顧家北詞伙0310詞伙筆記

1、Elderly people normally hold seniorts in companies because of theirprofesal expertise, who can pass on knowledge and wisdom toyoungsters.Who 離 elderly people 的距離很遠(yuǎn)，不能修飾 elderly peopleElderly eople normally hold eniorts in companies, ecause of theirprofesal expertise, and can pass on knowledge and wi

2、sdom toyoungsters.(c)Normally, elders who have rich experience oth in life and work, so theyususlly hold senior沒(méi)有動(dòng)詞是 at workts in a company or a community.Normally, elderly people have rich experience both in life and at work,so they usually hold seniorts in a company or a community. (c)The young no

3、rmally keep pace with the times and have the spirit ofinnovation, which can play a vital role（c）這句話沒(méi)問(wèn)題he development of society.Youths 是年輕人的意思，等于 young people The young 是單數(shù)還是復(fù)數(shù)？是復(fù)數(shù)the elderly 是單數(shù)么？是的，一半是 elderly people 或 the elderlyThese young generations are considered to be the main force to push

4、the frontier of science forward continuously, so as to prompt the countrys economic prosperity.Prompt 用得不好，用 boostso as to 表示目的，年輕人做這件事可能不是為了目的什么的，而是做了這個(gè)事情產(chǎn)生一個(gè)結(jié)果The young generations is considered to be the main force to push the frontier of science forward continuously, which can boost a countrysec

5、onomic prosperity. (c)The elderly feel cut o and different standard leisure time.這樣寫有點(diǎn)表達(dá)不清The lderly eel cutrom society due to the different pace of lifeof living, with fewer working hours and morerom ociety ue o he actt heir ifestyleis different from the young peoples. (c)Some people discriminate a

6、gainst the old n the grounds of age, which isdetrimental to sol cohe.The old 和 on the ground of age 重復(fù)，因?yàn)?on the ground of age 就有的意思了In some societies, employers discriminate against people on the groundsof age, which is detrimental to sol cohe. (c)ing population is also considered as a trendeconomi

7、c growth. (c)t can restrictI beadvan to thevet it is unfair to erect age barriers, as todays medicalnsure ld eople ood hysical onditions o ake ontributionssociety.健康就是為了貢獻(xiàn)社會(huì)？邏輯怪怪的I be advan years晚年vet it is unfair to erect age barriers, as todays medicalensure old people maain good physical conditio

8、ns in laterand can make contribution to the society. (c)In later years/lifey opinion, it should not erect age barriers, since medical advanimproving, he lderly eople re ealthy nd ainstay f ocietylater life.heirSinceimproving,錯(cuò)，improving 不是動(dòng)詞Healthy（形容詞）和 mainstay（名詞）不對(duì)稱，直接這樣寫不是很好y pinion, e hould ot

9、 rect ge arriers:nks o edical dvan,the elderly people are healthy and remain as the mainstay of society in their later life (c)nks o he dvancement f edical echnology, any lderly eople avea longer life expectancy and are still the mainstay of societylater life. (c)heirelderly people = the elderly？是的詞

10、伙的另外運(yùn)用hold seniortsIt eems(c)tewer omenn en old eniortshe orporate orld.pass on knowledge and wisdom toThe ain duty of teachers s to pass n nowledge nd wisdom to students. (c)Teachers 可以換成 universitieskeep pace with the timesIn general, private firms are more likely to keep pace with the times,while

11、 se-owned entrises normally are slow in embracing advancedtechnology. (c)push up the boundariesAnimal esting s mportant, ecause any indings f hese ests an ushup the boundaries of humnowledge (c)Restrict economic growthIf oung people cannot eceive a college ducation, he low productivity of the workfo

12、rce can restrict economic growth.The benefits of improving gender balance could be listed as follows.這句話沒(méi)什么問(wèn)題，但是比較模式化。最好不要寫這樣的句子。Promoting gender equality is an inevitable trend today, and there is nodoubtt his ractihould e mbraced s t enerates any enefits.不能說(shuō)是個(gè) inevitable trendshould be embrace 有點(diǎn)絕

13、對(duì)，換成 can，開(kāi)頭段過(guò)于強(qiáng)烈，用在建議的段落就可以Women are risk averse and they prefer to adopt a cautious approach whenfacing complex situations.（c）這句話沒(méi)問(wèn)題Women can help company make an optimal deci, because they enablepeople to consider differentsibilities.An optimal deci最優(yōu)選擇？不是女人讓公司選擇，而是她們的存在讓公司，或者因?yàn)樗齻兇嬖?，所以有選擇Women an

