高中英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)寫作-人物篇ppt課件

1、Usain BoltBorn 8,21, 1986 Jamaica,1.96 meters ,hard-working, love ,determined,In 2021, at the Olympic Games, broke In 2021, in the World Championship ,Now,Usain Bolt Usain Bolt was born on August 21st, 1986 in Jamaica. He is 1.96 meters tall and he is hard-working, full of love and determined.In 202

2、1, at the Olympic Games he broke the 100-meter and 200-meter world records. In 2021, in the World Championship he broke his own world records for the 100-meter and 200-meter races again. Now he is working hard to realize his dream to break more world records.審題的步驟審題的步驟、文體文體主體時(shí)態(tài)主體時(shí)態(tài)人稱人稱信息點(diǎn)整合信息點(diǎn)整合不要打草

3、稿，但應(yīng)有提綱不要打草稿，但應(yīng)有提綱人物引見(jiàn)人物引見(jiàn) 三段論1.主題段主題段 -開(kāi)頭段開(kāi)頭段Birthday , birthplace and family background2.拓展段拓展段-中間段中間段Appearance, qualities, interest /hobbies, education ,big events in ones life3.總結(jié)段總結(jié)段-結(jié)尾段結(jié)尾段 evaluation對(duì)人物做出綜合性的評(píng)價(jià)。對(duì)人物做出綜合性的評(píng)價(jià)。人物簡(jiǎn)介的普通步驟：人物簡(jiǎn)介的普通步驟：Give the right order( )教育：教育：education ( )外貌性格外貌性格

4、appearance ,character( )生平生平big events in his or her life ( in order of time )( )評(píng)價(jià)評(píng)價(jià)evaluation( )概略概略age, sex, birth-place, background概略概略,外貌外貌,教育教育,生平生平,評(píng)價(jià)評(píng)價(jià) A. 概略概略 :譯：鐘南山年出生在廣州，他是中國(guó)最偉大的譯：鐘南山年出生在廣州，他是中國(guó)最偉大的醫(yī)生之一醫(yī)生之一.1) Zhong Nanshan was born in Guangzhou in 1941 and he is one of the greatest docto

5、rs in China.1) Zhong Nanshan ,born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors in China.2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.語(yǔ)法，句法高分語(yǔ)法，句法高分tips可以用分詞短語(yǔ)可以用分詞短語(yǔ),同位語(yǔ)構(gòu)造同位語(yǔ)構(gòu)造,使文章簡(jiǎn)約使文章簡(jiǎn)約,照射照射1.A. 概略概略 :語(yǔ)法，句法高分語(yǔ)法，句法高分tips可以用分詞短語(yǔ)可以用分詞短語(yǔ),同位語(yǔ)構(gòu)造同位語(yǔ)構(gòu)造,使文章簡(jiǎn)

6、約使文章簡(jiǎn)約,照射照射 譯：費(fèi)孝通，我國(guó)著名的社會(huì)學(xué)家和社會(huì)活動(dòng)譯：費(fèi)孝通，我國(guó)著名的社會(huì)學(xué)家和社會(huì)活動(dòng)家，年月日生于一富有家家，年月日生于一富有家庭年月日因病逝于北京庭年月日因病逝于北京Born in a well-off family on November 2,1910, Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese Sociologist and active social worker, passed away for illness in on April 24, 2005 .B.外貌外貌,性格性格:譯：我的歷史教師是個(gè)美麗女人，她長(zhǎng)著譯：我的歷史教師是個(gè)美麗女人，

7、她長(zhǎng)著兩只大眼睛，留著長(zhǎng)發(fā)兩只大眼睛，留著長(zhǎng)發(fā).My history teacher is a beautiful woman who has two big eyes and long hair.My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.巧用巧用with做定語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ)C. 教育閱歷：教育閱歷：可以用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞可以用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞, 使文章精煉使文章精煉After she had graduated from the English department of Zhongshan Universit

8、y, she went on further education and received a doctors degree.Having graduated from the English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree.1.在中山大學(xué)英語(yǔ)系畢業(yè)后在中山大學(xué)英語(yǔ)系畢業(yè)后,她繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)她繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí),獲得了博士學(xué)位獲得了博士學(xué)位.D生平：生平：可以用復(fù)合句倒裝可以用復(fù)合句倒裝,非限定定語(yǔ)從句非限定定語(yǔ)從句等，潤(rùn)色文章等，潤(rùn)色文章Not on

9、ly is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.1.他對(duì)科學(xué)極有興趣他對(duì)科學(xué)極有興趣,也有音樂(lè)天賦也有音樂(lè)天賦.2. 他創(chuàng)了一個(gè)新的游泳記錄他創(chuàng)了一個(gè)新的游泳記錄,為中國(guó)隊(duì)博得了一為中國(guó)隊(duì)博得了一 塊金牌塊金牌.E評(píng)價(jià)：評(píng)價(jià)：留意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、描畫詞等短語(yǔ)、詞組留意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、描畫詞等短語(yǔ)、詞組Lishizhen made great contribution

10、s to Medical literature.Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people speak highly of him and all respect him .1. 雷鋒給我們樹(shù)立了一個(gè)良好的典范雷鋒給我們樹(shù)立了一個(gè)良好的典范,我們都我們都很敬重他很敬重他.2. 李時(shí)珍為醫(yī)學(xué)做出了宏大的奉獻(xiàn)李時(shí)珍為醫(yī)學(xué)做出了宏大的奉獻(xiàn).話題詞匯，詞組，句型：話題詞匯，詞組，句型： 外貌：外貌： good-looking容顏英俊的，容顏英俊的，funning-looking外表可笑的，外表可笑的， ugly-looking丑陋的，丑陋的， or

11、dinary-looking外貌平平的，外貌平平的， white-haired白頭發(fā)的，白頭發(fā)的，near/far-sighted 近近/遠(yuǎn)視的，遠(yuǎn)視的， charming有魅力的有魅力的, 時(shí)髦的時(shí)髦的fashionable, 苗條苗條slim 性格氣質(zhì)：性格氣質(zhì)： kind-hearted好心的，好心的， warm-hearted 熱心的，熱心的， absent-minded 心不在焉的，心不在焉的，bad-tempered 壞脾氣的，壞脾氣的，a strong will很強(qiáng)的意志力，很強(qiáng)的意志力，naughty 調(diào)皮的，調(diào)皮的， smart/bright 聰明的，聰明的， wise睿智的

12、，睿智的，diligent 勤勞的，勤勞的， humorous 幽默的，幽默的， attractive 有魅力的，有魅力的， talkative能說(shuō)會(huì)道的，能說(shuō)會(huì)道的，confident 有自信心的，有自信心的， independent 獨(dú)立的，獨(dú)立的，patient 有耐心的有耐心的 生日、出生地、年齡生日、出生地、年齡 , (who was) born in , is a , a , is a with a height of and a weight of 家庭背景：家庭背景： was born in/ into a poor/rich family 出生在貧窮的出生在貧窮的/富有的家庭

13、富有的家庭 as a child of years old, he 還是個(gè)還是個(gè)歲的孩子時(shí)歲的孩子時(shí) spend his childhood in 在在度過(guò)了他的童年度過(guò)了他的童年 live a happy/hard life 生活很幸福生活很幸福/艱苦艱苦 教育背景：教育背景： be admitted to university考取考取大學(xué)大學(xué) graduate from department of university從某大學(xué)某系畢業(yè)從某大學(xué)某系畢業(yè) receive/get a doctors degree 獲取博士學(xué)位獲取博士學(xué)位 主要事跡：主要事跡： serve as做某種任務(wù)做某種任

14、務(wù) devote oneself /ones effort to/ be devoted to 終身努力于終身努力于 concentrate /apply oneself to 專注于專注于 make up ones mind to do/be determined to do決心做決心做 have a gift for / be gifted in 有有的天賦的天賦成就：成就：one of the best/most important 最好的最好的/重要的重要的之一之一2. set a example to為為樹(shù)立典范樹(shù)立典范3. be honoured as被授予被授予； win the

