高中英語-應(yīng)用文寫作-求助信-導(dǎo)學(xué)案-帶答案

1、求助信學(xué)案一、 文體述求助信是當(dāng)個人遇到一些自己無法解決的問題或困難時向別人請求幫助的一種書信。注意語氣 委婉、真誠，并要向收信人表示感謝。通常包括三部分內(nèi)容：二、 常用塊(1) 做某事有麻煩 have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth(2) 給某人幫助 do sb a favor/give a hand(3) 尋求幫助 ask for help/seek help(4) 遇到一些問題 encounter problems(5) 面臨困難 be faced with difficulties(6) 忙于做某事 be busy doing sth/be enga

2、ged in doing (7) 急需/迫切需要 in urgent need (8) 專業(yè)指導(dǎo) professional guidance(9) 學(xué)以致用 putinto use(10) 讓某人失望 let sb down(11) 克服恐懼 overcome the fear(12) 取得巨大的進(jìn)步 make great progress(13) 渴望做某事 be anxious do sth/long to do sth(14) 提供一些有建設(shè)性的指導(dǎo) offer some constructive guidance(15) 因某事感激某人 be grateful to sb for st

3、h三、 常用式1. 開(1) 我寫信想請您幫我一個忙。I am writing ask you to do me a favor/give me a Im writing to ask for your help. (2) 面對以上的問題，我渴望得到你的幫助。Faced with the above problems, I am anxious get your help.2. 正(3) 我想知道你是否能為我推薦。Im wondering if you could recommend to me.例 我想知道你是否能為我推薦幾首比賽用的詩。Im wondering if you could r

4、ecommend some poems to for the competition.(4) 你能就給我一些建議嗎？could you give me some tips on ?/ Would you please offer me some advice on?例 我想知道你是否能為我推薦幾首比賽用的詩。Could you give me some tips on the basic skills of recitation?第1 / 5(5) 如果在方面有什么注意事項，請一定要告訴我。If there are any s and donts in terms , please do le

5、t me know.例 如果在著裝禮儀等方面有什么注意事項，請告訴我。If there are any s and donts in terms dressing manners and so on, please let me know.3. 結(jié)語(6) 如果你能幫助我，我將感激不盡。Id appreciate it you could lend me a hand/help me.(7) 如果你能花點時間來看一下并做些必要的修改，我將不勝感激。Id be very grateful if you could take some time go through it and make nec

6、essary changes.四、 典題例(2021 年 1 月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試適應(yīng)性測試)假定你是李華，準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校組織的 英文詩朗誦比賽。請給外教 George 寫封郵件求助，內(nèi)容包括：1. 說明比賽要求； 2. 請他推薦英文詩； 3. 請教朗誦技巧。注意：1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 80 左右；2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dear Im writing to for Yours,Li 第一步審題構(gòu)思很鍵一、審題1. 確定體裁：本文為求助信2. 確定人稱：第一人稱3. 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時二、構(gòu)思第一段：表明寫信目的，即尋求幫助第二段：說明比賽要求，請他推薦英文詩并請教朗誦技

7、巧。第三段：表達(dá)感謝，希望得到幫助第二步核心詞匯想全英文詩朗誦比賽 English Poetry Recitation Competition參賽者 competitors給我推薦幾首詩 recommend some poems to me與挑戰(zhàn)和夢想相關(guān)的主題 related to the topics of challenges and dreams請在我的閱讀技巧上給我一些指導(dǎo)，比如聲調(diào)、情感和手勢 offer me some guidance on my reading skills such as the tone, the emotion and the gesture第三步由詞擴(kuò)

8、句雛現(xiàn)Para. 2 說明比要求，請他薦英文并請教朗誦巧。第2 / 51. 我們學(xué)校下個月將舉行英語詩歌朗誦比賽。An English Poetry Recitation Competition is to be held next month in our school.2. 我們參賽者被要求在 3 分鐘內(nèi)朗誦一首英文詩。We competitors required to recite an English poem within 3 minutes.3. 我想知道您是否可以為我推薦一些比賽用的詩。I am wondering if you could recommend some poe

9、ms to me for the competition.4. 如果主題是關(guān)于挑戰(zhàn)和夢想，那就更好了。It would be better the topics are related to challenges dreams.5. 您能不能給我一些閱讀技巧方面的指導(dǎo)，比如語氣、情感和手勢。W ould you be kind enough to offer me some guidance on my reading skills such as the tone, the emotion and the gesture?Para. 3 表達(dá)感，希望得到助6. 如果您能為我提供幫助，我將不勝

