高考英語(yǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)課件

1、How to improve writingDo you want to score high in the writing part ?15？20？25!Nothing is impossible!Todays taskWrite an application to an organization Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as an English guide in your museum. Im a boy and Im 17. I was born in Changsha. Im a middl

2、e school student. I want to do something for the museum. First, Im good at English. Second, I like history. Third, Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like volunteering. Last, I live near the museum. It is convenient for the work. If you give me the chance, Ill try my best to offer the b

3、est service to others. Please accept my application. I wont disappoint you! Looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Huawhats more,I. Use correct sentence (使用正確完整的單句或復(fù)合句)1. Sentence structure: (使用結(jié)構(gòu)正確完整的單句，切忌參雜中文的句子模式，切忌中文式字對(duì)字翻譯)A. 單句結(jié)構(gòu) 1） 主+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)主：名/代/Doing 或 To do/主語(yǔ)從句 (注意主謂人稱數(shù)一致)謂語(yǔ)：vt/

4、vi+prep（注意時(shí)態(tài)以及數(shù)的變形）賓語(yǔ)：名/代/doing/to do/賓語(yǔ)從句2）主+謂語(yǔ)+表語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ):be/類系動(dòng)詞(seem,look,sound,taste,feel,touch)表語(yǔ):名/代/adj/doing/to do/表語(yǔ)從句2. 使用并列句(用and,moreover,but,however等連接的兩個(gè)或多個(gè)句子）3.使用復(fù)合句（主句+從句；狀語(yǔ)從句，+主句）1)定語(yǔ)從句：放在主句中某個(gè)先行名詞之后的句子; 2)賓語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)(vt/vi+prep)之后的句子;3)表語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)be/類系動(dòng)詞之后的句子;4)主語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)前(即主句主語(yǔ)位置)的句子5

5、) 狀語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)vi 之后的句子，狀語(yǔ)從句也可以放在主句之前，但必須要帶逗號(hào)。I. Use different sentences (使用多樣句型）Examples:I hope to help him, but he refuse my help. He sits next to the woman who is wearing a red coat.3. I am eager to know what he told you.4. My question is what I should do next.5.When well go outing depends on the w

6、eather.6.Because he was ill yesterday,he didnt go to school.7.It is believed that success comes from hard work.8. Its unknown who broke the window.Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as an English guide in your museum. Im a boy and Im 17. I was born in Changsha. Im a middle sc

7、hool student. I want to do something for the museum. First, Im good at English. Second, I like history. Third, Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like volunteering. Last, I live near the museum. It is convenient for me to do the work. If you give me the chance, Ill try my best to offer

8、the best service to others. Please accept my application. I wont disappoint you! Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua18.Choose advanced phrases (選取高級(jí)詞匯)be of great conveniencebe ready to / be willing to Word Phrase I like volunteering.2. I like history.3. This is convenient for the w

9、ork.be fond of / be interested in / have a great interest in/be crazy aboutdevoting myself to serving others.Choose advanced phrases (選取高級(jí)詞匯)Simple phrase Advanced phrase Im good at English.2. I want to do something for the museum.3. Ill try my best to offer the best service.have a good knowledge of

10、 /have a gift / talent formake a contribution to/ contribute to/ devote tospare no effort /make every effort toIII. Use suitable sentences (使用合適句型）1. I live near the museum . Its convenient for the work. I live near the museum, _. (定語(yǔ)從句)2. Im a boy and Im 18. I was born in Changsha. Im a middle scho

11、ol student._.(分詞作狀語(yǔ)/定語(yǔ)從句) which is convenient for the workBorn in Changsha, Im an 18-year-old boy,who is studying in a middle school北京國(guó)際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國(guó)學(xué)生參加的“和平、友誼”夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息寫一封申請(qǐng)信。注意：1、詞數(shù)不少于120。 2、可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 Task2： 姓名: 李華 性別: 男年齡: 17歲 學(xué)校: 長(zhǎng)沙市一中其它: 愛好音樂,攝影;善于與人交流, 樂于助人;熱愛自然,熱愛和平參加夏

12、令營(yíng)的目的: 結(jié)交朋友,了解外國(guó)文化Task2： The outline of the passage：Para1: Introduce yourself.Para2: Reasons why you want to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp . 北京國(guó)際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國(guó)學(xué)生參加的“和平、友誼”夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息寫一封申請(qǐng)書。 注意：1、詞數(shù)不少于120字。 2、可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 Task2： 姓名:李華 性別: 男年齡:17歲 學(xué)校:長(zhǎng)沙市一中其它:愛好音樂,攝影;善于與人交流

13、, 樂于助人;熱愛自然,熱愛和平參加夏令營(yíng)的目的:結(jié)交朋友,了解外國(guó)文化A sample of writingDear Sir / Madam My name is Li Hua, and Im a 17-year-old boy （1）（分詞或定語(yǔ)從句） in Changsha No. 1 Middle School. （2）我愛好廣泛 （S+V+O）. First of all,（3）我熱愛音樂（V-ing作主語(yǔ)）. （4）連接過(guò)渡, Im interested in photography because （5） . （6）善于與人交流（V-ing 作原因狀語(yǔ)）, I make many

14、 friends.（7）連接過(guò)渡, Im always ready to help others. I would like to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp for many reasons. The first reason （8）是我熱愛生活，熱愛自然、和平. But（9）最重要的原因是，這為我提供了一個(gè)結(jié)交朋友，了解外國(guó)文化的機(jī)會(huì).If （10） （省略&非謂語(yǔ)）the chance, I will make full use of it to broaden my horizon and learn from others.Lo

15、ok forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li HuaA sample of writingDear Sir / Madam My name is Li Hua, and Im a 17-year-old boy （1） in Changsha No. 1 Middle School. （2） . First of all,（3） . （4） , Im interested in photography because （5） （6） I make many friends.（7） , Im always ready to help others.

16、 分詞或定語(yǔ)從句(who is) studying我愛好廣泛 (S+V+O)I have varieties of interests 我熱愛音樂（V-ing作主語(yǔ)）enjoying music is my favorite連接過(guò)渡In addition to that it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. 善于與人交流（V-ing 作原因狀語(yǔ)） Being good at communicating with others,連接過(guò)渡Whats moreA sample of writing I would like

17、to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp for many reasons. The first reason （8） But（9）If （10） （省略&非謂語(yǔ)）the chance, I will make full use of it to broaden my horizon and learn from others.Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 是我熱愛生活，熱愛自然、和平 lies in the fact that I love life, nature as well as peace. 最重要的原因是，這為我提供了一個(gè)結(jié)交朋友，了解外國(guó)文化的機(jī)會(huì). the most important