14、elp ompany akeell-informedeci, nd ecause f heirpresence, people can consider differentsibilities. (c)There are increasing number of women oo the workforce and ngage inellectual ork, rimarily ue o he acta tertiary qualification.t ore nd ore omen ainThere are increasing number of兩個(gè) women 指代不清join?prim

15、arily due to 感覺(jué)怪怪的，用 because 好一點(diǎn)There re n ncreasing umber f omen oininghe orkforce nd ngaginghave gained a tertiaryinellectual work, primarily because theyqualification.(c)Women engaged inellectual work can tapo their talentsso as topush up the boundaries of humnowledge.不是 women 能 tapo their talent

16、s 而是雇主Engage in 不要用過(guò)去式Women should be given opportunities to engageinellectualwork, soso pushcompanies can tapo their talents and their knowledge cup the boundaries of knowledge.(c)When facing barriers to top-level promotion, working women often feelfrustrated and demotivated because their efforts g

17、o unrewarded and theoutlook is grim.（灰暗的）(c)It should also be noted that women are not as capable as men, physically or mentally, because of innate biological differences; they cannot tackle the strenuous work, as a consequence, it will harm the productivity of companies.women are not as capable as

18、men 不要這么說(shuō)，有歧視嫌疑It should also be noted that women are not as strong as men in terms of physical strength and this kind of innate biological differences make it difficult for women to do strenuous work. This means that women can reduce the productivity of a company if they are required to do some man

19、ual work.(c)詞伙的另外運(yùn)用Risk averseSenior people are normally risk averse, so they normally adopt a cautious approach to deal with problems. (c)Intellectual workThose people who receive a university education can engage in intellectualwork and earn a highere than the uneducated. (c)labour-intensive workT

20、he application of machinery has released people from labour-intensive work and enables them to spend time on leisure activity. (c)請(qǐng)問(wèn) manual work 和 labour-intnsive work 一樣嗎？差不多的，都是表示做一些體力活的Reduce productivityWorking long hours can cause strain and reduce productivity. (c) Cause strain 造成緊張Due to the

21、fact that social media hase a primary source ofinformation, media workers should adapt to new technologies and empowerthe audience.online education has empowered learnersJournalists should adapt to new technologies, due to the fact that socialmedia hasaudience. (c)e a primary source of information a

22、nd empowered theCompared with traditional second-hand information, the videos from audiences provides（主謂不一致） a whole picture of the story and bring us closer to reality.Second-hand information 指的是什么東西呢？Compared with the news coverage of an event, which is not based on first-hand information, the vid

23、eos from audiences provide a whole pictureof the story and bring us closer to reality.(c)The social media can transmit news by word of mouth and keep a close eye on media ethics, which will restrict the one-sided coverage of events. The social media enable the public to transmit news by word of mout

24、h and to keep a close eye on media ethics, so news media have to avoid theone-sided coverage of events (c)While social networking websites transmit news by word of mouth, and reflect diverse opinions.Social networking websites transmit news by word of mouth, and thereforereflect diverse opinions (c)

25、Besides, newspaper can offer in-depth analysis of events and social issues, while social media generally provide superficial, biased or even wrong information.Newspaper 的冠詞??？Another difference is that newspapers can offer in-depth analysis ofevents and social issues, while social media generally pro

26、vide superficial, biased or even false information. (c)不要寫很口語(yǔ)化的東西The news on newspapers are almost written by professional journalists who can offer in-depth analysis so as to enlighten audiences.News 不可數(shù)，要用 is幾乎用 almost 很奇怪，這是有種差點(diǎn)的意思, 用 normally 為好The news on newsprs is normally written byprofesal

27、journalists es, and this kind of. (c)who can offer in-depnalysis of sol iinsightful information can enlighten audien詞伙的另外運(yùn)用Keep up with technological changeA career move may enable people o keep up with technological change and expand their knowledge. (c) Career move 換工作A career move may enable peop

28、le o keep up with technological change andexpand their knowledge, because they need to figure out how technologyis appdhe new working environment. (c)bring us closer to the realityWatching news reports on TV can bring us closer to the reality, whilereading sometimes encourages us to speculate on(c)i

29、ng f the story.diverse opinionsIt is important to promote cultural diversity and cultures.只有 multicultural(形容詞)，沒(méi)有名詞respect differentLocal authorities can listen to diverse opinions, if people are treatedequally. (c)要么說(shuō) art 要么說(shuō) the artsArt reveals the colorful world in differentimagination.s and fir

