2023學年完整公開課版【教學】Unit 2 Integrated skills第2課時

Unit2Besporty,behealthyIntegratedskillsPeriod2Revision1.Whatexercisedoyouusuallydo?2.Howdoyoumakeexercisearegularpartofyourlife?Workingroupsanddiscussthequestions.Leo’sproblemsNotimetoexerciseNomoneytoworkoutNoonetotalktoWhat’reLeo’sproblems?RevisionYoursuggestionsTimeExercisecanbefittedintoone’sschedule.MoneyExercisedoesnotnecessarilyrequiremoney.CompanyExercisecanbedonewithone’sfamilyorfriends.GivesomesuggestionsforLeo’sproblems.RevisionLeo:IwenttoseethedoctorandshesaidIhavetomakeexercisearegularpartofmylife.IknowIneedtoexercisebutIdon’thavetimeormoney.WhatshouldIdo?Rachel:Afewminutesadayisallittakes.Startdoingsmallamountsofexercisewheneveryoucan.Takethestairsinsteadoftheliftwhenpossible.Andifyouhavebeensittingfortoolongwhilestudying,getupanddancetoyourfavouritemusic.Role-playaconversationbetweenRachelandLeoaboutwaysLeocanmakeexercisearegularpartofhislife.RevisionLeo:Interesting!Icandothat.ButdoyouthinkIneedtopaytoexerciseinthegym?Rachel:Notnecessarily.Thegoodnewsisthatyoudon’tneedmoneytoexercise!Youcangorunninginyourcommunity’sparkortrywalkingtoschool.Leo:Greatsuggestions!Howdoyoufeelaboutjoiningme?Idon’twanttoexercisealone.Rachel:Ofcourse!I’llhelpyougetintoanexerciseroutineifyou’reseriousaboutit.Leo:Iam!Thanksforencouragingme,Rachel.Weshouldfindotherfriendstojoinustoo.Whatdoyouthinkofit?Rachel:That’sthebestideayou’veeverhad.RevisionWritingAnalyzethestructureofLeo’semail.Leo’semailHiRachel,Hopeyou’redoingwell.GreetingsI’vebeenfeelingabit...tiredandnotmyself....seethedoctor...saidIneededtodomoreexercise....busyschedule...somuchschoolwork...Isimplyhavenotimetoexercise;I’malsoconcernedaboutmoney…can’taffordto...soexpensive;Howboring...alone...noonetotalkto...soongiveupwithoutapartner.PurposeofwritingWhatwouldyoudo...?Lookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.ReasonsfornotexercisingCurrentrequestsBestwishes,LeoSignatureBodyWritingPrewritingDraftingRevisingEditingPublishingWriteareplytoencourageLeo.Gatheringinformation(interviewingpeople,researchinginthelibraryorontheInternet,assessingdata,etc.)BrainstormingandtalkingwithothersOutlining(alist,amindmap,aflowchart)Prewriting:WritingBeginningShowyourunderstandingofthesituation.BodyGivesuggestionswithreasons.EndingOfferencouragement.Drafting:AnalysethestructureWriting21Readtheinstructionscarefullytofullyunderstandthetopicandbrainstormideas.Usediagrams,suchasamindmap

oraflowchart,toorganizeyourideas.Youcanalsomakealistofthepoints

youwanttocover.Drafting:WritingtechniquesWritingInformalProperConsiderthepurposeofyourwritingandyourreader,whichdetermineyourlanguagestyle,formalorinformal.Anemailtoencourageafriendisusuallyinformal.Showyourunderstandingwithexpressionssuchas“I’msorrytohearthat…”andendyouremailwith“Ihopeyou’llfindthesesuggestionshelpfulandI’msureyou’ll…”.Drafting:ThelanguageWritingWritingAnemailofencouragementGreetingsDearLeo,Hopeyou’redoingwell.ShowyourunderstandingIamsorrytohearthat...IhavereceivedyourletterandI’mgladtogiveyousomesuggestions...IwasdeeplyconcernedwhenIheardthat...OfferencouragementSignatureBestwishes,RachelGivesuggestionswithreasonsBodyDraftingWritingAnemailofencouragementGreetingsShowyourunderstandingTrytodosmallamountsofexercisewheneveryoucan.Takeregularbreaks...Takeawalkorpracticesomedancemoves.Manyformsofexercisecanbedoneoutsidethegym...gorunninginthepark…Youcouldinviteyourfamilyandfriends...Youcanhavefunexercisingtogether.OfferencouragementSignatureGivesuggestionswithreasonsIhopeyou’llfindthesesuggestionshelpful...I’msureyou’ll...Movewordsandsentences(sentencefluency,organization).Removewordsandsentences(beconcise).Addwordsandsentences(captureallideas).Substitutewordsandsentences(wordchoice,voice).ARMSRevising:WritingPunctuationUsageandgrammarCapitalizationSpellingCUPSEditing:WritingEnsurethatallrevisionsandeditshavebeenmadeandyourfinaldraftisclean.Shareyourarticle!Publishing:WritingDearLeo,I’msorrytohearthatyouhaven’tbeenfeelingwellrecently.Butthedoctorisright—youdoneedtoexercisemore.Ihavesomesuggestionsthatyoumightfindhelpful.First,rememberthatyoudon’thavetoexercisefor30minutesorawholehournon-stop.Instead,trytodosmallamountsofexercisewheneveryoucan.Forexample,trytakingthestairsuptoyourflatinsteadofthelift.Whenyoustudyforalongtime,remembertotakeregularbreaks.Getoutofyourchairandmovearoundabit:takeawalkorpracticesomedancemoves.Sample:WritingSecond,youdon’thavetopaytoexercise.Manyformsofexercisecanbedoneoutsidet