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專業(yè)英語寫作考點(diǎn)總結(jié)part?academicenglishwriting (專業(yè)英語寫作) chapter1sixconsiderationsinacademicwriting、academicwritingisaproductofmanyconsideration:audience,purpose,organization,style,flowandpresentation.(學(xué)術(shù)寫作六要素:寫作對象,目的,組織結(jié)構(gòu),文體特征,表達(dá)連貫和宣講 或宣、organizationusuallyhasthefollowingfourparts: 問題-解決方法包括四個(gè)部分descriptionofasituation (描述情況)identificationofaproblem (甄別問題)descriptionofasolution (描述解決方法)evaluationofthesolution (評估解決方法)3、formalgrammarstyle:(正規(guī)的語法風(fēng)格)generallyavoidcontractions (一般來講避免使用略縮詞)例: won’t 改為willnotusethemoreappropriateformalnegativeforms (使用更為適宜的正規(guī)的否定 形式)例:not...any改為 nonot...much 改為littlenot...many 改為fewlimittheuseof“run-on”expressions,suchasandsoforthandetc.(限制使用 多個(gè)詞連用的表達(dá)法)例:句子內(nèi)不能出現(xiàn) andsoforth和etc.出現(xiàn)時(shí)應(yīng)將省略的部分?jǐn)U展出來。avoidaddressingthereaderasyou(except,ofcourse,ifyouarewritingatextbookorotherinstructionalmaterials). (避免向讀者說 “你”)例:youcanseetheresultsintable1.改為: theresultscanbeseenintable1.改為: itisnecessarytoconsiderhowcostsmaybelowered.或者wenowneedtoconsiderhowcostsmaybelowered.placeadverbwithintheverb. (將副詞放于動(dòng)詞詞組內(nèi)) 例:thismodelwasdevelopedbykrugmanoriginally.改為:thismodelwasoriginallydevelopedbykrugman.considerwhetheryoushouldsplitinfinitives. (考慮是否該使用割裂不定式) 例:weneedtoadequatelymeettheneedsofthoseenrolledintheprogram.aimforanefficientuseofwords. (目的是為了有效地使用詞匯)例:therearesomeinorganicmaterialsthatcanbeusedbybioengineersintheprocessoftissueengineeringthathavebeenshowntobeverypromising. 改為:someinorganicmaterialsusedintissueengineeringhaveshowngreatpromise.習(xí)題:1)youcanusethismodeltoanalyzetheeffectsofseveralparameterchanges.錯(cuò)誤:使用了 you。改為:thismodelcanbeusedtoanalyzetheeffectsofseveralparameterchanges.2)ok,whatarethereasonsthatcoffeepriceshavefallen?there’realotofpossibilitie s.錯(cuò)誤:使用了口語 ok;直接引語的使用;使用了縮略詞 there’re。改為:coffeepriceshavefallenformanyreasons.3)youcanseethedifferencebetweenthesetwoapproachestodesigningundergroundsubwaystationsclearly.錯(cuò)誤:使用了 you;將副詞 clearly放在了句尾。改為:thedifferencebetweenthesetwoapproachestodesigningundergroundsubwaystationcanclearlybeseen.錯(cuò)誤:使用了 sofar;使用了 therebe結(jié)構(gòu);使用了 not...any 結(jié)構(gòu);使用了非正式的lookinginto。therearesomestudiesthathaveconcludedthatbamboocouldbeusedbybuildersmorewidelythanitisnowasaconstructionmaterial.錯(cuò)誤:使用了 therebe結(jié)構(gòu);副詞 widely位置放錯(cuò)。改為:somestudieshaveconcludedthatbamboocouldbemorewidelyusedthanitisnowasaconstructionmaterial.thesespecialtaxlawshavebeenenactedinsixstates:illinois,iowa,ohio,etc. 錯(cuò)誤:使用了 etc。改為:thesespecialtaxlawshavebeenenactedinsixmidwesternstates:illinois,iowa,indiana,ohio,michigan,andminnesota.thereisn’tverymuchresearchontheuseofoilpalmshellascoarseaggregateintheproductionofconcrete.錯(cuò)誤:使用了 therebe結(jié)構(gòu);使用了 not...verymuch 。