高中英語 高考英語寫作方法與技巧

1、2021/8/11 星期三1 NMET英語寫作方法與技巧 -Scoring High in NMET 2011 Writing 2021/8/11 星期三2 NMET2009書面表達 假定你住在一個涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會請你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動的安排傳達給住戶。要點：時間：下周六上午8：00至11：00內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果報名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前提示：帶帽子、手套歡迎踴躍參加2021/8/11 星期三3NMET2009書面表達Our Dear Residents,In order to enrich the life of the residents, t

2、he committee of our community has arranged a special activity for next weekend.We plan to go to a farm to pick apples from 8 to 11 next Saturday morning. All the residents in the 2021/8/11 星期三4community can join. Those interested in the activity have to sign up in the office before 5 next Thursday.

3、In addition, while working there, youd better wear a hat and gloves to protect your face from being exposed to the strong sunlight and your hands (from being) hurt. 2021/8/11 星期三5Welcome to take an active part in the activity.Wish you a wonderful time! The committee of the community2021/8/11 星期三6Our

4、 Dear Residents,In order to enrich the life of the residents, our community committee has arranged a special activity for next weekend: well go to a farm to pick apples. The activity will start next Saturday morning and will last three hours. The signing-up in the office will be ending before 5 next

5、 Thursday. One more thing, if you have decided to go with us, 2021/8/11 星期三7be sure to take hats and gloves with you, as they are necessary to use while you are working. We really expect all the residents in the community will join us and have fun. The committee of the community （106words)2021/8/11

6、星期三8Rewriting skills(寫作有道） 1. 重視5 wh-questions: who what when where why 2. Resupply writing skill(追述技巧） 3. Subjects(無生命的物作主語) 4. 名詞修飾名詞 5. 借助標點 6. 首尾相顧的寫作方式 7. 避免冗言與拖泥帶水 2021/8/11 星期三9 文的形態(tài): 三段式, 首尾相顧; 開門見山, 直入主題; 10句: 文章開頭與結尾: i. 主題句 開始就點明全文主題:We all want to grow up happily, and for this goal we mu

7、st do several things. ii. 時空法 以介紹某事件發(fā)生的時間和地點作為文章開頭 文章結尾: i. 總結式 把全文提出的主要觀點進行概括和總結: ii. 重復文章開頭提出的主題, 以達到前后呼應的效果: iii. 提出期望, 或?qū)ξ磥碚雇? If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.2021/8/11 星期三10Saturday, May 6 cloudy Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival progr

8、am yesterday, and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school. Early in the morning, we set out. Li Ming was carrying a compass and a tent in his backpack, and in mine there was a flashlight, a map, a knife, a first-aid kit, some matches, candles, food, and clothing. On t

9、he way to the campsite, we climbed a hill, and then we swam across a river, pushing the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river. As we got into a forest, we lost our way. 2021/8/11 星期三11Luckily, we found the right directionwith the compass. By the time we arrived at the campsite

10、, it had already been dark. Li Ming then put up the tent, and I made a fire and started cooking. The two of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems. It was quite an experience for us both, which Ill never forget for the rest of my

11、life.2021/8/11 星期三12句的形態(tài) E1 (過渡性詞語）， E2(主語Subject的多樣性) , E3(修飾性詞語), E4(精彩動詞 謂語部分), E5(補述或追述).2021/8/11 星期三13 認識英語寫作的基本特點 語序與信息：人們通過語言傳遞的信息是一個片斷一個片斷進行的。一個信息片斷可以是一個句子，信息片斷傳遞的信息可粗略地分為已知信息和新信息。一個信息片斷最顯著的部分有二：一是傳遞信息的起點，即處于句首的主位，另一個是新信息中最重要的部分，即信息中心。 主位通常傳遞已知信息，信息中心位于句尾傳遞新信息。2021/8/11 星期三14從信息分布的情況說，英語句中最

12、重要的信息一般出現(xiàn)在末端，稱為末端中心；從結構分布上看， 英語句中結構形式較長，較復雜的成分一般也向后推移，這種結構配置稱為句尾重心。這兩條原則是決定英語結構次序的重要依據(jù)。2021/8/11 星期三15 句尾重心-補述的寫作手法補述技巧是高考英語寫作最重要的技巧之一。補述分并列補述和后位補述兩種。補述的特點是既可以使語言連貫, 又可以收到簡練、生動的效果, 有時又能適時地表現(xiàn)當事人內(nèi)心的思想活動, 常用于事實表述后的情感感受, 引發(fā)的感想或?qū)κ聦嵓毠?jié)補充的場合, 一般會收到好的效果。2021/8/11 星期三16 E5 補述或追述：1. He paused for a moment, won

13、dering whether to turn back as the captain urged him.2. Upon arrival, my uncle hugged Pompy, and tried to give him courage.3. Tom is very tired, and really he should go to bed.4. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.

