考研圖畫類作文完全攻略（第三講）副本

考研圖畫類作文完全攻略第三講主講教師：劉暢Accordingtothissubtlyportrayedcartoon〔段首套話〕,thereare〔串聯(lián)細(xì)節(jié)詞〕twotourists-perhapsacouple-takingsightseeingonasmallboatsteeredbyaboatman,leaningintimatelyoneachotheranddiscarding〔-ing伴隨狀語，平行結(jié)構(gòu)〕theirpicnictrashcasuallyintoalake,with〔介詞伴隨狀語〕thebeautifulnaturalwaterresortbeinglitteredandteamedbyflowrubbishlikeplasticcontainers,fish-bones,bananapeel,watermelonrind,bottles,tins,foodwrappings,etc.,asif〔虛擬語氣〕theyturnedablindeyetotheenvironment.Andbelowthedrawing,atopicreads:〔提示語翻譯〕the“l(fā)eftovers〞“after〞thetraveland“me〞inthetravel,whichformsanironicpun〔定語從句〕.Asissymbolicallyillustratedinthecartoon,therearetwoindividualsrespondingtothesameeventincompletelydiverseways,withthepersonontheleftairinghisdissatisfactionanddisappointmentwhenabottleisoverturned,whilethemanontherightishurrytoraiseitup,wearingashiningsmileonface.Weareinformedbythewordsinthedrawingthatvariousfolkstakedifferentattitudestowardthesamescene.AnEnglishproverbhasitthat"it'snousecryingoverthespiltmilk".Thispicturepreciselycapturesoneofsuchsituations-

thereisabottleofwaterbeingaccidentallydroppedontotheground.Yetthereactionsofthetwoindividualsinthecartoonareofgreatdifference,withoneexclaiming"Oh,God,it'sallover!"whereastheotheroneremainscalmandpositive-expressingthat"thereisstillsomeleft."Thisthought-provokingcartoonfeaturesasharpcontrastbetweentwomen'sperspectivesonthewaterremaininginthefallenbottle.Theleftone,whowearsanexpressionofsadnessandmelancholyonface,lamentsthelossofwaterandthinkspessimisticallythat"itiscompletelyfinished".Conversely,theotheroneontherightconsidersthat"fortunatelythereisalittleleft."首韻：change,chance,andchallengeaccept,advocate,andappreciatecaution,conscience,andcouragethroughfairorfoul〔經(jīng)過困苦〕flourishandfail〔興衰〕waxandwanefameandfortunepeace,progress,andprosperitysurviveandsucceed2007:Accordingtothisvividandenlighteningcartoon,

therearetwofootballplayersstandingontheplayground,withthegoalkeeperlookingquitenervousandtheforwarddoubtfulabouthisability,asifbothofthemlosttheirconfidencetowinthegame.→Thiscartoonhumorouslypresentsasceneofacriticalmoment:

