讀后續(xù)寫六大場(chǎng)景課件-高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)備考

1、讀后續(xù)寫六大場(chǎng)景空白演示單擊輸入您的封面副標(biāo)題眼中閃耀著期盼的目光eyes shining with expectation（excitement；enthusiasm；determination）要抓住主要人物，問題和問題途徑，所以：第一段：父親幫我們做飯第二段：母親很感動(dòng)。這就是框架了，可以任何學(xué)生都能想到的，我們拓展細(xì)節(jié)就以它們?yōu)榉较?。?xì)節(jié)拓展：第一段：父親看到這一切，說了安慰話，教我們做飯第二段：母親看到這一切，說了感激話，擁抱我們和叫醒父親一起分享細(xì)節(jié)這么簡(jiǎn)單嗎？是的，就這么簡(jiǎn)單。重點(diǎn)說說情節(jié)拓展的技巧：說、看、想、做、情具體是：說：鼓勵(lì)的話，提醒的話，靈感的話看：看到了對(duì)方的想法或

2、表情，看到了原文說到的物想：想到了原文說到的物，想到了某人說的話，想到了過去的經(jīng)歷。由想生惑，由想生嘆。做：說后做；看后做；想后做。概括“做”：告知如何做，幫助完成；細(xì)說“做”：手腳如何動(dòng)情：情非突然，皆隨“說、看、想、做”而生。還是以這個(gè)為例：第一段：父親看到這一切，說了安慰話，教我們做飯具體就是：父親看到了亂糟糟的一切，說了一些安慰的話；我們很尷尬（感情），說出真相（概括說）；父親說教我們做飯（概括做）；我們開心（感情）；不多時(shí)（時(shí)間過渡），飯菜準(zhǔn)備好，父親離開。二、主題呈現(xiàn)：學(xué)會(huì)聯(lián)系由己及人、由物及理、由物及情解釋：由己及人：張三開心了，推及李四更開心，因?yàn)椋ㄆ┤纾簭埲_心因?yàn)榈玫搅耸裁?/p>

3、，李四更開心因?yàn)閲L到了幫助人的快樂。又或：張三幫助了李四，李四也要幫助他人，傳遞愛。諸如此類）。由物及理：找準(zhǔn)一個(gè)物,然后說明這個(gè)物不僅滿足了需要，還象征著什么，譬如愛，善良等。（譬如：我拿到圍巾后，圍巾不僅給我溫暖，也讓我感受到善良的價(jià)值）由物及情：找準(zhǔn)一個(gè)物，這個(gè)物寄托了各種感情。（譬如我拿到了圍巾，它不僅讓我開心，也讓朋友開心，開心的原因各不同。這個(gè)和前面有些相似，只不過它以一個(gè)物為支點(diǎn)）以上結(jié)合四法：（1）意識(shí)（2）提醒（3）記憶（4）最。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they though

4、t of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. T

5、he big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna

6、 found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sin

7、k and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off t

8、he gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece o

9、f bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. .As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.

10、Fathers appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Del

11、icious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two