牛津上海版中考英語(yǔ)專題復(fù)習(xí)作文專題

1、教育資源教育資源授課類型C專題一寫作高級(jí)句型默寫C專題一作文解析T能力一能力提高授課日期及時(shí)段教學(xué)內(nèi)容作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):按內(nèi)容、語(yǔ)言、組織結(jié)構(gòu)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分。內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容切題、充實(shí)、不寫廢話；意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、準(zhǔn)確、完整。語(yǔ)言：語(yǔ)言基本正確；用語(yǔ)規(guī)范、無(wú)或少見(jiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤；拼寫、大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。結(jié)構(gòu)：詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)自如；文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表達(dá)形式。中考作文打分的三個(gè)檔次和評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):A檔次的作文一般運(yùn)用了較多的連接詞、短語(yǔ)、并列、倒裝、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，審題合理、時(shí)態(tài)使用正確；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求；沒(méi)有大小寫、拼寫錯(cuò)誤。得分在18以上分B檔次的作文一般審題可以，有一定的過(guò)程描述，語(yǔ)言較流暢，

2、敘述基本完全；復(fù)合句；時(shí)態(tài)基本正確。得分在16-18分C檔次的作文一般能夠使用不同的句子，大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)使用正確，會(huì)使用些連接詞。但語(yǔ)言上可能還需要更加豐富飽滿。得分在13-15高級(jí)句型默寫、the+est+名詞+（that）+主詞+haveever+seen（known/heard/had/read,etc）themost+形容詞+名詞+（that）+主詞+haveever+seen（known/heard/had/read,etc）例句：海倫是我所看過(guò)最美麗的女孩。張老師是我曾經(jīng)遇到最仁慈的教師。二、Nothingis+erthanto+VNothingis+more+形容詞+thanto+

3、V例句：沒(méi)有比接受教育更重要的事。三、cannotemphasizetheimportanceoftoomuch.（再怎么強(qiáng)調(diào)的重要性也不為過(guò)。）例句：我們?cè)僭趺磸?qiáng)調(diào)保護(hù)眼睛的重要性也不為過(guò)。四、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V.（不可否認(rèn)的.）例句：不可否認(rèn)的，我們的生活品質(zhì)已經(jīng)每況愈下。六、Thereisnodoubtthat+句子（毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)的.）例句：毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。七、Anadvantageofisthat+句子（.的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是.）例句：使用太陽(yáng)能的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是它不會(huì)制造任何污染。八、Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子（.的原因是.）例句：我們必

4、須種樹(shù)的原因是它們能供應(yīng)我們新鮮的空氣。九、The+er+S+V,the+er+S+VThe+more+Adj+S+V,the+more+Adj+S+V（愈.愈.）例句：你愈努力，你愈進(jìn)步。我們書讀愈多，我們愈有學(xué)問(wèn)。十、By+Ving,can（借著.，.能夠.）例句：借著做運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們能夠始終保持健康。H、enable+Object（受詞）+to+V（.使.能夠.）例句：聽(tīng)音樂(lè)使我們能夠感覺(jué)輕松。十二、Thosewho（.的人.）例句：違反交通規(guī)定的人應(yīng)該受處罰。十三、Thereisnoonebut（沒(méi)有人不.）例句：沒(méi)有人不渴望上大學(xué)。十四、Thatisthereasonwhy（那就是.的原

5、因）例句：夏天很悶熱。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。十五、Since+S+過(guò)去式，S+現(xiàn)在完成式。例句：自從他上高中，他一直很用功。十六、Itpaysto+V（是值得的。）例句：幫助別人是值得的。十七、bebasedon（以.為基礎(chǔ)）例句：社會(huì)的進(jìn)步是以和諧為基礎(chǔ)的。十八、Sparenoeffortto+V（不遺余力的）例句：我們應(yīng)該不遺余力的美化我們的環(huán)境。十九、不用說(shuō)Itgoeswithoutsayingthat子句=（Itis）needlesstosay（that）子句=Itisobviousthat子句=Obviously,S.+V.例：不用說(shuō)早睡早起是值得的。二十、就我的看法；我認(rèn)為Inm

