山作文之鐘南山英語作文

1、鐘南山英語作文篇一：英語話題作文】英語話題作文話題 1 ：家庭、朋友和周圍的人part 1: some tips概述：人物介紹屬于記敘文( narration )的寫作范疇，寫作時要圍 繞人物組織材料。所寫短文中應包括人物 (who) 、時間 (when) 、地點 (where) 、主要事件 (what) 等內容。寫作時，要做到主題鮮明，內容 清楚，并注意結構的完整性。技巧點撥：仔細審題，確定主題。審題四確定：確定類型：人物介紹確定體裁 : 記敘文確定主體時態(tài) : 一般現在時確定主體人稱 : 第三人稱合理安排短文的結構層次，組織好所提示內容表達的先后順序。句子時態(tài)要在上下文中有相關性、連續(xù)性，

2、要與表達內容一致。審題后要先列出簡明扼要的提綱，其次寫出草稿，經過修改之后， 再正式成文。一、人物介紹的寫作步驟：age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth placefamily backgroundeducation backgroundbig events in his or her life (in order of time)evaluation二、人物介紹寫作常用的詞組及句子：age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth placeage:they might ha

3、ve needs and problems of their own.birthday and birth place: was/ were born in oneg. she was born in poland on nov.7,1867.born in 1985, he is now an 24-year-old student.sex marriage1eg. he is a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter.he is 35, male and unmarried.appearanceeg: she is a lovely gir

4、l, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long black hair.he is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.height: eg. he is 1.76 meters tall. he is 176 centimeters tall. he is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.health:eg. well looked after, the children look healthy. he is not

5、 so strong, but (he s) in good health.family background was/ were born in/into a poor/ rich family his/her family was so poor that his/ her father was very strict with him the son of a poor family when he was a small boy/ young as a child/ as a boy of 15 during his/ her childhood spend his childhood

6、 inlive a happy/ hard life s family,eg. abraham lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in kentucky on february 12,1809. born into a poor clerk charles dickens had little cation background be admitted to collegegraduate from department of university when at college, he majored inrec

7、eive a doctor s degree go abroad for further studieseg. he started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later. he went to study in beijing university in 1984 and 4 years later he graduated (from that university).we learned many courses, such as english,maths and so on.he got his bachelor s (maste

8、r s, doctor s) degree inmathematics in april 1998.big events in one s lifebe interested in /be fond of work hard at serve as devote his lifetime/himself to concentrate himself todo research about/ into make up one s mind to do sth. do sth with great determination and perseverance 2 be strict in sth.

9、have a way of doing sth try one s best to do sth. encourage sb to do fight for, give up one s life for sb/sth win a prize/the first prize in competition TOC o 1-5 h z receive/obtain/win the nobel prize forbe good at do well in be crazy about enjoy make rapid progress inset a new world record ofequal

10、 the world record win(won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal be selected to/ become a member of study / train hard go through hardship overcome many difficulties have a gift/ talent for language, etceg. his favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis. in his spare time, he likes reading and enjoy

11、ing traveling. he s good at spoken english and even better at using computers.evaluation one of the best/ most importantset a good example fora model teacher/worker be respected by everyone speak/ think highly of be honored as (an excellent athlete) his hard work brought him great success he is the

12、pride of china.his heroic story spread all over the city make great contributions to consistency/perseverance is the key to success. be famous/known as be regarded as become a world champion at championshipsremember sb forevera new chapter of history has been turnedlei feng has been praised for his

13、communist spirit. an inspiring leader描寫人物外貌和性格特征 good-lookingfunny-lookingstrong-looking ugly-looking ordinary-looking white-haired blue-eyed warm-heartedkind- heartedabsent-mindedbad-tempered near-sightedfar-sighted a strong will tall shortbeautiful prettylovely naughtysmartwise cleverbrightdiligen

14、tintelligent hard workinglazyhealthy3 humorous charming attractivetalkative confidentindependentpatient be in conditionbe out of condition finewell三、語法、句法高分 tipsa. 概況：盡量用分詞短語、同位語結構，使文章簡潔，通順 譯：鐘南山年出生在廣州，他是中國最偉大的醫(yī)生之一外貌 , 性格：巧用 with 做定語 譯：我的歷史老師是個漂亮女人，她長著兩只大眼睛，留著長發(fā)教育經歷：注意盡量用非謂語動詞 , 使文章精煉for further stu

