2023年顧家北雅思作文匯總

顧家北0813精品班作文大作文Maｎypｅoplethinkiｔｉsvｅｒyimpｏrtanｔtｏｐrotecｔthｅenviｒonmentbｕttheymaｋｅnoeｆforttodｏiｔthemｓelvｅs.Whyｄoyoｕthinkｉtisｔhｅｃasｅ？Whatacｔioｎsｃaｎbedonetｏensｕreｔhatindivｉduaｌｓpｒoｔecttheenviｒonmｅｎt？

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hｅtwofigures.第二篇ＴhebarchaｒtsprovｉdeｕsinｆormatioｎabｏｕthoｗfaｍiｌiesiｎanAsiａnｃｏuntrｙspenttheirｍoneｙin1９９8anｄ２0２３．Aglａｎｃeatthechａｒtsｔｅlｌｓtｈａｔexpenｄitureonｄiffeｒｅntgooｄsin20２3overwｅighedthatin１99８eｘｃｅpttｈａt(yī)sｐｅnｔonclothｅs.Peoｐlｅgａｖemucｈmoreｐrｉorｉｔｙtospirｉｔｕalenjｏｙmeｎｔwhｉchｌｅadtoahugeｉncrｅaseｏｆｅxｐenｄiｔureonholiday,eａｔingouｔ，readiｎg(nｅwspapｅrsａndmａgazines)anｄgoingtoｃｉnema,rｉsｉngfｒom8％ｔo１5％,６%to１5％，３%to８％ａnd3%to5%respectiｖeｌy.Ｔｈecostsforeｌeｃｔronicgoodsalsoiｎｃｒeａｓedfrom12％to14%dｕringthｅdecａde.Tｈｅonlｙdiffｅrenceｉsexpenditureoncloｔhｅswhiｃｈｗａsｔoｔaｌlyoppｏｓiｔeｔoｔｈemainstｒeaｍ.Thｅprｏportiｏｎoｆitwａｓ10％ｉn19９８;hoｗeveriｔdroppｅdtｏｈalfofitsｏｒｉginalratesin2023.Aｌlｉnalｌ,ｔhepａst１0yeａｒｓwitｎessedahuｇecｈangeofｔheeｘpｅnditurｅｏnvariousofasｐectｓfoｒｈoｕsｅｈｏlｄs.第三篇ThｅｃhａrtｓtellthｅpｒoｐｏｒtionｏfｄiｆferenｔｃategoriesofhousepeopleｌiveｉnｔｈreepartsofAusｔraｌiain2０２3ａnd２０２3.In2０23,Vicｔoｒiaｈad76%ｒeｓｉdentsiｎhｏｕsｅ,１２％iｎseｍi-ｄｅtaｃｈedｈouｓe,11%ｉnapａrtmentｓaｎｄtherestinotｈeｒｔｙpｅs．InNSW，hoｕseａｌsoａｃcoｕnｔedfｏrｔhelargesｔparｔｏf66%,with1０%ａnｄ13％inｄｕplｅｘandflaｔrespｅctｉvelｙ.Andmｏreｐeopleｌｉvedinothｅrkiｎds.Taｓmanｉahａdlaｒgesｔpropoｒtionofｈｏuselｉｖｉngpopulatiｏn,ｗhichrｅａcｈes8８%．Fiveyeaｒslater，ｔheratｅｓfｏrhｏusｅalｌdroppｅｄ2%iｎtheｔｈreeregｉonｓ．Asforseｍi-dｅtachedhoｕsｅ,Victｏｒia,ＮSＷａndTaｓmaｎiasaw１%incｒease,1percentdeｃｒeasｅandsｔabiliｔyreｓpｅｃtｉvelｙ.Theｆigureｓｏfflaｔallhadaｓlighｔｌyiｎcreaｓｅ.Aｎdｆｏrｔhｅｒｅstｕnmentionｅｄｔｙpes,thｅyｒｅmaｉnｅdtｈeｓameat1%eｘｃeptNSWrｏsｅｆｒoｍ11%to12%．ThetaｂｌecｏmparesｆｉｖeEuroｐeancountrieｓinteｒｍsｏftｈeｐropｏrtionsoｆunｅmｐloｙｅｄｐeopｌeasweｌlasthefiguｒesfortｈoｓｅｙoｕngpｅopleoutofwork.Ｐolａndｈadtｈeｈighｅｓｔｙｏuthuｎemｐloymenｔrateａt(yī)3７%,ｎeaｒlyfivｅtiｍeｓthｅｌeveｌｉnDenmark.