6、yopinion,=Tomymind,=AsfarasIamconcerned,=Iamoftheopinionthat子句例：就我的看法；打電動(dòng)玩具既花費(fèi)時(shí)間也有害健康。二H一、據(jù)說(shuō)Itissaid(that)子句般認(rèn)為Itisthought(that)子句大家都知道Itisknown(that)子句據(jù)報(bào)導(dǎo)Itisreported(that)子句一般預(yù)料Ttisexpected(that)子句般估計(jì)Itisestimated(that)子句般相信Itisbelieved(that)子句例：一般相信閱讀增加我們的知識(shí)、擴(kuò)大我們的心胸。二十二、然而，很可惜的是However,itisapityt

7、hat子句例：然而彳艮可惜的是他總是臨時(shí)抱佛腳。二十三、enable+Object(受詞)+to+V(.使.能夠.)例句：聽(tīng)音樂(lè)使我們能夠感覺(jué)輕松。二十四、Onnoaccountcanwe+V(我們絕對(duì)不能)例句：我們絕對(duì)不能忽略知識(shí)的價(jià)值。二十五、Itistime+S+過(guò)去式(該是的時(shí)候了)例句：該是有關(guān)當(dāng)局采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧﹣?lái)解決交通問(wèn)題的時(shí)候了。二十六隨著人口的增加Withtheincrease/growthofthepopulation,隨著科技的進(jìn)步,Withtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology,在這信息的年代扮演重要的角色。Intheageofinforma

8、tionandcommunication,_plays_an_importantrole.實(shí)例分析:HealthyLife(4.5+2.5+2=9)(A)Now,manystudentsarelikeonlyonekindsoffood.Itnotright.Itwillleadtomanykindofproblems,suchasputtingonweight,heartattack.Sobalanceddiefisveryimportantforourhealth.Ihavesomesuggestaboutbalanceddiet.First,weshouldeatfourfoods:gr

9、ainsregetablesmeat、milkproductsandfruit.It'sgoodforourhealth.Second,dontstopeatingjusttoloseweight.Itisharmfulforus.Keepagoodbalanceddietisgoodforyourfuture.(B)Now,manystudentsprefertoeatonlyonecertainkindoffood.Itisnotreasonable.Itwillleadtomanykindsofproblems,suchasputtingonweight,heartattack.

10、Soabalanceddietitsveryimportanttoourhealth.Withoutabalanceddiet,wecannotliveahealthylife.Ihavesomesuggestionsaboutbalanceddiet.First,weshouldeatfivefood:grainwegetablesmeat、milkproductsandfruit.It'sgoodforourhealth.Second,dontstopeatingjusttoloseweight.Itisharmfulforus.Keepingagoodbalanceddietis

11、goodforyourfuture.(C)Manystudentsprefertoeatacertainkindoffoodandtheywilleatnothingelseexceptit.Thisisabadhabit.Anunbalanceddietcancausemanyproblems,suchasbeingoverweightandcausingheartattack.Soit'simportantforyoutohaveabalanceddiet,oritwillbeharmfultoyourhealth.Ononehand,youshouldeatvariousfood

12、sfromthefivefoodgroup:grains,vegetables,fruit,milkproductsandmeat.Ontheotherhand,youhadbettereatlessfastfood.Thoughfastfoodiseasytogetandtasty,itcontainstoomanycalories.Inshort,ifyoufollowtheadviceabove,youcanenjoyfoodthatisnotonlydeliciousbutalsohealthiertoo.分析總結(jié)：如何審題立意：認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合理：1.寫什么（題目，參考問(wèn)題）2.重點(diǎn)

13、寫什么（提示問(wèn)題）3.時(shí)態(tài)（參考問(wèn)題）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Everybodyneedshelp"Usethefollowingpointsasareference.以下問(wèn)題僅供參考）?Doyouagreethateverybodyneedshelp?時(shí)態(tài)：般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）?Haveyouevergothelpfromothers?（Tellyourexperiences.）重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）?Whatdoyoudowhenotherpeopleareintrouble?（Giveexamples.）重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）立意訓(xùn)練:請(qǐng)根據(jù)如下的作文題目，闡

14、述你的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)大概結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容:VII.Writing（寫作）：（20分）Nowadaysmanystudentsarebusywiththeirstudy.Theyseldomhelptheirparentswithhousework.Whatdoyouthinkofit?Trytoshowyouropinionsandtellyourownexperience.（現(xiàn)在，許多學(xué)生忙于學(xué)習(xí)而很少幫助家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)，你是怎么看待這種現(xiàn)象的，請(qǐng)給出自己的觀點(diǎn)及自己的經(jīng)歷。）（13年奉賢二模）94.Writeapassageon“Alettertomyheadmaster/headmistressinat