thereisanervoussoccerforwardstandingbythepenaltyspot,facingupwithhisopponent,thegoalkeeper.Interestinglyenough,theforwardmagnifiestheopponentinhismind,imaginingthegoalkeeperasanimmenseobstacleloomingaheadofhimsothatchancesofshootinginareratherslim.Meanwhile,thegoalkeeperminimizeshisownimage,withanillusionthatthegoalistooenormousforhimtoguard,asifhecouldnotdefendtheshotsuccessfully.(Castingacloserlookandreflectionuponthispictureprovidesuswithabettersenseofitsdeepimplications.)補充：語言模板模板1：Thesatirical/enlightening/inspiringsketchgraphicallyportraysavividsceneinwhich(…).Quiteobviously,(…),butthisisnotthekeymessageconveyedbythepicture.Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthat(…),whichindicates(…).Aftercarefulobservation,weareinformedbythecaptionthat(…).模板2：Thispicturedepictsanenlighteningsceneinwhich....〔整體描述〕Thewittedartistdeliberatelyexaggeratessomedetails,fromwhichwecanperceivethat....〔細(xì)節(jié)描述1〕And,furtherexaminationuponthisportrayalalsorevealsthat....〔細(xì)節(jié)描述2〕(However,themoststrikingandconspicuousfeatureimpressingmedeeplyis....〔細(xì)節(jié)描述3〕)Theenlighteningsketchgraphicallyportraysavividsceneinwhich(twofootballplayersarestandingonaplayground).Quiteobviously,(theyareplayingafootballmatch),butthisisnotthekeymessageconveyedbythepicture.Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthat(bothofthemtendtooverestimatetheirrivalsandunderestimatetheirownabilities),whichindicates(theirlackofconfidence).二、意義闡釋段1、段落結(jié)構(gòu)：總分/總分總2、段落層次：復(fù)原邏輯詞WhenIwasatmiddle-school,myparentswerebothoutofwork.MyparentsfeltdisappointedandIwasgreatlyworriedaboutmyfuture.Ourlifebecameveryterrible.Ievendecidedtocommitsuicide.Ourneighborlearntaboutmyfamily’scondition,andtheybegantohelpus.Theylentafewmoneytomyparentsandmyparentsusedthesemoneytoopenashop.Theyhelpedmetostudy.Myparentsfinallygotthroughhardlife.SoIsaythatloveisgreat.→Forinstance,whenIwasatmiddle-school,myparentswerebothoutofwork,duetowhichmyparentsfeltdisappointedandIwasgreatlyworriedaboutmyfuture.Consequently,ourlifebecamesoterriblethatIevendecidedtocommitsuicide.Later,ourneighborlearntaboutmyfamily’scondition,andtheybegantohelpus.Meanwhile,theylentafewmoneytomyparentsandmyparentsusedthesemoneytoopenashop.Inaddition,theyhelpedmetostudy.Intheend,myparentsfinallygotthroughhardlife.SoIsaythatloveisgreat.補充：形合vs.意合英語：語言縝密，思維精細(xì)，借助語法、結(jié)構(gòu)形式連接。中文：尚世功，驚人疏懶，不講顯性的語法和邏輯。e.g.我出生在武漢；武漢是個美麗的城市；長江漢水在此交匯。你說你要來；你沒來；我很失望。吃食堂：I’mgoingtoeatinthedininghall.救火：extinguish/fightagainstthefire枯藤老樹昏鴉，小橋流水人家Youdon’tknow,whoknow?→Ifyoudon’tknow,thenwhowillknow?“天太晚了，住在這吧！〞It'slate.Stayhere.Youhadbetterstayovernightatthisplacebecauseitistoolateforyoutogohomenow,劉暢很帥。LiuChangishandsome.食堂今天吃餃子。Dumplings/Jiaoziareservedinthecanteentoday.3、論證模式：①論證形式：純道理/道理+舉例②論證方法：正反比照；因果分析主題句（+過渡句）正反對比（A→B；非A→非B）因果分析（分類：橫向/縱向）細(xì)節(jié)論證（例子、引言、數(shù)據(jù)等）2004年16分：Thecartoondepictsavividpictureinwhichanathlete,drippingsweat,isrushingtotheend.Obviously,hewinsthematch,butthisisnotthekeymessageconveyedbythepicture.Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthatthesamelineismarkedasboth“thestart〞and“theend〞,whichindicatesthatalthoughtheathletecametothefinish,anewraceiswaitingforhim.Theideaconveyedbythecartoonisapparent:theendisanewstart.Itiswidelyacceptedthatweshouldnotbesatisfiedwiththepresentachievement,fornowadaysnewchallengesandcompetitionneverstop.Themarketeconomyandcompetitivesocietydrivesmanypeoplestudyinghardforhigheracademicdegrees,someofthemevenseekingtheopportunitiestostudyabroad.Weshouldsparenoeffortsimprovingourselves,masterhightechnologyandprofessionalskills.Thenwecanmakeuseofittodevoteourselvestosociety.Takemyfatherasanexample.Hewasdeniedhighereducationforhistoricalreasons.Butbyself-studyhebecameatechnicianinafactory.Manypeoplethoughthewascontent.Butheneverstoppedstudying.Hetookcoursesoflawinhissparetime.Laterhebecamealawyer.“Thefinishingpointisjustanewstartingpoint〞,hesaidtome.Theideaconveyedbythecartoonisapparent:theendisanewstart.Itiswidelyacceptedthatweshouldnotbesatisfiedwiththepresentachievement,fornowadaysnewchallengesandcompetitionneverstop.Themarketeconomyandcompetitivesocietydrivesmanypeoplestudyinghardforhigheracademicdegrees,someofthemevenseekingtheopportunitiestostudyabroad.Weshouldsparenoeffortsimprovingourselves,masterhightechnologyandprofessionalskills.Thenwecanmakeuseofittodevoteourselvestosociety.→Theideaconveyedbythecartoonisapparent:theendisanewstart.Foronething,itiswidelyacceptedthatweshouldnotbesatisfiedwiththepresentachievement,fornowadaysnewchallengesandcompetitionneverstop.Foranother,themarketeconomyandcompetitivesocietydrivesmanypeoplestudyinghardforhigheracademicdegrees,someofthemevenseekingopportunitiestostudyabroad.Undersuchcircumstances,undoubtedly,weshouldsparenoeffortimprovingourselves,masterhightechnologyandprofessionalskills,bywhichwecanmakefulluseofittodevoteourselvestosociety.18分：Asisshowninthepicture,onarrivingatthefinishinglineofaraceontheplayground,thelovelyyoungmanhastocontinuehisnewjourneyinnotimeinsteadofstoppingtotakearest.Hehassuccessfullysettledthepuzzleof“stoppingorgoingon〞whichmighthaveconfusedmanyothers.Withtheincreasingpaceofmodernlife,perhapsnochangehascharacterizedthepastdecademoredramaticallythanthatofpeople'sviewontheirownlife.Itisgenerallyagreeduponthatpeoplehavetoadjustthemselvestothisnewchange.Ontheonehand,nodoubt,peoplewillgainalotbysettingnewgoalsintheirdailylife.TakethefamousscientistThomasEdisonforexample.Hehaddoneverywellinhisearlylife,butcontinuedtopursuesomethingmoredifficultallthroughhislife.Ontheotherhand,ifoneisobsessedwiththesuccesshehasachieved,hewouldlosethechancetopursuenewsuccess.Whatismore,hemaybecometheslaveofhissuccess.Therearemanycasesshowingthatpeoplelosetheircouragetobetterthemselvesafterbecomingsuccessful.Tosumup,one'sviewonhissuccessdetermineshisfuture.Inmyopinion,itisnecessarytocarryoutanation-widecampaignpublicizingpeoplewhohaveaburningdesireformoreandevergreaterachievementwhentheyarealreadywell-known.Sothatpeopleinthesocietywilldevelopaforward-lookingattitudeandmaketheirlifeworthlivingandtheworldmorebeautifulaswell.2021年：DoesInternetnarrowthedistanceamongpeople,orbroadenit?Thisissuehasbecomeahot-topicwhichconcernsmostofus.Ontheonehand,sincetheprimaryuseofInternetiscommunication,itwillsurelyexertpositivesocialconsequencesinpeople’severydaylivesbecauseitincreasesthefrequencyandqualityofinterpersonalcommunicationsamongpeople.Butontheotherhand,theeaseofelectroniccommunicationmayleadtoweakersocialties,inthatpeoplehavelessreasonstoleavetheirhomesandactuallyinteractfacetofacewithotherpeople.ThemetaphoricandimpressiveportrayalhassubtlyrevealedthedualityoftherelationshipbetweenmanandInternet.ThespiderwebundoubtedlyservesasasymbolofInternet,bothconnectingpeopleandisolatingthemfromeachother.Ontheonehand,fromthepositiveside,thereisnodenyingthatInternetiscurrentlyoneofthemostefficientmediausedforinterpersonalcommunication,connectingpeoplewhohaveaccesstoitinacomparativelycloserpattern.〔Forinstance,asacollegestudent,IgetonlineeverydaytodiscussopinionswithotherpeopleonBBS,tosharemypleasuresandsorrowsonmicro-blog,tostudyEnglishbyregisteringforwebcoursesandtochatfreelythroughe-mailsorWe-chatwithmynet-friends.Andformostpeople,instantmessagingservicesprovidedbyonlinetechcompanieslikeTencentenableustocommunicatewithothersfarawayfromus.