15、 prize 獲得獲得榮譽(yù)榮譽(yù)4. make great contribution to 為為作出宏大奉獻(xiàn)作出宏大奉獻(xiàn)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇120詞左右的英語(yǔ)短詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文引見(jiàn)美國(guó)總統(tǒng)奧巴馬。文引見(jiàn)美國(guó)總統(tǒng)奧巴馬。提示：提示：文體文體分段分段時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)人稱人稱信息點(diǎn)整合信息點(diǎn)整合姓名姓名Barack Obama出生時(shí)間出生時(shí)間 1961年年8月月4日日出生地點(diǎn)出生地點(diǎn) Honolulu, Hawaii家庭家庭父親是肯尼亞黑人，父親是肯尼亞黑人， 母親是美國(guó)白人母親是美國(guó)白人夢(mèng)想夢(mèng)想當(dāng)總統(tǒng)當(dāng)總統(tǒng)教育教育1988年考入（年考入（ Harvard Law School), 1991年

16、博士學(xué)院年博士學(xué)院職業(yè)職業(yè)畢業(yè)后當(dāng)律師，畢業(yè)后當(dāng)律師， 大學(xué)講師，后來(lái)一直從大學(xué)講師，后來(lái)一直從政。政。 2008年年11月月4日，日， 在大選（在大選（ 他（他（the general election)中擊敗（中擊?。?John McCain), 成為首位黑人總統(tǒng)成為首位黑人總統(tǒng)評(píng)價(jià)評(píng)價(jià)Obama的成功極大地激勵(lì)了非裔美國(guó)人的成功極大地激勵(lì)了非裔美國(guó)人。 subject 主語(yǔ)主語(yǔ) predicate 謂語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ) object 賓語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ) attribute 定語(yǔ)定語(yǔ) adverbial 狀語(yǔ)狀語(yǔ) complement 補(bǔ)語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ) predicative 表語(yǔ)表語(yǔ) appositive 同位語(yǔ)同位

17、語(yǔ)C clause 從句從句Short forms 縮略語(yǔ)縮略語(yǔ)P. S. Att Advcom pre Barack Obama , the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother, was born in Honolulu, Hawaii on August 4th, 1961. S. P.AdvWhen he was only a small a boy, he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States.= In his childhood,

18、/ As a small boy, he had a great dream that he would become the President of the United States. S. P.Adv.cIn 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School , where he gained his doctors degree in 1991.=In 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School and he gained his doctors degree in 1991 there. S.

19、 P.AdvAtt cAfter graduation, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics.=After he graduated from Harvard, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics. S. P.P.AdvOn November 4, 2021, Barack Obama defeated John McCain in the general election and became the first African- A

20、merican President of the United States.=On November 4, 2021, Barack Obama won the general election defeating John McCain and became the first African- American President of the United States.P. S. P.AdvAdvThe success of Obama inspires African-American greatly. His achievements show that anyone can s

21、ucceed as long as he works hard. S. P. S. P.Adv.cStudent times No 6 B3著名歌手叢飛的愛(ài)心事跡傳遍全國(guó)，深化到每個(gè)人的心著名歌手叢飛的愛(ài)心事跡傳遍全國(guó)，深化到每個(gè)人的心中。如今請(qǐng)他根據(jù)下面的寫作內(nèi)容和寫作要求，寫一篇中。如今請(qǐng)他根據(jù)下面的寫作內(nèi)容和寫作要求，寫一篇短文，引見(jiàn)叢飛的感人事跡。短文，引見(jiàn)叢飛的感人事跡。寫作內(nèi)容寫作內(nèi)容生平生平1. 1969年生于遼寧省盤錦市年生于遼寧省盤錦市. 1992年畢業(yè)于沈陽(yáng)音年畢業(yè)于沈陽(yáng)音樂(lè)學(xué)院。樂(lè)學(xué)院。 2、2006年年4月月20日病逝于深圳。日病逝于深圳。 主要事跡主要事跡 1、從、從