15、dies.degree.生平 : 盡量用倒裝 ,非限定定語從句等，潤色文章2)e評估：注意運用一些動詞、形容詞等短語、詞組) 2 )四、樣本寫作 姓名：劉翔出生年月： 1983 年 7 月 13 日 性別；男 出生地：上海 身高： 1.89 米 教練：孫海平 偶像： jordon 專項： 110 欄 成就： 2006 年 7 月 12 日在瑞士洛桑以 12 秒 88 破世界記錄 愛好：聽音樂，打游戲，看書 自評：為人誠懇，隨和，自信 瑞士洛桑 : lausanne, switzerland 寫作指導：組織材料，寫出句子為人誠懇, 隨和, 自信樂觀的男孩劉翔 , 出生在 1983 年 7月13日

16、 上海.liuxiang, an honest, easy-going and confident man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai.他的偶像是 jordon, 愛好是聽音樂 , 看打游戲及看書 . he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books.擁有身高 1.89 米的他擅長 110 米欄 .with the height of 1.89 metres, he is good at 110 metres hurd

17、les .在他的教練孫海平的幫助下他取得了很多傲人的成績 . under the training of sun haiping, he has gained many wonderful achievements.他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界記錄 he broke the record by 12 88 on july 12th, 2006 in lausanne,switzerland.擴句成文，構成篇章 liu xiang, an honest, easy-going and confident man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai.

18、4 he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books. with the height of 1.89 meters, heis good at 110 meters hurdles . under the training of hiscoach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. he hasgained many wonderful achievements and one of achievements is t

19、hat he broke the record by 12 88 on july 12th,2006 in lausanne, switzerland.檢查潤色 3) 是否用 5 個句子時態(tài)是否正確 4) 是否漏掉必要信息人稱是否一致 5) 是否語句連貫liu xiang, an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai. he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing games

20、and reading books. with the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. for example, he broke the asian record with the time 13 12 in 2002, and two years later, he wonthe championship again in 12 91 in athen

21、which ties the worldrecord. most excitingly, he broke the record by 12 88 on july12th, 2006 in lausanne, switzerland.part 2: have a try一 翻譯下列句子姚老師是我們的英語老師，他今年 41 歲，瘦高個，帶深度眼鏡。黃老師是我們的英語老師，她 1970 年來到我們學校，已經當了30 多年的英語老師。達 . 芬奇 (leonardo da vinci) 是 16 世紀意大利著名畫家，科學家。他是一位天才， 把科學知識和藝術想象結合起來。蒙娜麗莎是一幅享有盛譽的肖像畫

22、杰作。它是達. 芬奇的代表作。帕瓦羅蒂 (pavarotti) 被譽為 “高音 c(the high c 之s)王 ”，為古典 音樂和歌劇的普及做出了杰出貢獻。趙普從小家境貧寒，初中畢業(yè)后入伍。他 24 歲下崗，開一家小服裝店謀生。安南( annan )先生出生于 1938 年 4 月 8 日，加納( ghana ) 他在加納、美國和瑞士上頂尖的大學，獲得經濟學和管理學的碩士 學位。安南( annan )先生為建立一個更有組織、更和平的世界所做 出的工作得到大家的承認。5【篇二：英語話題作文】英語話題作文話題 1 ：家庭、朋友和周圍的人part 1: some tips概述：人物介紹屬于記敘文

23、( narration )的寫作范疇，寫作時要圍 繞人物組織材料。所寫短文中應包括人物 (who) 、時間 (when) 、地點 (where) 、主要事件 (what) 等內容。寫作時，要做到主題鮮明，內容 清楚，并注意結構的完整性。技巧點撥：仔細審題，確定主題。審題四確定：確定類型：人物介紹確定體裁 : 記敘文確定主體時態(tài) : 一般現在時確定主體人稱 : 第三人稱合理安排短文的結構層次，組織好所提示內容表達的先后順序。句子時態(tài)要在上下文中有相關性、連續(xù)性，要與表達內容一致。4 審題后要先列出簡明扼要的提綱，其次寫出草稿，經過修改之后， 再正式成文。一、人物介紹的寫作步驟：age, sex,