Ｔheleｖelsｏfuｎempｌoymentfｏｒyoｕnｇpeoｐlewｅresiｍilaｒinothercouｎtｒies,ｗiththehigｈｅstseｅninIｔalｙ２3％aｎdｔｈeｌowestｉnGermaｎyａｔ17%.Itiｓcｌeaｒfromｔheｔabletｈatinalltheｓecouｎtｒies,theuneｍployｍeｎｔrａt(yī)ｅｆorｔｈeｙounｇergｅnerａt(yī)iｏnwａshigｈerｔhaｎｔｈeoverallunemploymｅｎtfigｕres．Intereｓｔinｇly,Pｏlanｄ,Ｇermaｎy，IｔalyanｄＨｕngaryｈadsimilaｒuｎemｐlｏymentrates,ranginｇｂeｔweeｎ1５%ａnd18%.TｈeｆigurefoｒＤenｍaｒkwassignｉficａｎtｌyｌoweｒaｔ3％.Overaｌｌ,youthuneｍployｍentwａsmoreｓeriousinPｏlａndtｈａninothercountｒiｅs．Denmarkhadthelowｅstfigｕresforboｔhyouthunemｐlｏymentａndoverallｕｎemｐloyｍｅnｔ,whilｅoｔherｃounｔｒiesｈadsｉmilarfｉｇuｒesfortｈｅｓｅproｂleｍｓ.流程圖寫作Thｅchartｉllustratesｈowtousｅｃocoａbｅanｓtｏproducｅsｅvｅrａlfoodiｔｅmｓforcuｓtomeｒs.Firstｌy,ｗholｅbeansarｅcarefｕlｌｙpickingbeｆｏrｅdryｉngintｈesｈell.Tｈenｔｈeyaｒepressedｉnｔococｏａliqｕor,whicｈisthｅmainmａt(yī)erialofthesecoｎｄｓtagｅ.Thｅｎcocoaliｑuorisfurｔherpresｓeduntilｉｔｂeｃomesａcocaｃake，whｉcｈisdirｅctlｙsｅｎｔｔoindusｔｒyｔomaｋｅｃakeｓanddrinkｓorissｏｌｄtothｅｃonsumeraftｅrgrｉnｄeｄintocoｃoapowｄeｒ.Thecoｃoalｉquorｃanalｓoｃonveｒｔｉnｔoｃoｃoａａndｔhｅnbeseｎｔｔorｅｌeｖanｔｉnduｓtry.Cｏcoaｌiquor,afｔeｒfuｒtｈerｒeｆining，mixwｉthｃocoａandsｕgarturnstoinｄｕstrychocolate.Finishｅdcｈocolatepｒoｄuctswillbeｐutoｎtheｓhell,ｂeｆorｅｔｈeｆｉｎalproceｓs.Aｌlｉnalｌ,cocoabeanｓcanbｅｕsｅdtoproduｃecｏcoapｏｗder,cｈocolateｐｒoｄuctsａｎdｉngｒｅｄｉentｓfｏrｒelevaｎtｉｎｄusｔrythｒoｕghthreesimpｌestagesstartiｎgfｒompre-prｏcｅsｓｉｎgrawmaterialｔoｆiｎalpacｋaginｇforselｌ．顧家北Ｔhｅwｈolebｅansarepicｋedａt(yī)theｆiｒstsｔageｗｉthｓhellsrｅmoved,anｄｔhenｄrieｄａndprｅｓseduｎtｉｌcocoaliｑuoｒisｃrｅatｅd.Thiｓｍarkｓtｈestaｒｔoｆtheｓecｏｎdｓtage,wｈｉcｈｉnｖoｌvesthreepｒoｃesｓeｓ．Tｈｅcｏcoａlｉquｏrcanbeusedｔoｍakｅｃｏcacakesｉnthｅｆirstｏption.Anotherchoiceisthemaｎufactｕｒｅofcoｃoａ,whilecｏcoaliｑuｏriｓrｅfineｄｉntｈethirdpｒｏcesｓtｏproｄｕceindｕstrialcｈocｏlaｔe．Inthefiｎａlｓｔage，ｔhesematerialsarｅprocｅssｅdfurtｈｅrtoｃｒeatedｉfferentendｐroductsfｏreitheｒｃｏrｐｏrateclｉｅntsoroｒｄinarｙcｏnsumeｒs.Cocacaｋesａｒｅｇrouｎdiｎtocoｃoapｏwｄｅrfｏrinｄiｖiduａｌconsumers,ｏrｄirectlｙｄeｌivｅrｅdtocaterｉｎgbusiｎｅsseswhicｈpｒoｖidedrinksandcakes.Coｃｏａiｎtheｓｅconｄｐrｏｃeｄｕremenｔioｎeｄearlieriｓaｌsoｔransportedtothesebusiｎｅsses.Iｎcｏntrast，thｅinｄustrｉalchocolａｔeｉsｆlａvoｒedwiｔhsuｇａr,ａndfinｉshｅｄｃｈocolateproductsaｒesubsequentlｙavaiｌaｂleｆoｒｃｏnsuｍers.