1_高中英語作文滿分技巧

1、高中英語作文高分技巧英語作文在高考英語中占有很重要的地位。相對于其他題型，英語作文最容易在短期內(nèi)有所突破。同時因為作文屬于主觀題，主觀題就意味著需要人工閱卷而不是機器閱卷，只要考生抓住閱卷老師的心理，按照他們所期待的模式去寫，必定能在高考中取得高分。英語作文在評閱時遵循語言第一位（語言高級），內(nèi)容第二位（要點齊全），結(jié)構(gòu)第三位（文章分段）的原則，也就是說閱卷老師最注重的是語言，換句話說是亮點，根據(jù)語言使用情況，亮點的多少定出檔次，所以在英語作文中，語言上的亮點是得高分的關(guān)鍵。亮點一共有四種：1. 高級詞匯和語法；2. 修辭手法；3. 有效的連詞；4. 名人名言或諺語。以下介紹亮點當(dāng)中至關(guān)重要的

2、高級語法，以及修辭手法當(dāng)中一些技巧的使用。1 肯定不如否定好修辭的使用在書面表達中算作很大的亮點，在高中階段很少有學(xué)生會注重修辭的應(yīng)用。雙重否定也是種修辭，而且對于考生來說，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中設(shè)計雙重否定的句子。例如想表達“郵遞員天天準(zhǔn)時到”，如果寫成 The postman comes on timeevery day ，就不如變成雙重否定，The postman never fails to come ontime ，就變成了亮點句，起到強調(diào)作用?！皫缀趺總€人對生活的態(tài)度都不同程度受到地震的影響”，寫成雙重否定There was hardly a man or a woman wh

3、ose attitude towards life had not been affected by the earthquake.應(yīng)用類似的修辭會在高考中為同學(xué)們加分。2 陳述不如倒裝妙在書面表達中閱卷老師喜歡看到的高級語法共以下幾種：倒裝，強調(diào)，從句，獨立主格和分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，以及虛擬語氣。倒裝 是一種最簡單易行的使句子呈現(xiàn)亮點的方法。在高中階段只需掌握倒裝的四種形式，就足以應(yīng)對書面表達。1. 否定詞開頭如果寫出的句子中有否定詞，例如： I will never marry you. 不如變成倒裝，用否定詞開頭Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高級語法。其他的否定詞，如

4、not, seldom, hardly 等單詞開頭后面的句子，如果采用倒裝都屬于更好的表達。2. 地點狀語開頭在很多年的高考書面表達中都有表達地點的句子，一個建筑位于什么位置，或什么地方有什么東西，都可以應(yīng)用倒裝。例如在 2006 年的全國卷中，圖書館位于學(xué)校的中央，Our library is in thecenter of our school. 變成倒裝就用地點狀語開頭：In the center of our school lies our library. 表達“河岸上有很多花”： On the bank stand some flowers.“天空中繁星點點”： In the sk

5、y hang little stars.在表達地點時，把地點狀語放在句首，后面主謂倒裝。這樣做的好處之一是倒裝本身就是高級結(jié)構(gòu)，第二是倒裝后把真正的主語放到了句子的末尾，后面還可以繼續(xù)加從句，使整個句子再呈現(xiàn)更多的亮點。例如： In the center of our school lies our library ， which is between the garden and the teaching building.3. Only+ 介詞短語在 2007 年全國卷中，“只有通過這種方式我才能提高英語”，這句話可以寫成 Only in this way can I improve my

6、 English.4. 形容詞 +as+ 主語 +be 動詞例如： Young as I am, I can manage it.Rich as our country is, we have a lot of problems.在 2000 年的高考書面表達中：Badly injured as he was, he managed totake down t he car s number.3 主動不如被動巧在近些年的閱卷中，發(fā)現(xiàn)考生在寫作中很少使用被動語態(tài)，也許是受中文思維的影響，幾乎整篇文章都使用主動語態(tài)。其實在英文中，被動語態(tài)的使用是很重要的。英語是一門客觀的語言，而漢語是主觀的語言，

7、具體體現(xiàn)則是：英語經(jīng)常用被動語態(tài)，而漢語經(jīng)常用主動語態(tài)；英語中經(jīng)常用物稱或形式主語開頭，強調(diào)一件事發(fā)生在什么人身上，而漢語經(jīng)常用人稱開頭強調(diào)一個人發(fā)生了什么事。所以使用被動語態(tài)更符合英語的習(xí)慣。例如在2006 年的高考中，很多學(xué)生在表達“我們每次可以借五本書最多借十天”時，都是用： We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days. 這句話如果寫成：At most five books can beborrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days，得分會

8、更高。4 分詞結(jié)構(gòu)不能少前文提到，閱卷老師喜歡看到的高級語法是：倒裝，強調(diào)，從句，獨立主格和分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，以及虛擬語氣。在所有的高級語法中，閱卷老師最喜歡看到的是獨立主格和分詞結(jié)構(gòu)。但很多學(xué)生不知道如何在文章中使用這個最大的亮點。其實幾乎所有的狀語從句都可以變成獨立主格或分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，時間狀語從句，原因狀語，條件狀語等。例如條件狀語從句：If such is the case, you shouldapologize to her. 如何變成獨立主格或分詞結(jié)構(gòu)呢？學(xué)會下面的口訣，如果你的作文中有狀語從句，馬上可改成獨立主格或分詞結(jié)構(gòu)。口訣：一去，二看，三改。一去：去連詞二看：看主語三改：改分詞If s