24、 appearance, character, birthday and birth placefamily backgroundeducation backgroundbig events in his or her life (in order of time)evaluation二、人物介紹寫作常用的詞組及句子：1. age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth placeage:they might have needs and problems of their own.birthday and birth place: wa

25、s/ were born in oneg. she was born in poland on nov.7,1867. born in 1985, he is now an 24-year-old student.sex marriage1eg. he is a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter. he is 35, male and unmarried.appearanceeg: she is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long black ha

26、ir.he is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.height:eg. he is 1.76 meters tall. he is 176 centimeters tall.he is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.health:eg. well looked after, the children look healthy. he is not so strong, but (he s) in good health.family background was/ we

27、re born in/into a poor/ rich family his/her family was so poor that his/ her father was very strictwith him the son of a poor family when he was a small boy/ young as a child/ as a boy of 15 TOC o 1-5 h z during his/ her childhood spend his childhood ins family,live a happy/ hard life eg. abraham li

28、ncoln, the son of a poor family, was born in kentucky on february 1 2,1809. born into a poor clerkcharles dickens had little cation background be admitted to collegegraduate from department of university when at college, he majored inreceive a doctor s degree go abroad for further studi

29、es eg. he started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later. he went to study in beijing university in 1984 and 4 years later he graduated (from that university).we learned many courses, such as english,maths and so on.he got his bachelor s (master s, doctor s) degree inmathematics in april 1998

30、.big events in one s lifebe interested in /be fond of work hard at serve as devote his lifetime/himself to concentrate himself todo research about/ into make up one s mind to do sth. do sth with great determination and perseverance 2 be strict in sth.have a way of doing sth try one s best to do sth.

31、 encourage sb to do fight for, give up one s life for sb/sthwin a prize/the first prize in coimtiopnet TOC o 1-5 h z receive/obtain/win the nobel prize forbe good at do well in be crazy about enjoy make rapid progress inset a new world record ofequal the world recordwin(won) a gold /silver/ bronze m

32、edal be selected to/ become a member of study / train hard go through hardship overcome many difficulties have a gift/ talent for language, etc eg. his favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis. in his spare time, he likes reading and enjoying traveling. he s good at spoken english and eve

33、n better at using computers.evaluation one of the best/ most importantset a good example fora model teacher/worker be respected by everyone speak/ think highly of be honored as (an excellent athlete) his hard work brought him great success he is the pride of china.his heroic story spread all over th

34、e city make great contributions to consistency/perseverance is the key to success. be famous/known as be regarded as become a world champion at cham pionships remember sb forever a new chapter of history has been turned lei feng has been praised for his communist spirit. an inspiring leader描寫人物外貌和性格

35、特征 good-lookingfunny-lookingstrong-looking ugly-looking ordinary-looking white-haired blue-eyed warm-heartedkind- heartedabsent-mindedbad-tempered near-sightedfar-sighted a strong will tall shortbeautiful prettylovely naughtysmartwise cleverbrightdiligentintelligent hard workinglazyhealthy3 humorous

36、 charming attractivetalkative confidentindependentpatientbe in conditionbe out of condition finewell三、語法、句法高分 tipsa. 概況：盡量用分詞短語、同位語結構，使文章簡潔，通順譯：鐘南山年出生在廣州，他是中國最偉大的醫(yī)生之一外貌 , 性格：巧用 with 做定語 譯：我的歷史老師是個漂亮女人，她長著兩只大眼睛，留著長發(fā)教育經歷：注意盡量用非謂語動詞 , 使文章精煉 1) for further studies.degree.生平 : 盡量用倒裝 ,非限定定語從句等，潤色文章2)e評估：注