改為:littleresearchhasbeendoneontheuseofoilpalmshellascoarseaggregateintheproductionofconcrete.chapter2twounderlyingstructuresinacademicwriting(專業(yè)寫作的兩個(gè)基本結(jié)構(gòu))1、twounderlyingstructuresinacademicwriting :(專業(yè)寫作的兩個(gè)基本結(jié)構(gòu))general-specificstructure (泛論-特指(gs)結(jié)構(gòu))problem-process-solutionstructure (問題-過程-解決方法)2、gstextsusuallybeginwithoneofthefollowing:(gs文本通常以下列一種形式開始)ashortorextendeddefinition (簡短或拓展定義)ageneralizationorpurposestatement (一般化或目標(biāo)性陳述)astatementoffact. (事實(shí)陳述)、superordinate-categoryword :technique,method,process,device,andsystem. (超級坐標(biāo)詞)deletions(刪除):在下列情況下,你可以減少限制性關(guān)系代詞定語從句僅有關(guān)系代詞、 be動(dòng)詞、一個(gè)或多個(gè)介詞短語定語從句由被動(dòng)態(tài)動(dòng)詞加上一些額外的信息定語從句含有關(guān)系代詞、以 -ble結(jié)尾的形容詞和額外的信息 例題:p23.metalthatisoftenused —>metaloftenused.devicethatiscapableof —>devicecapableof.roofwhichisontopof —>roofontopof.precipitationwhichresultsfrom —>precipitationresultingfrom.thissentencecannotbereduced..flutethatispitchedanoctavehigher--->flutepitchedanoctavehigher
—>a—>.—>a—>involvingtheselectivetransport.acelestialbodywhichhasapproximatelythesamemasscelestialbodywithapproximatelythesamemass5、考題類型:句子排序 例題:p27(1)比較定義基本上有兩類:呈現(xiàn)一個(gè)概念是如何隨著時(shí)間的流逝而變化 的這樣一種史實(shí)陳述。呈現(xiàn)對當(dāng)代各位專家是怎樣不同地看待此概 念所做的一個(gè)全面性的評述。 7、participle(分詞)例題:p39(1)theoilisskimmedfromthesurfacebyusingaboomandthenpumpedintoatankforrecycling.afterbeingharvested,thegrapesarecrushedtoreleasethepulpandseedandthenfermentedforthreeweeks.first,theglassiscuttosizeandinspectedtodetermineifithasanyimperfections.itisthenheatedtoover600ocandcooledinastepknownasquenching.8、詞和詞型的變換 p23-p251、inmanydisciplinesthedataisdisplayedinatable,graph,figure,orsomeotherkindofnon-verbalillustration. (在許多學(xué)科中,數(shù)據(jù)信息都是以圖表、圖形、 數(shù)據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)圖或非口頭圖示的方式展示出來。)a、locationelementsand/orsummarystatements. (定位要素和 /或總結(jié)陳述)b、highlightingstatements. (強(qiáng)調(diào)陳述內(nèi)容)3、locationelementsandsummaries. (定位要素和總結(jié))c、verbsinindicativeandinformativessummaries. (用在陳述性和信息性總結(jié) 中的動(dòng)詞)as引出的從句)(總結(jié)與摘要寫作)(一份良好的任務(wù)總結(jié)具備四as引出的從句)(總結(jié)與摘要寫作)(一份良好的任務(wù)總結(jié)具備四chapter4summaryandabstractwriting、principlerequirementsforagoodsummary個(gè)主 要需求)itshouldpresentthesourcematerialinanaccurateandobjectivefashion. (它應(yīng)以 精確、客觀的形式呈現(xiàn)來源材料)itshouldcondensethesourcematerialandbepresentedinthesummarywriter’sownwordsandavoidterminology. (它應(yīng)凝縮來源材料并以總結(jié)寫作者自己的 文字呈現(xiàn)出來 ,而且要避免用專業(yè)術(shù)語)provideanindependentlyreferentialsummary,andkeepthelengthincontrol. (提 供完全獨(dú)立的參閱性總結(jié),并能控制其文章長度)2、寫作總結(jié)的基本步驟快速略讀文本,腦中注意小標(biāo)題。若無小標(biāo)考慮清楚為什么給了你這個(gè)文本。確定你在類型快速略讀文本,腦中注意小標(biāo)題。若無小標(biāo)考慮清楚為什么給了你這個(gè)文本。確定你在類型讀文本,標(biāo)示重要的信息或者作筆記用你自己的詞匯寫下每一部分的要點(diǎn)。每一對每一個(gè)主要題目,寫下關(guān)鍵的佐證點(diǎn),但再次仔細(xì)檢查這個(gè)過程,做些適當(dāng)?shù)淖儎?dòng)。處理哪種類型的文本 ,即:來源文本部分盡量寫出一個(gè)一句話 的總結(jié)。必要時(shí)也要包括小的細(xì)節(jié)。
