非謂語動詞在寫作中的運用李萍市公開課金獎市賽課一等獎課件

1、Non- finite Verbs in writing非謂語動詞在寫作中應用第1頁Teaching goal: Master the use of non-finite verbs in writing.Teaching important point: Three forms of non-finite verbs.Teaching important difficult point: How to use non-finite verbs to make sentences.第2頁Forms of non-finite verbs V-ingV-edto VEg. workworking

2、workedto work第3頁Revision.Do 1-15 on 22. 總復習目標第4頁Revion.1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I am given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies harder. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.Given another chance, I wil

3、l succeed.To improve his English, he studies harder.Join the sentences with non-finitive verbs.第5頁 On National Day, I had very bad luck. When I woke up , I found it was too late for school. And I found the alarm clock was turned off. I hurried downstairs and found my bike which was broken was stolen

4、. I felt exhausted when I arrived at school. After the school guard told me, I knew it was holiday for National Day. Then when I came back home, I realized I had left my keys in the door and I found my house was broken into.Read the passage aloud.第6頁On National Day , I had very bad luck. _ (wake) up

5、, I found it was too late for school and the alarm clock _ (turn) off. I hurried downstairs and found my _ (break) bike _(lose).So I had to run to school. _ (exhaust), I arrived at school. _ (tell) by the school guard, I knew it was holiday for National Day. Then when _ (come) back home, I realized

6、I had made my keys _ (leave) in the door and I found my house _ (break into).WakingturnedbrokenlostExhaustedToldcomingleftbroken intoRead again and compare.第7頁用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子1.因為在這國家沒有朋友，她以為要想找到工作是不可能。用連詞becauseBecause she had no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.用非謂語結構Havin

7、g no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.第8頁2.這本用簡易英語寫成書很輕易讀懂用定語從句 The book, is easy to understand.用非謂語結構 The book , is easy to understand用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子which was written in simple English, written in simple English,第9頁3. 他們是來自于幾個國家游客。用定語從句 They are visitors who come from seve

8、ral countries.用非謂語結構They are visitors coming from several countries.用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子第10頁4.發(fā)覺他好朋友沮喪，他竭盡所能讓他朋友開心。用并列句He found his best friend frustrated and he did everything he could to make him happy.用非謂語結構Finding his best friend frustrated, he did everything he could to make him happy.用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子第11

9、頁 It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy. It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.4. 用非謂語結構合并以下句子用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子第12頁Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont w

10、ork hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.用非謂語結構美化文章第13頁Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is po

11、pular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.用非謂語結構美化文章第14頁They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. They cheat to get highe

12、r marks so that they can be praised or even admired. 用非謂語結構美化文章第15頁Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.用非謂語結構美化文章第16頁

13、Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.用非謂語結構美化后文章第17頁提

14、議有足夠睡眠是必要。原因1.它能有效改進我們課堂學習。2.保持健康身體是深入學習及工作基礎。要求：1. 用2- 3句話表示表格內(nèi)容 2. 2- 3句話要有連貫性necessary an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the basis for our further study and work. 高考臨近，保持良好心態(tài)有利于減輕焦慮，還能增強克服困難勇氣 。Having a try第18頁翻譯: 高考臨近，保持良好心態(tài)有利于減輕焦慮，還能增強克服困難勇氣 。高考臨近。 (National College Entrance

15、 Examination) 保持良好心態(tài)很主要。 (have a right attitude)它有利于減輕焦慮（relax）和勇敢地克服困難。Step2：分別翻譯這幾個簡單句National College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Having a tryStep1：拆分成幾個簡單句(漢字)第19頁Step3：合并句子 With National College

16、 Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. National College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence1:Having a try第20頁Step3：合并句子 Wi

17、th College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence2:Tip: Try to us

