高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)(一)課件

概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)1Whatisasummary?

It'sa

shortstatement(陳述)thatcoversonlythemainpoints

ofsth,notthedetails.牛津高階英漢雙解詞典》概要：用簡(jiǎn)短扼要(brief)的語(yǔ)言客觀(objective)全面(thoroughly)呈現(xiàn)要點(diǎn)。Whatisasummary?

It'sashor2Example：Agroupofgreatteachersfromotherclasseshappilycametoourbeautifulandfriendlyclass.Ignore:theunnecessarydetailsThemainidea:Teacherscame（toourclass）Example：3要求01020304a60-wordsummary（一段60詞）cover4-5points（4-5個(gè)要點(diǎn)）useyourownwords（自己的語(yǔ)言）usethebriefsentences（簡(jiǎn)明扼要）05properconnection

(恰當(dāng)銜接）Part1

Requests?(高考寫作要求）要求01020304a60-wordsummary（41WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）2WrongPoints/lackpoints（要點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤/少要點(diǎn)）3Notcompleteordetails(要點(diǎn)不全/細(xì)節(jié)作要點(diǎn)）◆While

writing1.WithoutOwnLanguage(抄原句，無自己語(yǔ)言）2.PoorVocabulary(詞匯簡(jiǎn)單，無豐富詞匯句式）3.Notbriefandlogical(不簡(jiǎn)潔，不連貫）4.Otherproblems(書寫/分段/拼寫/詞句錯(cuò)誤等）Part2Problemsonsummarywriting

◆While

reading1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）Part25技巧01020304Skimmingforthetopicorpurpose略讀知主題/意圖Scanningforthetopicsentence尋讀找主題句Skippingforthekeypointsorsub-points跳讀找主次要點(diǎn)Listallthepointsinaform用表格,列要點(diǎn)Part3SkillsofReadingforpoints05Fastreadingforthegenre快讀定體裁【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦技巧01020304Skimmingforthetop6A:a

narration(記敘文）--tellsastoryoreventB:anexposition（說明文）--explainsthorshareinformationC:anargumentation（議論文）---makesbbelievetheauthor'sopinionWhydoweneedtoknowthegenre?Narration(記敘文)1.story(5w+1h):who,what,whenwhere,why,how)2.event（beginning-development-ending)Exposition(說明文)1.介紹事物→描述性質(zhì)/功用2.問題→解決方法3.現(xiàn)象→原因→本質(zhì)Argumentation(議論文)thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sviewSkill1.

Fastreadingforthegenre【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦A:a

narration(記敘文）--tellsa7Skill2--

Skimmingfor

thetopicorpurposeWhy?Knowingthetopiccanhelpus:1.leaveoutunnecessarydetails(刪除無關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)）2.presentallthepointscorrectly（正確呈現(xiàn)要點(diǎn)）【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill2--Skimmingforthetop8OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Forexample,DaVinci’spaintingMonaLisa(蒙娜麗莎）wasboughtfortoomuchmoneybecauseitstandsforthetopskillsinit.What’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sview次要點(diǎn)常出現(xiàn)：列舉項(xiàng)目中/段中頻度高/邏輯關(guān)系Tip5：TheformmakestheoutlineclearlyandlogicalforlaterwritingSkill3-DiscoverthetopicsentencesbelowandthinkabouttheirlocationTip4-LeaveoutunnecessaryexamplesordetailsOneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Totrulyunderstandtheinfluenceofmusicpiracy(盜版行為)oncreators,onemustunderstandhowmanypeopleareinvolvedintherecordingprocess.合并改寫：Nowadays,itisregardedasathefttosharemusiconlinewithoutpermission.event（beginning-development-ending)1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Otherproblems(書寫/分段/拼寫/詞句錯(cuò)誤等）【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦DoesthepointsneedtocontainMonalisa?Why?【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Scientistsfindthatthehard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Careerwomenarehealthierthanhousewives.Evidencesshowthatthejoblessareinpoorerhealththanjob-holders.Aninvestigationshowsthatwhenevertheunemploymentrate(失業(yè)率）increasesby1%，thedeathrateincreasescorrespondingly(相應(yīng)地)by2%.Allthiscomesdowntoonepoint：workishelpfultohealth.A:Hard-workingpeoplelivelongerB:HousewivesarehealthierC:UnemploymentrateanddeathrateD:Workisgoodforhealth【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Oneonlinebloggerstatesthat9Skill3-Discoverthetopicsentencesbelowandthinkabouttheirlocation