第一篇Thetａbｌeｐroviｄeｓｕsｗｉthdａt(yī)aoｆthｅｐｅrｃentagｅofｃｏnｓｕmeｒeｘpenditureoｎｄiｆfeｒｅntiｔemsinfiveｃountｒiesin2023．ThebiggestnumberexｉsteｄinＴｕｒkey,wｈｅrepeｏｐleｓpｅnt３2.14％oftheiriｎcoｍｅｏnｆooｄ，drinkandtoｂａｃcｏ,aｌmｏstfivetｉmeｓthenumberofpercentagesｐenｔoncｌoｔhing(6.63%)ａｎdeiｇhttiｍestheｆiguｒeofperｃｅｎtagespeｎｔonspiriｔuaｌeｎjoyment.ＣｏmingｎextisＩrｅlanｄ,whoｓepｅrcentａgeofnaｔiｏnａlｃonsｕmｅrexｐendituｒeｏｆeaｔingｗaｓ28.91％.Cｏｓtsｆoｒcｌotｈｉngandfｏotwearａccoｕｎtｅdfoｒoｎly６.43%,ｔhreetimesｔheeｘｐｅnｄitｕｒeｏflｅisureaｎdedｕcatiｏn.Sｐａiｎtooｋｔheｔｈｉrdplaｃeｔhoughthepｒopoｒtionｏfiｔsnａｔｉoｎalconｓｕmerｅｘpendiｔuｒｅwasthｅlowest(1.98％).ＥxpeｎｄitureoｆfoｏditeｍsiｎSｐainacｃｏｕntedfor1８．8%，tｈreefｏlｄthefｉgureｏｆiｔsｃlothinｇspｅnding．ItaｌyaｎdSwｅｄｅｎciｔizenshadsmａllperｃeｎtａgesofiｎｃoｍespenｔｏnfooｄ（１6．３6%，15.77%),onlyaboｕthalfｔhefiｇureｏfTｕｒkeｙ.Howｅver,theirclothinｇcｏｓts(9%,5．4%)aｎdspiｒituａｌｐay-oｕｔｓ(３.２%,3．22%)weｒerｅlativｅlyhigh.Ｉnanｕｔsheｌl，thepｅrｃentageｓｏfｎatioｎalconsumerｅxｐeｎdiｔureｂycａｔegｏｒｙin2023varieｄａｌotaｍoｎgtｈefivecｏuntriｅs.Buｔａｌlshａredsoｍesimｉlaｒities,namely,larｇestｐｒｏportionofexpｅnｄｉtｕreｏnfood,drｉnkandｔｏｂaｃｃoandｓmaｌlesｔpercentageｏfｌｅｉsureaｎdｅducatiｏncosts.第二篇TheｂａrｃｈaｒtsshowｔheｎuｍbeｒｏfｍａｒriａgesａnｄdivｏrcesiｎUSAandmａritalstaｔusofＡmｅｒicanａdultsduringtｈeperioｄｏf197０to202３．Tｈenumberoｆｍarriagｅsrｅmａinedat2.５ｍilliｏｎin1970and1９80，aｆterwｈichithadaslightｌydecｒｅａsｅto2mｉlliｏnin2０２3．Thediｖorceｓnuｍbersｔａrｔｅdfoｒm1millｉｏniｎ１9７0aｎdsｕddeｎlｙｉncｒｅasedｔoalmosｔ1.5ｍilｌiondｕriｎgthatdecａde.Theniｔdｒｏppedtｏnearlｙ1mｉlｌioｎｉn1980andfinａllｙreａcｈedtoitssｔａｒt（１milｌioｎ）.Theｐerｃenｔaｇｅofneｖｅrmarrｉｅdaduｌtswas15%iｎ1970anｄthefｉgｕrｅiｎclinｅdto２０%thirtyyearslater.Ｔｈepｒｏｐｏrtioｎsofbｏthmａｒrieｄandwidｏｗedaduｌtsｓawdroｐsduriｎgthethrｅedｅcaｄeｓ.Marｒiedａdultsaccｏuntedｆor70％in1９70whiｌｅｔｈefigurewaslesｓthａn60％in2023．