高考英語(yǔ)創(chuàng)新作文大賽：關(guān)于人生儀式寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)與解讀學(xué)案

1、高考英語(yǔ)創(chuàng)新作文大賽：關(guān)于人生儀式寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)與解讀學(xué)案高考英語(yǔ)創(chuàng)新作文大賽：關(guān)于人生儀式寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)與解讀學(xué)案PAGE PAGE 6高考英語(yǔ)創(chuàng)新作文大賽：關(guān)于人生儀式寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)與解讀學(xué)案關(guān)于人生儀式 寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)與解讀參賽作文題目：我的下水文:寫(xiě)之前,一定要認(rèn)真審題,注意三點(diǎn)：rituals you have observed; describe the details; explain the meaning這樣看,就是夾敘夾議，夾雜一些說(shuō)明。如果按照我們江蘇作文特點(diǎn)，就容易跑題。我開(kāi)始就這樣的，后來(lái)才意識(shí)到問(wèn)題.慎之！Rituals easilycome across asgrand ceremoni

2、es, like presidential inauguration， wedding ceremony and so on. However， rituals can be seen and felt everywhere in our daily life。 They， just like thecatalyst,serve the purpose ofremoving gapsandlubricatingmutual communication, thusbringing people closer together。寫(xiě)作思路：通過(guò)對(duì)比法(普遍看法和實(shí)際情形）來(lái)突出人生禮儀的作用.最后一

3、句是為了論證rituals can be seen and felt everywhere in our daily life。修辭手法：英語(yǔ)是講究隱喻特色，因此我用了催化劑和潤(rùn)滑油，通俗易懂，容易被讀者理解。詞語(yǔ)：come across as。.。給人什么印象catalyst催化劑lubricate加潤(rùn)滑油(此處是比喻)serve the purpose of。.。起的作用remove the gaps of.。.消除隔閡bring.。closer together讓更緊密Chineseare keen ontraditional festivals which provide a gold

4、en chance for family members to get together. For many reasons， we young nowadays have topursue our dreamsin every corner ofthe world, burying the missing for our parents in the heart。 However, on Mid-autumn days, for example, the whole family members will fly home，regardless ofthe heavy traffic. In

5、 my hometown, wegive high priority toworshiping ancestorsin honor oftheir contributions。 On this occasion， my father likes telling their taleswith great admirationand requires that we shouldfollow their exampleandmake a differenceto the society. The tales, though repeated year by year， neverlose the

6、ir meaningbutserve as a reminder ofthe past pains and gains。In the evening, the moon hanging in the sky smiling quietly and cozily， we sit around a table， sharing stories about study or work. It isan ideal channel for us to have a good understanding ofeach other。Next day，we will visit our relatives。

7、 Often, we hug each other warmly， followed bya heart-to-heart talk, including income， marriage and the like.It is through these rituals thatwe find theempathywith peers andshow respect forthe old。 The traditional customs are thushanded downfrom one generation to another。寫(xiě)作思路：主題句：中國(guó)人對(duì)節(jié)日的情有獨(dú)鐘支撐句：先說(shuō)平時(shí)難

8、以相聚；再舉例說(shuō)相聚后的儀式細(xì)節(jié)：祭拜祖先；父親講述先輩的故事；晚上賞月;拜訪(fǎng)親戚。結(jié)論句：扣題表達(dá)為什么儀式重要修辭：描述賞月可以用擬人法，突出溫馨場(chǎng)面。在語(yǔ)篇上，通過(guò)時(shí)空轉(zhuǎn)移突出順序。我在修改學(xué)生作文時(shí),很少發(fā)現(xiàn)這樣的條理存在.詞語(yǔ)：比較多，請(qǐng)讀者仔細(xì)體會(huì)吧.Soit is reasonable to conclude thatrituals, though seemingly tedious, encourage us to take our family, friendship, work and study seriously。 Rituals do make our life mo

9、re meaningful。其它思維拓展：人生儀式不一定是節(jié)日，還可以是方方面面，我認(rèn)為言之成理即可,例如，我也提供其它想法：On top of festivals, rituals play a vital role in developing friendship。 It doesnt necessarily mean kowtowing, which was quite common in Chinese ancient times。 However， it is a routine to shake hands with warm smiles first and then follo

10、ws a sincere introduction。 As to me, exchanging cards can save people much time for mutual understanding。 Most important， listen carefully and give your opinions in due time. Such rituals not only reflect your politeness， but also smooth the communication and facilitate the development of friendship。Even when it comes to study, some ritual will cultivate our positive attitudes。 Instead of opening books hurriedly， I like choosing a quiet place with soft light。 It can build a cozy environment where I can find empathy with the books authors easily。 If possible,