英語：高考書面表達(dá)之贏取高分策略 (2)

1、 書面表達(dá)系列講練 之 贏取高分策略 NMET對書面表達(dá)的要求 要求考生根據(jù)所給情景，用英語寫一篇100個單詞左右的短文 情景包括目的、對象、時間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等；提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、提綱等。 本部分滿分25/30分，所需時間約為30分鐘。NMET書面表達(dá)評分原則1、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定檔次。第五檔. 2125分第四檔. 1620分第三檔. 1115分第二檔. 610分 第一檔. 15分 0分語言地道，規(guī)范覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)2、主要內(nèi)容： 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)； 詞匯和語法的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性； 上下文的連貫； 語言的得體性應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有效地使用了語句間的連接成分3、拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是語言

2、準(zhǔn)確性的一個方面，評分時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。4、詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。5、如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個檔次。詞匯,句型 （高級）和語法多樣化（較復(fù)雜） 1.覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn) 2. 應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊要點(diǎn)全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？書面表達(dá)如何寫？五個步驟1、審題文字信息圖畫信息題材、人稱、時態(tài)、要點(diǎn)2、以詞及點(diǎn)：用一兩個單詞或短語寫出每句 話的細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)。3、聯(lián)詞成句：用聯(lián)詞成句的方法將上述要點(diǎn) 的詞語擴(kuò)展成句子。4 聯(lián)句成文：注意：主語和謂語背景（適當(dāng)增加時間、地點(diǎn)條件等）邏輯關(guān)系開頭

3、與結(jié)尾語篇銜接5、檢查修改，規(guī)范抄寫給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點(diǎn)題；一兩個句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心記述部分；層次分明3. Ending 小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題 技 巧1. 使用較高級的詞匯3. 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個重要標(biāo)志。運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對寫一篇有“英語味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。增強(qiáng)書面表達(dá)效果的技巧2. 使用較豐富的句式1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfor

4、table.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯We all think highly of him .A goo

5、d idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.10.Yo

6、u can find my house easily. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house. 豐富的句式：(常用到的句型結(jié)構(gòu)） 利用不同的句型來表達(dá)同一個意思， 能增

7、加文章的文采。1. 感嘆句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !2. 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.3、 倒裝句 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly

8、 had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.5、 with短語 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、 定語從句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can fi

9、nd much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.7、 各種名詞性從句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.8、 各種狀語從句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we

10、got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily. 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2. To his surpri

11、se, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句)4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) 5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語氣）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises

12、 him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎樣使用較豐富的句式Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students foll

13、owed her. (使用過去分詞)7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)8.I wont believe what he says. （使用狀語從句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than h

14、e was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.高考大綱中常用的連接詞1.表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容 另外，還有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 但是， 然而

15、， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.3. 表示因果關(guān)系 因為，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關(guān)系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否則: or else5. 表示時間關(guān)系 當(dāng) 的時候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 一就 : as soo

16、n as 后來， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來: lately; recently 自從 :since 從那時起: from then on6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系 首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end7. 換一種方法表述 換句話說: in other words; that is to say; 8. 進(jìn)行舉例說明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as9. 用于陳述事實 實際上: in fac

17、t; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你說實話 : to tell you the truth10. 對一個話題進(jìn)行總結(jié) 總而言之，總的來說: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word 其它常用到的副詞 Therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; personally; On one side of the road there is a new classroo

18、m building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library. (NMET1999 范文)As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.(NMET2001 范文)Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. (NMET2001 范文)三、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞Practice 1 請在下列句子中（間）填上恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或意思有聯(lián)

19、系的短語。Xiao Ming was walking in the street _ he heard someone cry for help.2. He advised that I hire a car _ I could travel around in the west .3. It was not long _ the police came ._he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.whenin order thatbeforeAs soon as 5. Do you agree

20、with my arrangement ? _ , do write to me soon.6. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of interest.I shared the cost of the gas with my friends ._, I saved $80.8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.If not/soIn additionAs a resultWhats wo

21、rse 聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個村的情況： 1)大?。航?00戶人家，約500口人。 2)變化：過去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了。現(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。 3)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。 注意：1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。2）詞數(shù)：100-120之間。Practice 書面表達(dá)：Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school.This village is very small. It has

22、 nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful

23、 building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very

24、poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People

25、 here live a much better life than before . 書面表達(dá)：Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small . Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They

26、 enjoy free education in it. Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free

27、education. May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/ May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed

28、a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which

29、has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 2001年春季高考作文給澳大利亞的朋友寫一封信，談?wù)劀p負(fù)給學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。 I will tell you the changes of my life.

30、Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspapers and watch TV. I go to bed at 1

31、0:00 now.17分高考滿分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed unt

32、il 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at

33、 about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.書面表達(dá)常用語句書信 Thanks for your last letter. I am writing just to inform you In reply to your last letter, I am writing to explain the two questions as follows: 開 頭 Looking forward to your reply/hearing from you! Thanks for your consideration.

34、 Do remember me to your parents! 結(jié) 尾2. 敘事 It is quite obvious/clear that ( 很顯然) There is no doubt that (毫無疑問) Take as an example. (以為例） On one hand, on the other hand (一方面，另一方面) Only in this way shall we (只有這樣我們才能) As far asis concerned, I prefer(就而言，我更) Measures/Action should be taken to(必須采取措施去) F

35、or the reasons given above, I feel that(鑒于以上原因，我覺得 What these people fail to consider is that(這些人沒有想到的是.) Undoubtedly there is a long way to go before(毫無疑問要 還有很長的路要走） Therefore, I strongly recommend that (因此， 我強(qiáng)烈建議All the facts show that（所有的事實顯示) I like not only because but also because(我喜歡 不僅因為而且因為

36、) I am writing to you to inquire about(我寫信給你想詢問) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at(我給你 寫信表示我對的不滿） I apologize to you for(我為向你道歉） I am grateful to you for(我為向你表示感謝） Mr. Green, my best friend, is teaching Mr. Green, a favorite teacher from the USA, is teaching信頭信內(nèi)地址、姓名稱呼正 文結(jié)束語簽名附言、附件（

37、Enc:/Encl:)Letter writingA LetterNov 5, 2001Wuzheng Middle SchoolZhejiang P.R.C.JackTongxiang High SchoolDear Mary,BodyYours,Jack親人、家屬：Yours lovingly ; Yours affectionately朋友、平輩：Sincerely yours Yours sincerely 上級、長者：Yours respectfully Respectfully yours 單位、部門：Yours sincerely Yours faithfully 結(jié)束語Clos

38、ing信封正面Stamp發(fā)信人姓名收信人姓名Airmail信封背面發(fā)信人姓名 June 5th , 2000Dear Mr. Zhao, I am sorry that I am unable to attend school during the following week because of the Sports Meet. The school expects me to play an important part in it . And I will be back to class in a week . I hope you will excuse my absence .(in fact , I take a French leave) Yours respectfu