過考點(diǎn)27 議論文-寫作訓(xùn)練

1、PAGE7專題6書面表達(dá)過考點(diǎn)27議論文Writing1體裁：議論文類型：正反對比類主題：是否該開車接送孩子建議用時(shí)：25分鐘2022廣東省廣州市部分重點(diǎn)中學(xué)高三模擬考試當(dāng)今,家長開車接送孩子上學(xué)的現(xiàn)象很是普遍。假如你是李華,上周五,你們班就該現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行了激烈的討論。請根據(jù)下列表格中提示的內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文,給中學(xué)生英語報(bào)投稿。贊成方節(jié)省時(shí)間,孩子可以有足夠的睡眠時(shí)間；可以舒適地吃早餐；有利于孩子的安全；增加家長與孩子的交流。反對方造成交通堵塞；增加家長負(fù)擔(dān)；你的觀點(diǎn)注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。_Writing2體裁:議論文類型：正反對比類主題：在學(xué)校是否可以

2、使用智能手機(jī)建議用時(shí)：25分鐘2022吉林省長春市重點(diǎn)高中高三質(zhì)量監(jiān)測假設(shè)你是李華,你班同學(xué)在今天的英語課上就高中生是否應(yīng)該在學(xué)校使用智能手機(jī)進(jìn)行了課堂討論,同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)不一。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容,為本次課堂討論的結(jié)果撰寫一篇英文報(bào)道,內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括：1.活動(dòng)簡介；2.支持者理由；3.反對者理由；4.你的觀點(diǎn)。支持者理由聯(lián)系父母方便；上網(wǎng)便捷,有益于學(xué)習(xí)反對者理由影響學(xué)習(xí)；手機(jī)游戲消磨意志你的觀點(diǎn)注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫；3.文章開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。Smartphonesarebecomingmoreandmoreofnecessityforseniorhi

3、ghschoolstudents._參考答案Writing1【寫作思路】本文是一篇議論文,贊成方與反對方的觀點(diǎn)悉數(shù)列出,而自己的觀點(diǎn)則需要自由發(fā)揮。因此,該篇文章寫作成功的關(guān)鍵就是如何整理安排已經(jīng)給出的要點(diǎn),做到表達(dá)精準(zhǔn),同時(shí)構(gòu)思自己的觀點(diǎn)使其有理有據(jù)、真實(shí)可信?！痉段馁p讀】LastFriday,ourclassheldaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherparentsshoulddrivetheirchildrentoandfromschool.Opinionsaredivided.Somebelievethatitcansavetimeforstudentstoget

4、enoughsleepandhavebreakfastcomfortably.Besides,itcanguaranteechildrenssafety.Stillitoffersmoreopportunitiesforparentstocommunicatewiththeirchildren.However,othersholddifferentopinions.Theybelieveitcausestrafficjamsaswellasundoubtedlyincreasetheparentsburdens.Additionally,inthelongrunitdoesharmtochil

5、drensgrowth,fortheymaybemoredependentontheirparents.Personally,itsnecessaryforveryyoungchildren,butforchildrenofaproperage,itlldonogoodtotheirindependence.本文要點(diǎn)齊全、層次清晰。自己觀點(diǎn)的描述符合客觀實(shí)際,合情合理。連接詞Besides,Still,However,Additionally,Personally的運(yùn)用使文章自然流暢、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。高級(jí)詞匯guarantee,opportunity,proper的運(yùn)用使文章增色不少。Writing

6、2【寫作思路】本題需要考生寫一篇英文報(bào)道,陳述正反兩方的觀點(diǎn)及考生自己的觀點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要點(diǎn),可以將主要內(nèi)容分成三段：第一段簡單描述現(xiàn)象；第二段寫支持者理由和反對者理由；第三段寫自己的觀點(diǎn)?！痉段馁p讀】Smartphonesarebecomingmoreandmoreofnecessityforseniorhighschoolstudents.Therefore,todayinourEnglishclassadiscussionwasheldaboutwhetherweseniorhighschoolstudentsshoulduseoursmartphonesatschool.Opinionsar

7、edivided.Studentswhoareinfavorofitconsideritconvenienttocontacttheirparentswhennecessary.Besides,theypointoutitissmartphonesthatgivethemaccesstotheInternetandthusbenefittheirstudies.Butothersholdtheoppositeopinion.Theyfinditeasyforsomestudentstobeaddictedtoplayingthesmartphones,whichhasanegativeeffe

8、ctontheirstudies.Worsestill,themobilegamescanalsodiscouragestudentswills.Personally,aslongasyoucancontrolyourselfanduseyoursmartphoneproperly,youcantakeit.一句多譯：Thosewhoareforitthinksmartphonesarenecessaryastheymakeiteasierforthemtocontacttheirparents./Studentssayingyestosmartphonesareobviouslyfocusingontheconveniencetheybring,suchascontactingtheirparents.Theyarguethatanincreasingnumberofstudentsarebecomingaddictedtosmar