高一讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)-課件

1、Continuation Writing（讀后續(xù)寫）Shiyan High School Miss Wang Continuation WritingShiyan Hig 讀后續(xù)寫: 提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的語言材料，原文多是情節(jié)豐富的記敘文，偶有少量的議論文，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語和所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行續(xù)寫（150詞左右），將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。（滿分25分）新高考考試說明 讀后續(xù)寫:高一讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)-PPT高一讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)-PPT第五檔： 21-25第四檔： 16-20第三檔： 11-15第二檔： 6-10第一檔： 1-5第五檔： 21-25評

2、分原則本題總分為25分，分5個(gè)檔次給分 評分原則本題總分為25分，分5個(gè)檔次給分 Step 1. Read the passage Step 2. Get the main idea (who? When? Where? What? Why? How?) Step 3. Predict the possible plot development (the plot, logical,reasonable, the given two sentences)Step 4. Begin to write(the underlined words)Step 5. Polish your writing

3、(詞匯、句式、語法的多樣性) How to write a continuation?Step 1. Read the passage How When?Where?Who?what?Why?how?how to get the main ideaWhen?how to get the main ideaBasic forms of the 6 questionsWhen did the story happen?Where did the story happen?Who is the main character?What happened in the story?Why was the

4、 matter caused?How was the matter solved/ended?Basic forms of the 6 questions讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)II When I was a little girl, every time my dad was repairing something, hewould ask me to hold the hammer, and meanwhile, have a conversation with me. I never saw my dad drinking or taking a night out. All he did afte

5、r work was taking care of his family. I grew up and left home for college andsincethen, my dad had been calling me every Sunday morning, no matter what. Several years later I bought a house,whichmy dad painted by himself for three days in the 80-degree summer heat. All he asked was for me to talk to

6、 him. But I was always busy,unable to find any time for conversation with him. One Sunday morning we had a telephone talk as usual. I noticed that my dad hadforgotten some things we discussed lately. I was in a hurry, so our conversation was short. Later that day came a call saying my father was in

7、hospital. Immediately I bought a ticket for a flight and on my way I was thinking about all the missed occasions to have a talk with my dad 注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為60左右；2. 至少使用4個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3. 續(xù)寫部分只有一段，開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)II When?Where?Who?What?Why? How?when I was a little girl my dad

8、,I have a conversation with me my dad takes care of my familywhen I was a little girl my daStep 1. Read the passage Para.1 When I was a little girl, every time my dad was repairing something, he would ask me to hold the hammer, and meanwhile, have a conversation with me. I never saw my dad drinking

9、or taking a night out. All he did after work was taking care of his family.Main idea: When I was a little girl my dad like to have a conversation with me,who takes care of my family.Step 1. Read the passage Main Step 1. Read the passage Para2.I grew up and left home for college and since then, my da

10、d had been calling me every Sunday morning, no matter what. Several years later I bought a house, which my dad painted by himself for three days in the 80-degree summer heat. All he asked was for me to talk to him. But I was always busy, unable to find any time for conversation with him.Main idea: W

11、hen I grew up,my dad want to talk to me .But I was busy, unable to have a conversation with himStep 1. Read the passage Main Step 1. Read the passage Para.3One Sunday morning we had a telephone talk as usual. I noticed that my dad had forgotten some things we discussed lately. I was in a hurry, so o

12、ur conversation was short. Later that day came a call saying my father was in hospital. Main idea: One Sunday morning came a call saying my father was in hospital.Step 1. Read the passage Main Para.4 Immediately I bought a ticket for a flight and on my way I was thinking about all the missed occasio

13、ns to have a talk with my dad. when I got to the hospital. Para.4when I got to the hospitStep 3. Predict possible plot developmentIn a group predict how the story will develop:To predict doesnt mean you can write whatever you like. Continuation writing must be designed in a logical and reasonable wa

14、y. And on top of that being creative will be appreciated. Step 3. Predict possible plot Step 4. Begin to write 注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為60左右；2.至少使用4個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3. 續(xù)寫部分只有一段，開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。The underlined words: I dad conversation talk unable hospitalStep 4. Begin to write 注意：參考詞匯：pass awa

15、y, die(vi), dead(adj.), lose sb.regret doing sth.后悔做過某事，find sb.lying on the bed,burst into tears, burst out crying,only then did I realize .get over the illness, recover from the illness,my heart is broken. selfless, be worried about, be concerned about參考詞匯：Possible version 1: When I rushed to hosp

16、ital, I found my dad lying there, weak and hopless. Holding back the tears, I talked to him gently. His face lit up . Only then did I realize the conversation was more than conversation . It was love .I was grateful that my father got over the illness and now it is I who always enjoy starting the co

17、versation.(62字）Possible version 1:Possible version 2: Bythe time I got to hospital, my father had passed away. Now it washe who did not have time for a conversation with me. I realized howlittle I know about my dad, his deepest thoughts and dreams. After his death I learned more about him, and even more about myself.（53字）Possible version 2