Aｓfｏrdｉvorcerａｔｅ,ｉthａdasignificantrisｅformnearly0%toalmost1０%.Ａlｌiｎalｌ，ｔheｐerｉodfrom１９70ｔo2023wiｔｎeｓsｅdａｈugechanｇeofmaｒriagesanｄｄｉvorcesinAmeriｃa.Bothtｈetotaｌｎumberanｄpｅｒcｅｎtageofmａrriageｄecreａsedｗｈileｔｈepｒｏｐoｒtｉoｎsoｆnevermａｒｒiedａnｄdｉvｏｒcedｐeoｐｌesawanupｗardｔrｅnd.流程圖Thetwodiagramｓilｌustraｔｅhｏwtoproｄｕｃecｅｍenｔａndhowtousecｅmeｎtｔｏproｄuceconcrｅtｅ．Ｃｅmenｔprｏductioｎｉsreｌaｔｉｖelycomｐlｅxａｎｄusestｗomatｅriａｌs.Ｆirstly,limestoneaｎdｃｌａyarepｌacedinｔhecrusher,wheretｈesemａt(yī)eｒiaｌｓarecｒｕsｈeｄｂｙthecrｕｓｈer.Thenｐｏwdｅrismixedbｙtｈemiｘｅr,ｂefoｒebeingheatedbytｈerｏtaｔingheateｒ.Atthenextstage，heatedpowｄeriｓsentｔｏthegrind,wｈｅreｉtiｓgroundeｄｉｎtoceｍent.Ａndfｉnalｌycｅmｅntiｓｐａｃkｅdinｔｈｅbａgs.Ｃｏncrｅtｅｐroductionｉsrelativelysimpｌe.15%ofcemeｎt，10%ofwａt(yī)ｅr,25％ofsanｄａnd5０%oｆgravel，namelysmallstoｎｅsａremixintheｃoncｒetｅmixer,whｅrethｅytｕｒｎedｏuttｏｂｅｃoncｒｅte．Alliｎaｌｌ，cｅmentpｒｏducｔioｎｉncluｄｅs５staｇesandthｅｏｕｔcomeceｍeｎｔisoneofthefoｕrraｗmaｔeriaｌsoｆtheconｃretｅproduｃtiｏn.地圖Themａｐsshowhowanａreachaｎgｅddurｉngtｈeｐeriodｏf1780to202３.Ｉn1780,theｒeweｒe100hｏmeslｏcateｄonｔhenorth-eａsterｎｃorneｒwithｗoｏｄｓtotｈesouth.Arivercrossedtｈeａreafroｍsoｕthtonｏrｔｈwithfourfarmsintheｍiddleoftheregiｏn.80yearslａt(yī)er，thenumbeｒoｆｄwelｌinｇpｌacｅsdｏubｌeｄto２00,wｈilｅｔhenｕmbｅｒｏfｆarmsdｒoppｅdbｙhaｌｆandwoodsalsoｓhｒａnkinsｉze.Ａｒｏadwasbuilｔｉnthenorｔhａrea,cｏnnecｔｉngtｈeｌｉvingｐlacetｏｔｈeｒiver.Anoｔhermａjoｒcｈaｎｇｅisｔhａt(yī)abridgeｗaｓcｏｎstｒｕctｅｄovertheriver.Iｎ2023,ｔhenuｍberoｆhoｍeｓsuｄｄeｎlyｉｎcrｅａsｅdto500aｎdanewｌybuiltrｏad,heａdingtoｗａrdssｏｕthrｅplacｅdｆaｒｍandwｏodsaｒｅa,whｉchlinkedtｈedwellingpｌacestｏthesｃhoｏlandｓpｏrtsfieldinthesouth．Seｖｅraｌｓhoｐsopeｎedtothｅrightｓideofthedowｎstｒｅaｍｒiverｗithawｅtlandｆorbirdstotｈeｉrsoｕth.Oｖｅｒalｌ,thｉｓａｒeasａwanincreaseｉnconstructionssuchａsdwｅｌlinｇｐlａceｓ,schｏolsandｆacilities,altｈoughfarmｌaｎdaｎdfｏrｅｓtswerｅｒemｏvedｆorｎewｂｕiｌｄinｇsandtranｓｐortiｎfraｓtructure．大作文Weｌiveincｉｔiesortｏｗnswｈiｃhｈａｖemuseumsdisｐlａyinghistoriｃaｌandcｕlturａlimpｏｒｔance，butｐeopledoｎotvisiｔｔheｍ.Whydoyouｔhinｋpeopledonotｖisiｔｍｕsｅumsiｎtｈｅirloｃaｌareas?Whａｔistheｉｍｐoｒｔanceｏｆmｕseumsｔｏsｏcietｙ？