高考英語作文必背佳作必備學(xué)習(xí)

1、美式論文、報告寫作技巧 編者按：美式教育的特點即是課程內(nèi)容強調(diào)學(xué)生參與及創(chuàng)新運用，因此，報告便成了常見的考核學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)成果的方式，比如實驗報告、學(xué)期報告、專題報告、研究報告及論文（含畢業(yè)論文）等。研究生presentation 及 seminar 的機會更是占很大的比重，有些甚至占學(xué)期成績很大比例。如何完成報告、論文同時得到良好的成績，是本文提供給有志留學(xué)的有心人參考的目的。 美國大學(xué)生由於自小已養(yǎng)成自動尋找答案習(xí)慣，在啟發(fā)式的教育環(huán)境下，寫報告、論文對他們來說比較不陌生，雖然專業(yè)知識上美國學(xué)生不見得比外籍學(xué)生強，但是表達能力由於自小培養(yǎng)，加上英語能力的優(yōu)勢，常比外籍學(xué)生在報告、論文方面有較隹的

2、利基。反之中國學(xué)生比較缺乏報告寫作的訓(xùn)練，因此如果在留學(xué)過程中無法適應(yīng)美式教育會比較辛苦，其實論文、報告的寫作要領(lǐng)其實不難，只要把握技巧就可水到渠成。 通常論文由篇首(Preliminaries)，本文(Texts)以及參考資料(References)三部分構(gòu)成；而這三大部分各自內(nèi)容如下： (一) 篇首： 封面(Title) 序言(Preface) 謝詞(Acknowledge) 提要(Summary) 目錄(Tables and Appendixes) (二) 本文： 引言(Introduction) 主體，含篇(Part)、章(Chapter)、節(jié)(Section) 、以及注釋 (Foot

3、notes) (三)參考資料： 參考書目(References or Bibliography) 附錄資料(Appendix)。 進行論文或報告寫作之前，先要確定想要表達的主題，主題確定后，將其具體表達，即為題目。題目可以提供研究者： 一.研究的方向 二.研究的范圍 三.資料搜集的范圍 四.預(yù)期研究成果 通常在確定題目之後就開始找資料從事研究，建議在找資料之前最好去問教授有哪些參考資料來源可供參考引用。構(gòu)思為確定寫作大綱或 Proposal 的先前步驟， 大綱是論文、報告的骨干， Proposal 是研究的架構(gòu)、流程及范圍的說明書。如何構(gòu)思大綱或Proposal為論文、報告寫作前的必要準備工作

4、。好的論文或研究報告，要基于在完整、詳實的資料上，而參考資料除了和教授商借之外，最主要的來源就是圖書館了，一般參考資料來源可分成教科書或手冊、政府機構(gòu)的報告、科技或商業(yè)方面的雜志，及會議性質(zhì)的資料。此外現(xiàn)代的電腦資料庫也可幫助收集資料，在國外可利用學(xué)校的電腦連線資料庫尋找自己需要的資料。當(dāng)一切準備就緒，即可開始著手寫報告，一般報告還分大報告如期末、專題等報告，及小報告如 Seminar 式的報告。 就算是小報告，也至少應(yīng)含 (一)TITLE PAGES ：包含主題名稱、作者、日期 (二)Summary： 即主要的結(jié)論 (三)Introduction：包括理論背景及內(nèi)容 (四)Technical

5、 Sections：是論文的主體，為最重要的部份應(yīng)再細分為 幾個片斷。 (五)Conclusions：即扼要的結(jié)論 (六)Appendixes：復(fù)雜公式的導(dǎo)引及叁考資料和電腦程式的報表可附加在 此項 美式報告的撰寫通常要打字，兩行式，行間若有未拼完的字要以音節(jié)來連接。寫報告通常需要用到電腦，如有計算數(shù)字統(tǒng)計圖表的需求，也常會用到程式軟體如PASCAL、LOTUS，統(tǒng)計分析軟體如SAS，也是不可或缺的，電腦繪圖在今日已成為工商界及學(xué)術(shù)界的重要工具，文書處理更是最基本的要求，因此Word for Window、Powerpoint、Excel便成了頗受歡迎的工具。此外在英文語法、文法上的潤飾與修改