37、意運用一些動詞、形容詞等短語、詞組) 2 )四、樣本寫作 姓名：劉翔出生年月： 1983 年 7 月 13 日 性別；男 出生地：上海 身高： 1.89 米 教練：孫海平 偶像： jordon 專項： 110 欄 成就： 2006 年 7 月 12 日在瑞士洛桑以 12 秒 88 破世界記錄 愛好：聽音樂，打游戲，看書 自評：為人誠懇，隨和，自信 瑞士洛桑 : lausanne, switzerland 寫作指導：組織材料，寫出句子1) 為人誠懇 , 隨和, 自信樂觀的男孩劉翔 , 出生在 1983 年 7 月 13 日 上海.liuxiang, an honest, easy-going a

38、nd confident man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai.2) 他的偶像是 jordon, 愛好是聽音樂 , 看打游戲及看書 . he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books.擁有身高 1.89 米的他擅長 110 米欄 .with the height of 1.89 metres, he is good at 110 metres hurdles .在他的教練孫海平的幫助下他取得了很多傲人的成績 . und

39、er the training of sun haiping, he has gained many wonderful achievements.他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界記錄 he broke the record by 12 88 on july 12th, 2006 in lausanne, switzerland.擴句成文，構成篇章 liu xiang, an honest, easy-going and confident man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai.4 he has an idol of jordon and li

40、kes listening to music, playing games and reading books. with the height of 1.89 meters, heis good at 110 meters hurdles . under the training of hiscoach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. he hasgained many wonderful achievements and one of achievements is that he broke the record by 12 88

41、on july 12th,2006 in lausanne, switzerland.檢查潤色 3) 是否用 5 個句子1) 時態(tài)是否正確 4) 是否漏掉必要信息人稱是否一致 5) 是否語句連貫liu xiang, an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai. he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books. with the he

42、ight of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. for example, he broke the asian record with the time 13 12 in 2002, and two years later, he wonthe championship again in 12 91 in athen which ties the worldrecord. mo

43、st excitingly, he broke the record by 12 88 on july12th, 2006 in lausanne, switzerland.part 2: have a try一 翻譯下列句子姚老師是我們的英語老師，他今年 41 歲，瘦高個，帶深度眼鏡。黃老師是我們的英語老師，她 1970 年來到我們學校，已經當了30 多年的英語老師。達 . 芬奇 (leonardo da vinci) 是 16 世紀意大利著名畫家，科學家。他是一位天才， 把科學知識和藝術想象結合起來。蒙娜麗莎是一幅享有盛譽的肖像畫杰作。它是達. 芬奇的代表作。帕瓦羅蒂 (pavarotti

44、) 被譽為 “高音 c(the high c 之s)王 ”，為古典 音樂和歌劇的普及做出了杰出貢獻。趙普從小家境貧寒，初中畢業(yè)后入伍。他 24 歲下崗，開一家小服裝店謀生。安南( annan )先生出生于 1938 年 4 月 8 日，加納( ghana )。 他在加納、美國和瑞士上頂尖的大學，獲得經濟學和管理學的碩士 學位。安南( annan )先生為建立一個更有組織、更和平的世界所做 出的工作得到大家的承認。5【篇三：英語話題作文】英語話題作文話題 1 ：家庭、朋友和周圍的人part 1: some tips概述：人物介紹屬于記敘文( narration )的寫作范疇，寫作時要圍 繞人物組

45、織材料。所寫短文中應包括人物 (who) 、時間 (when) 、地點 (where) 、主要事件 (what) 等內容。寫作時，要做到主題鮮明，內容 清楚，并注意結構的完整性。技巧點撥：仔細審題，確定主題。審題四確定：1) 確定類型：人物介紹2) 確定體裁 : 記敘文確定主體時態(tài) : 一般現在時確定主體人稱 : 第三人稱合理安排短文的結構層次，組織好所提示內容表達的先后順序。句 子時態(tài)要在上下文中有相關性、連續(xù)性，要與表達內容一致。審題后要先列出簡明扼要的提綱，其次寫出草稿，經過修改之后， 再正式成文。一、人物介紹的寫作步驟：1. age, sex, appearance, characte

46、r, birthday and birth placefamily backgroundeducation backgroundbig events in his or her life (in order of time)evaluation二、人物介紹寫作常用的詞組及句子：1. age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth place1) age:they might have needs and problems of their own.2) birthday and birth place: was/ were born in