顧家北Ｖisitｉｎgmuseumsiｓhardlｙａrewarｄingeｘｐerienceｆoｒmanypeople,soｔheywillnotconsiderthｉsoptiｏnwhenｔheycaｎspendlｅｉsuｒetｉｍeonoｔhｅracｔivitiｅs.Thesｅｍuｓｅuｍsｄonotorgaｎｉzenｅweｘｈiｂiｔionｓｔhatcankeｅpuｐwithｔhｅtreｎｄs，ｏrprovideanyformｏfentertainｍｅｎtlikeiｎteracｔｉvｅｇaｍestoattraｃｔtheyouｎｇaudｉencｅ．Thｉsiswhyatrｉptoａmuseumcanharｄlycomｐetefoｒaｔtｅntionｗitｈspoｒts,pｉcｎicsａｎｄpaｒties．Aｎoｔherreasonｉsthatpｅoｐｌｅcaｎgａt(yī)hｅrinfｏrmatiｏnabｏuｔthoseartefａctsoｎdisplaｙontｈeIｎterｎｅt.Theywiｌｌincｒｅaseknoｗleｄｇeaｂouｔthestoriesｂｅhinｄandtｈeculturalvalｕeｏｆeacｈitem,wｉtｈｏutｈaviｎgtｏvｉsitｉｎｇtheｍuｓeuminpｅrｓｏn.Musｅumscａnｅncourageｖｉsｉtors’ｉnteresｔiｎthｅircultuｒalheritaｇeａndｄisseｍｉnatｅknｏｗledｇｅａｂoutacitｙoｒaｃounty’sｃｕltｕｒａlasseｔs．Somｅexhibiｔionｓmayshowaｎｃiｅｎtuｔｅnsｉlｓusedbypｒevioｕｓgenｅｒatｉｏns,sｏpeopｌewhoaｔｔenｄｔｈeｓeｅxhｉｂｉtiｏnsmａyｈaｖeagｏodideaofhoｗｔｒaditｉonalfｏoｄwａscoｏked.Ｓoｍehｉstoricalｄoｃumｅntｓaｎdｐaintｉｎgsmighｔｓhowthearｃhitecturalstylewhichuｓeｄtopｒedｏminate,andmanｙｖiｓiｔｏｒｓｍightbeiｍpressedｂythearcｈiｔecturalachｉｅvｅｍentsｏftheirancesｔorｓ.Ｗiｔhsuchｋnowlｅｄge,tｈeseｖisitｏrsｍａymａkｅanｅffｏrtｔopreseｒｖesometraditｉｏnsaｎdkｅｅpsｏｍｅold-fasｈionｅｄcｏｏkingskillｓorｂuildingtｅｃhniquｅsalｉvｅ.Museumshａveａlsobeenoｐeraｔingasaｃｅnteroｆlearｎing,whereyｏungpeｏplecａnkeepuｐｔｏdaｔewiｔhｔhecutting-edgetechnologyindifferentfｉeｌds．Ｔｈeａviatiｏnmusｅums，ｆｏrｅｘａmple,giｖechiｌｄrｅnaglｉmpｓeoｆtｈｅａirｌiｎｅindustrｙandｅｖenｓｐacetravｅl,incｌuｄingｓｐacｅｓhipsａｎdequipmeｎtsｕｐpｏrtinｇastronauｔswhoｅｘｐｌoredtheｏuterspａｃｅ．Tｈemuseuｍｏｆarcheｏloｇycanshowthｅmｈoｗsomesｐecieshａｖｅdiedoｕt,anｄpoｓsiblyiｎｓｐｉrethemｔoｄｏｒｅｓearｃhｉnbiolｏｇyaｎdextｅndourknoｗledgeofhowtopreseｒveｏｕｒeｃｏsysｔem.Theycoｕｌdｎotｍaｋecｏntｒibutｉｏnｓtosocialpｒogresｓ,ifｔｈｅydiｄnotｈaveaｃceｓｓtoｓuchｋnowledge．Recenｔｌy,anincreａｓinｇnumberofpeoｐｌerefusedtopａyａｖｉsitｔｏmｕseｕmsｉｎtｈｅirlｏｃａlplａｃｅs．Ｐersoｎａlly,ｆollowingreasoｎsmayacｃｏuｎtfortｈepheｎomenon.Ｓomeｐｅoplereckonｍuseuｍsａｓboｒｉｎgｐlacｅssotｈaｔtheｙａrｅnevｅrwiｌlingtovｉsit.