B1U2StandardandDilaets(expositon說明文)Para1:Believeitornot,thereisnosuchthingasstandardEnglish.(段落第2句,前面是一個(gè)問句）Para2:AmericanEnglishhasmanydialets.(段落第2句）Para3:Geographyalsoplaysapartinmakingdialects.(段落第1句）Tip1---Topicsentencecanbethefirstorthelastsentenceortheanswerofaquestion.(西方喜歡開門見山，主題句常見句首，也有句尾和問句后的答句）【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill3-Discoverthetopicsen10Consolidaton---underlinethetopicsentence

Whyisworkgoodforhealth？

Itisbecauseworkkeepspeoplebusy，awayfromloneliness.Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy，worriedandsolitarywhentheyhavenothingtodo.Instead，thehappiestarethosewhoarebusy.Besides，workgivesonethesenseoffulfillment(滿足感)andasenseofachievement(成就感）.Workmakesonefeelhisvalueandstatusinsociety.Whenawriterfinisheshiswritingoradoctorsuccessfullyoperatesonapatientorateacherseeshisstudentsprogress，theyarehappybeyondwords.Tip2--Whenyouscan,payattentiontothelinkingwordssuchasfirst,besides,ontheotherhand【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Consolidaton---underlinethet11Skill4-Skipping

forthekeypointsorsub-pointsSkippingfor

thesignalwordsaspoints主要點(diǎn)信號(hào)詞：1.結(jié)果關(guān)系（so/asaresult)2.轉(zhuǎn)折后（however/but，tobehonest）次要點(diǎn)常出現(xiàn)：列舉項(xiàng)目中/段中頻度高/邏輯關(guān)系Whilesportsareforfun,itdoesnotmeanthattheyarenotimportanttopeople’slife.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Somesportsstarsgethonorfortheircountry,andtheircountrymenareproudofthem.Theydogoodtothepeople'smentalhealth.

Underlinethecentralpointsandsubpoints

(用下劃線劃出中心論點(diǎn)和次要點(diǎn)）

Tip3--Whenwriting,connectallpointsbrieflyWhy表示結(jié)果(enjoythegames為keypoints，幾個(gè)because后是次要點(diǎn)(exciting,gethonor,dogoodto

)Summary:

Weappreciatethegamesfortheymakeourlifeexcitingandtheyaregoodforourmind.【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill4-Skippingforthekey12

What’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Forexample,DaVinci’spaintingMonaLisa(蒙娜麗莎）wasboughtfortoomuchmoneybecauseitstandsforthetopskillsinit.Moststarsaregreatintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeak(尖端）toearnthatgoodearnings.DoesthepointsneedtocontainMonalisa?Why?Tip4-LeaveoutunnecessaryexamplesordetailsNo,itisonlyforthemainpoints:youhavetopayifitisthebest.Sub-points:talents,hardtraining(=keepperforming)Consolidation-Skimforcentralpoints&subpoints

【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦What’smore,sportsstars13Skill5-Listallthepointsintheform(用表格列要點(diǎn))Tip5：TheformmakestheoutlineclearlyandlogicalforlaterwritingTopic

logicMainidea(para1-)Supportingdetailsrewriting【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill5-Listallthepointsin14Part4--SummaryWriting:---Howtolookforthekeypoints

1.知文體（genre)-理解思路(outline)

2.知話題（topic)----找全要點(diǎn)(allpoints)3.主題句topicsentence-段首尾和問題后

4.主次要點(diǎn)(CPandSP)----合并，改寫，刪細(xì)節(jié)5.列表格（form)--弄懂層次和邏輯（outline&logical)【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Part4--SummaryWriting:---Ho15

閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

①Throughouthistory,musicspreadamongpeopleofdifferentcultures.

