讀后續(xù)寫寫作練習-2023屆高三英語二輪復習寫作專項

試題呈現(xiàn)：讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。Benracedoutofschool.Christmasholidays!Whenhegothome,hewenttocheckonhispony,Scout.Heslippedhimacandy,andScoutnuzzled（用口鼻輕擦）hisshoulder.BenstartedtowardthehouseandfoundhisolderbrotherJackstartingthesnowmobile（雪地機動車）todelivergastoUncleMike.Benjumpedonthebackandjoinedhim.Theysetoffslowly.Thesnowwasfreshanddeepontheremotemountainpath.Whentheyarrived,Jackwentoverwiththegascan.Benlookedupthemountainandsawsomethingmoving.Hegotbinoculars（望遠鏡）andsawtwoanimals.Coulditbeahorse?JackclimbedbackonthesnowmobileandaskedBentoleave.WhenBentoldJackhesawhorsesupinthesnowytrees,Jackdidn'tbelieveit.Benlookedbackupthemountain,buthecouldn'tseeanything.AtdinnerBentoldhisfatherhesawtwohorsesuponthemountaintoday.〃lftheyarehorses,theymustbetrappedbya11thissnow/'saidhisdad.〃lfthey'retrapped,wehavetodosomething//saidBen,hisvoicerising.HisdadlookedatJack."Well,inthemorninggoandtakealook.Takethegunandsomehay（干草）.Iftheylookasiftheycansurvive,givethemthehay.Ifnot../7Jacklookedserious,andslowlynodded.Benknewwhatthegunwasfor,andhischestwentcold.Inthemorning,theysetoffinthecoldsnow.WhentheygottotheplacewhereBenhadseenthehorses,theystoppedandlookedupusingbinoculars.Nohorses.Theywaitedforafewminutes.perchedonmyhandandlookedstraightintomyeyes.Myfriendsexclaimed,"Howinconceivable!Sheseeminglycelebratedyourreunion."Atthatmoment,thelivelyfarmfu11offragrantscentsandthrivingflowerscompletelymatchedthebeautyofthesingingofthelittlehummingbird.Itbecamerealformetoimagineanaturewheregenerationsoftheflocksofbirdsrestinthefarmandpeoplewillliveharmonywithdifferentspecieswithrespect.“Iseethem.They'rehorses.Let'stakethesnowmobileupthere，"Bensuddenlyexclaimed.Theydrovethesnowmobileinthedeepsnowandfinallyreachedtheplace."Ohno!"saidBen.''They'restarving!”O(jiān)neofthehorseshadlostalotofhair,andtheirtailswerealmostgone.Theireyeswerelifelessandtired.Paragraph1:Jackwalkedaroundthehorses.Paragraph2:Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingeveryonetocomeandhelp.參考范文：Jackwalkedaroundthehorses."Well,"saidJack,sighing,pickingupthegun."IguessIbetterusethis.""No!Weshouldatleasttry!”pleadedBen,strokingthehorsesgently.Jackwalkedaroundthehorsesagain.Hepattedoneofthemontheneck.Itmadeasad,smallgroaningsound,"Maybeyou'reright."Hesuredidn'twanttohavetoshootthesehorses.Benquicklygotthehayandspreaditaroundinpiles.Thehorsesatehungrily.Withonemorepattoeachhorse,JackandBenclimbedonthesnowmobileanddrovebackdownthemountainasquicklyastheycouldtoreporttheirnews.Backathomethefamilyhadahurriedmeeting.Afterdiscussingallkindsofpossiblewaystoputthehorsesoutoftheirmisery,theyfinallydecidedtoshovelatunnel.Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingeveryonetocomeandhelp.Theyevenputnoticesupinthestreets.Thentheytookthesnowmobilebackupthemountainwithmorehayandwaterandsomewarmblankets.Thehorsesseemedhappytoseethem.BenandJackstartedshovelingwiththeirfingersfrozenandnosesnumb.Fortunately,soonagroupofsnowmobilersarrived.Forthenextweek,peoplecameandshoveledeveryday,andadeep,narrowtrenchveryslowlyworkeditswaydownthemountain.JackandBenwenteverydaytofeedandwaterandtaiktothehorses.Whenthebigdaycame,BenandJackmanagedtoleadthehorsesdownthelong,narrowtunnel.Everyonewascelebratingandhuggingeachother.Bengrinnedfromeartoearandgavethehorsesabighug.