英語考試作文-【高分必備】實例講解如何避免GRE寫作中的中式思維

1、英語考試作文【高分必備】實例講解如何避免GRE!作中 的中式思維對很多中國GREt生來說，考試中的寫作部分實際上更對的是一個翻譯過程，如何把思想中的中文轉(zhuǎn)化成現(xiàn)實中的英文是考生在GRE!作中最關(guān)心的問題，也是學(xué)生們首要應(yīng)該解決的問題。但是很多考生受思維定式的影響，在英文寫作中套用中文思維，往往寫出一些表達(dá)和意思都讓老外考官覺得別扭的中式英文，從而丟失了不少分?jǐn)?shù)。如何在GRE!作中避免中式思維，下面就通過 實例為大家做一些講解。1 、 Original: If we agree to say that school offersus the best book knowledge acquisi

2、tion then our society offers us the best surviving techniques in a hard way.Revised: If we agree that school offers the best method for the acquisition of book knowledge, then our society offers us the best method for acquiring commonsense or “ street smartsAgree to say that 表達(dá)中式化，只需要agree that 即可 ;

3、the best book knowledge acquisition 改為 the best method for the acquisition of book knowledge（ 學(xué)校給我們提供了獲取書本知識的最好方法） 更為恰當(dāng)，同樣后面的the best survivingtechniques 改為 the best method for acquiring common sense, 加上street marks（街頭智慧）給文章的GRE司匯增添色彩。2 、 Original: They can spend more time studying education and com

4、munication to improve their role as a mother, wife and daughter.Revised: They can also decide to spend more time studying, education themselves, in order to improve themselves in their roles as mothers, wives and daughters.原句中 studying education and communication 的說法中式化， 不符合英語的表述，應(yīng)該為 studying ， educ

5、ating themselves 。除了詞語表達(dá)，此句中還存在其他問題，如名詞單復(fù)數(shù)的使用：不是提高他們的角色，而是提高他們自身以扮演好母親角色。還有，女性不止一個人。很多人都在扮演母親角色，role和 mother 應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)，故將improve their role as a mother 改為improve themselves in their roles as mother;同樣，為保持一致， wife 和 daughter 也可用復(fù)數(shù)，原文中wife 的復(fù)數(shù)寫法有誤，應(yīng)該是 wives。3 、 Original ： If you can get the point of commun

6、icationby watching TV ， will you.?Revised ： If one can learn about communicating from television ， will you.?原句的 get the point of communication by watching TV 表達(dá)不清，讓人難以理解，應(yīng)該是指“從電視上學(xué)習(xí)交際”： learnabout communicating from television.以上幾種常見的中式英文的寫作現(xiàn)象，希望各位考生都能夠有所了解，并結(jié)合平時的練習(xí)準(zhǔn)備學(xué)會避免這種思維方式和表達(dá)上的中式英文，寫出真正地道的GRE乍文，拿到作文高分。TIPS: GREf作應(yīng)