3、basicstructureofabstractwriting(1)topicsentence(主題句)(2)supportingsentences(佐證句)(3)concludingsentence3、basicstructureofabstractwriting(1)topicsentence(主題句)(2)supportingsentences(佐證句)(3)concludingsentence(結(jié)論句)(摘要寫作的基本結(jié)構(gòu))p70-p72的例句,寫作時(shí)會(huì)用得上。summaryandabstract 兩個(gè)詞要會(huì)寫,以及知道兩者的區(qū)別,其中 summary要分三段來寫, abstract不分段。 partiibasalenglishwriting (基礎(chǔ)英語寫作)chapter1punctuation (標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號)、theperiod(句號)、thesemicolon(分號)、thecolon(冒號)、thequestionmark、thequotationmark、theexclamationmark、thedash(破折號)、italicsandunderlining10、練習(xí)題: p96-97(問號)(引號)(感嘆號)(斜體字和下劃線)11、本節(jié)所有的例句都要仔細(xì)看 ※chapter2vocabulary、levelsofdiction:formalandinformal,abstractconcrete(具體) ,andgeneral (籠統(tǒng)) andspecificincludeshowtoappreciatetheconnotative (引申含義)denotative(字面含義,本義) meaningsofwords.(詞匯)(抽象) and(特指) .italsoaswellas2、englishwordscanbecategorizedasformal,informalandcolloquial(口 語的).3、練習(xí)題: 1/p1024、練習(xí)題: p109-p113chapter3englishsentencewriting作)(英語句子寫1、typesofsentences(1)accordingtostructure①simplesentencesaccordingtousedeclarativesentencesinterrogativesentencesimperativesentencesexclamatorysentencesaccordingtorhetoricloosesentencesperiodicsentencesbalancedsentences④longandshortsentences(句子的類型) p114(根據(jù)結(jié)構(gòu))(簡單句)(根據(jù)功能)(陳述句)(疑問句)(祈使句)(感嘆句)(根據(jù)修辭)(松散句,主體部分放在前面)(掉尾句,主體部分放在最后) ※(平行句)(長、短句)2、練習(xí)題 (p121)改為:hethoughtthepaintingwasoflittlevalue,soheletme改為:haveitforonlytenpounds. (或者h(yuǎn)ethoughtthepaintingwasoflittlevalueandheletmehaveitforonlytenpounds. )(2)ialwaystakemyraincoatwheneverigooutthesedays.(periodic)改為: wheneverigooutthesedays,ialwaystakemyraincoat.改為: whentheywereonholiday,theirhousewasbrokenintoandsomevaluablepaintingswerestolen.改為:afterthefiremenfoughtforthreehours,theyfinallymanagedtoputoutthefire.(6)thetrainisgoingtodalian.thetrainleavesat20:15.(simple)改為:thetraintodalianleavesat20:15.(7)inspiteoftheinterruption,hewasabletofinishallhisexercisesbeforetheclasswasover.(loose)改為:hewasabletofinishallhisexercisesbeforetheclasswasoverinspiteoftheinterruption.(8)manypeoplechoosetravelbyair.itisfast.itoffersconvenience.itisnotveryexpensive.(parallelstructure)改為:manypeoplechoosetravelbyair,becauseitisfast,convenientandnotveryexpensive.3、練習(xí)題 p121(1)履歷通常包括個(gè)人信息、教育背景、工作經(jīng)歷和過去的成就。譯:aresumegenerallyconsistsofpersonalinformation,educationalbackground,employmenthistoryandpastachievements.(2)戴安娜在南京醫(yī)科大學(xué)主修中醫(yī)學(xué)。譯:dianaismajoringinchinesetraditionalmedicineinnanjingmedicaluniversity.(3)請代我向你父母致以問候。譯:pleasesendmybestregardstoyourparents.(4)現(xiàn)代高等教育應(yīng)該具有前瞻性,超越眼前的社會(huì)需求。譯:moderncollegeeducationshouldbefar-sightedandabletoseebeyondtheimmediateneedsofthesociety.(5)這種細(xì)菌是引起現(xiàn)在流行病的原因嗎?譯:isthisbacteriumresponsibleforthecurrentepidemic?(6)經(jīng)?;仡欁蛱?,你就會(huì)珍惜今天,向往明天。