2014中考英語寫作講座

1、 金石中學(xué) 鄧艷蕾WritingWritingWriting英語寫作講座一、時(shí)事新聞，國(guó)家政策，家鄉(xiāng)變化。二、健康問題：學(xué)生不愛吃學(xué)校的午飯，常到校 外去吃他們所喜歡吃的食物。三、關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)問題 Howtoprotect/saveourenvironment/world? 四、語言學(xué)習(xí)：世界在發(fā)展，文化在交融，英語已經(jīng) 成為人們溝通的橋梁。怎樣學(xué)好英語是我們一直 在求索的問題 。五、寫人記事篇：Myfavoriteteacher 六、旅游和介紹地方篇七、新生事物評(píng)價(jià)：汽車、電腦、手機(jī)八、夢(mèng)想和未來九、煩惱篇十、社會(huì)準(zhǔn)則，公共道德English Day!Lets practice writin

2、g English!Writing is as important as speaking!英語寫作六字訣審列寫查賞評(píng)英語寫作訓(xùn)練六字訣定內(nèi)容定語法定句型開頭主體結(jié)尾打草稿謄寫要點(diǎn) 人稱 時(shí)態(tài) 句型 拼寫 字?jǐn)?shù) 標(biāo)點(diǎn) 自評(píng)互評(píng)師評(píng)學(xué)生作文評(píng)價(jià)表評(píng)價(jià)項(xiàng)目（共10分）評(píng)價(jià)要點(diǎn)分值評(píng)價(jià)形式備注自評(píng)同伴評(píng)師評(píng)符合題意內(nèi)容完整（4分）要點(diǎn)齊全4少1個(gè)要點(diǎn)3少2個(gè)要點(diǎn)1語意連貫符合邏輯（2分）要點(diǎn)順序合理2部分要點(diǎn)順序合理1要點(diǎn)順序混亂1多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)（2分）3種以上（含3種）22種11種1詞匯豐富（2分）60詞以上259-30詞以下129詞以下1-0總分合計(jì)備注如果以上評(píng)價(jià)要點(diǎn)都符合，但有語言錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)按1

3、-2個(gè)知識(shí)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤扣1分處理。Guessing gameWe can not only download music but also see films on it. Besides, it is the quickest and cheapest way to get in touch with our friends by sending emails. one of the most important inventionsbecome more and more importantbecome necessary in our daily lifebecome a part of ou

4、r lifeplay an important roleCould you please use a sentence to describe the importance of the computer?What do people often do on the computer?play _ emails_online listen to _films read _ download _do _computer gamessendchat/shopmusicseenews / magazinesmusic/pictures/informationhomework1、2、3、4、5、6、7

5、、8、Why do people often do that on the computer?get_get to know _ themselvesSending emails is the _ to get in touch with the friends.all kinds of informationthe latest newsrelaxquickest and cheapest way1、2、3、4、play computer games such a long time that What bad influence does the computer bring us?轉(zhuǎn)折、

6、連接句型Computers are useful, butAlthough Computers are good for us, However, computers also bring 1、2、3、lose interest in their lessonsbe bad for peoples eyespeoples health, get worse should doshouldnt doIts a good idea to doHow about doingWhat about doingWhy not doTry (not) to doI think, In my opinion.

7、What advice would you like to give on using the computer properly?Computer is a tool, not a toy!電腦是工具，而不是玩具！2022/7/3016典型例題分析 電腦在日常生活中越來越重要，我們通過電腦不僅能了解世界各地的新聞，而且還能，但是，電腦也給我們帶來了許多問題。請(qǐng)你以“Computers: Good or Bad?” 為題寫一篇短文，分析電腦的利與弊，并提出你合理使用電腦的建議。（不少于60詞） 提示詞語：computer, important, daily life， the latest n

8、ews, relax, however, problems, lose interest, health, thinkTask:寫作指導(dǎo)Step 1 定體裁 _Step 2 定語法 Step 3 素材串聯(lián)_人稱_時(shí)態(tài)_議論文以第一人稱為主一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)參考詞匯和句型Step 4寫作思路a.內(nèi)容：電腦的重要性 做什么 為什么 不利影響 給出建議b. 提綱 ：開頭:點(diǎn)題。 主體：利弊及建議。 結(jié)尾:闡明自己觀點(diǎn)。Beginning:_Body:_Ending:_Computers have become more and more important.We can not only , but als

9、o whats more,轉(zhuǎn)折句型 However, computers also bring some problems.2. Some students spend all their free time Whats worse, 3. I think we should/ shouldntIn a word, we should learn to use computers properly.Look for your mistakes.一查要點(diǎn)是否齊全，字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。二查語法是否有錯(cuò)誤。三查拼寫、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否正確。Lets look atA model essay Comput

10、ers have become more and more important in our daily life. We can not only get to know the latest news around the world but also send e-mails to our friends by using them. Whats more, after a busy day, we can relax ourselves by playing games. However, they also bring us problems. Some students spend

11、 so much time playing computer games that they have lost interest in their lessons. And their health is getting worse. So I think we can use them for a short while after finishing our homework. If we use them properly , they will become really helpful to us. 先讀提示，弄清要點(diǎn)與格式；時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)要當(dāng)心，前后呼應(yīng)要一致；句子結(jié)構(gòu)和搭配，語言習(xí)慣莫違背；文章寫好細(xì)檢查，點(diǎn)滴小錯(cuò)別忽視；審列寫查賞評(píng)明確標(biāo)準(zhǔn)靠嘗試。賞析互助共提高，Homework: Practi