【課件】高中英語續(xù)后續(xù)寫之環(huán)湖賽跑

續(xù)寫之環(huán)湖賽跑續(xù)寫中的學(xué)、思、辨、達(dá)讀原文，學(xué)內(nèi)容和語言01PART011.Forme,itwasnormaltofeellostattheinter-camptrack.Fourcampsofkidswerereadytoleadtheirteamstoablueribbonandwintheday.Notme.Iwastoolittletobetheleaderandtooskinnytobeanathlete.IknewthisbythetimeIwastwelve,becausemycampcounselors（輔導(dǎo)員）andtheotherkidsremindedmeofiteverychancetheygot.Sowhenourcampneededafourthrunnerinthetwo-mileracearoundthelake,IknewIwasnoone’sfirstchoice.2.Ihidintheshadeofamapletreeastheycalledthenamesoftherunners,mybodytensedasIheardacounselorcall,“Fred!WhereisFred!Heisinthisrace!”ItwasBarry.Hespottedmeunderthetree.“Fred!Weneeda12-year-oldwhohasn’tbeeninothereventstorunthetwo-mile!”3.Hegavemeapushtowardsthestartingline.Havingnoconfidenceandtryingtosavemyselffromtheshameoftakingthelastplaceasfourcampswatched,Ipleadedwithhim.4.“ButIdon’tknowthewayaroundthelake!”5.“You’rein.JustfollowBill!”Barrysmiled.6.Billwasmyfriendandthefastestrunnerinourcamp.AndthenBarrysaid,“Whenyoumakeittothelaststretch（最后一程）onthefield,justthrowyourheadbackandrun.”7.Atthestartingline,IstoodnexttoBillandtrembled.8.“Onyourmark…Getset...”Theguncrackedandsixteenofustookoff.IstayedcloseonBill’sheels,alittletoocloseforBill,Iguess.Heshoutedatme,“Backoff!”9.Idid.Twoguyspassedme,butIkeptmyeyesonBill.10.Itwastiring.ThedistancewaswideningbetweenBillandme.Wemadetheturnfromthedustyroadontothemuddy,woodedtrailthatwouldgoaroundthelakebacktothefield.Throughthetrees,IsawBilltripoveratreerootandfall.Arunnerfromanothercamppassedhim.Paragraph1Inamoment,Billwasupagainandrunning.____________________________________________Paragraph2Ididn’tknowwhenIcrossedthefinishline._____________________________________________A.學(xué)內(nèi)容(Getthemainidea)WhenplacetimepeopleeventFred(I),Barry(counselor),Bill(bestfriend)thetwo-mileracearoundthelakeatcampBarryaskedmetoparticipateinthetwo-mileracearoundthelakewithBill.Theracebeganbutunfortunately,wewerebehindandBilltrippedoveratreeroot..B.學(xué)語言(learnthelanguage)1.Forme,itwasnormaltofeellostattheinter-camptrack.Fourcampsofkidswerereadytoleadtheirteamstoablueribbonandwintheday.Notme.Iwastoolittletobetheleaderandtooskinnytobeanathlete.IknewthisbythetimeIwastwelve,becausemycampcounselors(輔導(dǎo)員)andtheotherkidsremindedmeofiteverychancetheygot.Sowhenourcampneededafourthrunnerinthetwo-mileracearoundthelake,IknewIwasnoone’sfirstchoice.2.Ihidintheshadeofamapletreeastheycalledthenamesoftherunners,mybodytensedasIheardacounselorcall,“Fred!WhereisFred!Heisinthisrace!”ItwasBarry.Hespottedmeunderthetree.“Fred!Weneeda12-year-oldwhohasn’tbeeninothereventstorunthetwo-mile!”ablueribbon優(yōu)秀wintheday獲勝tensev.(limbs)becometightandstiff緊繃定語從句3.Hegavemeapushtowardsthestartingline.Havingnoconfidenceandtryingtosavemyselffromtheshameoftakingthelastplaceasfourcampswatched,Ipleadedwithhim.4.“ButIdon’tknowthewayaroundthelake!”5.“You’rein.JustfollowBill!”Barrysmiled.6.Billwasmyfriendandthefastestrunnerinourcamp.AndthenBarrysaid,“Whenyoumakeittothelaststretch（最后一程）onthefield,justthrowyourheadbackandrun.”7.Atthestartingline,IstoodnexttoBillandtrembled.8.“Onyourmark…Getset...”Theguncrackedandsixteenofustookoff.IstayedcloseonBill’sheels,alittletoocloseforBill,Iguess.Heshoutedatme,“Backoff!”givesbapush推了某人一把thestartingline起跑線pleadv.乞求throwone’sheadback身體向前傾theguncracked.槍響了staycloseonone’sheels跟緊某人的腳步非謂語B.學(xué)語言(learnthelanguage)B.學(xué)語言(learnthelanguage)9.Idid.Twoguyspassedme,butIkeptmyeyesonBill.10.Itwastiring.ThedistancewaswideningbetweenBillandme.Wemadetheturnfromthedustyroadontothemuddy,woodedtrailthatwouldgoaroundthelakebacktothefield.Throughthetrees,IsawBilltripoveratreerootandfall.Arunnerfromanothercamppassedhim.woodedtrailtrailcoveredwithtrees樹木繁茂的小路tripover(trippedtripped)絆倒讀原文首句、思情節(jié)和情感02PART02beginningclimaxending1.______2.______3.______4.______5.______A.Billgotupandrestarted.B.Icrossedthefinishline.C.BarryaskedmetojointherunnersandfollowBill.D.TheracestartedbutBilltrippedover.E.Atwo-mileracearoundthelakewastobeheld.F.Ourcampneededafourthrunner.6.______EFCDABBeforethegame:Ifelt_________clues____________________________________unconfident

