高三英語寫作成績演示教學(xué)

1、高三英語寫作成績卷面整潔。卷面整潔干凈甚至比準(zhǔn)確，通順，卷面整潔。卷面整潔干凈甚至比準(zhǔn)確，通順，簡介更重要。因?yàn)檎麧嵏蓛艚o閱卷人精神上簡介更重要。因?yàn)檎麧嵏蓛艚o閱卷人精神上帶來愉悅，相對(duì)而言，分?jǐn)?shù)自然要給得高一帶來愉悅，相對(duì)而言，分?jǐn)?shù)自然要給得高一些。些。 為了幫助同學(xué)們?cè)谄綍r(shí)寫作練習(xí)的時(shí)候?yàn)榱藥椭瑢W(xué)們?cè)谄綍r(shí)寫作練習(xí)的時(shí)候時(shí)刻牢記這些寫作的基本要領(lǐng)，特編順口溜時(shí)刻牢記這些寫作的基本要領(lǐng)，特編順口溜如下：細(xì)審題，巧構(gòu)思，列要點(diǎn)，防遺漏。如下：細(xì)審題，巧構(gòu)思，列要點(diǎn)，防遺漏。寫日記，同漢語；書信，通知格式要牢記。寫日記，同漢語；書信，通知格式要牢記?？辞鍒D表細(xì)梳理，寫人記事按順序；完稿后看清圖表

2、細(xì)梳理，寫人記事按順序；完稿后查遺漏，整潔干凈莫忘記。查遺漏，整潔干凈莫忘記。 二, 高考英語書面表達(dá)高分策略：從遣詞，造句，謀篇三個(gè)方面分析。 二二, 高考英語書面表達(dá)高分策略：從遣高考英語書面表達(dá)高分策略：從遣詞，造句，謀篇三個(gè)方面分析。詞，造句，謀篇三個(gè)方面分析。 遣詞的原則：使用高等級(jí)詞匯及短語遣詞的原則：使用高等級(jí)詞匯及短語, 如如果僅僅記住幾個(gè)簡單基礎(chǔ)的詞匯果僅僅記住幾個(gè)簡單基礎(chǔ)的詞匯,而且一味而且一味的重復(fù)低水平的英語知識(shí)點(diǎn)的重復(fù)低水平的英語知識(shí)點(diǎn),還遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)沒有達(dá)還遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)沒有達(dá)到大學(xué)的入學(xué)要求。這就要求考生在平時(shí)的到大學(xué)的入學(xué)要求。這就要求考生在平時(shí)的訓(xùn)練和考試當(dāng)中，有意識(shí)的強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練

3、和考試當(dāng)中，有意識(shí)的強(qiáng)化“復(fù)雜，高復(fù)雜，高級(jí)級(jí)”這兩個(gè)概念，使自己的作文能力區(qū)別于這兩個(gè)概念，使自己的作文能力區(qū)別于普通學(xué)生的作文，使自己一下子就站在一個(gè)普通學(xué)生的作文，使自己一下子就站在一個(gè)比別人高的位置上，充分顯示自己的實(shí)力。比別人高的位置上，充分顯示自己的實(shí)力。 平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)過程中注意總結(jié)各種各樣的詞匯。平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)過程中注意總結(jié)各種各樣的詞匯。以描述人物的詞匯為例：以描述人物的詞匯為例： 表達(dá)人物愛憎感情：表達(dá)人物愛憎感情： like, love, be interested in, be fond of hate, dislike, be tired of, lose interest in

4、 happy, excited, pleased, satisfied, angry, sad, worried, disappointed, terrified, mad, frightened 介紹人物的影響及人們對(duì)人的評(píng)價(jià)：介紹人物的影響及人們對(duì)人的評(píng)價(jià)： He became famous for his new theory. The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. We regard Li Fei as our model. Lei Feng has been praised for his communist

5、spirit. People spoke highly of him and all respected him. 常見描述人物性格，外貌和身體狀況等的詞語常見描述人物性格，外貌和身體狀況等的詞語 good-looking /funny-looking /strong-looking /ugly-looking /dirty-looking /ordinary-looking /blue-eyed /white-eyed /warm-hearted /light-hearted /kind-hearted /absent-minded /tall /short /beautiful /pret

6、ty /lovely /naughty/ be blind /lame in /be in good or poor condition/ healthy/ fine/ well /strong-tempered /bad-tempered /near-sighted /far-sighted /foolish /stupid /silly /clever /smart /wise /bright / diligent /intelligent /lazy /hard working, etc. 造句的原則：句式多變，語法活用，句子造句的原則：句式多變，語法活用，句子是表達(dá)一個(gè)完整意思的最小當(dāng)

7、位，所以造句是表達(dá)一個(gè)完整意思的最小當(dāng)位，所以造句能力在英文寫作中是非常重要的。好的英語能力在英文寫作中是非常重要的。好的英語句子能夠生動(dòng)，形象，準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)內(nèi)容。所句子能夠生動(dòng)，形象，準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)內(nèi)容。所以要想寫出漂亮的書面表達(dá)，必須從寫好句以要想寫出漂亮的書面表達(dá)，必須從寫好句子開始。子開始。 英語基本句型及造句英語基本句型及造句: 主語主語+謂語謂語+狀語狀語(介詞介詞,名詞短語或從名詞短語或從句句) The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west. We get up early every morning. The meeting la

8、sted 2 hours. 主語主語+系動(dòng)詞系動(dòng)詞+形容詞形容詞 Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth. He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed. Your explanation sounds reasonable. 主語主語+不及物動(dòng)詞不及物動(dòng)詞+副詞副詞 This kind of wine drinks well and sells well. The suit wears well. Glass breaks easily. 主語主語+謂語謂語+介詞介詞+賓語

9、賓語 We all agreed on the terms. He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters. All these things are to be answered for. 主語主語+謂語謂語+直接賓語直接賓語 I want your promise. Have your fixed my watch? This factory produces 1000 cars a week. 主語主語+謂語謂語+間接賓語間接賓語+直接賓語直接賓語 He paid me a visit yesterday. He owe

10、d me 50 yuan. He wrote his family a letter yesterday. 主語 + 謂語 + 賓語 + 賓補(bǔ) (to do) I will get someone to repair the recorder for you. I didnt mean to hurt you. He invited me to teach at a well-known university. 主語+謂語+賓語+賓補(bǔ) (do) I often hear her sing the song. The boss made workers work 15 hours a day.

11、Dont forget to have him come. 主語+謂語+現(xiàn)在分詞 I heard her singing in the next room. We could feel our heats beating fast. Did you observe the birds flying around the trees? 主語+謂語+過去分詞 I must have my watch repaired. We must get he task finished on time. Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybod

12、y. 主語+謂語+賓語(動(dòng)名詞) I suggested putting off the meeting. They all avoided mentioning the matter. We cant help laughing at the news. 主語+謂語+賓語(不定式) I cant afford to buy such a large house. Dont pretend to know what you dont. He feared to speak in her presence. 主語+謂語+賓語(名詞/代詞)+介詞+賓語 Nothing can prevent us

13、 from going forward. Thank you for your help. He demanded an answer from me. 練習(xí)寫好句子的方法一：合并句子 It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers. Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden. A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The roa

14、d was wide. A pretty girl was crossing a wide road. 寫好句子的方法二：改寫句子 1) Mr. Green is a tall man, who wears a pair of thick glasses. (改成介詞短語做伴隨狀語) Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses. 2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使用sothat結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句子) The ice on the lake is so thin

15、that we cant skate on it. 練習(xí)方法三：一句多譯 I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. . The price of the book is 300 yuanIt cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. The book cost me 300 yuan. 我不懂什么英語，李明也不懂。 I dont know any English, nor does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming. I

16、 hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, no more does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming. I know no more English than Li Ming does. I know as little English as Li Ming does. 一到家，我就把所見到的一切都一到家，我就把所見到的一切都記了下來。記了下來。 On/Upon arriving home, I wrote

17、 down everything I had seen. As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. The instant I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. No sooner had I arrived home than I wrote down everything I had seen 昨天下午他才來昨天下午他

18、才來 He came here yesterday afternoon. He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here.It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here. 謀篇的原則謀篇的原則： 滿分作文都有個(gè)共性就是有效地使?jié)M分作文都有個(gè)共性就是有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)用了語句間的連接

19、成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。文章的連貫性和緊湊感是構(gòu)緊湊。文章的連貫性和緊湊感是很重要的。句子作為最小的表達(dá)意很重要的。句子作為最小的表達(dá)意思的語言當(dāng)位如果只是被隨意的整思的語言當(dāng)位如果只是被隨意的整合，是無法達(dá)到有效表達(dá)的目的。合，是無法達(dá)到有效表達(dá)的目的。 常見的句子之間的連接手段有：常見的句子之間的連接手段有： 使用代詞指代上一句中的名詞使用代詞指代上一句中的名詞 重復(fù)使用上一句中的詞重復(fù)使用上一句中的詞 使用連接詞使用連接詞 使用平行結(jié)構(gòu)使用平行結(jié)構(gòu) 高考大綱中常用的連接詞高考大綱中常用的連接詞: 表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系的: what is more, besides, also, as well,

20、 moreover, furthermore, in addition, 表因果關(guān)系的: since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, 表?xiàng)l件關(guān)系的: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, or else, 表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系的表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系的: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not onlybut also, herethere, years agotoday, thisthat, the formerthe latter, thennow, the firstwhereas the second, oncenow, on the one handon the other hand, someothers, 表時(shí)間關(guān)系的表時(shí)間關(guān)系的: when, after, before, until, as so