Ｆorｅｘample,tｈehｉstｏｒｉｃalａndｃulturａlimpｏｒtａnceｄisｐlａｙedthｅreｈasneveｒｃhangｅdａｎdthereisnoｅntertaｉnmｅnｔ,ｓuchasintｅractivｅｇameｓ.Allｔhesetｅndtoleftpｅｏpleａboｒinｇfeｅling.Incontraｓt,peoｐlepｒefertojoinsomeinｔerestinｇaｃtivitieｓｓuｃｈaｓballgames,piｃｎicandｄinｉngout.Anotherｒeａsonｉsthａt(yī)nowadayspeopleｌearnｈistoryandａｃquirｅｓｃienceknowledgｅthroughinterｎetraｔherｔｈaｎgoｔoliｂrarｙinｐｅrson．Informatiｏnoftｈeeｘhibitｉｏn＇stｈｅhisｔoricａｌvａlｕeandｓtorycanｂeeａsilyａcｃesｓedoｎline.Ｈowevｅｒ,visｉtiｎgmｕseｕｍspｌayａｎｉｍportａntroｌeintraｄｉtioniｎheriting.Ancｉentvｅsselsｐroviｄeuswithｔｒaditioｎalcｏokiｎgmetｈodswhileｍｕralsｅnabｌeustｏｃoｍpｒｅhｅｎdstyleofａnciｅｎtaｒchiteｃtｕｒetosomedegree.Ｉtisadvantageｏusｆorｙounｇpeｏpletoｐasｓｏntｈecultｕreiftheｙhaｖeagoｏdacknowledgeoftheirｏwntraｄｉｔionbｙvisitinｇmｕseｕmｓ.Ａddｉtionalｌy，ｍuseumsｏｆferｕstｈemostａdvanceｄscｉｅnｃｅａｎdtechｎology,whｉｃhisbenefｉｃｉａltｏtｈeｄeｖelｏpmenｔofthesoｃiety．Thｅlateｓtdeｖelopmenｔofspaｃｅanduｎiversｅｉｎｏurｃountryｃａｎｂeacquiredｉnspａcemusｅumsandtｈeyouｎgcａnuｎｄｅrsｔａnｄthereasonofcrｅａt(yī)uｒeeｘtiｎｃtｉoｎthrｏughｖiｓｉtingarcｈaｅｏlogymuseｕms.Ｍuｓeuｍｓcanmotivateｔｈeinterestsｏftheaｄｏｌｅsｃｅntsａｎdtheyouｎgwｉllacceｌerａt(yī)estheｄｅvｅlopmentｏfsｏｃietｙiｎthefutuｒe．Ｏveｒall，vｉsitingmuseumｓｉsoｆｇreａｔsignｉfiｃanceforbotｈtｈｅｉｎｄividualｓ’compｒeｈｅndiｎgofｃultureaｎdtheｄevelopｍentofoｕrｓoｃiｅtｙ．顧家北Visiｔingmｕseuｍｓishａrdlyarewardｉnｇexperienceformａｎｙpｅoplｅ,sotheywｉｌlnotｃonsｉderthiｓoptｉoｎwhｅntheycanｓpｅｎdlｅisｕrｅtimeonｏtheractivitｉｅｓ.Theｓeｍuｓeuｍsdonotorｇａｎiseneweｘｈｉbiｔiｏnsthatｃankeepupｗiththetｒｅnｄｓ,orprｏviｄeａnyfｏrｍｏfenｔertaｉnｍenｔlikeiｎteｒactｉvegamesｔｏattｒacttheyoｕｎgａudience.Thisiswhyaｔriｐｔｏａmｕsｅｕmcaｎhardlycompeｔeforattｅntionｗiｔhｓportｓ,picnｉcsanｄparties.AｎotｈerreａsｏnisthaｔpeoplecangatｈｅrinｆormationaｂoutthoseartｅfactｓondiｓpｌaｙontheIntｅrnet.Tｈeywiｌlｉnｃreasekｎoｗleｄgeabｏuｔｔｈｅstorieｓbehindandtheｃulturａlｖalueｏfｅachｉｔem,ｗiｔhoｕthavingtｏvisｉtinｇtheｍusｅuｍinpersoｎ.Museumｓcaｎｅnｃouｒageｖisitors’ｉntｅｒestintheｉrcultｕrａlｈeritaｇeａnddissｅmｉｎaｔeknowledgｅａboutacityoｒａcounty’scuｌｔuralaｓsetｓ．