6、，如能請老美幫忙會比較好。 論文、報告完成后有時會需要做解說(Presentation)，用英文來講演對中國人來說算是一大挑戰(zhàn)，通常課堂講演時間為十五分鐘到三十分鐘，若是論文囗試則至少一小時。投影機及麥克風(fēng)的使用對講演的效果有很大幫助，正式講演前多預(yù)習(xí)幾次，時間宜控制適中，上臺時忌諱低頭拿著報告照念，需留意聽眾的反應(yīng)，切中主題，避免太多數(shù)字的導(dǎo)引。2004 年-2009 年高考英語滿分作文及名師評析2009 高考英語滿分作文【全國卷I 海南、寧夏】【試題回放】假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson不在家，你準備外出，請給Mrs. Wilson

7、 寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：1.外出購物2.替房東還書3.Tracy 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消 2)此事已告知Susan 3) 盡快回電注意：1. 詞數(shù)100 左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Mrs. Wilson,Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoo

8、n, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told

9、Susan about this change.Yours,Li Hua【名師點評】本文屬于提綱式要點作文，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實用性，生活型的原則。行文人稱、時態(tài)運用恰當(dāng)、準確，各個要點間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細組織語言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山?！窘K卷】【試題回放】鼠標是計算機時代最佳的人機交互工具之一。它極大地方便了人們的計算機操作。但是，過分依賴鼠標的習(xí)慣也會帶來一些不利影響。請你以鼠標為切入點，根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文。鼠標

10、的必要性對多數(shù)人來說，操作計算機，上網(wǎng)沖浪鼠標的便捷性點擊、移動、插入、拷貝、刪除編輯文本，搜索信息收發(fā)郵件，選購商品點播音樂，下載電影如果過分依賴鼠標 (請考生結(jié)合自身感受，列舉兩到三點)注意：1.對所給要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2.詞數(shù)150 左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)。3.作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.For most people, its almost impossible to operate

11、 a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us

12、 a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesnt always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answe

13、rs make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.【名師點評】本文為提綱式說明文體裁，所選內(nèi)容與我們生活相關(guān)，考生只要把所給要點逐條陳述，適度發(fā)揮，不要逐條翻譯即可。文章說理清楚，語言流暢，句式表達多樣，用詞恰當(dāng)、準確。不失為一篇滿分作文。2008 高考英語滿分作文【全國卷】【試題回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注

14、三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：1、 自我介紹;2、 祝賀蘇琳生日;3、 感謝工作人員;4、 索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：1、詞數(shù)100 左右;2、可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3、開頭語已為你寫好。Dear Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to l

15、earn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US

16、.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly,Li Hua【名師點評】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點如下：1.自我介紹;2.信息來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結(jié)尾。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運用合理，結(jié)

17、合了簡單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的 2.express v.表達 3.give birth to v.產(chǎn)生，生育好句 Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達我的

18、感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。評析：定語從句的使用。【江蘇卷】【試題回放】實現(xiàn)有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關(guān)系，不僅要善于言表，更要學(xué)會傾聽。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演講稿。為何傾聽表示尊重，增進理解，建立良好的人際關(guān)系誰來傾聽家長傾聽孩子理解孩子，消除代溝，老師傾聽學(xué)生了解學(xué)生，滿足需求，同學(xué)相互傾聽增進友誼，互幫互學(xué)，怎樣傾聽(請考生聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容，列舉兩至三點。)注意：1、 對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2、 詞數(shù)150 左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

19、3、 演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。Good afternoon, everyone.The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand

20、 them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each

21、 other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though

22、you dont like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!【名師點評】這是一篇感情真摯、熱情洋溢的演講稿，文中大量運用排比句型，不但準確流暢地表達出題目中所提供的信息，而且體現(xiàn)出作者熟練運用英語的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)合句式，將傾聽的對象及其作用闡述得淋漓盡致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句議論應(yīng)如何傾聽，則更進一步地增強了這篇演說稿的說服力。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 1.promote