Intoday’stechnologicaladvancedsociety,

however,peoplespreadmusiconline,sometimeswithoutanartist’spermission.Thiscanleadtomanyproblems,andmusiccompaniesarenowdealingwiththispractice.Sharingmusiconlinewithoutpermissionistheft(偷竊).

②Sharingmusiconlinepreventsrecordingcompaniesfrommakingmoneyfromtheirefforts.Theysaythatsharingmusiconlinehasresultedinahugedropinprofitsandsalesoverthepast10years.PeoplewhofindmusicforfreeonlinearenotpayingforCDsoreveryMP3downloaded.Totrulyunderstandtheinfluenceofmusicpiracy(盜版行為)oncreators,onemustunderstandhowmanypeopleareinvolvedintherecordingprocess.Forthesaleofeachalbum,profitsmustbesharedamongmusicians,soundengineers,musicproducers,managers,advertisers,andthecompanysellingtheproduct.Manypeoplebelievesharingmusiconlyaffectstherecordingartist,buttherealityisthatsharinghurtsbusinessofallthecompaniesinvolved.【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要16

③Therearemanypeoplewhodon’tseetheharminsharingmusiconlineandeventhinktheyhavetherighttodoit.OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Whilehemayhavelegallypaidforthemusic,hedoesnothavetherighttoprovidepermission,whichmeanspeoplelikethebloggerarethieves.④Althoughwedon’tspreadtoday’smusicinthesamewaywedidbefore,there’snodoubtthatpeoplearoundtheworldlovetosharemusic.However,internetpiracywouldpreventmusiciansfromcontinuingproducingalbumsforfearoftheft.Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦③Therearemanypeoplewh171.知文體（genre)-理解思路(outline)

本文是一篇Argumentation(議論文)thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sview未允許的網(wǎng)上音樂分享是盜竊--盜版會(huì)影響唱片相關(guān)人的利益/即使購(gòu)買唱片也不能隨意分享--保護(hù)音樂版權(quán)2.知話題（topic)----找全要點(diǎn)(allpoints)Sharingmusiconline【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦1.知文體（genre)-理解思路(outline)【18a60-wordsummary（一段60詞）Forthesaleofeachalbum,profitsmustbesharedamongmusicians,soundengineers,musicproducers,managers,advertisers,andthecompanysellingtheproduct.Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy，worriedandsolitarywhentheyhavenothingtodo.Thiscanleadtomanyproblems,andmusiccompaniesarenowdealingwiththispractice.PoorVocabulary(詞匯簡(jiǎn)單，無豐富詞匯句式）Forthesaleofeachalbum,profitsmustbesharedamongmusicians,soundengineers,musicproducers,managers,advertisers,andthecompanysellingtheproduct.Skill4-Skippingforthekeypointsorsub-points3Notcompleteordetails(要點(diǎn)不全/細(xì)節(jié)作要點(diǎn)）轉(zhuǎn)折后（however/but，tobehonest）Part1Requests?(高考寫作要求）【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦A:a

narration(記敘文）--tellsastoryoreventWhat’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Agroupofgreatteachersfromotherclasseshappilycametoourbeautifulandfriendlyclass.Allthiscomesdowntoonepoint：workishelpfultohealth.D:WorkisgoodforhealthScientistsfindthatthehard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Themainidea:Teacherscame（toourclass）Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy，worriedandsolitarywhentheyhavenothingtodo.3.主題句topicsentence-段首尾和問題后

Para1:Sharingmusiconlinewithoutpermissionistheft(偷竊).Para2:Manypeoplebelievesharingmusiconlyaffectstherecordingartist,buttherealityisthatsharinghurtsbusinessofallthecompaniesinvolved.Para3:Therearemanypeoplewhodon’tseetheharminsharingmusiconlineandeventhinktheyhavetherighttodoit.