10、感激。期待您的早日回復(fù)。Id appreciate it you could lend me a hand. Looking forward to your early reply.第四步過渡銜接連篇邏輯角度排序關(guān)系遞進(jìn)關(guān)系舉例關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系因果關(guān)系歸納總結(jié)并列關(guān)系合適的過渡性詞匯first; firstly; second; last but not least; first; first all; the first place; at last; last all; for one thing; for another on the one hand; on the other hand;

11、finallywhats more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; make mattersworse; whats worse; worse still;for for like; such as follows; take an examplebut; however; on contrary (of); owing to; to; to;as a result /consequence (of); thus; in a word; in short; up; in conclusion; in general; in s

12、ummary; on whole;in briefand; too; as well as; along with; together with; both and ; not only but alsoOne possible version：Dear George,Im writing for your help.An English Poetry Recitation Competition is going to be held next month in our school. We competitors are required recite an English poem wi

13、thin 3 , I am wondering if you could recommend some poems to me for the competition. it would be better if the themes are related to challenges dreams. Moreover would you be kind enough to offer me guidance on my reading skills such as the tone, emotion and the gesture第3 / 5Id appreciate it you coul

14、d lend me a hand. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua五、 課堂習(xí)假定你是李華，下個月要參加新華外國語學(xué)校的入學(xué)英語面試，給外教 Chris 寫信請教，內(nèi) 容包括：1. 口語表達(dá)；2. 面試技巧；3. 注意事項。注意：1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 80 左右；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第一步構(gòu)思首段：表明寫信目的請教入學(xué)英語面試技巧。主體段落：咨詢口語表達(dá)、面試技巧以及著裝建議。結(jié)尾：表達(dá)感謝，希望能夠得到幫助。第二步核心詞匯入學(xué)英語面試 English admission interview語言流暢 languag

15、e fluency急需你的專業(yè)指導(dǎo) in urgent need of your professional 英語口語 oral English 面試技巧 interview techniques 著裝禮儀 dressing manners第三步由詞擴(kuò)句雛現(xiàn)Para. 1 表明寫目的請入學(xué)英語面技巧。1. 我是李華，您班上的一名學(xué)生。我寫信是想咨詢你關(guān)于我下個月參加新華外國語大學(xué)英語入學(xué)面 試的事。Im Li Hua, student your class. Im writing consult you about my English admission interview of Xinhua

16、 Foreign Studies University next Para. 2 咨詢口表達(dá)、面試巧以及裝建議。2. 語言的流利程度對于這樣的面試來說是非常重要的，所以我非常需要您對我的英語口語進(jìn)行專業(yè) 的指導(dǎo)。Language fluency is of vital importance for such an interview, Im in urgent need your professional guidance my oral English.3. 此外，任何關(guān)于面試技巧的建設(shè)性建議我們都將非常感謝。Besides, constructive advice on interview

17、 techniques will be highly appreciated.4. 最后，如果在著裝禮儀等方面有什么注意事項，請務(wù)必告訴我。Finally, if there are any s and donts in terms dressing manners and so on, please let me know. Para. 3 表達(dá)感，希望能夠到幫助5. 如果你能花點時間幫助我，我將非常感激。期待你的盡早回復(fù)。I would be grateful if you could take some time and help me with it. Looking forward

18、to your earliest reply.One possible version：Dear Mr Chris,Im Li Hua, student your class. Im writing to consult you about my English admission interview第4 / 5of Xinhua Foreign Studies University next Language fluency is of vital importance for such an interview, so Im in urgent need of your professio

19、nal guidance in my oral . Besides, constructive advice on interview techniques will be highly appreciated. Finally, if there are any dos and donts in terms manners and on, please do let me know.I would be grateful if you could take some time and help me with it. Looking forward to your earliest repl

20、y.Sincerely,Li Hua六、 課外業(yè)假定你是學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)負(fù)責(zé)人李華，計劃組織英文視頻配音比賽。給外教 Mr Albert 寫信，他 幫忙審定策劃書，并就比賽的形式、內(nèi)容等方面提供建議。注意：1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 80 左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：配音 dubbing核心詞英語配音比賽 English dubbing competition這是我們第一次舉辦這樣的活動 this is first time that we held such an activity我希望您能抽出時間告訴我您對這個計劃的看法 I hope you could spare some time to tell your opinion on the plan在比賽的形式、材料的內(nèi)容等方面給我們一些建議 give us some advice on the form of