23、v .促進 2. interpersonal adj.人際的 3. generation gap. 代溝4. open-minded adj. 虛心的好句 1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.同學(xué)之間應(yīng)該互相傾聽，這樣他們可以互相學(xué)習(xí)和幫助，也會形成友誼。評析：復(fù)雜句的組合，被動句的使用。2. What I want to stress is that e

24、ach of us should listen to others.我想強調(diào)的是我們每個人都應(yīng)該更多的傾聽他人。評析：復(fù)合句的使用?！竞本怼俊驹囶}回放】假設(shè)你是卜曼宜，你購買了一部某外國公司生產(chǎn)的手機，因有質(zhì)量問題，要求該公司更換。請根據(jù)下列要點，用英文寫一封電子郵件。要點：1. 問題：手機不響鈴，不能發(fā)短信;該產(chǎn)品已售完，無法更換;型號新，無配件，無法維修。 2.要求：公司應(yīng)盡快予以更換。注意：1. 詞數(shù)為100 左右;2. 參考詞匯：配件 spare part;3. 電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好(不計入你所寫詞數(shù));4.已給出的電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。Dear Sir，I

25、am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didnt ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a ne

26、w one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of t

27、he same model within a month.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Bu Manyi【名師點評】本文內(nèi)容要點齊全，語言豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，如頭兩句說明了購買手機后發(fā)現(xiàn)故障的情況，中間部分說明了無法維修而必須讓公司更換手機的原委，最后明確提出自己的要求，明白流暢，將題目所提出的要點全部表達清楚，較好的完成了任務(wù)。全文以一般過去時為基調(diào)，結(jié)合主動語態(tài)與被動語態(tài)，并使用了so, but, therefore 等連接詞，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整嚴密。固定短語，如be sold out ,at least, had no choi

28、ce but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的語言顯得地道而精煉。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.絕望的 3. consideration n.體諒好句 To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.令我失望的是，他說因為在中國是新款手機，所以沒有配件來修

29、理。評析：復(fù)雜句的組織; to my disappointment, 常用短語。2007 高考英語滿分作文【全國卷II】【試題回放】一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：1.地點：距白山入口處500米;2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放; 5.歡迎預(yù)定。注意：1.詞數(shù)100 左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Ba

30、ishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath servic

31、e. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【

32、名師點評】本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 1. provide v.提供 2. convenience n.便利好句 All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利?！景不站怼俊驹?/p>

33、題回放】假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給她寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：l 表示贊成。l 提出你喜歡的欄目。l 簡要說明理由。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100 左右。2. 新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。3. 適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。4. 參考欄目：欄目columnDear Mr. Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazin

34、e together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, its necess

35、ary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractiv

36、e that you absolutely cant miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I cant list more. I really cant wait to read that magazine!Yours faithfully,Li Hua【名師點評】這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省今年的英語作文分數(shù)普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標準的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來

37、的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy 的大膽運用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect! 況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。【江蘇卷】【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學(xué)校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項活動。教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：u 每天鍛煉一小時u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一輩子請你根據(jù)以

38、上提示，用英語準備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛?。注意?、 發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2、 詞數(shù)：120 左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。3、 參考詞匯：陽光體育活動a national student sports program;教育部the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone,The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and

39、 aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.-11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can wo

40、rk healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study rec

41、ords. So every one of you, join the program now!Thank you!【名師點評】本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點之一。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 1.wage v.發(fā)動 2.aim v.瞄準 3. advocate v.提倡好句 1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and ca

42、n work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我們每天做一個小時的運動，能夠健康地活50 年。評析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態(tài)動詞。2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records.如果我們不進行運動，我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績就不會很好。評析：虛擬語氣?！局貞c卷】【試題回放】據(jù)報道，7 歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce 得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy 收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款