30、e onesFrom different不要給 world 加定語(yǔ)了sArt reveals the world from differentimagination.(c)s and fires onesArts can fire ones imagination, ashe art world there is not a starkline betn rightThere is no strictand wrong.rules or right answershere is no trict ules r right answers，people anAshe art worldportr

31、ay the world in a way they like and this kind of practitheir imagination (c)can fireArts nspire people to break he mould and ut deao practice, on hecontrary, the scienubject appear to focus on conforming to rule.On the contrary 不能做連詞主謂不一致Arts inspire people to break the ould and put deao practice, w

32、hilethe scienubject appears to focus on conforming to rule. (c)Science and technology In ontrast, echnology（前面這句寫得不錯(cuò)）normally require people to obey rules. (c)nd cience lace mphasis n ccuracy nd ules. he world of technology and science, people mustobey rules, or else they can barely gainBarely 寫得怪怪的

33、al achievements.he world of technology and science, people cannot achieve theirs if they do not obey rules. (c)or else 就是 otherwise 嗎？是的Otherwise theGainingchance of gainingal achievement is slim.(Ok)al achievement 表達(dá)不是很好 achieve their好點(diǎn)Arts ormallyrovides n utlet or elf-expres, y hich eople reartwo

34、rks.able to express their emotions through creating Creating artworks 有點(diǎn)重復(fù)Arts ormally provide an utlet for self-expresable to express their emotions. (c), y hich people areArts provide an outlet for self-expres, for exle, people can useare-works to express their unique emotions.For exle 不是連詞，不能連接句子

35、！Arts provide an outlet for self-expres; in other words, people canuse art-works to express their unique emotions. (c)his way, art also reminds eople to be sensitive to urroundings andtake care of others feelings, so other.不要用 take care of 他人的感受t people can empathize with eachhis way, art also remin

36、ds eople to be sensitive to surroundings andothers eelings, oother. (c)t eople evelopabit f mpathisingith achost f ime, he echnology nd cience an olve roblems, address emotional needs.Most of the time, technology and science can solve problems, b address emotional needs(c)annotannotUnlike rt, echnol

37、ogy nd cience re ore ikely o orce eopleo daptequiredtoto nohe pace of life. or exle, peopleheir fifties may belearn how to use complex online work systems, although they may haveerest or talenthis area.(c)詞伙的另外運(yùn)用Break the mouldIt is inappropriate to ime strict rules on children, because it willdisco

38、urage them from breaking the mould and putting their ideasopractice. (c)Provide an outlet for self-expresThe sol media have prevailedhe world, providing an outlet forself-expresand enabling us to voice our concerns.(c)voice our concerns 表達(dá)empathising with others所關(guān)心的事情People oday re ncreasingly elf-c

39、entred nd ot apable f mpathisingwith others.(c)high-risingTopic 5建筑樓Describe a good neighbour you know well.You should say:Who he/she isHow long you have known him/herWhat he/she is likeAnd explain why you think he/she is a good neighbour.The neighbour I want to talk about is a retired engineer. He

40、lives he same apartment block（公寓樓）, but he has earnedrepuionhe community for what he has done for teenagersand young people.Many parentshe neighbourhood are busy with their work, sosometimes, they have limited time to take care of their children.The neighbour I mentionedanise some after-school activ

41、ities,such as soccer gameshe playfield, so teenagers can take upsome sports outside of the school. He is also in charge of thecommunity centre where children doafter the schooland before their parents pick them up. He has done all thesethings without being paid. He has set a good role mwhat wecanPar

42、t 3n later life for the community.What is the importance of a community? Is a community good for children?Community is the place children establish a sense of identity and develop habits.住在窮的地得自己也很窮。我已經(jīng)結(jié)婚了I got marriedI am marriedIf children observe street crime（街道commit aggressive acts as well.）eve

43、ry day, they mayWhat benefits you can get if you have neighbours?Neighbours ceep an eye on your flat when you are away onvacation. They may also help you take care of your parents if your parents have health problems.What qualities（素質(zhì)） do you think a good neighbourshould have?A good neighbour is able to empathise with u, and ready to lenda helhand whenever nesary.Some people seem to be moreerested in watchinn ineracting with their neighbours. Do you think it is a good habit?Of course not. We should take an active part in（活躍地參與）community life and so connection.l life. This can