〕Butontheotherhand,fromarathernegativeperspective,asizableproportionofInternetusersadmitthattheyaretoomuchaddictedtoInternettomaintainface-to-facecontactwiththeirfamilies,acquaintancesandcolleagues,idlingawayanexcessiveamountoftimeonline,withtheresultthatthetraditionalwayoflifehasbeenradicallytransformed.Onceindulgedinthefictitiousworld,peoplefeelreluctanttoapproachothersandtoconcentrateonreallife,unwillingtomakecontactwitheachotherinaface-to-faceway,whichleadstotheirlossoftheskillofdirectcontactandtheiralienationfromothers.2021：Itisapparentthatthecartoonistaimsatremindingusoftheimportanceofcooperationandglorifyingthespiritofmutualhelp,whichtopthelistofvirtuesinChinesetime-honoredtradition.Hardlycananyoneachievesuccessinhiscareerwithouttheassistanceofhiscolleaguesandpartners.Ascompetitioninalllinesofworkgrowsincreasinglyfierce,wemustdefeatourrivalsthroughpowerfulteamwork.Whatweneedmostinplightiscooperation,simplybecauseconcertedeffortsbenefiteveryindividualaswellasthewholesociety.TakebasketballheroYaoMingforanexample:hecanslamthedunksmartlybecauseallhisteammatescontributemoreorlesstohisoutstandingperformance.Similary,itisthespiritofteamworkamongthestaffthatempowersthestrickendigitalgiantAppletosurvivetheterriblecrisisandclimbanewheight.Ifthevirtuewereignored,itisimpossibleforthehigh-techcorporationtocreateacontinuousseriesofhitsintheglobalelectronicmarket.Likewise,thesuccessfullaunchingofChang'eNo.3lunarprobeshouldbeattributedtotheChinesescientists’jointeffortsinsteadofindividualaccomplishment.Ifweworkseparately,wewillbeconfinedtofrailmindsandlimitedresources-inanutshell,cooperationreallydoesmatter.2021:Laughteristhesunthatdriveswinterfromthehumanrace.Whenwefeeldisappointed,sad,lonelyormiserable,wetendtofeelasifwewerelivingindespair.Butlaughterisagoodmedicineanditcanworkmiracles.Actually,whatseemstousasbittertrialsareoftenblessingsindisguise.AsSirWinstonChurchillstates:Apessimistseesthedifficultyineveryopportunity;anoptimistseestheopportunityineverydifficulty.Sotodrawaconclusion,optimismisthekeytoachievement.Onnoaccountcanproblemengulfuswhenweareplacedinaplightinthatwehavetohewoutofthemountainofdespairastoneofhope.2021年：Wecandeducefromthepicturethatgreatimportancehastobeattachedtotheissueofoptimism.Then,whathassparkedthisphenomenon?Identifyingthereasonsforthisemergingfactwhichinvolvesseveralcomplicatedfactorsisfarfromaneasytask.Butingeneral,theymaycomedowntothreemajorones.Tobeginwith,onaccountofthequickeningpaceoflife,competitiongoesincreasinglyfierceinallwalksoflife,imposingtremendouspressureonallindividuals.Thus,ahostofpeoplehavegainedagreaterawarenessoftheneedforanoptimisticandpositiveattitudetowardslife.What'smore,wemustmaintainpowerfuloptimisminfaceofchallengessoastosurviveandsucceed.Anothercausewhichisalsoworthmentioninghereisthebenefitsoptimismprovidesonindividualsandonsocietyasawhole.正反比照模板Peopledifferintheirattitudestowardsfailure.Facedwithit,someofthemcanstanduptoit,drawusefullessonsfromitandtryhardtofulfillwhattheyaredeterminedtodo.Others,however,loseheartandgivein.人們對失敗持有不同的態(tài)度。面對失敗，有人能夠經(jīng)得起考驗，從失敗中汲取教訓(xùn)，并努力去完成他們下定決心要做的事情。然而，另一些人卻喪失信心并退卻了。Inthefirstplace,ifyouwanttoachievesomethingorintendtofulfilloneofyourambitions,youmustworkhard,makeeffortsandgetprepared.Otherwise,youwilltakenoadvantageofopportunitieswhentheycometovisityou.Secondly,thedifferencebetweenamanwhosucceedsandonewhodoesnotliesusuallyinthewayeachtreatsopportunities.Thesuccessfulpersonalwaysmakesadequatepreparationstomeetopportunitiesastheydulyarrive.Theunsuccessfulperson,ontheotherhand,workslittleandjustwaitstoseepassby.第一，假設(shè)你要取得成就或要實現(xiàn)你的雄心壯志，你必須努力工作、艱苦奮斗、準(zhǔn)備好條件。否那么，機遇來臨你卻無法利用。第二，成功者與失敗者的區(qū)別在于處理機遇的態(tài)度。成功者做好充分準(zhǔn)備迎接機遇的適時來臨。而失敗者工作懶散，眼看機遇悄然而過。The

