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1、英語寫作中高級句式應(yīng)用將樂一中 巫瑤環(huán)第1頁How to write a good composition 第2頁高考作文評分細則第五檔(21-25分）1.覆蓋全部內(nèi)容關(guān)鍵點2.利用較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯3.有效地使用英語句子之間連接成份,全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊第3頁 Studentshomework 假如你是李華。最近，你外國筆友戴維發(fā)來一封郵件，說他飲食不規(guī)律，缺乏鍛煉，造成過分肥胖，經(jīng)常被同學(xué)們嘲笑。為此他感到非?？鄲?，特向你求援。請依據(jù)下面寫作提醒給他寫一封提議信。內(nèi)容包含： 1.對他表示同情； 2.提出你提議； 3.希望情況好轉(zhuǎn)。第4頁Student ADear David, -I can und

2、erstand your mood. Dont be too nervous, take it easy. Here are some my advice: First, you should be more confident. Dont think about too much. Second, you can do some exercise. Such as , running, swimming and so on. Finally, you ought to have a balanced diet, eat more vegetables and fruits , and eat

3、 less meat. You will lose weight. I hope everything will be ok. Im looking forward to your reply.第5頁Student BDear David, - because youre laughed at by your classmates for being overweight. Therefore, I will give you some suggestions. I think it is vital for you to live a healthy life. First, you sho

4、uld have a balanced diet. Second, it would be a good idea to have three meals on time. Last but not least, youd better do some exercise in the morning, because its helpful to lose weight. You can run around your house, which is a good way to lose weight. I do hope my advice is useful to you.第6頁Who w

5、rites betterWho writes better?第7頁Student A: 語法基本正確，句式單一，多為簡單句，三檔或四檔；Student B：句式變換豐富，語法利用正確并得體，如： It形式主語，強調(diào)句，非限制性定語從句 上下文銜接詞 ，如：therefore，because，last but not least 五檔 Comparison第8頁Sample Dear David, -Now Id like to offer you some advice. I think its necessary for you to lead a healthy lifestyle now

6、. First, you should have three meals on time instead of eating snacks now and then. Second, it is a good idea to have a balanced diet that includes grain, meat, milk ,fruit and vegetables to get enough energy. Third, I suggest you should get up early and take physical exercise every morning, which w

7、ill help you lose weight and regain your confidence. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. 第9頁Dear David, -Now Id like to offer you some advice I think its necessary for you to lead a healthy lifestyle now. First, you should have three meals on time instead of eating snacks now and then. Second,

8、it is a good idea to have a balanced diet that includes grain, meat, milk ,fruit and vegetables to get enough energy. Third, I suggest you should get up early and take physical exercise every morning, which will help you lose weight and regain your confidence. I hope my advice will be helpful to you

9、.第10頁What we have learned ？Some useful sentence patterns：1.Its +adj. + that(vital,important,necessary,etc) Its + adj. + for sb. to do.2.Its +a pityshame pleasure+that3.Its done + that 4.Noun clauses(objective clauses,subjective clauses,predicative clauses,etc)5.find it adj. to do.(difficult, possibl

10、e,interesting)6.Its +被強調(diào) + that第11頁7.倒裝句式：Not only-but also，Only+狀語+部分倒裝，So+adjadv that 8.There is no doubt that ,there is no need to do9. Which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。10. when，while，if，although ，because 引導(dǎo)復(fù)合句。11.Its not until - that 12.With sb.sth doing doneto do.第12頁Warming up training 第13頁Translation1.我們有必要在

11、學(xué)習(xí)中探尋有效方法。（Its necessary）2.杭州如此迷人，以至于我決定明年再去參觀它一次。(so,that)3.有些人提議說父母應(yīng)多陪同孩子。(Its done that)4.它不但能夠鍛煉身體，而且還能減壓。(not only, but also)5.作為老師，極難平衡工作和家庭生活。(Its hard）6.你必須恪守規(guī)則并舉止得體，即使你以為他們不公平。（even if）7.我寧愿呆在家里也不愿意處處閑逛。(Would rather)8.只有用這么方法，我們才能提前完成任務(wù)。(Only +adv.)9.我每七天運動三次，這對我健康有好處。（which）10.有這么多家務(wù)活要干，你

12、周末最好呆在家里。（with）第14頁Hang Zhou is so attractive that I decide to visit it again.Its suggested that parents should accompany children.It can not only build up our body but also release the stress.Its hard for teachers to balance work and family life.Its necessary for us to explore efficient ways in our

13、 study.You should obey the rules and behave yourself even if they are unfair.7. I would rather stay at home than hang around.8. Only in this way can we complete our task ahead of time.9. I do exercise three times a week, which is beneficial to our health.10.With so much housework to do, youd better

14、stay at home.第15頁假如你是李華，是某國際學(xué)校學(xué)生會主席。做家務(wù)有利于培養(yǎng)同學(xué)們獨立生活能力、構(gòu)建融洽家庭關(guān)系?，F(xiàn)請用英語寫一封倡議信。內(nèi)容包含：1.青少年學(xué)會做家務(wù)意義；2向同學(xué)們發(fā)出倡議。注意：詞數(shù)100.Writing第16頁Discussion in groups Making an outline 第17頁StructurePara 1 express topic & opinionPara2 the reasons of doing housework（three or four points）Para3 calling on第18頁第19頁Enjoy the sam

15、pleDear schoolmates, Many teenagers are not allowed to do housework at home so that they can spend more time on their lessons. However, I think we should share housework with our parents. Its known that sharing housework benefits us greatly. First, it strenghtens our family bonds . we can not only e

16、njoy the pleasure of doing housework, but also communicate with our family members. Second, doing housework is a kind of physical exercise which builds up our body. More importantly, we can learn some basic living skills , which enables us to live independently when we grow up. Only in this way will we adapt our life. So lets set asid