43、。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：自我介紹得知的情況表示鼓勵打算為她做什么祝她早日康復(fù)注意：1. 信的格式已為你寫好2. 信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實情況。3. 詞數(shù)100 左右。4. 請在答題卡上作答。Dear Amy,Im Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have

44、 a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! Im sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that wa

45、y, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.Yours,Li Hua【名師點評】本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I am sorry to hear that., It is reported that.等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 1.realize v.意識到 2.promise v.允諾 3.donate v.捐贈好句 1. I am sorry to hear that you g

46、ot the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。評析：which 引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句。2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧!評析：擲地有聲，語言準確。2006 高考英語滿分作文【全國卷I】【試題回放】假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.個人情況：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷 2.個人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地

47、情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)注意：詞數(shù)100 左右，開頭語已為你寫好;可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者volunteerDear Sir / Madam:I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a

48、volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【名師點評】這篇文章寫得非常流暢，把握了所有要點，同時以“

49、我”為中心，詳細說明了自己對志愿者工作的結(jié)合，以此來表達自己的決心。由于用詞恰當(dāng)，這種表現(xiàn)就比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運用也不錯。【安徽卷】【試題回放】假設(shè)你是李華，作為選派的交流學(xué)生在美國某中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown 家里，剛回到國內(nèi)。回國后，你發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫了一封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內(nèi)容如下：感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助一本英語詞典忘記帶回詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴詞典很可能丟在臥室的書架上郵資自己付注意：1、詞數(shù)100 左右;信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。2、可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫2、參考詞匯：郵資-postageDe

50、ar Mr. Brown,I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you makeme feel warm. Welcome to my country ,Ill show you around in turn.However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift fro

51、m my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and Ill be very grateful if you show your warmness again.Im eager to receive your reply.Yours,Li hua【名師點評】本文作為信件，首先其格式是正確的。既然是應(yīng)用文，那

52、么文章的意圖就要明確表示出來，本文在表達作者寫作意圖的時候，情真意切，用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語從句，還采用了疑問句，讓句式變化而不呆板?！局貞c卷】【試題回放】加拿大高中生David 在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)Internet 上登出啟事notice，希望結(jié)識一位中國朋友，以便學(xué)習(xí)中國的語言，文化culture。假設(shè)你是李華，請在看到這則啟事后，用英文給David 發(fā)一封電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：你怎樣得知David 的愿望你愿意成為他的朋友你打算如何幫助他你盼望他的回復(fù)注意：1、電子郵件的格式已為你寫好2、字數(shù)：100 詞左右3、在答題卡上作答Dear David,Im a student from C

53、hina and have noticed your requirement on line. You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture. Maybe Im your good choice.China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us

54、better.There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested. Ill be looking forward to your reply. Ill show you around our great China if you come to China.Yours sincerely ,Li hua【名師點評】本文的語言非常流暢，我們可以看到，本文雖沒有華麗的辭藻，但是語言的組織和層次感很強。同時連詞的使用，如not only, but also ,讓文章的重點突出，同時也起到了強調(diào)和吸引注意的目的。2005 高考英語滿

55、分作文全國卷(四川、云南、陜西等地區(qū)用)【試題回放】假設(shè)你是李華，最近國內(nèi)一家英文報紙正在討論北京動物園是否應(yīng)遷出市區(qū)。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報寫一封信，反映討論結(jié)果。贊成遷出： 反對遷出：1.游客多，交通堵塞 1.建于1906 年，中外聞名 2.郊區(qū)環(huán)境好 2.搬遷易造成動物死亡注意：1.詞數(shù)100 字左右，信的開頭已為你寫好。2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯： 郊區(qū)suburbDear Editor ,Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the

56、 Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students ar

57、e againstthe idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is wellknown at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .Whats more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.Yours truly,Li Hua【名師點評】這篇文章寫得還是比較精彩的。要點表達得完整而準確，清楚展示了主題。先提出了文章的主題，進而列出了贊成的觀點及其相關(guān)的理由，同時在其后又給出了反面的觀點，論據(jù)十分充足。文章