Sｏmeｅxhibiｔionｓmayshowａｎｃiｅnｔuteｎsilsusedbypreviouｓgeｎeratiｏns,sｏpｅoｐlewhoaｔtenｄtheseeｘｈibｉtionsmａyhaｖeagｏｏdiｄeaofhowtraditionａlｆｏｏdwaｓcoｏked.Ｓomehiｓtoricaldoｃumentsａndpａintｉｎgsmigｈtshowthｅarｃhitｅｃｔｕｒａlsｔylｅｗｈiｃhusedtopredoｍiｎate,aｎｄｍanyｖisitorsmｉghｔｂｅiｍｐressedbyｔhearｃhiteｃｔｕralaｃｈｉeｖemeｎｔsoftｈeiranceｓtors．Wiｔhｓｕchknowｌedｇe,thｅｓeｖiｓｉtorsmaｙmaｋeaｎｅfforｔtopreｓeｒvesomeｔraditioｎｓａndkeepsomeｏｌd－faｓｈｉoneｄcookｉｎgsｋiｌlsorbuildｉnｇｔechｎiqｕｅsａlive.Museumsｃａｎalsoprｏｖiｄeuswｉthｔｈelatｅsttｅchnologicａladvanｃeｓ,whｉｃhisbenｅｆiciaｌｔoｔｈedeveloｐｍｅｎtofｔhesｏｃｉety.Ｆｏrexamplｅ,ｔheａvｉａt(yī)ioｎmｕseｕｍｓoｆfｅｒuslａt(yī)estknoｗｌedgeofａeｒoｎauticswhilethearｃhａeoloｇymuseuｍshelpuｓcomprehendtｈｅreasonofｅｘtiｎcｔiｏn.Thiｓiｓｗhｙmuseｕmｓcannｏtｏnlymｏtiｖaｔeｔｈeinｔerｅstsoｆtｅenagersbutaｌｓoencｏｕragethｅmｔｏstｕｄｙhardinalｏngrun,ｗｈichwiｌlacceleratｅｔｈeiｍprｏｖeｍentofｔhesocietyｉnｔheｆｕture.（Seｌｆ-wｒitｔeｎｐａrａgraph)Theaｖiatioｎmuseumsｓpaceships,ｓhuttleｓ,aｓｔroｎauｔs,exｐloretheouｔersｐaｃe,Someｐeopｌethinkuｎｉversiｔyｅduｃationshouldｐrovｉdestuｄentswｉthｓkｉllsofemploｙmｅntｉntｈefｕtureｗhilｅothｅrsbeliｅveｔhatpeopleｓｈｏuｌdｆｏｃusｏnａcaｄemiｃstuｄyｏnlｙ.Discuｓsbｏthviewsａnｄgiｖeyｏuｒoｗｎopiｎiｏn.Sｏmeｐeｏplethiｎkthｅinｃreasingbusｉｎessaｎｄculturalcontactbeｔweencountｒiesbrinｇsmａnyposｉｔiveefｆｅcts.Oｔheｒssaｙitcauｓestｈeｌosｓofｎationalideｎtiｔies.Disｃussonbothsidesandｇｉｖeyｏuropｉniｏｎ．Peoplｅreｌｙｍoreｏnfｏreignpｒodｕctsandimitaｔetrａdiｔionsaｎｄｃultureoｆｏtｈercountrｉes,whichleaｄtoahardwａytoｐassoｎｔheｉrowｎculｔuｒｅ.Forｉnstanｃｅ,ｔoomuchrelianceｏnｔheforｅｉgncoｓｍeｔｉｃｓwｉllsurelyshrinｋtｈedｅｍandoｆdomesｔｉcｍａｒkｅt，whiｃｈreqｕirｅｓｔｈｅｌoｃａlindustｒyｔｏdownsｉzewoｒｋforceanｄthustrａdｉtionalwａysofmakingupｗｉllbｅａbaｎｄonｅｄ.Additiｏnally,thｏsewhｏａreiｎｆａvoroｆｃeleｂｒaｔiｎgoｔhｅrs’festｉｖａlsｔｅndｔogiｖelessprioritytｏtｈeｉrowｎtraｄitionｓ.Tｈｉｓwｉllｐuｔtheintanｇibｌeculturehｅritａgeforｍoｕraｎceｓtｏrｓｉnadａｎgerousｓiｔuａt(yī)ioｎ.Mａnyｃｏｕntriesｓpｅndalotofｍoneyiｎａrｔ.Sｏmepeoｐlｅｔhinkinｖｅｓｔmentinarｔiｓｎeｃessary，bｕtothｅrssaｙmoneyisbetterspｅntonpｕbｌｉcservicｅsａｎdfａcilｉties.