18、e differentways to express.Having a try第21頁提議有足夠睡眠是必要。原因1.它能有效改進我們課堂學習。2.保持健康身體是深入學習及工作基礎。要求：1. 用2- 3句話表示表格內(nèi)容 2. 2- 3句話要有連貫性（高考模擬）Having a trynecessary an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the basis for our further study and work.第22頁提議有足夠睡眠是必要。原因1.它能有效改進我們課堂學習。2.保持健康身體是深入學習及工作基礎。Ha

19、ving a tryIt is necessary to have enough sleep .Having enough sleep is necessary.It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Keeping healthy is the basis for our further study and work.To Keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.第23頁 Passage： Having enough sleep

20、 is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.Tip: Never ignore the conjunction.Having a try第24頁 With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which h

21、elps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work. Besides, doing exercise regularly is of great benefit to our health.

22、Last but not least, it is very important to keep a balanced diet.第25頁二. 使用非謂語動詞使句子簡練高檔三. 巧用倒裝增強句子表現(xiàn)力四. 嘗試多 樣化表示方式一.使用較高級詞匯使文章增加吸引力強調(diào)句With短語復合結構定語從句名詞性從句(主賓表同從句)各種狀語從句被動語態(tài)第26頁書面表示評分檔次情景作文共分6檔給分 第1檔 1820 分 第2檔 1517 分 第3檔 1214 分 第4檔 6 11 分 第5檔 1 5 分 第6檔 0 分第27頁08北京高考：假設你是紅星中學高三一班學生李華，為?？⒄Z園地寫一篇題為 “Our

23、Spring Outing” 英文稿件。請依據(jù)以下四幅圖先后次序，敘述上周你們班從準備春游到春游結束完整過程。 注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。 提醒詞：游樂園 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin 討論爬山撿拾他人垃圾投放垃圾第28頁慣用語：1.Last Friday left me a deep impression, which I will never forget. Last week, I / my brother had an unforgettable experience.2. In order to improve our abilities of facing danger

24、, our school organized an activity. 按時間次序描寫3. Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went toby bus. One Sunday morning, my classmates and I went to the park for an picnic. 4 After doing, we went to do. 5.Having done,we. 6. And then, we.第29頁結尾語： I was tired, but I was happy that I did a

25、good deed. I have learned a great deal through the activity. It is an unforgettable day / experience 評論語/感嘆I think the activity is both necessary and meaningful. It not only makes us aware of the importance of self- protection/helping others/protecting our environment but also develop our abilities

26、of dealing with things /communicating with others.2.The activity can develop /promote our sense of social responsibility.第30頁.心情語 We were in high spirit. With excitement filling our heart, we said thanks/goodbye to sb. With our hearts filled with excitement, we. To our joy/delight, we saw. 景色： 1. Th

27、e view was beautiful. 2. The sun was shining. 3. Gently came the soft wind. 4. The weather was clear , the wind calm and the sun shining 第31頁時間次序：關鍵點：細節(jié)：適當添加：時間次序：關鍵點：細節(jié)：適當添加：時間次序：關鍵點：細節(jié)：適當添加：時間次序：關鍵點：細節(jié)：適當添加：Early in the morningset off climb爬山、天氣心情，景色When we got to the top of處處垃圾情緒詫異心情Finally或few h

28、ours later,或After.投放垃圾可回收, 不可回收感受Before the Spring outing討論不一樣想法心情第32頁 好作文要素：詳細生動We started our spring outing on a fine day. In high spirits, we started our spring outing on a fine day. In high spirits, we started our spring outing early in the morning on a fine day. Flowers greeted us with their sw

29、eetest smiles and we were soaked up in the warm sunshine. 第33頁上周我們班組織了一次春游。我們先召開了班會討論春游去哪兒。我們提出了很多不一樣想法,比如去游樂園,去劃出和去爬山。Last week our class organized a spring outing.We first held a class meeting, discussing where to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choices, such as going to an amusem

