議論文好句欣賞

1、議論文好句欣賞議論文好句欣賞關(guān)于關(guān)于 “水的重要性水的重要性”好句欣賞好句欣賞:Water is to life what heart is to a person.Water is to life what blood is to body.Water is to life what engine is to machine.We should spare no efforts to save water. We cannot emphasize the importance of saving water too much.Only by saving water can we solve

2、 the problem of lacking water.議論文三部曲議論文三部曲:第第1段段 概括概括(30字左右字左右), 開頭句可以這樣寫開頭句可以這樣寫: As the article states shows, The article statesshows that第第2段段 自己的觀點(diǎn)自己的觀點(diǎn) 120字左右字左右 1)按照作文的具體要求來(lái)完成按照作文的具體要求來(lái)完成 2)如果沒(méi)有給具體要求如果沒(méi)有給具體要求, 建議同學(xué)們建議同學(xué)們 圍繞圍繞三個(gè)要點(diǎn)三個(gè)要點(diǎn)來(lái)寫來(lái)寫,即即 “提出問(wèn)題提出問(wèn)題; 陳述為什么陳述為什么; 建議解決方法建議解決方法”第第3段段 總結(jié)總結(jié):用一兩句話總

3、結(jié)用一兩句話總結(jié),文字不要文字不要 太多太多.作文評(píng)講作文評(píng)講2造成作文低分的最大原因造成作文低分的最大原因:低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤多低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤多, 影響作文的流暢影響作文的流暢,嚴(yán)重嚴(yán)重降低作文分?jǐn)?shù)的層次降低作文分?jǐn)?shù)的層次.常見詞匯拼寫錯(cuò)誤常見詞匯拼寫錯(cuò)誤: ski sweets choosechosechoice choice n. encourage v. encouragement n. succeed v. success n. successful adj滑雪滑雪 skate 滑冰滑冰甜點(diǎn)心甜點(diǎn)心 選擇選擇 鼓勵(lì)鼓勵(lì) 成功成功超低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤超低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤:by communicateafter retur

4、n homestudy cookingNo matter you are a boy or a girlby communicating after returninglearn to cookWhether you are a boy or notId like to choose the Second line.Because I can communicate withthe teachers.Id like to.because I teachers.美句欣賞美句欣賞:1 Its because I am a girl that I workpoorly in science subj

5、ects.2 We should develop what we are good at as well as improve what we dont do well enough.3 People voice different opinions on this question.4 Im sure I can change my weakness into strength though I have to go through all kinds of hardships.5 My teachers offer me help whenever I am in trouble.6 Th

6、eir encouragement is to me what columns(柱子柱子) is to a building.“高考勝券高考勝券”作文作文p114話題：節(jié)約話題：節(jié)約 回收回收 環(huán)保環(huán)保 1 It is undeniable that the worsening environment has become the biggest concern of todays world. Pollution is threatening humans existence on the earth.2 the resources of the earth are becoming les

7、s and less.3 Its high time that we took action to reduce waste and recycle things. It is universally acknowledged that4 As students, there is no doubt that protecting environment from pollution is a duty5 The earth is to man what Mother is to a son. On no account can we pollute the earth to gain wha

8、t we want. we should devote ourselves to.12月考作文月考作文-關(guān)于交通和廣告的主題關(guān)于交通和廣告的主題基礎(chǔ)詞匯錯(cuò)誤基礎(chǔ)詞匯錯(cuò)誤:公司公司(pl.)經(jīng)濟(jì)經(jīng)濟(jì)各種各樣的商品各種各樣的商品產(chǎn)品產(chǎn)品廠家廠家對(duì)對(duì)有利的有利的companieseconomy various goods productsproduct, productionproducerfactorybe beneficial to sth.be of benefit to sth.Chinese Englsih:1 The companies are through advertisement

9、s to show their products.2 If a thing that no one know it,3 People can easy to know what to buy.美句欣賞美句欣賞1 The dream of the humans to use the transportation with high technique will finally come true.2 The transportation which is comfortable , safe and environment-friendly will take the place of the