15、least60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（以“給校長(zhǎng)的一封信”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的文章。）提示：初中學(xué)習(xí)階段肯定給你留下許多的回憶。有甜美，有苦澀，這些都是寶貴的人生經(jīng)歷。在即將告別你的初中生活，請(qǐng)你以Susan的名義給你的校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，分享一件讓你最難忘的校園活動(dòng)以及提出一個(gè)你最希望學(xué)校改進(jìn)的方面。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）-14年奉賢二模VII.Writing（作文）：（共20分）94.Writingatleast60wordsonthetopic“Betterhabits,Betterlife”.（請(qǐng)你

16、以“培養(yǎng)良好習(xí)慣，打造美好生活”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）-15年奉賢二模Thefollowingquestionsareforyourreference以下信息僅供參考）：1.Whatbadhabitsdoyouhaveinyourlife?2.Howdotheyaffect（影響）yourlife?3.Howwillyouchangeyourbadhabits?提綱分類籬見(jiàn)中考作文體我和題目要求：一_議論1支I:觀點(diǎn)'4：理由，：3議）記敘文（夷敬夷設(shè)）|：什名人1：經(jīng)蛙/患醫(yī)3：ttKI

17、：觀點(diǎn)q：建istiJ精銳投育I:件幺I：Stt3：收獲Writeapassageotatleast60wordsonthetopic"Ho叼happiness（以"Howtnfindhappiness”為題寫一母不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格.）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息,否則不予評(píng)分。）-Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(短文必須包含以下要點(diǎn))4Tiat“syourviewonhappiness?Doyouagreewiththesaying.'Moneyishappinesi”?(givetworea

18、sons),Howdoourstudentsfindhappinessin/urstudyondlifu?ri精銳致育Mmm reasonssolutions ,英文提綱工Beginning；itiswidelyacceptedthai.physanimponautpaninourlife，Be虱nnin虱你認(rèn)為開(kāi)心是由么"怎樣重要）二升心對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)很重要Malnbudv說(shuō)明次點(diǎn)工認(rèn)同金錢就等于開(kāi)心嗎?happinesscan'tbeboughtwithmoneyapoorpersonwhogetslotsofloveisalwayshappyAlthough1don'

19、;thavemuchmontv1stillhaveahappylifebecauseThaveparentswhoalwaystakecaieofme,friendswhoalwayshelpmeandleacherswh。alwaysencmir里eme.HelpothersWhat'smore.,.It'scheerfultomakeprogressandgetgoodmarks.i|吊Ending:Belieseitoinot,ifyouUytofindhappiness,happinesswillbeSample：Itiswidelyacceptedthathappin

20、essplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.It'severywhereifyoutrytofindthebeautyaroundyou.Thereisasaying"Moneyishappiness"amongmanypeople,butIdon'tthinkso.First,happinesscan'tbeboughtwithmoney.Secondly,apoorpersonwhogetslotsoflovesalwayshappy.Inaddition,althoughIdon'thavemuchmon

21、ey,IstillhaveahappylifebecauseIhaveparentswhoalwaystakecareofme,friendswhoalwayshelpmeandteacherswhoalwaysencourageme.It'sfuntoplaywithfriends.It'scheerfultomakeprogressandgetgoodmarks.It'shappytohelpothers.Believeitornot,ifyoutrytofindhappiness,happinesswillbealwaysaroundyou.對(duì)名詞的修飾:可以使用

22、形容詞、定語(yǔ)從句來(lái)修飾思路二對(duì)物的修飾;顏色、形狀、位置、作用、所屬關(guān)系等等;I have a friend.1 have a cute dog with bJonde fur.人:職業(yè). 年齡、高矮笄瘦、性格等.My father doctor fat patient middle agedMy father , who is a middle-aged tat man is a doctor門精銳教育1）添加副詞Iwanttofinishmyhomework.Iwanttofinishmyhomeworkmoreandmorecarefully./fwanttofinishmyhomewo