譯:takeafrequentandbackwardlookatyouryesterday,andyouwillvalueyourtodayandlookforwardtoyourtomorrow.(7)中國傳統(tǒng)知識(shí)分子認(rèn)為:窮則獨(dú)善其身,達(dá)則兼濟(jì)天下。譯:traditionalchineseintellectualsholdthatoneshouldrefinehispersonalvirtuewheninpoverty,andhelpsavetheworldwheninsuccess.(8)就算我追求愛情,我也肯定不會(huì)只顧沉浸在愛河里而荒廢學(xué)業(yè)。譯:ifididhuntforlove,icertainlywouldn ’tbathemyselfintheriverofloveallthetime,neglectingmystudies. (9)學(xué)校倡導(dǎo)大學(xué)生改變就業(yè)觀念,并鼓勵(lì)他們把自己的才華和天賦投入到西部大開發(fā)中去。譯:universitiespromoteachangeintheconceptofemploymentamongthegraduates,encouragethemtogivetheirtalentsandgeniustothewesternexploration.4、sentenceexpansion (句子拓展) (各個(gè)位置的例句都要看) ※句子拓展的三種方法: addition(增添法), coordination(并列法),subordination(從屬法)。 重點(diǎn)題型,要會(huì)判斷句子正誤(1)增添法:常見的修飾詞有形容詞、副詞、數(shù)詞、名詞、名詞性詞組、代詞等( adjectives,adverbs,numerals,nouns,nounphrasesandpronouns)。修飾詞通常在句中作定語或狀語。添加形容詞 (addiongadjectives)單個(gè)形容詞做定語一般放在被修飾詞之前,但修飾由 any,every,nosomebody,one或thing構(gòu)成的不定代詞時(shí),放在其后。添加副詞( addingadverbs)如果句子里同時(shí)帶有幾個(gè)副詞做修飾語時(shí),其位置應(yīng)按一下順序排列: 程度副詞 方式副詞 地點(diǎn)副詞 時(shí)間副詞。添加短語( addingphrases)短語有8種:名詞短語、動(dòng)詞短語、介詞短語、非限定性短語(分詞短 語、動(dòng)名詞短語、不定式短語)、同位短語、限定性短語。( noun,verb,prepositional;threekindsofverbalphrase(participial,gerundandinfinitive),appositiveandabsolute )2)并列法:包含三種方法coordinatingpronouns (并列連詞)conjunctiveadverbs (使用連接副詞)semicolon(運(yùn)用分號連接)(3)從屬法:從句主要包括名詞性從句( nounclause),狀語從句( adverbialclause)和定語從句(attributiveclause )。名詞性從句又分為主語從句( subjectclause)、表語從句( predicativeclause)、賓語從句( objectclause)和同位語從句( appositiveclause)。①常見的狀語從句有時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、原因、目的、結(jié)果、條件、比較、讓步等。、幾種短語拓展法:TOC\o"1-5"\h\z1)介詞短語進(jìn)行拓展( expandingwithprepositionalphrases )介詞短語在句中可做表語、賓語、定語、狀語和補(bǔ)語。作定語時(shí)置于所修飾詞之后,做狀語時(shí)位置比較靈活,可位于句首,也可位于句中或句尾,有時(shí)用逗號將其與句子的主體部分隔開。2)不定式短語進(jìn)行拓展( expandingwithinfinitivephrases )不定式短語做名詞時(shí),可做主語、表語、賓語;做形容詞時(shí),在句中作定語; 做副詞時(shí),可以表示目的、原因、結(jié)果、狀語等。3)動(dòng)名詞短語進(jìn)行拓展( expandingwithgerundphrases )動(dòng)名詞為動(dòng)詞 -ing形式,名詞性可做主語、表語、賓語、定語和補(bǔ)足語。動(dòng) 詞性可以帶賓語和狀語。4)分詞短語進(jìn)行拓展( expandingwithparticipialphrases )分詞短語有現(xiàn)在分詞短語和過去分詞短語兩種形式。、effectivesentences (有效句)(1)effectivesentenceshavesomeorallofthefollowingqualities:unity (一致性) ,coherence(連貫性) ,conciseness(簡潔性) ,emphasis(強(qiáng)調(diào)性) ,andvariety (多樣性) .(2)此節(jié)中的每個(gè)例子都要認(rèn)真看。 ※、練習(xí)題: p142theyoungmanishonestandhardworking,andisaveryreliableworker.改為:theyoungmanisanhonest,hardworkingandreliableworder.(theyoungworkerishonest,hardworkingandreliable. )dufuwasoneofthebest-knownpoets.改為:dufuwasoneofthebest-knownpoetsintangdynasty.amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobyhisdeeds.改為:amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobywhathedoes.(amanisjudgednotonlybyhiswordsbutalsobyhisdeeds.)wethoughtshewascharming,intelligent,andaverycapableyoungwoman.改為:wethoughtshewascharming,intelligentandcapable.togetreadyforthetrip,allthethingssheneededwereputintoasuitcase. 