metaphoric

and

impressive

portrayal

has

subtly

revealed

the

importance

of

(self-confidence)

in

our

daily

life.

After

careful

reflection,

I

come

to

understand

its

implications

gradually.

In

the

first

place,

if

you

want

to

achieve

something

or

intend

to

fulfill

one

of

your

ambitions,

you

must

work

hard,

make

efforts

and

get

prepared

(on

the

basis

of

your

strong

courage

and

confidence).

Otherwise,

you

will

take

no

opportunities

when

they

come

to

visit

you.

Secondly,

the

difference

between

a

man

who

succeeds

and

one

who

does

not

usually

lies

in

the

way

each

treats

(challenges

and

difficulties

in

his

life’s

journey.)The

successful

person

can

always

build

up

and

maintain

powerful

optimism

to

bravely

welcome

any

strike

or

storm

looming

ahead

of

him,

holding

a

positive

attitude

toward

the

difficulty,

able

to

calm

down

to

get

a

tough

situation

under

his

control.

The

unsuccessful

person,

on

the

other

hand,

tends

to

overestimate

his

rival

and

the

dilemma,

intimidating

himself

unnecessarily

and

proving

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be

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Undoubtedly,thiscartoonarousesdeepconcernovertheissueofmutualsupport.Themessageconveyedinit,Isuppose,istwofold.Inthefirstplace,innowadaysworld,ifonewantstoachievesomethingorintendstofulfilloneofhisambitions,hehastoworkhard,makeeffortsandgetpreparedonthebasisofhisteam.Otherwise,hewilltakenoadvantageofopportunitieswhentheycometovisithim.Secondly,thedifferencebetweenamanwhosucceedsandonewhodoesnotliesonlyinthefactwhetherornothecouldcooperatessuccessfullywithothers.Thesuccessfulpersonalwaysachieveaccomplishmentsinhiscareerwiththeassistanceofhiscolleaguesandpartners.Theunsuccessfulperson,ontheotherhand,worksmerelyonhimselfandjustwaitstoseepassby.因果模板Whathassparkedtheincreasinginterestinexercise?Foronething,peoplehavegainedagreaterawarenessoftheneedforphysicalfitness.Foranother,theconstantlyimprovingstandardoflivingenablesChinesepeopletopatronizetheincreasingnumberofrecreationalvenues.Themainthingperhapscentersonthehealthcareandpsychologicalbenefitsexerciseprovides.什么引發(fā)了人們對鍛煉越來越濃的興趣？一方面，人們更加清楚地意識到保持身體健康的必要性。另一方面，不斷提高的生活水平使中國人能夠支付增加的娛樂支出。最主要的可能在于鍛煉帶來的保健和心理上的好處。Identifyingthereasonsforanemergingphenomenonwhichinvolvesseveralcomplicatedfactorsisfarfromaneasytask.Forexample,

somescientistsattributeenvironmentaldeteriorationtoaseriesofnaturalfactors,whileothersplacetheblamesolelyoninappropriatehumanbehavior.要找到涉及許多復(fù)雜因素的新現(xiàn)象的原因遠(yuǎn)非一件易事。例如，一些科學(xué)家把環(huán)境的惡化歸結(jié)為一些自然因素，而另一些人把責(zé)任都推在人類不適當(dāng)?shù)男袨樯稀heexplanationforthephenomenonoftherisingteenagesuiciderateinvolvesmanycomplicatedfactors.Someattributetherisetoanoveremphasisonearlysuccess,otherspointtomountingpeerpressure,andstillotherstoconfusionoverchangingsocialvalues.對上升的少年自殺率的解釋涉及很多復(fù)雜的因素。有的人把上升的原因歸結(jié)為過分強調(diào)少年時期的成功，有的人指出是因為不斷增長的同伴之間的壓力，還有人認(rèn)為是對不斷變化的社會價值的迷茫造成的。Thereasonsforantisocialbehaviorarebothcomplicatedandvaried.Isuggestthephenomenonresultsfrominappropriaterolemodelsandthelackofwell-definednormsofbehavior.However,themainreasonisquitelikelythecontinuingdegenerationofsocialvalues.反社會行為的原因既復(fù)雜又多樣。我認(rèn)為這種現(xiàn)象是不恰當(dāng)?shù)慕巧湫秃腿鄙傩袨闃?biāo)準(zhǔn)的很好的定義造成的。然而，主要原因很可能是不斷貶低的社會價值。仿寫：

