2016屆高考英語短文改錯集訓(xùn)(7)及答案解析(共5頁)

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)（七）【專項突破】短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Passage 1My father took me out camping for the first time when I was

2、seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arr

3、ows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the skythey were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity! Passage 2Dear Miss Li, Im one of

4、 your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my per

5、formance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is

6、no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.Thank you.Yours,Wang MinPassage 3My niece Mary is a Senior 3 student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study at ho

7、me until deeply into the night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldnt work effectively. In Sunday morning, she was abut to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself,

8、 competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On the Monday，Mary was energetic but active in class. She spent the whole day in the countryside, and Mary said what she had done was worthwhile.Passage 4It is three years now since I graduate from Xinhua High School. Last S

9、unday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in touch with everybody and set a properly time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together. It reminded us of the interesting stories an

10、d the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.Passage 5Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! Id like tell you something about the holiday we have arr

11、anged it for you. For those who wants to ski, you can rent skis on the spot, and boots too. Surely it is better if you have your own boots. Dont forget it can get quite cold in the day, so warm clothes are must. The ski-poles are often very hot when it is sunny, so be care not to get burnt. The hote

12、l booking for you is very comfortable, and the nights do get very cold sometimes, so be prepared. For those looking for another activities, there are lovely walks, good views and interesting birds up the hill. Finally, Id like to mention what we offer excellent opportunities to try delicious and unu

13、sually foodPassage 6Here is a introduction to Beech School of English. Comparing with the other schools, I will think it is the best one that you can go to. First, it is very convenient of you to get there by train. Second, the school is small and the classes are very small, either. There are 24 tea

14、ching hours a week. Stay with an English family will provide you with a chance to practise your speaking English and know more about the English family life. After class, you can enjoy sports and other activity with your classmates. The price is reasonably. I will get in touch with them you are inte

15、rested in it.Passage 7Last summer I went on holiday to Canada. I thought it must be an amazed place but everything seemed to go wrong with myself. Fristly, the weather was awful. It rained every day but it was terribly cold. The hotel which I stayed was noisy any dirty and also very expensive. Durin

16、g I was out walking one day my wallet and some other thing were stolen. When I go to the police they said they couldnt do anything about it.Fortunate, I had a credit card in my room so I could pay the rest of my holiday. This year Im staying at the home!2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)（七）答案Passage 11. wanted后加

17、to    2. come改為 came     3. have改為 having    4. immediate 改為immediately   5. on改為 at  6 Neither改為 None  7 was改為 were  8. 去掉were 或looked    9.but改為 and  

18、60; 10. 將learnt后的a改為 anPassage 21.student改為students 2.studied改為studying 3.of改為for 4.that 改為which5.are改為is 6.you改為I 7.effectively改為ettective8.have后加a 9.去掉well 10.whether改為thatPassage 3My niece Mary is a Senior 3 student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last devotesSaturday, as usua

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21、 andwhat she had done was worthwhile.Passage 4It is three years now since I graduate from Xinhua High School. Last Sunday, the class graduatedthat I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed notin to easy to get in touch with everybody and set a properly time for a

22、ll of us. We all enjoyed a proper theprecious day greatly, remember the time we spent together. It reminded us of the remembering interesting stories and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us we thatwere not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.cardsPassage 51.like 和 tell中間加to; 2. 去掉it 3.wants改為want 4.must前加a 5.care改為caerful 6.booking改為booked 7.and改為but8.another改為other 9.what改為that 10.unusually改為unusualPassage 6第一句：a改為an 第二句：comparing 改為co