23、rkmorecarefullythanbefore.2）運(yùn)用句型IwanttofinishmyhomeworkearliersothatIcanplay.用定聲從句修飾名證P1 likemusicnIcandancetomusic.IlikemusicthatIcandanceto.JaneismysisterMysisterisverybeautifulJaneismysisterwhoisverybeautiful.Heruns.Herunsquickly.Herunsasquicklyasdhorse,作文：假設(shè)Jay是你們班上一個(gè)很有天賦的學(xué)生，他學(xué)習(xí)很好。根據(jù)下面表格所提供的信息，寫

24、一寫對(duì)他的介紹。Jay'sinformationcardAge15yearsoldHobbiesPlayingchess,doingwordpuzzlesFavoritesubjectsMath,chemistry,physicsandEnglishGoodfeaturesCuriousandalwayshasmanynewideasGoodatcollectinginformationHasagoodmemoryFinishesclassworkquicklyLearnsnewinformationquicklyWishTobecomeascientist.Jayis15yearso

25、ld.Jayisa15yearsoldboy.Jayisa15yearshandsomeboy.Jayisa15yearshandsomeboywholikesplayingchessanddoingwordpuzzles.JayisCurious.JayiscurousaboutthingsaroundhimJayiscuriousaboutthingsaroundhimandalwayshasgoodideas.Jayisacuriousboywhoalwayswanttoexplorethingsaroundhim.Hehasgoodideasaswell.課后作業(yè)：Writeatlea

26、st60wordsonthetopic"Iwanttoinvent"（以“我想要發(fā)明"為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）（注意：1.在答題紙上將題目補(bǔ)充完整。2 .短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）Thefolloingisforreferenceonly.（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）1.Itcanbeusedto.2.1 twillbeexciting/necessary/helpful.范文1及點(diǎn)評(píng)：IWantToInventAFamilyDoctorRobotIwanttoinventafamilydoctorrobot,w

27、hichcanbeusedtocuretheillnesswithoutgoingoutoftheirhome.AsfarasI'mconcerned,itwillbeextremelyhelpfulandusefulbecauseofthefollowingreasons:First,youcanseethedoctorimmediatelyathomewhenyoufeelsickorgethurt.Itcansaveusalotoftime,especiallyinemergencysituations.Furthermore,hospitalstodayarealwaysfil

28、ledwithpatients,noteveryonecanbetakengoodcareof.However,withthehelpofourrobotdoctors,youcantalktoyourpersonaldoctoronetoonewheneveryouwant.Inshort,familydoctorrobotscanmakegreatcontributiontooursociety.精彩亮點(diǎn)分析：亮點(diǎn)一：全文巧用“first,furthermore,inshort”等連接詞，把家庭機(jī)器人醫(yī)生的好處寫的非常清晰，讓閱卷老師一目了然。亮點(diǎn)二：全文采用了定語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句等

29、多種長(zhǎng)難句，為文采分增色不少。亮點(diǎn)三：文中出現(xiàn)了"extremely,makecontributionto”這些超綱單詞及詞組，恰到好處地強(qiáng)調(diào)了家庭機(jī)器人醫(yī)生的重要性，且為文采再次進(jìn)行潤(rùn)色。范文2及點(diǎn)評(píng)：IwanttoinventatimemachineIfIhavetheabilitytoinventsomethingthatcouldmakelifebetter,thefirstthingthatcomesintomymindisatimemachine.Withitshelp,peoplecouldgobacktothepastconveniently.Weunavoidabl

30、ymakesomemistakesthatweregretsomuch,it'sfantasticifwecouldgetanotherchancetofixit.Besides,itisofgreatimportancetotheagedpeopleiftheyareabletoenjoytheiryouthforasecondtime.Althoughitsoundslikeanimpossibledreamtorealize,Istillbelievewiththerapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,myideawillbecomerea

31、litysomeday.精彩亮點(diǎn)分析：亮點(diǎn)：thefirstthingthatcomesintomind首先映入腦海的是。亮點(diǎn)二：conveniently方便地，便利地。亮點(diǎn)三：beofgreatimportance名詞結(jié)構(gòu)更高端。亮點(diǎn)四：使用beableto短語(yǔ)替換掉could,避免重復(fù)。亮點(diǎn)五：withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology隨著科學(xué)和技術(shù)的迅速發(fā)展。范文3及點(diǎn)評(píng)：IwanttoinventakindofmedicineIfyouaskmewhatIwanttoinvent?Iwillsayakindofmedicinewhichcancurecancer.Asweallknow,manypeoplesufferfromcanceranddieataveryyoungagethe