10、slow unsafe ones.3 The advantages of advertisements far outweigh the disadvantages.4 Advertisements are to products what clothes are to a person. windows are to the house.5 Its universally acknowledged that advertisements add color to our life. If we can make good use of ads, we can learn what canno

11、t be found in books. 7 Advertisements combine arts with movements and sound, which is a feast to our eyes.8 Advertisements may help to improve peoples standard of beauty.關(guān)于關(guān)于 “上網(wǎng)上網(wǎng)”1 Its too young for children to control themselves, so they are easily addicted to surfing the net.2 A home without com

12、puter is like a house without windows.3 As parents, they should guide their children to take advantage of the Internet correctly rather than prevent them from using it.4 Children have grown so addicted to the net that they neglect their meals, sleep, homework and outdoor activities. 關(guān)于關(guān)于 “上網(wǎng)上網(wǎng)”1 It

13、goes without saying that the existence of the Internet brings us many benefits.2 Thanks to the Internet, now studying at home and shopping without going out become the usual things in our daily life.3 People can get what they want just by clicking the mouse.4 Disadvantages as the Internet has, it is

14、 intended to help the people in many fields.5 Once addicted to being on line, well forget the important things that we should devote our time to.6 What we can learn from the net is endless while the knowledge we get from the textbooks is limited.7 Through the net, we can obtain the latest news whene

15、ver and wherever, which enlarges our knowledge greatly.8 The net supplies students with available study advice as well as latest news at home and abroad.become ignorant of their study,feel the world under your feet,result in some unexpectedconsequence,lose themselves in computer games,be lost in.bec

16、ome a big concern好詞好詞:關(guān)于看關(guān)于看 “中國(guó)卡通中國(guó)卡通”還是還是 “外國(guó)卡通外國(guó)卡通”1 On no account can we ignore the potential of Chinese cartoon.2 It comes as no surprise that in some way domestic cartoons really have advantages over the foreign ones.3 Watching foreign cartoons only, children will become ignorant of our native

17、 culture.4 If children just fix their attention on foreign cartoons, it turns out that the national culture will die away sooner or later.5 The fact that the foreign cartoons take the place of domestic ones and become very popular drives us into deep thought. 關(guān)于關(guān)于 “反扒反扒”小偷小偷,扒手扒手與斗爭(zhēng)與斗爭(zhēng)減少減少害怕害怕安全安全 n

18、.在公開場(chǎng)合在公開場(chǎng)合thief, pickpocket fightstruggle against decrease be afraid of safety in the public places1 Many people hold the view that we would rather tolerate the loss of money than fight against the pickpockets, for in some way it may make ourselves get into the more dangerous situation.2 Its extrem

19、ely necessary for us to bear in mind to be careful in public occasions.3 There is no surprise that the quantity of pocket-picking would keep decreasing before it absolutely dies out.3 Pickpockets are to society what pests are to crops.4 Only when all of us contribute ourselves to it, can the thieves

20、 disappear entirely.5 In short, the less pocket-picking is, the better peoples lives will be.6 Because of the large number of pickpockets, the society suffers a great loss each year .好詞好句好詞好句: keep an eye on be absorbed in be lost in the game, be burnt get burnt be aware of sothat when watching the

21、football match, Being a football fan,Not until he smelled the bad smell, did he realize his fault.It was not untilthatHardly had his wife gone out when he forgot his task.關(guān)于關(guān)于 “鞭炮燃放禁令的解除鞭炮燃放禁令的解除”詞匯詞匯:1 燃放鞭炮燃放鞭炮2 生產(chǎn)者生產(chǎn)者,廠家廠家3 解除禁令解除禁令4 文章文章5 缺乏樂(lè)趣缺乏樂(lè)趣6 吉祥和幸福吉祥和幸福7 安全安全8 象征象征 set off fireworksarticlel

22、ift the banproducer lack fun luck and happinesssafetysymbol n.v.light let off1 The fireworks combine sound with colorful pictures and different styles, which is a feast to our eyes.2 Whats more important is that setting off fireworks during the Spring Festival can create a wonderful atmosphere, whic