下水作文：Jackwalkedaroundthehorses.Lookingatthethinhairthatcoveredthehorses'bodiesandthelifelessandtiredeyes,Jackknewthattheirsurvivalchancesweresmallandtookthegunout.However,Benstoppedhimsayingthatthoughtheywerejustliketinybrokenboatsatthemercyoftheroughstorm,hestillfelttheirdesiretosurvive.Theyofferedthehayandthewatertothetwohungryhorses,whoquicklyconsumedallandseemedalittlebackontheirfeet.Butalmostsimultaneously,anewproblemcameup:howtotakethemdowntothevillageinsuchadiresituationwhenthemountainpathwascoveredwithdeepsnow?Andtheonlywayoutwastohelpthemdownthepath.Atthepoint,Bensuddenlyhadanidea.Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingeveryonetocomeandhelp.Theyexplainedthestrugglingsituationfacingthetwohorses.Inspiredbythetwoboys'kindnessandcourage,thewholevillagejoinedintherescue,sometakingsuppliesofhayandwater,somecomingwithblanketstokeepthehorseswarmandtheothersequippedwithsnow-clearingtools.Onceattheplace,theysprangintoaction.Withthejointeffortsofthevillagers,thehorseswerewellfedandthepathwascleared.WiththeguidanceofScoutandthecompanyofthewarmheartedsouls,thetrappedhorseswerefinallydown,safeandsound.Thetwoboys'heroicdeedsgotwidelyrecognizedandeveryonetheyknewgavethemthumb-ups.ButforJoe,itwashislovelyponythatmadetherescuesuccessful.PattingScoutandstrokinghishairgently,heknewitwouldbeanunforgettableChristmas!MyhusbandandIenjoyseeinglifethroughtheeyesofourchildren.It'samazingtowatchastheydiscovertheirworld.Whilewewereoutdoorslastsummerenjoyingthesunshine,ouroldestdaughter,Kaytlin,calledmetothedoorway.Beneaththestepswasababyredsquirrel/'skwiral/.Wewatcheditfromadistance,notwantingtodisturbitorscareoffitsmother.Butafteralongwait—andlookinga11roundourhouseforsignsofanestoramother—werealizedthetinysquirrelwaslost.Shakingterribly,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohelp,buttheInlandFisheriesandWildlifewebsiteshowedthattherewerenowildlifeexpertsinourarea.Aftersomequickresearch,weconcludedthatthebestwaytogivethesquirrelafightingchancewastocareforhimourselves.Soatriptothelocalstoreformilkandsupplieswasinorder.Moreresearchtaughtushowmuchtofeedhim,howtoestimatehisage,howandwhentowean（斷奶）him,andthatweshouldlethimgoassoonashecouldsurviveonhisown.OurdaughtersandItookturnsinfeeding"Squirt."Kaytlintookonthemostresponsibility.Shetaughthimtoeatfromabottle,andshewokeinthenightforhisfeeds.Toourrelief,Squirtsoonbecamehealthyandstrong.Withinafewweekshebecamemoreactive.Hewouldchatter（吱吱叫）forhisnextmeal,playfullygoaroundthegirls,andliedownonthemforsleep.Itwasn/tlongbeforehewasweanedontosolidfoodandreintroducedtothewild.Hisfirstfewvisitstothegreatoutdoorswerefunny.Justlikeachild,hewouldplayinthegrasssomeandthenrunbacktoKaytlinforsafety.Soonshehadhimclimbingtreesandfindingnestmaterial.Pl.Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.P2.Onenight,Squirtdidn'tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.參考答案Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.Theyfoundahollowinanoldtreewheretheirnestwassnugwithmossandtreeleaves.Startledbytheunexpectedstranger,thegraysquirrel,crouchingonthetree,chatteredfierecelyandtrembledhisfurrytail.Afterspottingthis,SquirtabandonedthestickinhismouthandranbacktoKaytlinforshelter.〃Heseeminglycouldn'tsurviveonhisowntemporarily.Mydaughterturnedtousandstrokedhimaffectionately.Thefollowingdayswitnessedhisactiveround-trip,whowasbusyincarryingsticksandpatchingupthenestbutcamedowntohouseforfood.Onenight,Squirtdidn'tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.Weimmediatelyheadedforthenest,onlytofinditwasdestroyedbytheheavyrain.Itdeepenedmydaughters'concernaftersearchingeverywherearoundourhouse.Kaytlinwasanxiousthatthetinysquirrelwasthreatenedbysomeothernocturnalcreatures.Wehadnoalternative,distressedthewholenight.Buttoourrelief,whenthesunrose,theSquirtappearedandwaswaitingforhisfeeds,accompaniedbythefamilyofgraysquirrels.Itseemedthattheyhaveformedanintimateacquaintanceandhecanbereintroducedtothewild.Thewarmexperiencetaughtmychildrentoappreciatelifewithrespectandliveinharmonywithnature.AsIwasdrivingtotheairportlastweektheodometer（里程表）onmytruckrotatedto100,000kilometers.Thisledmetopauseandthinkaboutsellingthetruckandbuyinganewone,butitalsomademethinkabouta11