Notme;toolittleto...tooskinnyto...;noone’sfirstchoice;hid;tensed;trembledDuringthegame:Ifelt_________clues____________________________________tiredstayedcloseonBill’sheels;keptmyeyesonBill;passed;tiring;widening;Afterthegame:Ifelt_______________clues_______________??讀情節(jié)、情感變化，

辨主題、續(xù)文方向03PART03How?BeforethegameDuringthegameAfterthegameunconfidenttiredconfidentthemelovefriendshipchangeofmyattitudefiercecompetition構(gòu)思語言，傳情達(dá)意04PART04Para.1Inamoment,Billwasupagainandrunning.

Para.2Ididn’tknowwhenIcrossedthefinishline.Howwashiscondition?HowdidIfeelatthesightofBill’spersistence?WhatdidIdo?Bill帶傷跑步--我受到激勵--我奮起直追WhatdidIdoandhowdidIfeelafterreachingthefinishline?WhatdidBarryandBillsay?WhatdidIthinkoftheexperience?

（我)到達(dá)--(別人)祝賀--(我)感悟比賽中受激勵l來自比爾的感動1.一看到比爾跌跌撞撞地前行著，膝蓋仍在流血，我無比動容。

（on+doing一...就...）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.DespitethehugepainIcouldtellfromhisextremelypaleface,Billdidn’tstop._____________________________________________________________________________________________(正是他鋼鐵般的堅持和堅定的決心給了我額外的能量。強調(diào)句)OnseeingBillstumbleforwardwithhiskneesstillbleeding,Iwasdeeplymoved.Itwashisironpersistenceandresolutedeterminationthatgavemeanextraburstofenergy.比賽中受激勵l來自巴里的提醒、激勵

我突然想起巴里的話。

ThenBarry’swords______________________.(閃過我腦袋)

_______________________.(在我腦袋回響)flashedintomyhead.

echoedinmyhead.?

加速1.快速跑v._________________比賽中堅持和努力raceeg.Iraced

forward.快速移動eg.Irushedforward.

迅速移動rushdarteg.Idartedtowardsthefinishline.飛奔zoomeg.Izoomed

passedBill.

快速移動whizeg.BarrycheeredasI

whizzed

by.

嗖嗖地快

速移動?

加速1.快速跑v._________________

比賽中堅持和努力eg.Ichargedoff,headingstraightforthefinishline.猛沖eg.Izipped

across

thewoodedtrail.

呼嘯而過zipsprintshootchargeeg.Isprinted

forthefinishingline.沖刺Itookadeepbreathandshot

forward.沖?

加速2.加速____________(vt)____________(短語)

3.我全速往前沖。

Idashedforward___________________.

4.我以驚人的速度向終點沖去。Ichargedtowardsthefinishline________________.5.我以閃電般的速度向終點沖去。(比喻)Idartedtowardthefinishline___________________.

I...________________(像箭般)

I..._________________(像正在加速的火車般)6.Iranasfastasmylegscouldcarryme.__________________________________比賽中堅持和努力acceleratespeedup/pickupspeedattop/fullspeedatanamazingspeedinlightningspeed

likeanarrow

likeaspeedingtrain

我飛快地跑著。比賽中堅持和努力?

