投訴信教學設計

英語寫作：投訴信英語寫作：投訴信Writing:aletterofcomplaintWhatisacomplaintletter? （什么是投訴信？）?背景：遇到一些不文明現(xiàn)象、所購商品質量差、售后服務不滿意等情況下向相關機構或人員寫信，旨在解決問題。?語言：要注意把握分寸，要公平、公正、禮貌。?內容：1.表明寫作目的，因何事投訴；2.具體存在的問題；3.希望得到回復并解決問題。Taskpresentation（任務呈現(xiàn)）?假如你是學生會主席李明，請你代表全校同學給校長寫一封信，反映一下你校食堂的幾點問題，以引起學校重視。問題包括：.菜價昂貴；2.過于油膩，味道不佳，菜品種類少；3.排隊時間長，浪費午休時間。?注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120;2.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.可適當增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Brainstorming （頭腦風暴）?Structureofthetext:Paragraph1:Introduceyourselfandexpressthedissatisfactiondirectly.Paragraph2:Describethedetailsofcomplaining.Paragraph3:Expectareplyandexpressgratitude感激）.?Notice:Tense:Presentsimple.Person:Thefirstperson.Keypoints:菜價；味道、種類；排隊時間。Usefulexpressions（詞語、句型儲備）套用句式：.寫作目的：I'mwritingtomakeacomplaintabout….投訴內容：Thereasonisthat???Inthefirstplace,…What'smore,…Lastbutnotleast,.希望得到的結果：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldkindlyreplyusandgiveasolution.詞語儲備：?代表onbehalfof?抱怨complain?餐廳canteen?對……不滿bedissatisfiedwith?油膩的greasy?路邊攤stall?對造成威脅poseathreatto?排隊waitinline?小憩nap句子儲備：?寫這封信是想代表全校同學對餐廳的服務質量提出不滿。myfellowstudents,thepoorserviceofthecanteen.?餐廳食物價格太高，成為一些同學的負擔。inthecanteenishighitbecomesaburdenforus.?餐廳食物過于油膩，味道不佳，菜品選擇有限。Thefoodinthecanteenisand,andwehave ofdishes.?食物被浪費，有些學生轉而購買校外路邊攤食物，對健康造成威脅。ismuchfoodwasted,manystudentsoutsidethecampus,whichcantoourhealth.?午飯排隊時間長，浪費午休時間，下午上課犯困。Waitinginlineduringlunchforthenapatnoon,inlaterclasses.?我們希望餐廳服務能得到改善。如能得到您的回復并給出解決方案，我們將感激不盡!thattheserviceofthecanteencanbeimproved.WewouldreallyifyoucouldkindlyreplyusandCombiningsentences（連接句子）A.Asaconsequence B.LastbutnotleastC.Basically D.AllinallE.What'smore F.Inthefirstplace,therearethreeaspectsthatwearedissatisfiedwith.,thepriceofthefoodinthecanteenissohighthatitbecomesaburdenforus.,thefoodinthecanteenisrathergreasyandtastesbad,andwehavelimitedchoicesofdishes.,notonlyismuchfoodwasted,butalsomanystudentsturntostallsoutsidethecampus,whichcanposeathreattoourhealth.,waitinginlineduringlunchresultsindecreasedtimeforthenapatnoon,makingussleepyinlaterclasses.,itisourhopethattheserviceofthecanteencanbeimproved.Wewouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldkindlyreplyusandgivesolutions.范文:DearPrincipal,I'mLiMing,presidentoftheStudentUnion.Onbehalfofmyfellowstudents,Iwritingtocomplainaboutthepoorserviceofthecanteen.Thedetailsareasfollows:Basically,therearethreeaspectsthatwearedissatisfiedwith.Inthefirstplace,thepriceofthefoodinthecanteenissohighthatitbecomesaburdenforus.Whatthefoodinthecanteenisrathergreasyandtastesbad,andwehavelimitedchoicesofdishes.Asaconsequence,notonlyismuchfoodwasted,butalsomanystudentsturntostallsoutsidethecampus,whichcanposeathreattoourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,waitinginlineduringlunchresultsindecreasedtimeforthenapatnoon,makingussleepyinlaterclasses.Allinall,itisourhopethattheserviceofthecanteencanbeimproved.Wewouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldkindlyreplyusandgivesolutions.Bestwishes!Sincerely,LiMingPractice（實戰(zhàn)演練）假如你是紅星中學生李明，發(fā)現(xiàn)晚自習下課后校門前擁堵現(xiàn)象十分嚴重， 給同學和外部車輛造成很大不便。請就此向校長寫一封抱怨信。要點如下：.車輛擁堵，給公共交通帶來不便；.道路狹窄，不利于學生安全；.等待浪費時間。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120;2.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.可適當增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Structureofthetext:Paragraph1:Introduceyourselfandexpressthedissatisfactiondirectly.Paragraph2:Describethedetailsofcomplaining.Paragraph3:Expectareplyandexpressgratitude感激）.Notice:

Tense:Presentsimple.Person:Thefirstperson.Keypoints:擁堵造成不便；路窄不利安全；排隊浪費時間。'Usefulexpressions:晚自習'Usefulexpressions:晚自習交通/車輛擁堵道路狹窄造成不便公共交通現(xiàn)象traffic/vehiclejamnarrowroadscause;resultin;leadto;asaresultconsequently;asaconsequenceinconveniencepublictransportationphenomenon?連接詞：表起始：firstofall;inthefirstplace;firstandforemost.表遞進：furthermore;what's