高中英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫與概要寫作微技能五情緒與情感描寫

1、微技能五情緒與情感描寫在讀后續(xù)寫中，描寫人物的情緒與情感是常用的描寫方法，恰當(dāng)?shù)那榫w與情感描 寫能夠表現(xiàn)文中人物的性格，推動(dòng)事件的發(fā)展。在描述人物情緒與情感時(shí)要突出 文章的中心，與人物的性格吻合，符合事件發(fā)展的邏輯。要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~句通過(guò) 情緒與情感描寫精確地刻畫(huà)人物的內(nèi)心世界。S!語(yǔ)言輸入素材積累，為續(xù)寫奠基人物喜樂(lè)I .詞匯積累happy aJ/.愉快的，高興的；美滿的cheerful adj. 快樂(lè)的excited adj,興奮的joyful adj.歡樂(lè)的pleased adj.欣喜的，高興的，滿意的enjoy vt.喜愛(ài)brighten vt,使快活delight n.歡喜，愉快，高興

2、vt.使快樂(lè)，使喜歡pleasure n.愉快passion n.熱情，激情be fond of music 愛(ài)好音樂(lè)a satisfied look 滿意的表情brighten one飛heart 使某人心情愉快yell with delight 樂(lè)得大叫set ones heart at rest 使某人安心be wild with delight 欣喜若狂be in high spirits 精神高漲be excited with joy at the success 為成功而欣喜be on the top of the world 心滿意足，非常幸福a mixture of excit

3、ement and happiness 既興奮 乂開(kāi)心n.佳句背誦The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅。Tears of happiness poured down Susans cheeks.幸福的淚水順著蘇珊的臉頰流下來(lái)。Her cheerful spirits and hearty laughter infected the whole class.她那歡樂(lè)的情緒和爽朗的笑聲感染了全班同學(xué)。She wo

4、re a shining smile on her face.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。人物悲憂消沉I .詞匯積累tearn.常用復(fù)眼淚,淚珠sob v.啜泣，抽噎sorrow n.悲痛；憂傷desperate adj.絕望的；無(wú)望的sadness n.悲傷，憂愁pain n.痛苦release vt.釋放griefn.悲痛a broken spirit 意志消沉ciy ones heart out 悲痛欲絕with a heavy heart懷著沉重的心情with a sinking heart 心情沉重地with a sorrowful heart 懷著憂郁的心情be seized with

5、panic 驚慌失措put him into a sentimental mood 讓他很傷感fall into despair 陷入絕望a strong sense of loss 強(qiáng)烈的失落感make ones heart bleed 使某人悲痛be down in spirits 情緒低落lose ones spirit 垂頭喪氣1【.佳句背誦He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著面頰流了下來(lái)。In those days he was in low spirits.那些日子里他情緒低落。Her hands

6、were shaking and she was on the point of crying.她的手在顫抖，快要哭出來(lái)了。They were immersed in sorrow.他們沉浸在悲痛之中。Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息，他絕望地把悲傷淹沒(méi)在酒里。人物怨怒I .詞匯積累displeasure n.不高興glare V.對(duì)怒目而視frustrated adj.失意的；失望的annoyed adj.惱怒的，氣惱的rage n.憤怒cross adj.生氣的，不高興的

7、complain constantly 不斷地抱怨flame with anger氣得滿臉通紅be displeased at ones conduct對(duì)某人的行為感到不滿be easily annoyed at trifles 易為瑣事而惱火get mad/cross at sb 對(duì)某人勃然大怒h(huán)ave a worried look 愁眉苦臉ignore a complaint對(duì)抱怨不予理會(huì)express/voice a complaint about 對(duì)表示不滿run out of the room in a burst of anger 怒氣沖沖地跑出房間stamp one,s foot

8、 in anger 憤怒地跺腳feel discouraged 感到泄氣的feel puzzled/confused 感到困惑的1【.佳句背誦His voice trembled with anger.他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。They stopped arguing and glared at each other.他們停止了爭(zhēng)論，相互怒視著對(duì)方。He gave me a look of burning anger.他憤怒地看了我一眼。This failure leaves the child

9、 depressed and frustrated.這次失敗使這個(gè)小孩灰心喪氣。人物其他情緒I .詞匯積累serious adj,嚴(yán)肅的,莊重的shame n.羞愧；恥辱yawn V.打呵欠forgive vt.原諒kindly adj.仁慈的；和藹的；友好的，體貼的hopeless必.沒(méi)有希望的，絕望的anxiety n.焦慮find.highly stimulating 覺(jué)得非常刺激a forgiving spirit 寬容的精神with a kindly spirit以和藹可親的態(tài)度not in the least is he interested in. 他對(duì)點(diǎn)也不感興趣mixed w

10、ith the emotion of anxiety and hope 混合著焦慮與希望的情緒set off strong feelings 引起強(qiáng)烈的情感be hopelessly addicted to 對(duì)徹底上癮under the domination of these emotions 在這些情緒的控制下1【.佳句背誦He lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了頭。I decided to go for a walk to clear my head.我決定去走走，清醒一下頭腦。He felt his cheeks burning wi

11、th shame.他因?yàn)樾呃⒍械侥橆a發(fā)燒。She looked at her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.她直視父親的眼睛，誠(chéng)實(shí)地回答了他的問(wèn)題。My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.我走進(jìn)她的辦公室時(shí)，緊張得心都到了喉嚨口。:語(yǔ)言輸出層級(jí)訓(xùn)練，讓續(xù)寫添彩I .基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)補(bǔ)全句子Her smile li jp th邑巨 joem.她的笑容照亮了整個(gè)房間。The woman delighted 或 the recovery o

12、f her stolen jewels那位婦人對(duì)找回 被盜的珠寶感到非常高興。 Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held 迫 W steady smile.令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光，嘴角保持著穩(wěn)定的微笑。She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起來(lái)，跑出了房間。. She sobbed, hiding “匚 face jn _he hands 她掩面哭泣。His attitude mad邑 jn_ gxtremelY .gnnoy

13、ud. 他的態(tài)度使我極為惱火。Dont ge_nat ajne. I did it all for your own good. 別生我的氣，我這樣做完全是為了你好。His face suddenly rew serious.他的表情突然嚴(yán)肅起來(lái)。I【.綜合演練完成讀后續(xù)寫，注意情感描寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短 文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Ali and his younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood.Their mother was very

14、sick and their father was stiuggling to find a job, and they had only a little money with which to buy food.As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks.One day, Ali took Zahras shoes to a shoe repainnan to be fixed, but he lost them on the way HYPERL

15、INK http:/home.It home.It wasnt until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes.He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep it seciet.Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Alis running shoes.Zahras school hours were in the morning, so

16、she would wear them first.After school, she would rush back and give them to Ali.He could then run to his school, which began in the afternoon.Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in t

17、he city.When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part.He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.The day of race arrived.Ali had a strong start, but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ach

18、e.Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her.Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined to finish third.Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided （碰

19、撞）with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.【根據(jù)提示完成范文】Paragraph 1：Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could.He dashed across the finish line and won the fourth prize.Thinking he would let_her sister down（讓她妹妹失望）, Ali couldnt help sobbing（情不自禁哭 了 起來(lái)）.Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule.Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony,