高考英語寫作指導(dǎo)-（課堂PPT）

1、1一、高考英語作文四步驟一、高考英語作文四步驟二、高考英語作文注意事項(xiàng)二、高考英語作文注意事項(xiàng)2步驟一：認(rèn)真審題立意，確定寫作中心。步驟一：認(rèn)真審題立意，確定寫作中心。找出根據(jù)這個(gè)中心能夠擴(kuò)展的材料有哪些，要避免那些與中心內(nèi)容無關(guān)的細(xì)節(jié)。高考英語作文四步驟：高考英語作文四步驟：以命題作文“The Classmate I Admire Most”為例，文章的主題是關(guān)于記敘我最欣賞的一位同學(xué)，因而就不能泛泛談?wù)撨@位同學(xué)的家庭關(guān)系、社會(huì)背景等，而要緊緊抓住這位同學(xué)身上能夠吸引你的地方展開去。3提綱一定要包含所提供的情景、要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)盡量使用自己熟悉的詞匯與句型。仍以“The Classmate I A

2、dmire Most”為例，提綱可以這樣寫： Who is the Classmate I admire most? My reasons. (Some Examples) What can I learn from the classmate。步驟二：圍繞中心，列出寫作提綱。步驟二：圍繞中心，列出寫作提綱。4有幾個(gè)可以遵循的規(guī)律，供大家參考：1、在整篇文章中，努力避免只是用一、兩個(gè)句式，要靈活運(yùn)用各種句式。試著通過改造低級(jí)句型，讓你的英語靚起來 強(qiáng)調(diào)句：可以輕松地將時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、原因、方式等類型狀語從句轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)閺?qiáng)調(diào)句。 原Li hua had saved my little sister bra

3、vely.步驟三：根據(jù)字?jǐn)?shù)要求，擴(kuò)展成篇。步驟三：根據(jù)字?jǐn)?shù)要求，擴(kuò)展成篇。改It was brave Li hua who had saved my little sister.5 倒裝句：只要句中有介詞短語或狀語從句，便可將其提前，變成倒裝句。 原He didnt finish his homework until the teacher came. with引導(dǎo)的伴隨結(jié)構(gòu)：可以將狀語從句或并列句中的其中一個(gè)分句變成with結(jié)構(gòu)。 With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in

4、 high spirits.改Not until the teacher came did he finish his work.6巧妙地使用非謂語動(dòng)詞：可以將狀語從句或并列的動(dòng)詞簡化為非謂語動(dòng)詞。 原Many teenagers sit at their computers all day long and watch their favorite TV shows.恰到好處的被動(dòng)句：適合應(yīng)用于較簡短的句子，這樣顯得語言簡潔生動(dòng)。I searched all my pockets, but nothing was found.改Many teenagers sit at their comp

5、uters all day long， watching their favorite TV shows.7感嘆句：通常用于開頭結(jié)尾活躍文章氣氛，凡是“I feel ”之類表達(dá)感情的句子皆可如此改造。 How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam. 定語從句：若定語從句中的動(dòng)詞帶有介詞，只需將介詞移至先行詞后。 原My aunt bought me a book. The title of the book is All about The USA.改My aunt bought me a book， whose titl

6、e is All about The USA.8 進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)：有時(shí)會(huì)含有一定情緒，尤其要使用always這樣的富含感情色彩的副詞。He is always asking silly questions.what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句原We had to stand there to catch the offender.改What we had to do was (to) stand there， trying to catch the offender.9“數(shù)詞+名詞”變?yōu)椤癮s many as+數(shù)詞+名詞” As many as ten years ago, my hometown used t

7、o be covered by forests.獨(dú)立主格：將主從句去掉連詞，前句動(dòng)詞變?yōu)榉衷~即可。 The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.適當(dāng)加一些不關(guān)痛癢的插入語：一些連詞、副詞可以放到句子中間充當(dāng)語氣較弱的插入語，如I guess、however、in a way、certainly、in my opinion、probably、briefly等，有時(shí)可以考慮幾個(gè)插入語連用，就更像英美人士的文章了。10省略句。如： If so， victory will be our