Para4:Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦a60-wordsummary（一段60詞）3.主題194.主次要點(diǎn)(CPandSP)----合并，改寫，刪細(xì)節(jié)Para1:Sharingmusiconlinewithoutpermissionistheft(偷竊).Intoday’stechnologicaladvancedsociety,

however,peoplespreadmusiconline,sometimeswithoutanartist’spermission.合并改寫：Nowadays,itisregardedasathefttosharemusiconlinewithoutpermission.Para2:Manypeoplebelievesharingmusiconlyaffectstherecordingartist,buttherealityisthatsharinghurtsbusinessofallthecompaniesinvolved.合并改寫：Actually,notonlydoesitaffectrelevantrecordingmusiciansbutalsodoesharmtobusinessinvolvedintherecordingprocess.【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦4.主次要點(diǎn)(CPandSP)----合并，改寫，204.主次要點(diǎn)(CPandSP)----合并，改寫，刪細(xì)節(jié)Para3:Therearemanypeoplewhodon’tseetheharminsharingmusiconlineandeventhinktheyhavetherighttodoit.

Whilehemayhavelegallypaidforthemusic,hedoesnothavetherighttoprovidepermission,whichmeanspeoplelikethebloggerarethieves.合并改寫：However,manypeopletakenonoticeoftheharm.Eventhoughtheypurchasemusic,theycan'tshareitonline.Para4:Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.合并改寫：Ifwewantthemusicianstocontinueproducingalbumsforustoappreciate,weneedtoprotectmusicians’copyright.(要點(diǎn)4)【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦4.主次要點(diǎn)(CPandSP)----合并，改寫，21C:UnemploymentrateanddeathrateThiscanleadtomanyproblems,andmusiccompaniesarenowdealingwiththispractice.1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。主題句topicsentence-段首尾和問題后Scientistsfindthatthehard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Para4:Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.列表格（form)--弄懂層次和邏輯（outline&logical)Whyisworkgoodforhealth？Itisbecauseworkkeepspeoplebusy，awayfromloneliness.Listallthepointsinaform用表格,列要點(diǎn)(要點(diǎn)3)Ifwewantthemusicianstocontinueproducingalbumsforustoappreciate,weneedtoprotectmusicians’copyright.Argumentation(議論文)a60-wordsummary（一段60詞）OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Tip1---Topicsentencecanbethefirstorthelastsentenceortheanswerofaquestion.Para4:Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.【寫作提示】這是一篇議論文。文章論述目前音樂版權(quán)問題的嚴(yán)重性,并指出不保護(hù)音樂版權(quán)的危害。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,寫作時(shí)可以根據(jù)自然段的段意概括要點(diǎn)。注意句子的多樣性和句子之間的連貫性。【參考范文】Intoday’ssociety,itisthefttosharemusiconlinewithoutartists’permission.(要點(diǎn)1)Ithurtsallrelevantcompaniesandpeopleinvolvedintherecordingprocess.(要點(diǎn)2)However,manypeopletakenonoticeoftheharmandeventhinksharingmusiconlineistheirright,notknowingmostmusiciscopyrighted.(要點(diǎn)3)Ifwewantthemusicianstocontinueproducingalbumsforustoappreciate,weneedtoprotectmusicians’copyright.(要點(diǎn)4)【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦C:Unemploymentrateanddeath22概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)23Whatisasummary?

It'sa

shortstatement(陳述)thatcoversonlythemainpoints

ofsth,notthedetails.牛津高階英漢雙解詞典》概要：用簡(jiǎn)短扼要(brief)的語(yǔ)言客觀(objective)全面(thoroughly)呈現(xiàn)要點(diǎn)。Whatisasummary?

It'sashor24Example：Agroupofgreatteachersfromotherclasseshappilycametoourbeautifulandfriendlyclass.Ignore:theunnecessarydetailsThemainidea:Teacherscame（toourclass）Example：25要求01020304a60-wordsummary（一段60詞）cover4-5points（4-5個(gè)要點(diǎn)）useyourownwords（自己的語(yǔ)言）usethebriefsentences（簡(jiǎn)明扼要）05properconnection

(恰當(dāng)銜接）Part1

Requests?(高考寫作要求）要求01020304a60-wordsummary（261WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）2WrongPoints/lackpoints（要點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤/少要點(diǎn)）3Notcompleteordetails(要點(diǎn)不全/細(xì)節(jié)作要點(diǎn)）◆While

writing1.WithoutOwnLanguage(抄原句，無自己語(yǔ)言）2.PoorVocabulary(詞匯簡(jiǎn)單，無豐富詞匯句式）3.Notbriefandlogical(不簡(jiǎn)潔，不連貫）4.Otherproblems(書寫/分段/拼寫/詞句錯(cuò)誤等）Part2Problemsonsummarywriting