14、The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed，heading west. 5. On the other side, where the playground used to be， now stands another new building - our library.6Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact, its only one stop. 2021/8/11 星期三17E4 精彩動詞 謂語部分：1. With the development of Intern

15、et, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones at New Years time. 2. Aside from water pollution, we are suffering from air pollution and soil pollution as well. 3. This brings out the important fact that we Chinese young people are really fond of public affairs. 4They s

16、ay large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .5There is sure to be a lot of fun.6To think “想不到; 居然; 想想看” To think that in just a few weeks I will be a college student (, and stay in a bright college room with) ! 7要是你那天在這里該有多好。 If only you would be here on the day!2021/8/11 星期三1

17、8E1 過渡性詞語：1. By the time we arrived at the campsite, it had already been dark. 2. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class. This way, they may be healthier and more energetic.3. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.

18、4. With Tom staying together with us, we all felt relaxed and at ease. 5. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things. 2021/8/11 星期三196. In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools, we students should be honest and try to ge

19、t good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. 7. Whats more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations. 8. In addition, it often takes quite a few hours off, and they cannot afford the time. 9. Personally, I agree with the former. In fact, I of

20、ten go online at the weekends and have fun. But I dont think sticking to the internet for too long will be good. 10. The more modernized life we are living, the more civilized we should be. 2021/8/11 星期三20后位補述:1. He bathed and had dinner, giving everyone the impression that there was no danger at al

21、l.2. He paused for a moment, wondering whether to turn back as the captain urged him.3. Upon arrival, my uncle hugged Pompy, and tried to give him courage.2021/8/11 星期三214. The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed, heading west.表達法: drive off heading west 高速向西開去 5. On the other side, where th

22、e playground used to be，now stands another new building - our library. 該句含一個由where引導的非限定性的定語從句, 在此處插入, 令人感到自然、 得體, 其中還使用了表達法used to be, 準確、地道。該句的后半部由一個倒裝句組成, 在對主語作進一步說明時, 使用了破折號, 語言既利落, 結構又緊湊。2021/8/11 星期三22 了解NMET書面表達的答題要求 按5個檔次給分, 寫一篇100個單詞左右的書面材料。情景包括目的、對象、時間、地點、內(nèi)容等; 提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、提綱、短文等。書面表達的要求是

23、:1. 覆蓋所有的語言要點。 內(nèi)容要點可用不同方 式表達。對緊扣主題的適當發(fā)揮不予扣分。2. 應用詞匯和語法結構的數(shù)量和準確性。值得 意的是 語法結構或詞匯方面雖有些許錯誤, 但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致; 具有較強的語言運用能力。 點評: 此點極為重要, 現(xiàn)舉實例如下, 部分為核心部分:2021/8/11 星期三23 My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. 該句使用with結構, 其結構為with + 賓語 + 賓語補足語。 該結構的情景描述功能十分突出。此外, behind一詞用作seat定語的用法也十分

24、輕巧。 There is sure to be a lot of fun. 在There is句式中加入be sure to等表達是十分有用的寫作技巧, 又如: There happened to be. There seems to be . 3. 上下文的連貫性, 即有效地使用語句間的連接 成分, 全文結構緊湊。 4. 語言的得體性2021/8/11 星期三245. 拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方 面, 對交際程度有一定的影響, 應予以考 慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。6. 書寫較差, 以至影響交際, 將分數(shù)降低一 個檔次。建議：在聽力結束后，建議用2-3分鐘提前了解書面表達情景作

25、文的命題，以便從容構思2021/8/11 星期三25NMET2009 假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東MrsWilson不在家，你準備外出，請給Mrs Wilson寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：1外出購物 2替房東還書3Tracy來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消 2)此事已告知Susan 3)盡快回電2021/8/11 星期三26Mrs Wilson, Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two book

26、s you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. S

27、he wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.Li Hua2021/8/11 星期三27NMET2008假定你是李華，從小喜歡大熊貓(panda)，一直通過有關網(wǎng)站(websites)關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和他的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：內(nèi)容要點1.自我介紹 2. 信息來源 3. 祝賀生日 4. 感謝照顧 5.索取照片 6. 合適的結尾2021/8/11 星期三28De

28、ar Sir/ Madam,Greetings from China!Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website. Now shes going to be there. Id like to wish her

29、a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, Li Hua2021/8/11 星期三29NMET2007

30、 假定你是李華，希望通過外籍教師Peter。找一位英語筆友，請寫一封短信，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括： 1年齡； 2性別； 3愛好(旅游、運動、寵物等)。2021/8/11 星期三30 Dear Peter。 I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favorI want to have a pen friend，hopefully a girl in her early twenties，and with interests similar to mineIn my mind, she i

31、s someone who is interested in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennisBesides，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some timeWith such a pen friend，I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling，taking care of pets，or whatever we have in commonAnd

