新教材高中英語(yǔ)Unit1AnewstartPeriod5Writing練習(xí)外研版必修第一冊(cè)

1、Period 5 Writing 應(yīng)用文寫作日記技法指導(dǎo)日記是一種常用記事文體，可分為記事型、議論型、描寫型和抒情型。寫英語(yǔ)日記應(yīng)注意以下要點(diǎn)：(1) 一事一記，要選擇當(dāng)天感受最深刻、最有意義的事件來(lái)描述，不要寫成流水賬。(2) 日記的內(nèi)容多是親身經(jīng)歷和耳聞目睹的事情，所以要用第一人稱來(lái)寫。(3) 日記多是記述當(dāng)天發(fā)生過的事情， 因此常使用過去時(shí)， 但使用時(shí)必須靈活掌握。 例如：進(jìn)行時(shí)可用于描寫當(dāng)時(shí)正在進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作，馬上要發(fā)生的事件，以及在某事、某動(dòng)作正在進(jìn) 行當(dāng)中，又發(fā)生了另外一個(gè)事件或動(dòng)作；描寫天氣、景色等，為了描寫生動(dòng)，也可以使用 現(xiàn)在時(shí)，以表現(xiàn)當(dāng)時(shí)的情景；文末，發(fā)表感想或評(píng)論可用現(xiàn)在時(shí)或

2、將來(lái)時(shí)。(4) 日記應(yīng)條理清楚，寫出真實(shí)感。(5) 注意格式，英文日記通常由書端和正文兩個(gè)部分組成。書端包括日期、星期和天氣，左上角是日期和星期，右上角寫當(dāng)天的天氣情況。正文寫在星期和日期的正下方，可以頂格寫，也可以內(nèi)縮3 至 5 個(gè)字母的空間。(6) 在日期和天氣的下一行中間可以寫上日記小標(biāo)題，也可以不寫標(biāo)題。(7) 在句式上，盡量使用簡(jiǎn)單句，以防繁雜，造成句型、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。經(jīng)典句式1 常用開頭句式：It is sunny and very hot today.今天天氣晴朗，非常炎熱。Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sen

3、t me presents.昨天是我的生日，所以有幾位同學(xué)送我禮物。It is the second day of our summer holiday.今天是暑假的第二天。2 常用主體段句式：On this day, all the family members gather together at home to celebrate this special occasion.在這一天，家庭成員歡聚一堂，慶祝這一特殊時(shí)刻。In the afternoon, I watched TV at home.下午，我在家看電視。My classmates are all friendly and h

4、elpful. I was very impressed with .我的同學(xué)都很友好，對(duì)我也是很有幫助的。我對(duì)留下了深刻印象。When it came to the question answer period, I couldnt wait to ask him some questions, and he answered them with great interest and patience.當(dāng)問答時(shí)間到來(lái)時(shí)，我迫不及待地問他一些問題，他帶著極大的興趣和耐心回答了它們。3 常用結(jié)尾句式：However, this special day left a deep impression

5、 on me.然而，這個(gè)特別的日子卻給我留下了深刻的印象。All in all, its a wonderful day today.總之，今天是美好的一天。To sum up, the above mentioned rules are the very duties of a student.總而言之，上述規(guī)則就是一個(gè)學(xué)生應(yīng)盡的責(zé)任。典例演練假設(shè)你是李華，今天是你上高中的第一天，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇日記來(lái)記錄高中生活第一天的情況。內(nèi)容包括：1 學(xué)校的總體情況；2 同學(xué)和老師的情況；3 你的感受。注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右 （ 開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） ；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)

6、，以使行文連貫。MondaySeptember 2 FineIt s Mondaytoday . 精彩范文 MondaySeptember 2 FineIt s Mondaytoday . It is my first day at senior high. My new school is much larger than my previous one, and the classrooms are amazing with a computer in each. My classmates are all friendly and helpful. Wehelped each other

7、 to find the dormitories.Whats more, I was very impressed by my teachers different teaching methods. At the first lesson, I felt nervous at first, but I soon felt relaxed after our teacherasked us to introduce ourselves to each other. I like my new school very much. I thinkI can make great progress

8、in this school.總評(píng) 這是一篇記敘型的日記。結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，中心突出，有選擇地記錄了當(dāng)天的見聞 人或事 和感受，并加以分析和評(píng)論。完成了題目規(guī)定的全部任務(wù)，達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。同時(shí)，該文內(nèi)容豐富，語(yǔ)句流暢，使用了新學(xué)的語(yǔ)法和句式，學(xué)以致用。 亮點(diǎn)呈現(xiàn) (1)My new school is much larger than my previous one使用了比較級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)，使表達(dá)更準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)。(2) 過渡詞 Whats more 的使用使文章連貫自然、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。(3)be impressed by 和 make great progress 短語(yǔ)的使用令文章增色不少。跟蹤演練假設(shè)你是李

9、華，剛上高中一周左右。請(qǐng)你按以下內(nèi)容寫一篇日記，簡(jiǎn)單記錄你的學(xué)校、老師和自己的情況：1 有 60 個(gè)班， 3,500 多名學(xué)生；2 教室配有電腦；3老師友好熱情，教學(xué)方法與初中截然不同，上課方式很有趣；4 與同學(xué)相處融洽，積極參加各種課外活動(dòng)。注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右 ( 開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)) ；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Tuesday March 2 FineI ve been at Senior High school for more than a week.精彩范文Tuesday March 2 FineI ve been at Senior High scho

10、ol for more than a week My new school is a famous school with a long history, covering an area of three times as big as our Junior High school. There are 60 classes and over 3,500 students in my school. Its amazing that every room has a computer. Our teachers are enthusiastic and friendly. Their tea

11、ching methods are interesting and nothing like those of our previous teachers.Im getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in after school activities like football, basketball, volleyball and so on. I like my Senior High school life.課外拓展閱讀一一中國(guó)優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化專題練閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容(1個(gè)

12、單詞)或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。Situated in the Haidian District, northwest of Beijing, the Summer Palace is 15kilometers away from the downtown area. Being the _1_ (large) _and most well一preserved royal garden in China, it _2_ (great)_influences Chinese horticulture(園藝)and landscape with _3_ (it) famous natural vie

13、ws and the works of humankind.Originally _4_ (name) Qingyi Yuan or the Garden of Clear Ripples, theSummerPalace was first constructed in 1750. It later _5_ (become) the main residence of royal members at the end of the Qing Dynasty. However, like most of the gardens in Beijing, the Summer Palace _6_

14、 (destroy) by fire and was razed to the groundby the Anglo French Allied Forces. Rebuilt in 1886, it was supposed to serve _7_a summer resort for the Empress Dowager Cixi. In 1900, the Summer Palace sufferedanother hit by the Eight Power Allied Forces. Then the government spent two years_8_ (repair) it. In 1924, it was open to _9_ public. The Summer Palace was added to the World Heritage Sites by UNESCO in 1998, and became one of the first national AAAAA tourist _10_ (spot) in China.1 . 2. 3. .8.9.10.答案：1.largest6. was destroyed2.greatly 3.its7.as 8.d9.the5