◆While

reading1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）Part227技巧01020304Skimmingforthetopicorpurpose略讀知主題/意圖Scanningforthetopicsentence尋讀找主題句Skippingforthekeypointsorsub-points跳讀找主次要點(diǎn)Listallthepointsinaform用表格,列要點(diǎn)Part3SkillsofReadingforpoints05Fastreadingforthegenre快讀定體裁【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦技巧01020304Skimmingforthetop28A:a

narration(記敘文）--tellsastoryoreventB:anexposition（說明文）--explainsthorshareinformationC:anargumentation（議論文）---makesbbelievetheauthor'sopinionWhydoweneedtoknowthegenre?Narration(記敘文)1.story(5w+1h):who,what,whenwhere,why,how)2.event（beginning-development-ending)Exposition(說明文)1.介紹事物→描述性質(zhì)/功用2.問題→解決方法3.現(xiàn)象→原因→本質(zhì)Argumentation(議論文)thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sviewSkill1.

Fastreadingforthegenre【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦A:a

narration(記敘文）--tellsa29Skill2--

Skimmingfor

thetopicorpurposeWhy?Knowingthetopiccanhelpus:1.leaveoutunnecessarydetails(刪除無關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)）2.presentallthepointscorrectly（正確呈現(xiàn)要點(diǎn)）【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill2--Skimmingforthetop30OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Forexample,DaVinci’spaintingMonaLisa(蒙娜麗莎）wasboughtfortoomuchmoneybecauseitstandsforthetopskillsinit.What’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sview次要點(diǎn)常出現(xiàn)：列舉項(xiàng)目中/段中頻度高/邏輯關(guān)系Tip5：TheformmakestheoutlineclearlyandlogicalforlaterwritingSkill3-DiscoverthetopicsentencesbelowandthinkabouttheirlocationTip4-LeaveoutunnecessaryexamplesordetailsOneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Totrulyunderstandtheinfluenceofmusicpiracy(盜版行為)oncreators,onemustunderstandhowmanypeopleareinvolvedintherecordingprocess.合并改寫：Nowadays,itisregardedasathefttosharemusiconlinewithoutpermission.event（beginning-development-ending)1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Otherproblems(書寫/分段/拼寫/詞句錯(cuò)誤等）【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦DoesthepointsneedtocontainMonalisa?Why?【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Scientistsfindthatthehard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Careerwomenarehealthierthanhousewives.Evidencesshowthatthejoblessareinpoorerhealththanjob-holders.Aninvestigationshowsthatwhenevertheunemploymentrate(失業(yè)率）increasesby1%，thedeathrateincreasescorrespondingly(相應(yīng)地)by2%.Allthiscomesdowntoonepoint：workishelpfultohealth.A:Hard-workingpeoplelivelongerB:HousewivesarehealthierC:UnemploymentrateanddeathrateD:Workisgoodforhealth【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Oneonlinebloggerstatesthat31Skill3-Discoverthetopicsentencesbelowandthinkabouttheirlocation

B1U2StandardandDilaets(expositon說明文)Para1:Believeitornot,thereisnosuchthingasstandardEnglish.(段落第2句,前面是一個(gè)問句）Para2:AmericanEnglishhasmanydialets.(段落第2句）Para3:Geographyalsoplaysapartinmakingdialects.(段落第1句）Tip1---Topicsentencecanbethefirstorthelastsentenceortheanswerofaquestion.(西方喜歡開門見山，主題句常見句首，也有句尾和問句后的答句）【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill3-Discoverthetopicsen32Consolidaton---underlinethetopicsentence