47、 oneg. she was born in poland on nov.7,1867.born in 1985, he is now an 24-year-old student.sex marriage1eg. he is a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter. he is 35, male and unmarried.appearanceeg: she is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long black hair.he is thin, t

48、all and wearing a pair of thick glasses.height: eg. he is 1.76 meters tall. he is 176 centimeters tall. he is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.health:eg. well looked after, the children look healthy. he is not so strong, but (he s) in good health.family background was/ were born in/int

49、o a poor/ rich family his/her family was so poor that his/ her father was very strict with himthe son of a poor family when he was a small boy/ young as a child/ as a boy of 15 during his/ her childhood spend his childhood inlive a happy/ hard lifeeg. abraham lincoln, the son of a poor family, was b

50、orn in kentucky on february 12,1809. born into a poor clerk s family,charles dickens had little cation background be admitted to collegegraduate from department of university when at college, he majored inreceive a doctor s degree go abroad for further studieseg. he started school in 19

51、84 and left school 12 years later. he went to study in beijing university in 1984 and 4 years later he graduated (from that university).we learned many courses, such as english,maths and so on. he got his bachelor s (master s, doctor s) degree inmathematics in april 1998.big events in one s lifebe i

52、nterested in /be fond of work hard at serve as devote his lifetime/himself to concentrate himself todo research about/ into make up one s mind to do sth. do sth with great determination and perseverance 2 be strict in sth.have a way of doing sth try one s best to do sth. encourage sb to do fight for

53、, give up one s life for sb/sthwin a prize/the first prize in competitionreceive/obtain/win the n obel prize for be good at do well in be crazy about enjoy make rapid progress inset a new world record ofequal the world record win(won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal be selected to/ become a member of s

54、tudy / train hard go through hardship overcome many difficulties have a gift/ talent for language, etceg. his favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis. in his spare time, he likes reading and enjoying traveling. he s good at spoken english and even better at using computers.evaluation one

55、 of the best/ most importantset a good example fora model teacher/worker be respected by everyone speak/ think highly of be honored as (an excellent athlete) his hard work brought him great success he is the pride of china.his heroic story spread all over the city make great contributions toconsiste

56、ncy/perseverance is the key to success. be famous/known as be regarded as become a world champion atchampionshipsremember sb forever a new chapter of history has been turned lei feng has been praised for his communist spirit. an inspiring leader描寫人物外貌和性格特征 good-lookingfunny-lookingstrong-looking ugl

57、y-looking ordinary-looking white-haired blue-eyed warm-heartedkind- heartedabsent-mindedbad-tempered near-sightedfar-sighted a strong will tall shortbeautiful prettylovely naughtysmartwise cleverbrightdiligentintelligent hard workinglazyhealthy 3 humorous charming attractivetalkative confidentindepe

58、ndentpatient be in conditionbe out of condition finewell三、語法、句法高分 tips1.a. 概況：盡量用分詞短語、同位語結構，使文章簡潔，通順 譯：鐘南山年出生在廣州，他是中國最偉大的醫(yī)生之一外貌 , 性格：巧用 with 做定語 譯：我的歷史老師是個漂亮女人，她長著兩只大眼睛，留著長發(fā)教育經歷：注意盡量用非謂語動詞 , 使文章精煉 1) for further studies.2) degree.生平 : 盡量用倒裝 ,非限定定語從句等，潤色文章 1) 2)e評估：注意運用一些動詞、形容詞等短語、詞組 1 ) 2 )四、樣本寫作 姓名

59、：劉翔出生年月： 1983 年 7 月 13 日 性別；男 出生地：上海 身高： 1.89 米 教練：孫海平 偶像： jordon 專項： 110 欄 成就： 2006 年 7 月 12 日在瑞士洛桑以 12 秒 88 破世界記錄 愛好：聽音樂，打游戲，看書 自評：為人誠懇，隨和，自信 瑞士洛桑 : lausanne, switzerland寫作指導：1. 組織材料，寫出句子1) 為人誠懇, 隨和, 自信樂觀的男孩劉翔 , 出生在 1983 年 7月13日 上海.liuxiang, an honest, easy-going and confident man, was born on july 13th, 1983