《高三英語看圖作文講評匯編6》

1、看圖作文講評6 看圖進行書面表達的基本要求是：認真審圖，確立主題，提煉要點，展開聯(lián)想，變點為句，連句成篇。 要達到這些要求，我們就必須認真審圖，善于利用圖中人物間的關系、人物的對話、人物的活動及所處場所，以及圖（表）中的文字說明和標識來提煉要點；要圍繞主題展開合理的想象，切忌游離于主題展開不著邊際的聯(lián)想。 請根據(jù)下面四幅圖畫內容，寫一篇短文，記述昨天發(fā)生在你叔叔身上的事。 注意：1.詞數(shù)120以上。2.參考詞匯：吊銷駕照 revoke a driving license 1、認真看圖，確立主題 結合文字和圖畫，確立所要表達的主題是什么。 四幅圖記述了昨天發(fā)生在叔叔身上的事，我們可以確立本篇書面

2、表達的主題是：昨天叔叔酒后開車，出事故而受傷，被吊銷駕照 2、圍繞主題，提煉要點 圍繞確立的主題，仔細看圖，初步列出每幅圖的要點。 第一幅圖：與朋友聚會，喝酒 第二幅圖：酒后駕車 第三幅圖：出事故受傷 第四幅圖：住院 3、合理想象，補出要點 將四幅圖連起來并結合考慮每幅圖中的各個細節(jié)進行想象，將隱藏的要點補出來,使故事連貫。 第一幅圖：喝酒的地點（可能在朋友家，也可能在小酒館），根據(jù)喝酒的地點確定是誰邀請誰?？赡芤驗楦吲d叔叔酒喝多了，喝醉了（為下文鋪墊） 第二幅圖：根據(jù)他說的話：No problem可以推斷：朋友勸他，他沒聽，堅持駕車回家 第三幅圖：酒后駕車，可以想象開車的情況：蜿蜒向前，撞樹

3、出事故。根據(jù)第四幅圖可推斷他沒有死而是受了傷。警察到現(xiàn)場，將他送往醫(yī)院。 第四幅圖：因傷勢嚴重，要住院幾天；警察對他處罰吊銷駕照 4、確定時態(tài)，譯出要點 確定表達時所用的正確時態(tài)，將圍繞主題初選出的要點和經(jīng)過合理想象補出的要點翻譯出來。 本篇書面表達是記述的昨天發(fā)生在叔叔身上的事，故用過去時態(tài)來表達。 第一幅圖：Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.As a result he got drunk. 第二幅圖：Afte

4、r the meal,his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home,but he didnt to listen to them,saying“No problem” and insisted on doing so.第三幅圖：He got into the car and drove away.A few minutes later,he was widing his way in the street.And suddenly his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured bu

5、t still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital. 第四幅圖：He had to stay in hospital for several days because of being seriously injurned. He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked. 5、連句成篇，過渡自然 對譯出的要點通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞或詞語以使表達連貫，再加上文章開頭和結尾的話照顧到文章的首尾呼應。 My uncl

6、e will never forget what happened to him yesterday. How he regretted what he had done! My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday. Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.As a result he got drunk. After the meal,his f

7、riends tried to persuade him not to drive home,but he didint listen to them,saying“No problem” and insisted on doing so. He got into the car and drove away.A few minutes later,he was widing his way in the street when his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital.Unfortunately he had to stay in hospital for several days .Worse still he was fined by the