高考英語新題型策略指導：應用文寫作（二）課件

1、高考新題型策略指導應用文寫作（二）一、 典例分析題型示例1 假如你是李華，你以前一直對英語語法和寫作感到困惑，李老師給了你很好的建議和幫助，甚至幫你訓練口語?，F(xiàn)在你的英語成績進步很大，請寫封信感謝李老師。Poor content!Bad structure!Problems?Grading standards 第五檔（1315分）覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點。應用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。Principles of score 評分原則3.詞數(shù)少于60和多余100的，從

2、總分中減去2分。4.評分時，應注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準確性及上下文的連貫性。5.6.如書寫較差，以致影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。contentlanguagecoherencehandwritingWhat makes perfect writing?1. Complete content 內(nèi)容完整3. Advanced language 語言高級2. Clear coherence 條理清晰Complete in Content (內(nèi)容完整)01What makes perfect writing?How?二、應用實踐（2019全國卷1）假定你是李華，暑假

3、在倫敦學習，得知當?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括： 1.寫信目的 2.個人優(yōu)勢 3.能做的事情BeginningBodyEndinga letter of application 4. Conclusion(add by yourself) Complete content：1.Structure Beginning（background+purpose）I am Li Hua and I am delighted to know that volunteers are needed for a Chinese painting exhibition. Im wri

4、ting to_.apply for the positionComplete content：2.Beginning應用文開頭格式 . Im writing to.交代背景,簡介題干信息 + 寫明來意，體現(xiàn)文體假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學習，得知當?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽, 寫一封信申請做志愿者。 Id appreciate it if you could consider my application. Ending (Thanks/Hope/Expectations)Complete content：3.EndingMore examplesMore examplesMore exampl

5、esStudent A: 個人優(yōu)勢; 能做的事情First, I am interested in Chinese paintings. Also, I can communicate with others in English fluently. Student B: 個人優(yōu)勢; 能做的事情 First, I am interested in Chinese paintings so my related knowledge will help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form. Also, having b

6、een exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English.details explainingthe resultdetails explaining the reason2 main points2 main pointsPair work:Compare and see which is better? Why?Complete content：4.Body Body1. main point2. main point3. How can we com

7、e up with the supporting details in Body part?reasonresultexampleeffectHow?Fill in the blanks with proper conjunctions. Visiting a Chinese family can be a very good opportunity to experience Chinese culture. Here are some advice. _, Chinese people are not very strict with being punctual, _ you dont

8、have to worry about the time of arrival. I suggest that you arrive five to ten minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. _, it would be better if you could bring some gifts, _ make sure you wouldnt bring a watch or a clock. _, table manners are what you should pay attention to

9、. _, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. To begin withsoIn additionbutLastlyFor exampleClear coherence (條理清晰)02What makes perfect writing?How?More examples:（一）用于“開始”詞匯有：Firstly, first of all, in the first place, above all, to begin with(二) 表示“遞進”：besides, in addition, whats

10、 more, moreover, furthermore, meanwhile, last but not least, lastly, finallyPoor vocabulary and sentence patterns!Problems?題型示例2 問題描述：語言平淡，缺乏亮點應用文寫作得分得分低的寫作特點：1.缺乏承上啟下的詞語和句子2.僅使用簡單的詞或短語 3.句式單一，不會使用從句、非謂語、倒裝句、強調(diào)等句型。Advanced language (語言高級)03What makes perfect writing?How?策略1多用高級表達方式，少用普通表達方式釋義普通表達高級表

11、達能夠做be able to dobe capable of doing習慣于be used tobe accustomed to實際上actuallyas a matter of fact喜歡like, love, enjoyhave a taste for, be fond of, be crazy about策略1多用高級表達方式，少用普通表達方式釋義普通表達高級表達得到getobtain, acquire重要，要緊importantmatter, count, essential, significant, vital,crucial決定做decide to dobe determin

12、ed to do相信believe that-hold the firm belief that-,be convinced that-The film Ne Zha is popular among people.It makes people more interested in Chinese culture. The film Ne Zha, _, makes people more interested in Chinese culture.The film Ne Zha is popular among people, _ people more interested in Chi

13、nese culture.which is popular among peoplemaking策略2：用高級句型Change into relative clause定語從句. Change into non-finite verbs非謂語. Many doctors made great efforts to fight the disease.Their action really touched me._ really touched me _ _ many doctors made great efforts to fight the disease._ _ many doctors

14、 _ _ to fight the disease _ touched me.great efforts It is was thatWhatthat Change into noun clause名詞性從句. Change into emphatic sentence強調(diào)句. Advanced sentence patternsEveryone should attach great importance to garbage classification. Then our society will be cleaner.Everyone should attach great impor

15、tance to garbage classification _ _our society will be cleaner._ _ everyone attach great importance to garbage classification _ our society be cleaner.so thatOnly ifwillChange into adverbial clause狀語從句. Change into inverted sentence倒裝句. Advanced sentence patternsWays to get advanced sentence pattern

16、sRelative clause 定語從句Noun clause 名詞性從句Adverbial clause 狀語從句Non-finite verbs非謂語Inverted sentence倒裝句Emphatic sentence 強調(diào)句.Summary:Tip: As we only need to write about 80 words, two or three advanced sentences will be enough. 假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習俗，請你回復郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.到達時間；2.合適的禮物；3.餐桌禮儀。 An

17、alyses:Style:A letter of replyParagraphs: 3三、即時鞏固Paragraph 1: Background+purpose你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習俗+回復相關(guān)信息 In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest toa Chinese friends home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevantdetails.Paragraph 2:郵件內(nèi)容包括：1.到達時間；2.合適的禮物；3.餐桌禮儀。 M

18、ain points: Conjunctions: Advanced sentence patterns:1.到達時間；2.合適的禮物；3.餐桌禮儀。 to begin with, besides, whats more定語從句；狀語從句；非謂語 To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arriveearly, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningfuland interesting. Besides, youd better bring some gifts, like a book or aChinese knot. Whats more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoidmaking noises while chewing food.Last paragraph:Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have theconfidence that you will have a great time.祝愿或期望One p