.主語(修飾限定)Homeschoolingallowschildrentomoveattheirownpace.Childrenwhoobviouslyperformbetterthantheirpeerscanbegivenmorechallengestostudymoredifficultmaterials.Asaresult,talentsofthesechildrencanbeized.Thisis Theobviousargumentisthatyoungchildrenpickuplanguagesmuchmoreeasilythanteenagers