新教材高中英語(yǔ)UNIT2OnwardsandupwardsPart4Writing提升訓(xùn)練含解析外研版選擇性必修第一冊(cè)

PAGEPAGE3Part4Writing記敘文寫(xiě)作寫(xiě)作題目假定你是李華,曾經(jīng)在一所聾啞學(xué)校做過(guò)助教,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英文寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于你的助教經(jīng)歷。1.一位對(duì)生活失去信心的失聰女孩Jean在你的幫助下重拾生活信心;2.當(dāng)時(shí)你遇到的最大困難是溝通障礙;3.你是如何克服困難的,并學(xué)到了什么。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

思路點(diǎn)撥主題助殘經(jīng)歷體裁記敘文人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主文章布局第一部分:概述助殘經(jīng)歷;第二部分:遇到的困難及解決辦法;第三部分:你的收獲。遣詞造句Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞填空1.adj.難堪的,尷尬的

2.adj.令人愉快的,討人喜歡的

3.n.友誼;友好交往

4.adj.心煩意亂的,煩惱的

5.adv.然而,不過(guò)

6.v.鍥而不舍,堅(jiān)持不懈

答案1.panionship4.upset5.nevertheless6.persevereⅡ.本單元語(yǔ)塊、語(yǔ)法運(yùn)用1.完成句子(1)總的來(lái)說(shuō),幫助Jean重拾生活信心是一次愉快的經(jīng)歷。Onthewhole,Jeanrestoreherconfidenceinlifeis.

(2)我面對(duì)的最大的困難是溝通障礙。Thebiggestdifficultywasthecommunicationbarriers.

(3)此外,我盡一切努力與她建立友誼及互相的信任。Furthermore,Imadeeveryefforttowithher.

答案(1)helping;adelightfulexperience(2)Ifaced(3)establishcompanionshipandmutualtrust2.句式升級(jí)(4)用it作形式主語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)句(1)

(5)將句(2)改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句

答案(4)Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.(5)ItwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultyIfaced.連句成篇

參考范文Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.Frommymemory,whenwefirstmet,shewasalwaysupset,makingmeembarrassed.Meanwhile,itwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultyIfaced.Nevertheless,Imadeit.First,Iadvisedhertogathercouragetoconfrontthedifficultiesinsteadofescapingfromthem.Furthermore,Imadeeveryefforttoestablishcompanionshipandmutualtrustwithher.Eventually,whatmatteredmostwastopersevereinwhatIwasdoing.Fortunately,whatIgetfromthisexperienceisthatconfidenceanddeterminationcanreallycontributetooursuccessandthateveryoneshouldbeconfidentaboutlife.寫(xiě)作積累1.OnceIwasinvitedto...butwhathappenedlatermademefeel...2.AtfirstIthought...butitturnedouttobe...whichmademefeel...3.OnlywhenIwastoldby...didIbegintorealizewhatasillymistakeIhadmade.4.Seeingthis,MrSmithcouldn'thelplaughingandtoldmehowto...實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練P108()假設(shè)你是Tom,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示講述你和父親一起爬山的一次經(jīng)歷。1.去年暑假我和父親早晨出發(fā)去爬山;2.在半路上,下起雨來(lái),我們?nèi)肀涣軡窳?又冷又累;3.我開(kāi)始抱怨,想要放棄;4.父親給予我鼓勵(lì)和溫暖;5.最終我們成功到達(dá)山頂,享受了美景。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Part4Writing實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練Onepossibleversion:IstillrememberthedaywhenIwentclimbingwithmyfatherinthelastsummervacation.Wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Unluckily,itbegantorainonthehalfway.Igotwetallthrough,feelingcoldandtired.SoIcouldn'thelpcomplainingandwantedtogiveup.Justatthattime,myfatherencouragedmenottogiveupandputhiscoatonmesoftly.Hetoldme,“Wewon