8、s. 由with或without引導(dǎo)的短語。如： He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. there be結(jié)構(gòu)。如：原People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food.改There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food.11在議論文中適當(dāng)運(yùn)用諺語。1） As a popular saying goes， Every coin h

9、as two sides.2） As a proverb says，Where there is a will there is a way. （有志者事竟成）eg. As a proverb says， Everything has two sides. On the one hand， physical exercise is good for your health. On the other hand， if you dont deal with it properly， it will do harm to your health. So we should look at the

10、matter from two sides.123） As a popular saying goes， A man is known by the company he keeps.（觀其交友，知其為人）4） As is known to all， No pains，no gains.（沒有苦，就沒有甜）5）Better early than late.寧早勿遲6）It is never too late to learn.學(xué)習(xí)永遠(yuǎn)不嫌晚。7）Health is better than wealth.健康勝于財(cái)富。8）Time waits for no man.時(shí)不待人。9）Knowledg

11、e is power.知識(shí)就是力量 1310）Time is money .時(shí)間就是金錢11）Progress is the activity of today and the assurance of tomorrow .進(jìn)步是今天的活動(dòng)、明天的保證。12）Success covers a multitude of blunders .成功由大量的錯(cuò)誤鑄就。13）Never leave that until tomorrow , which you can do today .今天的事不要拖到明天。14）When work is a pleasure , life is joy ! When

12、 work is duty , life is slavery .工作是一種樂趣時(shí)，生活是一種享受！工作是一種義務(wù)時(shí)，生活則是一種苦役。142、盡量使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞以增加文采：用make use of替代use，用I come up with a good idea替代I have a good idea等。用be supposed to替代should，用of importance替代important，用pay a visit to替代visit，用catch sight of替代see，153. 使用一些很有“洋味”的單詞：Thank you for sharing the

13、time with us. （用share而不用spend）Our school is located in the suburb of the city. （用is located而不用lies）Tom had his leg broken last week. （用havedone而不用broke his leg）The noise nearly drove me mad. （用drive而不用make）The way he views the world is very practical. （用view而不用look at）164、 避免重復(fù)使用同一單詞或短語：如果前文用了intere

14、sting，后文就可用a lot of fun；若前文用了clever，后文就可用smart；若前文說了a good idea后文就可說a lovely idea，等等。這樣就可以做到“別開生面”，給評(píng)判者以清新感，以避免文章陷入“千人一面”的窘境。17 遞進(jìn)關(guān)系： furthermore；moreover；further；In this way ；still； not only.but also.； not.but.； in addition (to)；etc。 轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but；even so；however；though；even though；etc。 歸納總結(jié)類：in other w

15、ords；on the whole; in sum; therefore；hence；in short； to sum up；in conclusion; in summary；etc。 強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系：in fact; especially；particularly；moreover；naturally; what is more important； in reality； indeed; in particular；etc。5、學(xué)會(huì)使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞：18 對(duì)照(不同點(diǎn))：yet; still; for all of that; notwithstanding; rather; neither . n

16、or; although; though; but; however; etc。 并列關(guān)系： and; also; as well as；either.，or.；both.and. etc。 先后次序關(guān)系：at this time; first; second; at last; previously; simultaneously; last but not least；to begin with；etc。 結(jié)果關(guān)系：accordingly; thus; consequently; thereupon; etc。 順序關(guān)系： at the outset，following this; at this time; etc。 重申關(guān)系：in other words; that is to say; as I have said; etc。19步驟四：檢查、修改、抄寫。步驟四：檢查、修改、抄寫。書寫要工整，不要讓閱卷教師看起來費(fèi)力，切忌涂改。段落清晰，讓閱卷教師容易找到要點(diǎn) 。205、做好短文改錯(cuò)。因?yàn)樽魑暮投涛母腻e(cuò)都屬于寫作題，、做好短文改錯(cuò)。因?yàn)樽魑暮投涛母腻e(cuò)都屬于寫作題，閱卷有時(shí)會(huì)結(jié)