堅持與努力1.咬緊牙關(guān)___________________(短語)2.拼盡全力___________________(短語)3.鼓起勇氣___________________(短語)4.不遺余力做__________________(短語)5.Mythroatwasdry,chestwasburning,andIwas

____________

(喘氣)butIdidn'tstop.6.Tough__________________(氣喘吁吁),Ipushedon.(非謂語)7.Thelastfewmileswasablur.But____________(倒裝)

最后幾公里我感覺一片模糊，但我一直跑著。8.我深吸一口氣，大喊一聲，往前沖去。(三連動)I______________,_____________and_______________.puffingandpantingworkupmycourage/summonupmycourage/pluckupmycourage/musterupmycouragewithallone’smightgritone’steeth(-tt)sparenoefforttodosthonIrangaspingforbreathtookadeepbreathletoutashoutsprintedforward9.環(huán)境+身體的阻力也沒使我放棄Thescorchingsun(炙熱的太陽)_________myface,andbeadsofsweats__________myvision,Iwasnearly_______________,yetIploughedon.ploughon:tocontinuedoingsththatisdifficultorboring.堅持做某事；苦撐bakingblurredsuffocated比賽中堅持和努力比賽后的如釋重負(fù)1.我如釋重負(fù)地舒了一口氣。

_______________________________________

Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverme.welledupinsideme._______________________________________

（無靈主語）

Iletoutadeepsigh./Iheavedasighofrelief./Ifeltrelievedandsighed.heave:tomakeasoundslowly緩慢發(fā)出(聲音)比賽后的喜悅鼓掌v.__________n.__________拍肩膀_____________________(短語)Thewholeteamwas_____________(非常高興),especiallyBill.Thewholeplace__________________.(爆發(fā)出掌聲和歡呼聲)Thefield

_____________________________.(爆發(fā)出難以置信的歡呼)ThencameBill,whoslightlyquivered____________(高興地),tookunsteadystepsforwardand______________________(熱情地?fù)肀?wildwithjoyburstoutclappingandcheeringexplodedwith

yellsofdisbeliefinexcitementhuggedmewarmly/gavemeawarmhugpatone’sshoulder(-tt)clap(-pp)/applaudapplause(U)比賽后內(nèi)心反思沒有想到______________________________didIeverexpectmyselftocompletethewholeraceasarunner.要不是比爾我不可能完成兩公里的繞湖賽并且找到我的勇氣的。(虛擬語氣)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________突然意識到_________________________thatthereisalwaysstrengthandconfidenceinsideus,andaslongaswepersevere,maintainhopeandpushforward,wecanfinallyreachthem.

NeverinmywildestimaginationHadn’titbeenforBill/ButforBill,Iwouldn’thavemadethetwo-mileracearoundthelakeandfoundmyconfidence.Itsuddenlydawnedonme=itoccurredto/struck/hitsb=ItwasexactlyatthatmomentthatIcameintotheenlightenmentthat...用虛擬語氣引出感悟：self-doubt學(xué)生作品1生動的小詞engulf:tosurround/coversb/sthcompletely包圍/吞沒(+by/in)bracesbforsth:topreparesbforsthdifficult為困難做好準(zhǔn)備Onepossibleversion

Inamoment,hewasupagainandrunning.Heyelledtome,“Watchtheroots!”Strugglingtokeepmylegsmoving,Ilookeddownandsawthetreeroot.Ipuffedoverit.Twohundredmetreslater,Iscrambledupthehill,readytoseetherestofthepackcrossingthefinishlinewhenIsawnotthefifteenguys,butthree.Thecrowdwasroaring,butIcouldhearBarryovertherestofthem,yelling“Run!”IthrewmyheadbackandtoldmylegstogoandIknewIwaswinning.

Ididn'tknowwhenIcrossedthefinishline.BarrycaughtmeandIcollapsed.“Youflew!Youflew,man!Second!Youpassedtwoguys!”Therewasacrowdofkidsaroundme,pattingmeontheback,givingmehighfives.Ihadcomeinsecond.Billhadfinishedfirst.Withthatandallthehighfivesandthecheersoftheday,thebestprizethatIwalkedawaywith

(輕易贏得)wasmyconfidence.ThatyearIdiscoveredIcoulddoalotofthingsifIputmyenergyintothem.Mikelickedthelastofthemintchocolatechipicecream.Itwasalmosttimetoleave.HejumpedintothecarwithhisparentsandheadedofftotheOlympic-sizedpoolforthebigswimmeet.Whenhisracecameup,Mikewasconfident.Hewasstrongandswift.Mikeclimbedoutthepool,smiling.Hehadjustwonfirstplace,makinghimthefastestboyinhisagegroup."Congratulations,son,"hisfathersaid.Hismomgavehimahug,eventhoughhewassoakingwet.Aweeklater,itwastimeforanotherswimmeet.Likebefore,Mikedecidedtoenjoyhisfavoriteicecreamflavor.Mikerememberedthatthelasttimehehadwonarace,healsoatemintchocolatechipicecreamfirst.Maybehe'dwinagain.He’stakenfirstplaceagain