thelifeI'dlivedinthistruck,andhowmybulldoghadaccompaniedmeinit,leavingmehesitatingaboutsellingit.WhenIreturnedtoCanadaafternineyearsoverseas,whatbetterwaycouldIfitinwithandimmerseinruralculturethanbybuyingapickup?ThedayIrolledoutofthedealer（經(jīng)銷商）andhitthefirstgravelroad（碎石馬路）inmyToyotaTacomawasexciting,untilIgotverynervousasrockshitmynewpurchase.ButallthatquicklyevaporatedwhenIreceivedmyfirstcalIthroughthetruck'sBluetoothphone.Itwasthedoctor,tosaythatmyDadwashospitalizedinaremotelocation.Iimmediatelyfollowedthetruck'sGPSandgottherequicklyandsafely.IwaswithDadforhislasttwodays.Andsothefirstmemoriesofmytruckareimagescarvedinmyheart.AsthekilometersofmyIiferolledon,Lyon,mybulldogwhocamebacktoCanadawithmefromFrance,claimedthebackseatasanareabelongingonlytoher.Itdidn/tmatterhowshortorlongthetripwas,shestaredatmeinthereviewmirrora11thetimie.Mostoften,IwouldarriveatourdestinationandLyonwouldstayinthebackseat,bathedinthesunwiththedooropen,knowingIwouldreturn.Therewasanoverwhelmingsenseofcomfortbetweenusinthattruck.Intheearlydaysoftruckownership,Ipanickedathowdirtyitbecameandanydent（凹痕）itputon.Isoonrealized,though,thatitwaspartofthetruck'scharacter.Nowtruck'scharacter.Nowtruck'scharacter.Nowthatputthemthere.wrinklesappearingonbegan,likehumans,tolookateverydentandrecallthestoryoradventureIbegantoseeitascharacter-building,muchlikemyface.Thetruckwassimplyaginggracefullyanddisplayitsexperienceandwisdom.truck'scharacter.Nowthatputthemthere.wrinklesappearingonbegan,likehumans,toPl.Idon'tthinkavehicleisjustfortravellingfromplacetoplace.P2.ButasIapproachedthecardealer,Istopped.原文內(nèi)容解讀L〃我〃打算換車，但有些猶豫；.開始回憶與車共處的點點滴滴.回憶1：開車去看爸爸.回憶2：狗在后座上成長的許多溫馨時刻.回憶3：我對車子凹痕的感受：一種歲月斑駁，性格塑造參考答案P1.Idon/tthinkavehicleisjustfortravellingfromplacetoplace.Mytruckwasalsoawitnesstomypreviousexperiencesfu11ofsorrowandjoy.Eachtimewemetandparted,itmeantcompletingasmoothtravelling.Asayoungman,Iwaspassionateaboutself-drivingtourthen.AndtheenergetictruckbumpedovertheroadandbouncedupanddownwhilelivelyLyonstuckherheadoutofthewindowwithhertailwaggingexcitedly.AsIsteppedontheaccelerator,thewholevalleyechoedwiththeroarofengine,mixedwithmylaughterandherdeterminedbark.Thereweremanybeautifulmomentsworthrecalling.ButIknewpeoplecouldn'tlivewithpast.SoIdrovethetrucktothedealer.P2.ButasIapproachedthecardealer,Istopped.Thestoriesandmemoriesduringtheseveraldecadesfloodedintomymindaltogether.Lyonwassti11staringatmeintherearmirrow,butcollapsingontothebackseat.Withthewrinklesonmyfacegrowing,onlythenumerouscirclesoftyrescouldgenuinelyrecordedtherealtrackandprovetheshiftingseasons.Afterspottingthedentandrust,arippleofdepressionranthroughmeandtearsbegantoflow.Icouldn'tsayfarewelltothetruck,actingasanimpressivereminderofsomanymemories.Therefore,Iturnedthetruckaround,boundforthefurtheradventures.Theodometerkeptrotating,likethestoryofmylife—movingahead.（四）Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird（蜂鳥）/desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs（蛛網(wǎng)）andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidn'tflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidn/timmediatelyflyaway.Hovering（懸停）,sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdepar