英語作文講評（描寫地理位置的說明文）

1、關(guān)于地方、關(guān)于地方、景點(diǎn)介紹景點(diǎn)介紹荷塘月色.mp3l人口人口：have/with a population of., the population of is, percent of the population arel New Zealand has a population of about 3.8 million people, of which about fourteen percent are Maoril Ireland has a young population , with forty four percent of the total population under

2、 the age of 25.l面積面積：cover/have/with an area of., take up, the area/size of is環(huán)境環(huán)境：with green hills and beautiful rivers, be surrounded by green trees and beautiful flowers氣候：氣候：neither too cold nor too hot，the climate varies from place to placeThe climate of the British Isles is mild with a lot of

3、rain.The coldest month is February , when the temperature can be as low/high as v二、地位和評價(jià)二、地位和評價(jià)v1. The cathedral is famous for the height of its tower, which is without doubt the highest and handsome in England .v2. You will never regret if you pay a visit to it .v3. It is really a great feast for y

4、our eyes. v4. A trip to China will make you know more about it besides/ as well as/ in addition to/ apart from its culture and history.v5. Youll be rewarded not only by/with the view of,but also byPracticev蘇州位于上海西面蘇州位于上海西面50英里處，人口五百多萬，英里處，人口五百多萬，占地占地8488平方公里。平方公里。vSuzhou is located /is situated/lies

5、 50 miles (to the) west of Shanghai , covering an area of 8488 square kilometers , with a population of over 5 million.n鐘祥一中坐落在南湖湖畔，全校擁有師生近四千鐘祥一中坐落在南湖湖畔，全校擁有師生近四千余人，一年四季被綠樹紅花環(huán)繞著，是一個風(fēng)景余人，一年四季被綠樹紅花環(huán)繞著，是一個風(fēng)景如畫的地方。如畫的地方。nLocated on the bank of the South Lake, No.1 middle school of Zhongxiang has a popul

6、ation of nearly 4,000, including teachers and students. Surrounded by green trees and beautiful flowers all the year round, it is really picturesque(風(fēng)景如畫的風(fēng)景如畫的) all the time. 整體結(jié)構(gòu)分布整體結(jié)構(gòu)分布l Para 1 總體介紹/位置，面積、人口l Para 2 周邊環(huán)境，交通狀況，歷史，名勝古跡，本地特色，風(fēng)土人情l Para 3 針對描述，結(jié)合寫作要求進(jìn)行結(jié)尾。語言語言 1涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn) 2運(yùn)用靈活的表達(dá)方式，長短句結(jié)合

7、； 運(yùn)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，盡力使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯 3 有效地使用語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 4 書寫工整，卷面整潔l 澳大利亞位于最小的大洲澳大利亞位于最小的大洲大洋洲，是世界第六大國家。大洋洲，是世界第六大國家。它是一個以干旱氣候?yàn)橹鞯膰?，只有少部分沿海地區(qū)有它是一個以干旱氣候?yàn)橹鞯膰?，只有少部分沿海地區(qū)有充足的雨量。它由六個州組成，其中墨爾本充足的雨量。它由六個州組成，其中墨爾本(Melbourne)、悉尼悉尼(Sydney)是最大的兩個城市。它以明媚的陽光、數(shù)是最大的兩個城市。它以明媚的陽光、數(shù)不清的牛羊和奇特的野生動植物而著名，世界各地的游客不清的牛羊和奇特的野生動

8、植物而著名，世界各地的游客來到這里體驗(yàn)它獨(dú)特的美麗。來到這里體驗(yàn)它獨(dú)特的美麗。l 總面積：總面積：7,686,850 square kilometersl 人口：約人口：約2,000萬萬l 注意：要有標(biāo)題，介紹必須包括所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不要注意：要有標(biāo)題，介紹必須包括所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條翻譯成英語。逐條翻譯成英語。_ nLocated in the smallest continentOceania，Australia is the sixth largest country in the world。 It covers a total area of 7,686,850 square

9、 kilometers with a population of about 20 million. It is a mainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have adequate rainfall. It is made up of six states，of which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities. Because it is famous for its bright sunshine，countless sheep and cattle and its u

10、nique wildlife，tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its beautiful scenery.澳大利亞位于最小的大洲澳大利亞位于最小的大洲大洋洲，是世界大洋洲，是世界第六大國家總面積：第六大國家總面積：7,686,850 square kilometers 人口：約人口：約2,000萬萬1、Covering an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers , Australia , whose population is 20 million , is the sixth largest c

11、ountry in the world , situated on the smallest continent , Oceania .（李翔）2、Australia , the sixth largest country in the world , lies on the smallest continent , Oceania . It covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers , with only a population of 20 million .（韓雨璁）3 Covering an area of 7,686,850 squa

12、re kilometers makes it the sixth biggest country in the world.(彭珊) 4 Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of 20 million, which makes it the sixth biggest country in the world.(王麗娟) Rain seldom falls on the land except for some areas along the seaside ， so most pa

13、rts of the country are very dry and hot all the year around .（楊揚(yáng)），它是一個以干旱氣候?yàn)橹鞯膰?，只有少部分沿海地區(qū)它是一個以干旱氣候?yàn)橹鞯膰?，只有少部分沿海地區(qū)有充足的雨量。有充足的雨量。它由六個州組成，其中墨爾本它由六個州組成，其中墨爾本(Melbourne)、悉尼、悉尼(Sydney)是最大的兩個城市是最大的兩個城市 It consists of / is made up of six states, of which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest .它以明媚的陽光、數(shù)不清的牛羊

14、和奇特的野生動植物它以明媚的陽光、數(shù)不清的牛羊和奇特的野生動植物而著名，世界各地的游客來到這里體驗(yàn)它獨(dú)特的美麗。而著名，世界各地的游客來到這里體驗(yàn)它獨(dú)特的美麗。 6、There are warm sunshine , a good many cattle and countless sheep as well as special wild animals and plants , which have appealed to the tourists all over the world to enjoy / experience its unique view .（李絲絲） 7、Its u

15、niversally acknowledged that Australia is not only famous for its warm sunshine and a good many cattle and sheep , but also is home to a rich diversity of fantastic wild animals and plants .（熊曼婷） 8、The warm sunshine , countless cattle and sheep as well as many other strange wild animals and plants m

16、ake it one of the most famous country , attracting a great many people from all over the world to experience its charm of nature.（孫安安） 9、When you come there , you are served/ rewarded not only with its lovely sunshine but also by the numerous sheep and cattle as well as unusual wild animals and plan

17、ts .（洪勝男） 10. Having so beautiful scenery , it attracts hundreds of thousands of tourists throughout the world to come here , where they can have a feast for their minds as well as their eyes .（李翔） 11. It is also said to be one of the most suitable place to live in.(崔雅倩) 12. It is a fascinating plac

18、e marked out for tourists.(謝千馳)補(bǔ)充語句o Having been separated from other continents for millions of years , Australia has many plants and animals that cant be found anywhere else in the world .How to polish your composition?n應(yīng)用定語從句nAustralia is made up of six states, of which Melbourne and Sydney are t

19、he two biggest cities.nWith結(jié)構(gòu)作定語nIt covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers , with only a population of 20 million.n分詞作狀語nSituated on the smallest continent ,Oceania, Australia is the six largest country in the world.nHaving been separated from other continents for millions of years , Australia has many plants and animals that cant be found anywher