9、uch is the case, you should apologize to her. 按照這個口訣來改，第一步，去掉連詞if；第二步，看前后兩句話的主語，前后主語不一致，所以要改成獨立主格；第三步，改分詞，is 變成分詞是being ，所以最后變成Suchbeing the case, you should apologize to her. 就變成了獨立主格。如果前后兩句話主語一致，就變成分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，例如2005 年高考書面表達中的一句話 Because I am a student, I d like to know the price forstudents. 改成 Being a

10、student, I d like to know the price for students.總之，英語作文重在設(shè)計，設(shè)計出讓閱卷老師眼前一亮的句子，寫出有分詞，倒裝，強調(diào)，修辭的句子，使整篇文章句型豐富，不單一，有效地使用連接成分使文章連貫，方能讓你的作文在高考中拿到高分。新知呈現(xiàn)：高考英語作文高分句型積累：1. As far as .is/am/are concerned就 而言2.It can be said with certainty that 可以肯定地說 3.As the proverb says， 正如諺語所說的，4.It has to be noticed that 必須

11、注意到 5.It's generally recognized that 普遍認(rèn)為 6.It's likely that 這可能是因為 1.1 t's hardly that 這是很難的8 .There's no denying the fact that 毫無疑問，無可否認(rèn) 9 .Nothing is more important than the fact that 沒有什么比 更重要。10 .what's far more important is that 更重要的是 02銜接句型1.A case in point is. 一個典型的例子是2.B

12、ut the problem is not so simple. Therefore， 然而問題并非如此簡單，所以 3.But it's a pity that 但遺憾的是 4.In spite of the fact that 盡管 5.Further, we hold the opinion that此外，我們堅持認(rèn)為，6.However , the difficulty lies in 然而，困難在于7.Similarly, we should pay attention to 同樣，我們要注意8.As it has been mentioned above 正如上面所提到的 9

13、.In this respect, 從這個角度上， 10.However, nevertheless, 然而，03結(jié)尾句型1.I will conclude by saying. 最后我要說 .2 .Therefore, we have the reason to believe that 因此，我們有理由相信3 .All things considered= In a word=In conclusion 總而言之4 .It may be safely said that 它可以有把握地說 5 .Therefore, in my opinion,因此，在我看來， 6 .From what h

14、as been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that通過以上討論，我們可以得出結(jié)論7 .The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that 通過數(shù)據(jù)我們得到的結(jié)論是， 8 .It can be concluded from the discussion that 從討論中我們可以得出 的結(jié)論9.From my point of view, it would be better if 在我看來，如果 也許更好長難句分析和仿寫：11. Once a decis

15、ion has been made, all of us should stick to it.12. Children under 12 years of age in that country must be under adult supervision when in a public library.13. We are living in an age when many things are done on computer.14. He is the only one of the students who has been a winner of scholarship fo

16、r three years.15. Is this the reason that he explained at the meeting for his carelessness in his work?16. As is known to everybody, the moon travels round the earth once every month.17， It can be helpful to those who carefully choose the programmes that they watch（定語從句中含有另一個定語從句） and harmful to tho

17、se who watch it toomuch.（定語從句）18，My family offers me warmth and cares, while my friends give me strength andcourage.（對比從句）19， When it comes to friends, I desire those who will share my happiness, who possess wings of their own and who will fly with me.20，As far as I can see, there is only one possib

18、le way to keep away from the danger.21. Foshan paper cutting is a traditional folk art with a long history, which dates back to more than 1000 years ago.佛山剪紙藝術(shù)是一種傳統(tǒng)的民間藝術(shù)，歷史悠久，（起源于 1000 多年前。 ）22. There are more than 30 shops for paper cutting in Foshan, and paper cutting products sell as far as in So

19、utheast Asia有三十多家經(jīng)營剪紙的商店， （產(chǎn)品遠(yuǎn)銷東南亞 ）23. The Lantern Festival, which falls on January 15th of the lunar calendar every year, is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and the first one after the Spring Festival as well. Nor only does the Lantern Festival mean the first night in the

20、new year to see a full moon, but it is the symbol of a family reunion.高分范文分析：全國 I 卷 書面表達（滿分25 分）假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie 學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計劃。內(nèi)容包括：1.時間和地點；2.內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩；3.課前準(zhǔn)備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。范文Dear Leslie,How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning an

21、d mI writing to tell you something about our next lesson.The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beau

22、ty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.If there is anything that I can help you, please don t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to me

23、eting you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua.全國 II 卷 書面表達（滿分25分）假定你是李華，想邀請外教Henry一起參觀中國剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術(shù)展。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽時間、地點；2.展覽內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。學(xué)生實例1（分?jǐn)?shù)： 24分 四川德陽中學(xué)）Dear HenryI'm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to

24、learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I'm glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.The exhibition, the theme of which is "beauty of China", will take place in the

25、school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club's works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer pictur

26、e of Chinese culture.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I'm looking forward to your reply.點評1.邏輯性較好，層次分明，連貫恰當(dāng)；2.運用詞塊、句型豐富；3 .個別用詞需要改進比如說leader, leave a wonderful impression不符英語表達習(xí)慣；4 .第一段不夠簡潔。全國 III 卷 書面表達（滿分25分）假定你是李華。你所在的校乒乓球隊正在招收新隊員。請給你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric 寫封郵件邀請他加入，內(nèi)容包括：1.球隊活動；2