2005：Throughtheartisticpresentation,wecanbeeasilyremindedofapopulartendencyintoday'ssociety,thatis,disrepecttowardseldersandshirkingoftheresponsibilityofnursingagingparents.Then,whyareagrowingnumberofChineseyoungstersfailtotakeonthefilialresponsibility?Onereasonistheincreasingdemandformaterialpossessionoftheyoungergeneration.Anotheristhebenefit-orientedtrendinmodernsociety.Perhapsthemainreason,however,centersonthedeteriorationofthepublicawarenessofnursingagingparents.2006：Themessageconveyedinthiscartoonisquiteapparent:incontemporaryChina,anincreasingnumberofyoungsterstendtoworshipthesuperstarsinanirrationalway.Identifyingthereasonsforthisemergingphenomenonwhichinvolvesseveralcomplicatedfactorsisfarfromaneasytask.Aftercarefulanalysis,Isuggestthephenomenonresultsfrominappropriaterolemodelsandthelackofwell-definednormsofbehavior.However,themainreasonisquitelikelythecontinuingdegenerationofsocialvalues.

負(fù)面話題模板Thiscartoonservesasawake-upcalltounveiltheincreasinglygraveissueof(tourists'spoilingofnature)whichprevailsinChinaandwhichalarminglyremindsusoftheimportanceof(naturepreservation)incontemporarysociety.Firstandforemost,atnotimecantheeconomyboom/societydevelopatthecostof(environmentaldamage).Inthisrespect,(tourism)isnoexception.Thus,(asustainedandharmoniousdevelopment)insteadof(thenettouristrevenue)justifiablytopstheagendaoftheoperationandmanagementofthegovernmentandtheauthoritiesconcerned.Inaddition,thecartoonalsourgesustopaydueattentionto(considereringhowtoraisethepublicmorality).ThephenomenonpresentedintheabovedrawingisanabsolutedisgracetousChinese,whosecorevaluestraditionallyhighlightthetremendoussignificanceof(publicmorals).正面話題模板Themetaphoricandimpressiveportrayalhassubtlyrevealedthesignificanceof(optimism).Firstandforemost,withinthiscompetitive21stcenturyfullofchancesandchallenges,weallexperienced(enoughgoodandbadinlife-amplehappinessandsorrow,sufficientjoyandpain).Undersuchcircumstances,itisgenerallyagreeduponandwidelyacknowledgedthat(apositiveandoptimisticattitude)notonlyprovidesthepassporttoapromisingfuturebutalsolaysthefoundationforachievingtriumph.Foranother,quiteunfortunately,ahostofindividualssinkincreasinglydeeperintothemiredueto(theirgloomyoutlook).Sotosumup,nomatterwhathappens,wehaveto(sparenoeffortestablishingarightoutlook,improvingourselvestodevoteourselvesinabetterwaytosociety).引用Oneofthegreatearlywriterswrotethat:Workisthegrandcureofallthemaladiesandmiseriesthateverbesetmankind.Ifthisistrue,thenthepresentsituationshouldmakeuswonderwhetherthemeasurethattheaverageworkerisobligedtoretireattheageof50isreasonable.一位偉大的作家曾寫到：工作是醫(yī)治人間一切病痛和疾苦的萬應(yīng)良藥。如果是這樣的話，那么現(xiàn)在的狀況應(yīng)使我們想一想，強迫普通工人在50歲退休是否合理。"Thepeoplewhogetoninthisworldarethepeoplewhogetupandlookforcircumstancestheywant,andiftheycannotfindthem,makethem."SuchistheremarkmadebyBernardShaw,agreatwriter.Thisviewhasbeensharednowbymoreandmorepeople.著名作家蕭伯納曾說過：在這個世界上取得成功的人，都努力去尋求他們想要的時機，如果找不到時，他們就自己創(chuàng)造時機。這一觀點現(xiàn)在正在被越來越多的人所接受。Adleriscorrectinthisassertionthateducationdoesnotendwithgraduation.阿得勒這句話很正確，教育不能隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束。