讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)送給媽媽的禮物課件-高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)1——送給媽媽的禮物題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目再現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Bobbywasgettingcoldsittingoutinhisbackyardinthesnow.Bobbydidn’twearboots;orrather,hedidn’townany.Thethinsneakersheworehadafewholesinthemandtheydidapoorjobofkeepingoutthecold.Bobbyhadbeeninhisbackyardforaboutanhouralready.Tryashemight,hecouldnotcomeupwithanideaforhismother’sChristmasgift.Heshookhisheadashethought,“Thisisuseless.EvenifIdocomeupwithanidea,Idon’thaveanymoneyforagift.”Wipingtearsfromhiseyes,Bobbystartedwalkingdowntothestreetwheretheshopswere.Itwasn’teasybeingsixwithoutafather,especiallywhenheneededamantotalkto.Bobbywalkedfromshoptoshop,lookingintoeachdecoratedwindow.Everythingseemedsobeautifulbutsooutofreach.ItwasstartingtogetdarkandBobbyreluctantlyturnedtowalkhomewhensuddenlyhiseyescaughttheglimmer(微光)ofthesettingsun’sraysreflectingonsomethingontheroadside.Hereacheddownanddiscoveredashinydime(一角硬幣).4續(xù)寫原文NeverbeforehasanyonefeltaswealthyasBobbydidatthatmoment.Asheheldhisnewly-foundtreasure,warmthspreadthroughouthisentirebodyandhewalkedintothefirststore.Hisexcitementquicklyturnedcoldwhensalespersonaftersalespersontoldhimthathecouldnotbuyanythingwithonlyadime.Hesawaflowershopandwentinsidetowaitinline.Whentheshopowneraskedifhecouldhelphim,Bobbypresentedthedimeandaskedifhecouldbuyoneflowerforhismother’sChristmasgift.TheshopownerlookedatBobbyandhisten-centoffering.ThenheputhishandonBobby’sshoulder,saying,“YoujustwaithereandI’llseewhatIcandoforyou.”ThesoundofthedoorclosingasthelastcustomerleftpulledBobbybacktoreality.Allaloneintheshop,Bobbybegantofeelaloneandafraid.5段首句Paragraph1:Eventuallytheshopownercameoutandmovedtothecounter.Paragraph2:Withthebunchofbeautifulrosesinhishands,Bobbybackedoffandthenturnedandran.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫已知內(nèi)容通過閱讀所給文章可知，生活貧苦的鮑比想在圣誕節(jié)送母親禮物，但他沒有錢，就在他在街上走時(shí)，他撿到了一角硬幣，他很開心，當(dāng)他走進(jìn)第一家商店，售貨員告訴他一角硬幣無法買東西，他很失落，之后他去了一家花店，店主讓鮑比等著，說“我看看能為你做些什么”。8點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫建議第一段：第一段開頭是：最后店主走出來，來到柜臺前。本段應(yīng)該寫店主為鮑比準(zhǔn)備了一角硬幣的禮物，注重寫店主對鮑比的幫助，鮑比簡直無法相信。第二段：第二段開頭是：鮑比手里拿著一束美麗的玫瑰，退后轉(zhuǎn)身跑開了。本段應(yīng)該寫鮑比把花送給媽媽，媽媽很驚訝且開心，之后鮑比把在花店里的經(jīng)歷告訴媽媽，母子倆感受到了冬日的溫暖。10Part3范文呈現(xiàn)11范文呈現(xiàn)Eventuallytheshopownercameoutandmovedtothecounter.There,beforeBobby'seyes,laytwelveredroses,withleavesofgreenandtinywhiteflowersalltiedtogetherwithabigsilvertape.Bobby'sheartsankastheownerplacedthemgentlyintoalongwhitebox."Thatwillbetencents,youngman."theshopownersaid,reachingouthishandforthedime.Slowly,Bobbymovedhishandtogivethemanhisdime.Couldthisbetrue?Hewondered.12范文呈現(xiàn)Withthebunchofbeautifulrosesinhishands,Bobbybackedoffandthenturnedandran.Withinminutes,hewasathome,stillbreathless.“Look,Mother,whathaveIgotforyou?”Bobbycalledoutinthebackyard.Mothercameoutfrominsidethehouse.Shecouldhardlybelievehereyesuponseeingthebeautifulflowersinfrontofher.“MerryChristmas!”Bobbysaidandbegantotellhereverythinghehadexperiencedintheflowershop.Tearfully,Motherhuggedhersoninherarms.Standinginthebitter