22、1994年年8月開(kāi)場(chǎng)資助貧困兒童，堅(jiān)持月開(kāi)場(chǎng)資助貧困兒童，堅(jiān)持11年之久，共年之久，共捐贈(zèng)捐贈(zèng)300 多萬(wàn)，多達(dá)多萬(wàn)，多達(dá)178名貧困兒童受助。名貧困兒童受助。2、生前立下遺言、生前立下遺言捐贈(zèng)眼角膜。捐贈(zèng)眼角膜。榮譽(yù)榮譽(yù) 終身獲得許多榮譽(yù)，其中包括獲得終身獲得許多榮譽(yù)，其中包括獲得“2005打動(dòng)中國(guó)打動(dòng)中國(guó)年度人物的稱號(hào)年度人物的稱號(hào)寫作要求寫作要求 必需運(yùn)用必需運(yùn)用5個(gè)句子引見(jiàn)全部所給的內(nèi)容個(gè)句子引見(jiàn)全部所給的內(nèi)容.參考詞匯：捐贈(zèng)眼角膜參考詞匯：捐贈(zèng)眼角膜donate cornea沈陽(yáng)音樂(lè)學(xué)院沈陽(yáng)音樂(lè)學(xué)院Shenyang Conservatory of Music2005打動(dòng)中國(guó)年度人物打

23、動(dòng)中國(guó)年度人物2005CCTV Moving China Award Cong Feis spirit lives on Cong Fei, born in Panjin, Liaoning Province in 1969, graduated from Shenyang Conservatory of Music in 1992. From August 1994, he began his 11-year cause of aiding poor children in mountainous areas, donated more than 8 million yuan and aid

24、ed up to 178 poor children. In his life, he got many honors, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award. Before his death, he made a will - to donate his corneas. Cong Fei passed away on April 20, 2006, but his spirit will live on.主要問(wèn)題人名表達(dá)法地名表達(dá)法Choose-chose-chosen時(shí)態(tài)ArticleIn order to his count

25、ryHis many novels假設(shè)他叫李明，他的美國(guó)朋友布魯斯開(kāi)場(chǎng)學(xué)習(xí)中假設(shè)他叫李明，他的美國(guó)朋友布魯斯開(kāi)場(chǎng)學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)文學(xué)，來(lái)信訊問(wèn)魯迅其人及作品。他回信引見(jiàn)國(guó)文學(xué)，來(lái)信訊問(wèn)魯迅其人及作品。他回信引見(jiàn)魯迅，內(nèi)容如下魯迅，內(nèi)容如下:1魯迅，原名周樹(shù)人，浙江紹興人魯迅，原名周樹(shù)人，浙江紹興人2為了國(guó)家，棄醫(yī)從文。為了國(guó)家，棄醫(yī)從文。3著名的作家著名的作家,思想家思想家,而且還是中國(guó)現(xiàn)代文學(xué)而且還是中國(guó)現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開(kāi)創(chuàng)者的開(kāi)創(chuàng)者.4小說(shuō)被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如小說(shuō)被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如、這兩部影片。這兩部影片。5一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。參

26、考詞匯參考詞匯:The True Story of AH Q ：The New Years Sacrifice留意留意:引見(jiàn)必需包括一切內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)引見(jiàn)必需包括一切內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),但不要逐條譯成但不要逐條譯成英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ).寫作要求寫作要求只能運(yùn)用只能運(yùn)用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。文章個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。文章首尾已給出，不算字?jǐn)?shù)。首尾已給出，不算字?jǐn)?shù)。評(píng)分規(guī)范評(píng)分規(guī)范句子構(gòu)造的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完好性句子構(gòu)造的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完好性.Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you

27、something about Luxun. _. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will help you to know more about it. Yours, Li MingDear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, Lu Xun with real name Zhou Shuren abandoned the study of medicine because he thought he could change society more through writing. Not only was Lu Xun a well-known Chinese writer, thinker, and translator, but a