改為:togetreadyforthetrip,sheputallthethingsheneededintoasuitcase. (7)thosewhowishtotakelinguisticsareexpectedtosignhisnameonthissheetofpaper.改為:thosewhowishtotakelinguisticsareexpectedtosigntheirnameonthissheetofpaper.whenonethieshardenough,youcandoalmostanything.改為:whenonethieshardenough,hecandoalmostanything.foryearsihavebeenattendingsummercampandenjoyedeveryminuteofit. 改為:foryearsihavebeenattendingsummercampandenjoyingeveryminuteofit.)whenisawthegradeonmyreportcard,iwasterriblydisappointed,becauseistudiedveryhard.改為:whenisawthegradeonmyreportcard,iwasterriblydisappointed,becauseihadstudiedveryhard.)ifiwererichandshewassingle,iwouldmarryher.改為:ifiwererichandshewrersingle,iwouldmarryher.)theyinsistedthatthemoneybecollectedandthatareceiptbegiveninteturn. 此句正確。8、練習(xí)題 p142)tomandhissweetheartmarriedintheearlypartofthemonthofoctober. 改為:tomandhissweetheartmarriedinearlyoctober.in1979,therewasastrikeparticipatedinbyfivethousandunionworkers.改為:in1979,fivethousandunionsparticipatedinthestrike.thecauseofthefloodwasduetoheavyraininlatespring.改為:thefloodwasduetoheavyraininlatespring.thereareanumberofstudentsfromourinstitutewhoareplanningtojointheexpedition.改為:anumberofstudentsareplanningtojointheexpedition.whatiamtryingtosayisthatinmyopinionheisaveryhonestman.改為:inmyopinionheisaveryhonestman.icametothisinstitutebecauseofmanyfactors,butmostofallofthefactthatiwanttobeaninterpreter.改為:icametothisinstitutebecauseiwanttobeaninterpreter.thesewatermelonsarelargeinsizeandsweetintaste.改為:thesewatermelonsarelargeandsweet.atthepresenttimeiamtakingthecourseofworldhistoryandinadditionacourseingeographytoo. 改為:atpresentiamtakingworldhistoryandgeography.weplannedtomeetjustbeforesunriseveryearlyinthemorning.改為:weplannedtomeetbeforesunrise.)hisattitudewasofapuzzlingnature.改為:hisattitudewaspuzzling.9、練習(xí)題: p143)hewasselfless,hardwordingandmodest;that’swhyhebecameagreatscientest.改為:hebecameagreatscientistbecausehewasmodest,selfless,andhardworking.asaclerk,johnwashonest,efficientandwell-dressed.改為:johnwasawell-dressed,honest,andefficientclerk.janewalkedoutofhislife,burstingintotearsasshelefttheroom.改為:asshelefttheroom,jane,burstingintotears,walkedoutofhislife.chinahaschangedagreatdealasaresultofreformandtheopenpolicydutingthepast14years.改為:asaresultofthereformandtheopenpolicyduringthepast14years,chinahaschangedagreatdeal.huang,thefamouswriter,wasamonghisneighbors.改為:huang,whowasamonghisneighbors,wasafamouswriter.socialposition,reputation,evenlifeitself,andfriends,werenolongerinterestingtohimafterhewentbankrupt.改為:afterhewentbankrupt,friends,socialposition,reputation,evenlifeitselfwerenolongerinterestingtohim.10、常見的語法錯(cuò)誤: p143書中每個(gè)正確的句子都要看 ※)misusedpartsofspeech (用錯(cuò)詞性);sentencefragments(殘缺句);)run-onsentences(流水句);misplacedmodifiers&danglingmodifiers (誤置修飾與懸虛結(jié)構(gòu));probleminagreementandreference (一致與指代問題)。