23、h is of benefit to the development of Chinese traditional culture.3 As a symbol of traditional culture, fireworks play an important role in celebrating Chinese traditional festivals. 4 It is letting off fireworks that makes many people especially children hurt seriously.5 Burning fireworks may resul

24、t in air pollution and sound pollution whats more, it is dangerous for children to play with, for it often causes fire accidents.關(guān)于關(guān)于 “競(jìng)爭(zhēng)和合作競(jìng)爭(zhēng)和合作”詞匯詞匯1 勇氣和自信勇氣和自信2 競(jìng)爭(zhēng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng) v.n.3 合作合作v.n.4 取得很大進(jìn)步取得很大進(jìn)步5 向別人學(xué)習(xí)向別人學(xué)習(xí)6 哪里有競(jìng)爭(zhēng)哪里就有發(fā)展哪里有競(jìng)爭(zhēng)哪里就有發(fā)展. courage and confidenceCompete competition cooperate cooperation m

25、ake great progresslearn from othersWhere there is competition, there is development.1洪洪 As we all live in a peaceful earth, cooperation tends to be more necessary.2 As far as I know, many meaningful outcomes in every fields are produced by groups, instead of by individuals. One may become more creat

26、ive and skillful if he has an opponent at hand. 4 羅羅 It is competition that makes our society develop like crazy, which plays an important role in the progress of the world.5 劉劉 Through competition, we can learn from the opponents and make up for our disadvantages.關(guān)于關(guān)于 “交通的利弊交通的利弊”1 Thanks to the mo

27、dern transportation, our journeys are not long, tiring, dangerous any more, but fast, safe and enjoyable. And traveling to a far-away place is no longer the right of rich people. 利利:2 Modern transportation brings us many benefits, for instance, we can travel in comfort. Our curiosity can be satisfie

28、d and our mind and soul can be enriched.3 In recent years, ships, cars, trains etc. are accessible to take us wherever our dreams lie. 1 On the other hand, the disadvantages cant be ignored. The busy transportation may make the roads more crowded, drivers more annoyed, air pollution more serious and

29、 so on.弊弊: 2 Fantastic though it may be, modern transportation has brought about many problems, such as traffic accidents, air pollution and traffic jams. 如何適當(dāng)發(fā)泄自己的情緒如何適當(dāng)發(fā)泄自己的情緒1 概括內(nèi)容概括內(nèi)容,舉一些不正常的發(fā)泄方式舉一些不正常的發(fā)泄方式2 談自己的看法談自己的看法: 1)適當(dāng)做運(yùn)動(dòng)適當(dāng)做運(yùn)動(dòng) 2)聽自己喜歡的音樂(lè)聽自己喜歡的音樂(lè) 3)找一些要好的同學(xué)傾訴找一些要好的同學(xué)傾訴 4)想象一些美好的東西想象一些美好的東

30、西詞匯詞匯:1 聽音樂(lè)聽音樂(lè)2 想象想象3 自我傷害自我傷害v.&n.4 遇到挫折遇到挫折,壓力壓力5 感到輕松感到輕松6 感到傷心感到傷心,痛苦痛苦7 發(fā)泄情緒發(fā)泄情緒8 解除解除,消除消除 listen to music imagine self-injure , self-injury come across defeat troubledifficulty, pressure feel relaxed feel sad, painful release the bad emotionget rid of, remove,1 We have many good choices t

31、o relieve ourselves depending on individual preferences. 2 The fantastic music will easily catch our attention and pull us out of sadness and sorrow. 3 we can find a friend who can be depended on to speak our minds to. Life is made up of sadness and happiness, so it is not avoidable to encounter tro

32、uble and defeat, which makes us feel upset and depressed. Therefore, it is of great importance to deal with our bad feeling in a right way.5 It is extremely foolish to deal with bad feeling by hurting ourselves, for nothing is as precious as life.6 Dont let the bad feeling cast a shadow on your life

