2020高中英語讀后續(xù)寫-技巧專題09高分情緒描寫技巧(解析版)

1、專題 09 高分情緒描寫技巧一、情緒描寫之笑smile brightly; grin at sb; laugh; beam ; light (sth) up ; light up with ; burst into laughter; burst out laughing ； wear a bright/broad smile; give sb a smile學(xué)一學(xué)：beam: smile very happily例：獲勝者滿意地笑了。譯法一：The winner beamed/smiled with satisfaction.譯法二：The winner wore a satisfied s

2、mile on his face.light up : if someone s face or eyes light up, they show pleasure, excitement etclight up with ： His eyes lit up with laughter.Her face lit up with pleasure.light sth up: to make someones fa ce or eyes show pleasure or excitementSuddenly a bright smile lit up her face/eyes.練一練：看到直升飛

3、機(jī)，Jane 高興地笑了起來?！敬鸢敢弧浚?At the sight of the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy.【答案二】： Seeing the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy.【答案三】： The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, Jane s eyes/ face lit up with delight.【答案四】： The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, a bright smile lit

4、 up Jane s face/eyes.判斷正誤：Seeing the helicopter, a bright smile lit up her face.【答案】 ：錯(cuò) seeing 和 a bright smile 邏輯不一致。二、情緒描寫之高興激動(dòng)V. dance; whistle; jump/leap with joy; feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy/excitement; be overcome with happines/delight/joy/excitement; (one s eyes) twink； le(one s hea

5、rt) beat/pound wildlyAdj. happy; delighted; overjoyed; excited; thrilled; wild with joy練一練：當(dāng)她知道考試結(jié)果時(shí)，她興奮極了?！敬鸢敢弧浚?When she knew the result of the test, she felt excited/ thrilled.【答案二】：Whenshe knew theresult of the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement.【答案三】：Whenshe knew theresult of the test, her

6、 heart was pounding with wild joy.【答案四】：Whenshe knew theresult of the test, a wild excitement took hold of her.【答案五】：Knowing the result of the test, she felt a surge of excitement.【答案六】： Knowing the result of the test, she was overcome with excitement.三、情緒描寫之生氣feel/get angry/furious; feel a surge of

7、 anger(rage/fury); eyes blaze; storm out of/into/off ; storm (say angrily) ;sth. makes sb s bloo(ds tbho iml akes sb extremely angry); clasp one s hands; clench one s feisetcs/htleeestsh; sp練一練：Sam 感到非常生氣?！敬鸢敢弧浚篠am felt very angry.【答案二】：Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.【答案三】

8、：Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.【答案四】：Boiling with rage, Sam shook his fist at me.【答案五】：Filled with fury, Sam was unable to utter a single word.四、情緒描寫之傷心痛苦sad; bitter; sorrowful; feel a surge of sadness; (sadness) surge within sb; one hse ar

9、t ache; be overcome with sadness練一練：她傷心不已?！敬鸢敢弧浚篠he felt extremely sad.【答案二】：A sadness came over her.【答案三】：Her heart ached, tears streamingdownher cheeks.【答案四】：Numb with grief, she becamespeechless.【答案五】： Feeling a surge of sadness, she couldn t help crying bitterly.【答案六】： Sadness surging within her

10、, she burst into tears.五、情緒描寫之哭cry; sob; weep; burst into tears; burst out crying; (one s eyes) brim with/be full of/be filled with tears練一練：1. 他哽咽欲哭?！敬鸢浮?： A lump came to his throat.2. 她的雙眼哭得通紅【答案】 ： Her eyes were red from crying.3. 她的眼里滿含淚水?！敬鸢浮?： Her eyes brimmed with tears.4. 眼淚沿著她的面頰流下來.【答案】 ：

11、Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.5. Oliver 獨(dú)自一人在房間里流下了孤獨(dú)傷心的淚水【答案】 ： Alone in the room, Oliver cried bitter, lonely tears 6. Wilbur 哭著直到睡著。【答案】 ： Wilbur cried himself to sleep.六、情緒描寫之害怕:frightened; panicked; scared; speechless; in (a) panic; in a cold sweat; be full of fear; be fil

12、led with terror; be rooted to the spot; freeze; run away; flee; one s knees feel weak; (hands) sweat;練一練：我感到很害怕?！敬鸢敢弧浚篒felt very frightened/scared/panicked.【答案二】：Iwas in (a) panic/ was full of fear.【答案三】：Istood rooted to the spot, brimming withfear/filledwith fear.【答案四】： I felt so scared that my thr

13、oat tightened and my knees felt weak.【答案五】：Ifroze with terror, too scared to move.【答案六】：Iwas seized by a strong sense of horror;mypalmssweating.七、實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages

14、and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark.He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lyi

15、ng on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the p

16、olice station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked,“ Are these yours ” “ Yes, sir. ” the farmer an（膽怯地）swered timid.ly “ Have yokuill ed the man ” “ No, no, sir. ” the farmer said in a hurry.“ When did you see the dead man ” “ About seven last evening. ” “ Did youman” “ No, sir. ” The officer

17、 brought konuitfea and asked, “ Have you seen it yet ” “ No, sir. ” The officer bec angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. The officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession（ 供認(rèn) ）, but the farmer didn t admthit eh em wuradse rer.注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50 左右；2. 至少使用5 個(gè)

18、短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語：3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.Paragraph 2:The farmer was lucky. A few days later,【參考范文】Paragraph 1:The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The fa

19、rmer was very afraid, thinking he would be sentenced to death by killing people. But he was innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. Helpless, he was eager that someone could come and save him.Paragraph 2:The farmer was lucky. A few days later, a young man came to the police station, followed by a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It