11、練習(xí)題 p146 修改殘缺句)afterreturningfromthebeach.thechildrenwereexhausted.改為:afterreturningfromthebeach,thechildrenwereexhausted.johnneglectinghisdutiesandspendingtimeonindependentresearch.改為:johnneglectedhisdutiesandspenttimeonindependentresearch.(3)karendroppedcalculus.whichshehaddroppedseveralltimesbefore.改為:karendroppedcalculus,whichshehaddroppedseveralltimesbefore.workingtogethertosaveourenvironment.wecanleavetheworldabetterplacethanwofoundit.改為:workingtogethertosaveourenvironment,vingthatsheisanhonestperson. 改為:ellenreturnedthelostwallettotheman,whichprovedthatsheisanhonestperson.someerrorsinwritingareserious.forexample,sentencefragments,andrun-onsentences.改為:someerrorsinwritingareserious,forexample,sentencefragments,andrun-onsentences.12、練習(xí)題 p147修改流水句(1)somepeoplesaytheycarefortheenvironmentwhiletheylittercigarettebutsorfruitskinsjustaboutanywheretheyhappentobe.改為:somepeoplesaytheycarefortheenvironment,yettheylittercigarettebutsorfruitskinsjustaboutanywheretheyhappentobe.liliisnotworriedaboutpayingforhercollegeeducation,shehasjustreceivedafullscholarship.改為:liliisnotworriedaboutpayingforhercollegeeducationbecauseshehasjustreceivedafullscholarship.wefinishedtheworkbynineo’clockintheeveningthenwewenthome.改為:wefinishedtheworkbynineo’clockintheeveningandthenwewenthome.athighnoonabigandnoisypartywasgoingonnextdoor,icouldnottakemyusualnap.改為:athighnoonabigandnoisypartywasgoingonnextdoor;icouldnottakemyusualnap.13、練習(xí)題 p147改正句子(1)therobberwasasix-foot-manwithamustacheweighing150pounds.改為:therobberweighing150poundswasasix-foot-manwithamustache.(2)hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats.改為:hesoldtheoldcarwithleatherseatstotheman.tomboughtanoldcarfromacrookeddealerwithafaultytransmission.改為:tomboughtanoldcarwithafaultytransmissionfromacrookeddealer.unconcernedabouthisownlife,thelittlegirldrowningintheicyriverwassavedbyapasser-by.改為:unconcernedabouthisownlife,apasser-bysavedthelittlegirldrowningintheicyriver.thepuppythatmary’sdadpickedupinthewoodswasreturnedtoherowner.改為:thepuppythatmary’sdadpickedupinthewoodswasreturnedtohisowner.iwasshockedtoseeat-shirtinthatfancydressstorewhichhadapricetagof$2000.改為:iwasshockedtoseeinthatfancydressstoreat-shirtwhichhadapricetagof$2000.)theapplicant’slistofcredentialsareratherlong.
改為:theapplicant’slistofcredentialsisratherlong.chapter4englishparagraphwriting (英語段落寫作)、paragraphstructure (段落結(jié)構(gòu))(1)主題句( thetopicsentence)具有三個(gè)重要功能: p149通過明確陳述討論中的一個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)一步證明全文中心思想。顯示段落內(nèi)容??刂圃摱温鋬?nèi)容。某一段中全部討論 —— 舉例、細(xì)節(jié)列舉以及解釋都必須與主題句直接相關(guān)并能進(jìn)一步證明主題句。(2)練習(xí)題: 1/p151精彩的正文段落應(yīng)該圍繞一個(gè)主題句展開:段落應(yīng)該展開充分、前后統(tǒng)一而且銜接自然。具體地講,一個(gè)很有說服力的正文段落必須滿足四個(gè)要求。首先,該段落必須只討論一個(gè)主體,即段中陳述和說明只能表現(xiàn)一個(gè)主題或內(nèi)容的統(tǒng)一,主題思想通常用一
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