33、.就就 “學(xué)習(xí)中樂(lè)趣與勤奮哪個(gè)重要學(xué)習(xí)中樂(lè)趣與勤奮哪個(gè)重要”這一這一主題發(fā)表你的看法主題發(fā)表你的看法1以英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)為例以英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)為例,簡(jiǎn)述你在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)簡(jiǎn)述你在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí) 中是重視樂(lè)趣還是勤奮中是重視樂(lè)趣還是勤奮2 你是如何看待自己的做法你是如何看待自己的做法3 你的老師對(duì)你的做法有何反應(yīng)或看法你的老師對(duì)你的做法有何反應(yīng)或看法4你對(duì)老師的做法有何反應(yīng)你對(duì)老師的做法有何反應(yīng),為什么為什么?Words:1 勤奮努力勤奮努力2 刻苦的刻苦的3 學(xué)習(xí)中學(xué)習(xí)中興趣興趣比勤奮重要比勤奮重要4 如果你想如果你想成功成功. diligence , hard work hard-workingInterest in

34、learning is more important than hard work working hard.If you want to be successful, to succeed get success 1 Working hard and taking pleasure in leaning is equally important.2 Loving English deeply, I can always find interest in English. An interesting word, an optimistic idiom or a lovely poem can

35、 move me deeply, so its easier for me to master the language.3 If you are only buried in learning hard without pleasure, you will be bored of leaning at last. 4 Only with interest and hard work combined, can we master the skill more confidently and easily.分析壓歲錢的弊端分析壓歲錢的弊端, 給出解決辦法給出解決辦法Good words:1 t

36、o some extent (degree)某種程度上某種程度上2 Appropriate measures should be taken.3 in accordance with the article 根據(jù)文章根據(jù)文章4 additionally 另外另外5 the phenomenon 現(xiàn)象現(xiàn)象分析弊端分析弊端:1 蘇蘇Every coin has two sides. Some children may become ignorant ofthe meaning of Lucky Money. Without control they will spend money on unne

37、cessary things. Whats worse, they may form the bad habit of getting money in wrong ways when they lack money, which will cause some society problems.2梁梁 By no means can we neglect its disadvantages. To some children, they are only concerned about how much money they can get, for they have to compete

38、 for riches with their classmates, which is against our will. Besides, children are too young to arrange money properly. Some of them are lost in buying expensive clothes, toys and food.3 The custom sometimes does harm to children when they have no idea about how to spend money. Too much money to a

39、child may even make him regard money as a power of fortune.4 Children are too young to know how to deal with money so they just buy what they like withoutconsidering whether it is necessary. 解決辦法解決辦法 1丘丘 Parents should give less money to their children and be in charge of part of the money their chi

40、ldren receive. Whats more, they should teach them the correct and proper ways to spent money. Deep in my thought is that we can contribute parts of what we get to the charities. On the whole, we should set up a correct attitude towards using lucky money. 2 What the parents should do is to decrease t

41、he amount of the Lucky Money and help the children form a correct sense of the money.3 Parents and schools have the responsibility to teach children to have a correct idea of spending money.考試分?jǐn)?shù)是否重要考試分?jǐn)?shù)是否重要詞匯詞匯:1 是否是否2 分?jǐn)?shù)分?jǐn)?shù)3 忽略忽略4 忽略忽略5 分?jǐn)?shù)很重要分?jǐn)?shù)很重要6 創(chuàng)造力創(chuàng)造力7 創(chuàng)造力的創(chuàng)造力的whether score ignore, neglect be ig

42、norant of. creation creativeThe score is of importance. is very important.8 同等重要同等重要 equally important美句欣賞美句欣賞1 Since scores are the symbol of the performance of a student, getting high scores becomes the most concern of students so that they can stand out and go to a good university. 2 Scores are o

43、f great importance because whether we can be admitted to a good college or get a good job depends on our score in some way.李李鄧鄧3 As far as I am concerned, scores are one of the standards to judge a students performance. Many people think the higher score one student gets, the better the student is.4