三、舉例論證段結(jié)構(gòu)簡圖：〔主題句+〕關(guān)聯(lián)詞+主人公+插入修飾+例子細(xì)節(jié)+〔引言+〕例子總結(jié)2021:Weshouldgatheradditionalfactstosupportexistingevidenceandillustratethecorrectnessofmycontentionthatself-confidenceisoftheutmostimportance.Forinstance,Beethoven-theworld-famousGermanComposer-begantolosehishearingin1801andwasentirelydeafby1819.However,thisobstaclecouldnotkeephimfrombecomingoneofthemostinfluentialandprolificcomposersinarthistory.Withastrongspiritofoptimism,hesuccessfullyconqueredthestrikeanddifficultyinhislifeandmadehismusicformatransitionfromclassicaltoromanticcomposition.Beethoven'scaseisatypicalexampleindicatingthatconfidenceisthebasisofanysuccess.2021：Anexampleshouldbeaddedtohighlighttheissuediscussedabove.Todemonstrate,thestudentswhoareintheprocessofpreparingfortheNationalPostgraduateEntranceExamination–greatmanyinnumber,doubtfulabouttheirchancesandchoicesinmind–motivateandencourageeachothertogetridoftheoverwhelmingpressurefromthatexam,throughwhichtheysoonregaintheconfidenceandcourageaftercheeringeachup.Thisisaperfectevidenceindicatingthatonlycooperationandteamworkcanmakeitpossibleforthemtogothroughinfaceofanxietiesandinsecurity.2007：AnancientChineselegendoffersareadyexample.Anman–oldinage,namedtheFoolandlivingbesideMountainTaihangandWangwu–setuphismindtoremovethemountainblockingthevillage’sday,disregardingmockingcommentsfromhisfellowvillagersastheysawhimandhissonssettingouttowork,shovelbyshovel.TheFoolbelievedthatafterhisdeaththeworkwouldbehandeddownfromonegenerationtoanotheruntilthemountainwasleveledandfinallyherealizedhisdream.ThisisatypicalexamplethattheoldFool’sconfidenceinhimselfandcontemptfordifficultieseventuallypaidoff.2004：Numerousexamplescouldbecitedtosupportmyclaim.Forinstance,ThomasEdison–diligent,world-famousanddoingverywellinhisearlylife–continuedtopursuesomethingmoredifficultallthroughhislife.“Geniusconsistsof1%inspirationand99%perspiration.〞Suchistheremarkmadebyhim.Itistrueindeed.ThomasEdison’scaseisatypicalexamplethatkeepingmakingprogressanddaringtostrideforwardalwayshastobeconsideredastherightattitudetowardslifeandworkforeveryonewholongsforsuccess.開放式舉例：Tospecifythisstatement,Iwouldliketotakeanexample.HelenKeller-blindanddeaf-isalwaysadmiredandrememberedasaheroinestrivingforthedreaminherlife’sjourney.Withlanguage,sheprovedshecouldcommunicateintheworldofsightandsound-andwasabletospeaktoitandliveinit.“Literatureismyutopia.HereIamnotdisenfranchised.〞Helen’scaseisatypicalexamplethathowknowledgecouldliberateandcultivateone’smind.Todemonstrate,LadyDianaSpencer-theforevercharmingPrincessofWhales-isalwaysrememberedandrespectedbypeopleallovertheworldmoreforherkindness,humanityandcharitableactivitiesthanforherbeauty.Thislady’scaseisatypicalexamplethatone’sinternalmeritsoutweighsanythingelse.Forinstance,LiuChang–smart,quick-wittedandmostlikelytosucceedaftergraduation–endedupunemployed.“I’mregretful!〞HelaterremarkedwheninterviewedbyareporterfromChutianMetropolisDaily.“Myfailure,toalargeextent,canbeattributedtomylossofconfidence.〞LC’scaseisatypicalexamplethat….Risingcrimeisoftencitedasaprimeexampleofmountingsocialdecay.犯罪的上升經(jīng)常被當(dāng)作越來越嚴(yán)重的社會倒退的主要例子。BillGates,founderofMicrosoft,isaclassicexampleofsuccess.微軟的創(chuàng)始人比爾·蓋茨是成功的經(jīng)典范例。Persistencepaysoff!AcaseinpointcentersontheongoingnegotiationsandanticipatedeminentresolutionoftheMiddleEastpeaceprocess.堅持不懈能取得好結(jié)果！一個恰當(dāng)?shù)睦邮钦谶M(jìn)行的關(guān)于中東和平進(jìn)程的談判和預(yù)期達(dá)成的引人注目的決議。Weshouldgatheradditionalfactstosupportexistingevidenceandillustratethecorrectnessofthecontention.我們需要收集更多的事實支持現(xiàn)有的證據(jù)，并證明論點的正確性。Afewmoreexamplesshouldbeaddedt