Whyisworkgoodforhealth？

Itisbecauseworkkeepspeoplebusy，awayfromloneliness.Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy，worriedandsolitarywhentheyhavenothingtodo.Instead，thehappiestarethosewhoarebusy.Besides，workgivesonethesenseoffulfillment(滿足感)andasenseofachievement(成就感）.Workmakesonefeelhisvalueandstatusinsociety.Whenawriterfinisheshiswritingoradoctorsuccessfullyoperatesonapatientorateacherseeshisstudentsprogress，theyarehappybeyondwords.Tip2--Whenyouscan,payattentiontothelinkingwordssuchasfirst,besides,ontheotherhand【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Consolidaton---underlinethet33Skill4-Skipping

forthekeypointsorsub-pointsSkippingfor

thesignalwordsaspoints主要點(diǎn)信號(hào)詞：1.結(jié)果關(guān)系（so/asaresult)2.轉(zhuǎn)折后（however/but，tobehonest）次要點(diǎn)常出現(xiàn)：列舉項(xiàng)目中/段中頻度高/邏輯關(guān)系Whilesportsareforfun,itdoesnotmeanthattheyarenotimportanttopeople’slife.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Somesportsstarsgethonorfortheircountry,andtheircountrymenareproudofthem.Theydogoodtothepeople'smentalhealth.

Underlinethecentralpointsandsubpoints

(用下劃線劃出中心論點(diǎn)和次要點(diǎn)）

Tip3--Whenwriting,connectallpointsbrieflyWhy表示結(jié)果(enjoythegames為keypoints，幾個(gè)because后是次要點(diǎn)(exciting,gethonor,dogoodto

)Summary:

Weappreciatethegamesfortheymakeourlifeexcitingandtheyaregoodforourmind.【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill4-Skippingforthekey34

What’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Forexample,DaVinci’spaintingMonaLisa(蒙娜麗莎）wasboughtfortoomuchmoneybecauseitstandsforthetopskillsinit.Moststarsaregreatintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeak(尖端）toearnthatgoodearnings.DoesthepointsneedtocontainMonalisa?Why?Tip4-LeaveoutunnecessaryexamplesordetailsNo,itisonlyforthemainpoints:youhavetopayifitisthebest.Sub-points:talents,hardtraining(=keepperforming)Consolidation-Skimforcentralpoints&subpoints

【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦What’smore,sportsstars35Skill5-Listallthepointsintheform(用表格列要點(diǎn))Tip5：TheformmakestheoutlineclearlyandlogicalforlaterwritingTopic

logicMainidea(para1-)Supportingdetailsrewriting【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill5-Listallthepointsin36Part4--SummaryWriting:---Howtolookforthekeypoints

1.知文體（genre)-理解思路(outline)

2.知話題（topic)----找全要點(diǎn)(allpoints)3.主題句topicsentence-段首尾和問題后

4.主次要點(diǎn)(CPandSP)----合并，改寫，刪細(xì)節(jié)5.列表格（form)--弄懂層次和邏輯（outline&logical)【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Part4--SummaryWriting:---Ho37

閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

①Throughouthistory,musicspreadamongpeopleofdifferentcultures.

Intoday’stechnologicaladvancedsociety,

however,peoplespreadmusiconline,sometimeswithoutanartist’spermission.Thiscanleadtomanyproblems,andmusiccompaniesarenowdealingwiththispractice.Sharingmusiconlinewithoutpermissionistheft(偷竊).

②Sharingmusiconlinepreventsrecordingcompaniesfrommakingmoneyfromtheirefforts.Theysaythatsharingmusiconlinehasresultedinahugedropinprofitsandsalesoverthepast10years.PeoplewhofindmusicforfreeonlinearenotpayingforCDsoreveryMP3downloaded.Totrulyunderstandtheinfluenceofmusicpiracy(盜版行為)oncreators,onemustunderstandhowmanypeopleareinvolvedintherecordingprocess.Forthesaleofeachalbum,profitsmustbesharedamongmusicians,soundengineers,musicproducers,managers,advertisers,andthecompanysellingtheproduct.Manypeoplebelievesharingmusiconlyaffectstherecordingartist,buttherealityisthatsharinghurtsbusinessofallthecompaniesinvolved.【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎(jiǎng)PPT--學(xué)年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點(diǎn)（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要38

③Therearemanypeoplewhodon’tseetheharminsharingmusiconlineandeventhinktheyhavetherighttodoit.OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Whilehemayhavelegallypaidforthemusic,hedoesnothavetherighttoprovidepermission,whichm