【三維設(shè)計(jì)】高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí) 寫作專題講座 第七講 高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的寫作與訓(xùn)練課件

一、使用高級(jí)詞匯詞匯量能反映一個(gè)人知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)準(zhǔn)?？忌肴〉酶叻?，就要強(qiáng)化使用復(fù)雜、高級(jí)的詞匯。常用方法如下：1．多實(shí)少虛寫作中多用specificwords，少使用generalwords，多用蘊(yùn)含感情色彩的詞語，少用中性詞。如good指人時(shí)可用以下形容詞替換：kind,honest,generous,selfless,brave,warm-hearted,sympathetic,honorable,humorous,smart,gentle等；good指事物或事情時(shí)可用以下形容詞替換：great,fantastic,splendid,marvelous,excellent,wonderful,meaningful,enjoyable,nice等。以下句子中的形容詞雖然都可以用good代替，但遠(yuǎn)不如原句出彩。Ihopeeveryonecanhavea

time.Heisa

teacher.Thisisreallya

ideatogoclimbingMountHuathisweekend.wonderfulwarm-heartednice2．短語優(yōu)先多使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.→Icannolonger

thewayhespeakstous.He

whatIsaidintheclass.→He

whatIsaidintheclass.putupwithdidn'tlistentoturnedadeafearto3．棄舊取新寫作中要恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地使用高中學(xué)過的、較長(zhǎng)的詞匯。Weall

thesamechance.→Weall

thesamechance(opportunity)．Wehave

homeworktodoattheweekend.→Wehave

homeworktodoattheweekend.havepossessalotofendless4．避免重復(fù)盡量避免過多地使用某一個(gè)單詞，必要時(shí)選擇使用其他恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞或詞組來代替。Ilikereadingwhilemybrother

watchingfootballmatches.→Ilikereadingwhilemybrother

watchingfootballmatches.likesenjoysWe'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealso

alibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.→We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealso

alibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.builtsetup二、使使用較較復(fù)雜雜結(jié)構(gòu)構(gòu)1．在一一篇文文章中中要適適當(dāng)?shù)氐馗淖冏冋Z法法結(jié)構(gòu)構(gòu)來增增加文文章表表達(dá)方式的的多樣樣性。。(1)改變時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)和和語態(tài)態(tài)Thebellisringingnow.→Theregoesthebell!(2)使用名名詞性性從句句Itdisappointedeverybodythattheplayerwasbadlyinjuredinthefirstround.→Thefactthattheplayerwasbadlyinjuredinthefirstrounddisappointedeverybody.(3)使用較高高級(jí)的狀狀語從句句Iwon'tbelievewhatyousay.→Nomatterwhatyousay,Iwon'tbelieve.(4)使用定語語從句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.→Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.(5)使用虛擬擬語氣Youdidn'ttakemyadvice,soyoufailedintheexam.→Ifyouhadtakenmyadvice,youwouldn'thavefailedintheexam.(6)使用倒裝裝句Somevaluablebooksandmycreditca→Initaresomevaluablebooksandmycreditcards.(7)使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.→Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.2．改變句句子開頭頭的方式式。不要要一味地地采用““主語—謂語—賓語”的的文法語語序?？煽梢赃m當(dāng)當(dāng)?shù)匕岩灰恍┏煞址?如狀語)提前，放放在句子子的開頭頭，這樣樣使整個(gè)個(gè)句子讀讀起來跌跌宕起伏伏，增加加書面表表達(dá)的表表現(xiàn)力。。Wemetattheschoolgateandwen→EarlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttotheHongxingFarmtogether.Theyoungmancouldn'thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.→Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn'thelpcrying.3．通過整整合的方方式，把把幾個(gè)松松散的句句子用一一定的連連接方式連接接起來，，也可以以對(duì)所學(xué)學(xué)