Ｄiscｕssbothviewsanｄgiveyｏurownｏpiｎiｏn．翻譯練習１.人們對政府贊助藝術(shù)(gｏvernmentｓpｏnsorshiｐ）有不同的見解,特別在國家碰到預算問題的時候。Peoplehaveadopｔeｄdifｆerｅntａt(yī)titudeｓtowardsｇoveｒｎｍentsponsorshipoｆarts，eｓpecｉａllywｈentｈｅirｃountｒieｓ’buｄgetsaｒeｉntherｅd.2．我覺得我們應(yīng)當一方面注重基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施,只有政府有盈余的時候才去投資藝術(shù)。Peｒｓonａlly，weshoulｄgiveｐｒｉoｒｉtyｔothepuｂlicservｉcesａndfａciｌities，whｉleｉｎveｓtmenｔｉnartsiｓanopｔｉoｎonlywhenfｉnanceiｓｓurｐlus.3.很多人支持藝術(shù)的投資認為藝術(shù)可以讓我們的城市更加地美麗和吸引人。Ｔｈoｓewhoａreinfavorｏfarｔsinｖestmentshaｒbortｈeｉdeaｔｈatartseｎableoｕrcityｔobeamorｅgloriｏusandａt(yī)ｔｒactiｖｅone.４.藝術(shù)作品譬如說雕塑，繪畫，塑像，可以讓我們的公共場合,譬如說圖書館、地鐵站、甚至公共廁所都非常地美麗。Ａｒtwｏｒks,suchaｓｓculptuｒｅs,paintingsaｎdstａt(yī)ues,willadｄｃoｌortothepｕblｉｃｐlaces,suchａsliｂｒarieｓ,ｍｅtrｏstatｉoｎｓａndevｅnrestrooｍs．5.假如藝術(shù)行業(yè)繁榮發(fā)展，城市的建筑也有各種風格，我們可以更好地享受城市的生活。Pｒospｅrｏuｓｄevｅloｐmeｎtｏｆartswillleadｔoｖａriousｓｔｙlｅsofarchitectｕres,ｔhuswｅｗilleｎjoyａbeｔteｒcitylife．6.接觸藝術(shù)讓我們減少壓力,也會讓我們心情更好。Ａrtｓwillalsoｌoadoffｏurprｅｓsureandthusｐｒｏｖideuｓwitｈabｅtｔｅrｍood.主體部分第二段7．雖然藝術(shù)如此重要，很多人認為公共設(shè)施更加應(yīng)當獲得政府的資助。Althouｇhartｉsoｆsｏgｒeａt(yī)ｓｉgnificance，amａjｏrityoｆｐｅoplerｅckoｎthａt(yī)ｉnfrａsｔrｕctuｒｅsareｍoｒeimperativetobesｐonsorｅd.8.普通公民對公共設(shè)施（譬如說,水電供應(yīng),學校,圖書館,道路）更感愛好,這些設(shè)施對他們生活質(zhì)量有直接的影響。Comｍoncｉｔｉｚensaｒemorｅｃｏｎｓcｉousｏfpuｂlicserｖｉｃes(eｌectｒiｃｉｔyａnｄwaｔｅrｓｕpｐly,scｈooｌs,ｌｉbｒａｒｉesandroads）,siｎcetｈeｓeaｒewhatｄirｅctlyｃontrｉbuteｔothｅiｒｌivingｑuａlity.9.好的衛(wèi)生條件和獲得干凈水可以提高大眾的健康和減少疾病，而學校和圖書館可以普及知識,提高人們的工作前景。Ａcｃesｓｔｏsanitaryconditｉoｎanｄpｕrｉfieｄwatｅrcａnimpｒovepublic’sｆitｎｅsｓanddecreａsedisｅａseswhiｌｅschoolｓanｄlｉbｒariesspreadacｋｎｏｗｌedｇｅsｏaｓｔobeｔteｒtheircａreeｒpｒosｐectｓ.10．相比之下，對于大部分人來說,雕塑、繪畫或者歌劇是奢侈品(luxuryｉtemｓ）,不也許給他們帶來什么實際的(tａngibｌe)好處。Incontrast,sｃulpｔｕｒes,paintingsanｄｏperasａrｅlｕxｕryitemsfｏrtheｍａjｏｒity，whiｃhwｉllｎｅverbｒiｎｇｔｈｅmanyｔangibleadvanｔages.主體部分第三段１１.我自己的見解是公共設(shè)施促進經(jīng)濟發(fā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