32、I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country I look forward to hearing from you soon Best regards， Li Hua2021/8/11 星期三31NMET 大學生活即將開始，你將面對新的學習和生活環(huán)境，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇英語短文，談談你打算如何安排你的大學生活。內(nèi)容要點應包括：。確定新的學習目標 。改進學習方法 。學會獨立生活 。參加各種課外活動 。處理好與同學的關系2021/8/11 星期三32 I will go to coll

33、ege in the near future. After I enter college, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning. Whats more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself. In my spare time, I will take part in dif

34、ferent kinds of school activities, for example, I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English. In addition, I need to get along well with my classmates and teachers at college. I think I will have a wonderful life.2021/8/11 星期三33NMET Beijing 國際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國學生參加的“和平，友愛”夏令營活動，要求

35、報名者提交英文個人簡介。假設你是王珊，請根據(jù)下列信息寫一篇個人簡介。姓名：王珊 性別：女年齡：16歲 學校：北京陽光中學其他：愛好音樂，攝影；善于與人交流，樂于助人；熱愛自然，熱愛和平參加夏令營的目的：結交朋友，了解外國文化2021/8/11 星期三34 Im Wang Shan, a girl of sixteen, presently attending Beijing Yangguang Middle School. I like music, especially classical music. Im also interested in photography because it

36、 allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. Through my hobbies, Ive made many friends. In fact, I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them. Believing we all need help from each other, I appreciate friends help, and Im willing to help anyone in need. I love life; I lover Mother

37、Nature; and I love peace. I hate any form of violence. I would like to join the Peace & Friendship Summer Camp since it would be a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about their culture.2021/8/11 星期三35NMET Writing (Sample)你校高三學生舉行了一場有關高三學生在高三復習期間上網(wǎng)

38、是否合適的討論。討論的題目是：Is it wise for Senior 3 students to surf the Internet while busypreparing for the College Entrance Examination? 請你根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況。一些同學認為:(1) 應當上網(wǎng)。上網(wǎng)可以獲取有用的信息, 好處很多。(2) 上網(wǎng)可以調(diào)節(jié)身心。另一些同學認為:(1) 時間緊, 不應上網(wǎng)浪費時間。(2) 上網(wǎng)對高三復習幫助有限。你贊成上網(wǎng), 但認為應有度。2021/8/11 星期三36 Senior 3 students in our school

39、have different views on whether Senior 3 students to surf the Internet while busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination.One possible version:Senior 3 students in our school have different views on whether Senior 3 students to surf the Internet while busy preparing for the College Entrance E

40、xamination.Some think that Senior 3 students, though busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination, can benefit by surfing the Internet. They insist that surfing the Internet is a good way to gain the information needed, 2021/8/11 星期三37and what is better still, surfing the Internet can help th

41、em relax and enjoy life, which is especially important for a student of Senior 3. But some others hold an opposite opinion. They argue that the surfing of the Internet is not really necessary, since the College Entrance Examination is drawing near. In addition, it often takes quite a few hours off,

42、and they cannot afford the time. Personally, I agree with the former. In fact, I often go online at the weekends and have fun. But I dont think sticking to the internet for too long will be good.2021/8/11 星期三38 注意語言評價能力的培養(yǎng)與運用 考生在完成NMET書面表達的過程時, 應當有一整套那怕是初步的寫作微技能的有效支持。其中最重要的是能夠依靠良好的語言評價能力的有效支持。語言評價能力

43、也稱編校能力, 是指考生寫作時, 同時評價自己的能力。評價大致包括(1) 審題、審圖是否準確; 寫作要點是否 完整 (2) 布局謀篇是否合理; 文章層次是否清晰 (3) 句式是否豐富; 組句是否正確 (4) 行文是否連貫; 細節(jié)是否嚴謹 (5) 表達是否清楚; 措辭是否得體2021/8/11 星期三39解讀NMET書面表達高頻考點 1. 都具備Who(主體), What(內(nèi)容), Where(地點), When(時間), Why(原因)構成NMET書面表達 內(nèi)容的5大要素。2. 不論通知類、情況介紹類還是情景描述類命 題, 題材均為考生所熟悉。3. 都具備6個左右的描述要點。4. 都要求行文的

44、連貫與流暢, 由此帶來的是作 狀語用的副詞(尤其是時間副詞)、副詞短語 或副詞從句提至句首。2021/8/11 星期三40II. 要有連貫性要素 1. 并列連詞代替從屬連詞的特點是讓讀者自己去補充所連接的兩部分間的邏輯聯(lián)系, 根據(jù)兩部分的思想內(nèi)容去推論, 從而達到思想表達生動、有力和鮮明的修辭效果。 We were leaving the farm, and every farm worker seemed sorry. It is true he is young, but / and yet he is really good at go.It is true . but. = It is true.and yet .=Indeed . but =Ind