30、ent park, going boating and going mountain climbing. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.1.第二天，我們一大早兒就出發(fā)了。2.當我們爬山時候,我們享受著溫暖陽光和觀賞著漂亮景色。3.沒過多久我們便來到了山頂。The next day, we set off early in the morning.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.It didnt take us l

31、ong to arrive at the top of the mountain.4. 最終我們決定去爬山。第34頁然而，當我們抵達山頂那一刻我們詫異地發(fā)覺這里處處都是游客留下垃圾。我們毫不遲疑地開始撿垃圾。However, we were shocked to see litter here and there left by tourists the moment we reached there.Without any hesitation, we set out to pick up the litter at once.撿完全部垃圾后，我們把垃圾分別扔到附近可回收和不可回收垃圾桶里。

32、即使很累，但我們很有成就感。因為我們?yōu)楸Ｗo環(huán)境盡了我們綿薄之力。Having collected all the rubbish, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.Tired as we were, we had a sense of achievement because we did our small part to protect the environment.第35頁最基本范文 Last Thursday, we_ a class meeting

33、_where to go for our spring outing. We _up with several choices, such as_ boating, _a mountain, and _to an amusement park. Finally we decided_ mountain climbing. The next day, we set off early in the morning, while _the mountain, we _ the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we _the top

34、, we _to see litter here and there, such as bottles and bananas peels. Then we started _the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby _bin and_ bin respectively. We _tired but happy.hadto discusscamegoingclimbinggoingto goclimbingenjoyedreachedwere shockedto pick uprecyclingnon-recyclin

35、gwere第36頁37 Last week, our class organized a spring outing. To make this memorable activity more wonderful, we discussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain climbing instead of other choices like playing in an amusement park and going boating.With high spirits, we started ou

36、r spring outing on a fine day. Flowers presented us with their sweetest smiles and were soaked up in the warm sunshine. However, we were shocked when we reached the top of the mountain. Waste bottles and used packages were thrown everywhere which totally ruined the beauty of the nature. Feeling a gr

37、eat pity for the tourists, we picked up the rubbish and carefully divided them into two groups: the recycle ones and the non-recycle ones. After that, we put the rubbish第37頁38into the bin differently. We call on awareness on protecting our environment which is of great importance. Though cleaning up

38、 the rubbish was a tough task, our hearts were filled with joy and we will remember this outing for ever.19第38頁 Gently comes the Spring. As the wind softly blows, it brings back the vitality to the great outdoor. Students in our class were excited, too, and eager to have a spring outing in the weeke

39、nd last week. A heated discussion was held: Some students suggested we go boating, some insisted that going hiking was the best idea, while some thought the amusement park was of more fun. Finally, we decided to go hiking in the mountains on a sunny day. The flowers were blooming happily and sent th

40、eir welcome to us. With excitement in our heart, we climbed the mountain easily and reached the peak soon.優(yōu)異作文觀賞第39頁 To our surprise, what we found on the peak was not only beautiful scenery, but also rubbish here and there. Feeling so bad for the environment spot, we changed our plan and began pick

41、ing up the rubbish. Afterwards, we brought the rubbish down the mountain and sorted them into “can be recycled” and “cant be recycled”. We finally dropped them into different bins set at the foot of the mountain. Fun as we had during the trip, we still felt so sorry for the ruined nature. I think it

42、 is everyones duty to take care of the environment so that we can contribute to a better living and relaxing space for others.得分：18分 內(nèi)容關鍵點齊全，連貫，恰當使用了連接成份，所用句式和詞匯較豐富；表達了較強語言利用能力。第40頁假設你是紅星中學高三一班學生李華，為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為“Our Social Practice Activity”英語稿件。請依據(jù)以下四幅圖先后次序，敘述上周你們班從準備參觀首都博物館到參觀結束完整過程。注意：次數(shù)不少于60第41頁 Our class visited the Capital Museum last week, and it is one of the most impressive social practice activit