44、 Getting high scores is good for students to study hard and compete with each other, which is useful to develop a students character.5 Scores are important because only with high scores you can be admitted into a key university and of course you may have better chance to get a good job after graduat

45、ion. Because of all these, you may live more happily .鄧鄧 1 Every coin has two sides. The intense competition for high scores also does harm to students, for students might care for only test scores and neglect the development of other abilities. Then education will lose its meaning. Besides, it will

46、 bring a heavy pressure to students. 2 By no means can we set our goal only by getting a high mark. We should also pay enough attention to the development of our total personality.李李3 區(qū)區(qū) Some students only focus attention on the test score and neglect other abilities. As a result, they will become t

47、he ones who are smart in study but disabled in daily life.4 林林 The test scores just can reflect only one part of the ability of a student. Even if a student can get a very high score in the exam, he might still not succeed when he enter society if he doesnt develop fully.請(qǐng)描述請(qǐng)描述你校圖書館不文明現(xiàn)象你校圖書館不文明現(xiàn)象這樣

48、做可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果這樣做可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果應(yīng)該采取什么措施應(yīng)該采取什么措施1 There exist some bad behaviors in our school too. For example, some students take their own book into the library, which is against the rule. Besides, some students may put books out of order after reading, which will do harm to the librarys environment. Even wo

49、rse, some students take the books for their own rather than何美琳何美琳-采用夾敘夾議法采用夾敘夾議法.使用較多高級(jí)詞匯使用較多高級(jí)詞匯return them on time, which makes the library suffer a great loss.Taking all things into consideration, we are supposed to take some special measures to deal with the problem. Firstly, we should educate s

50、tudents how to behave well. Then we should carry out some rules to prevent such behaviors from happening.林慧明林慧明-層次分明層次分明,條理清晰條理清晰,語(yǔ)言地道語(yǔ)言地道1 大學(xué)畢業(yè)生找工作難大學(xué)畢業(yè)生找工作難,有有2個(gè)原因個(gè)原因: 1)高校體制問(wèn)題高校體制問(wèn)題;學(xué)非所用學(xué)非所用,學(xué)費(fèi)高學(xué)費(fèi)高 2)畢業(yè)生問(wèn)題畢業(yè)生問(wèn)題:期望值高期望值高;擠在大城市擠在大城市; 缺乏對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí)的正確評(píng)判缺乏對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí)的正確評(píng)判.2 解決問(wèn)題的措施解決問(wèn)題的措施美句欣賞美句欣賞1 The universities a

51、nd the graduates both are responsible for the problems.李力穎李力穎2 Nowadays many graduates are over-burdened with high fee of university.李韻瑩李韻瑩3 On the other hand, we cant ignore the fact that graduates false attitude to jobs leads them in trouble of finding jobs. They often expect too much from themsel

52、ves and stick to the view that the city is the only ideal place where they can make a hit.4 梁麗麗梁麗麗 Facing the job market pressure and the existing problems in universities, we should take some effective measures to build up a life attitude that is right for us.The main topic from above reflects some

53、 problems hidden in the university, of which the key problems are that the tuition is too high and the knowledge learned by graduates isnt practical enough. Although the system of education should be to blame, graduates have their faults. Their expectation for jobs is too high, so they want to stay

54、only林慧明林慧明 in big cities. Whats more, they cant judge themselves correctly when they face the facts. Considering all the above, therefore, we must take measures to deal with the problems. For one thing, the government should reform the system of university education and offer more information about

55、jobs to graduates. For another, graduates should practise more before they go into the society and learn more practical skills. Above all, graduates should have a positive attitude to finding a job.How to deal with anger1 許多人容易生氣許多人容易生氣,專家提醒專家提醒,生氣危害生氣危害 健康健康2 如何有效地控制或減輕憤怒情緒如何有效地控制或減輕憤怒情緒3 我的看法我的看法詞

56、匯詞匯1 很多人容易生氣很多人容易生氣2 生氣危害健康生氣危害健康get angry easilyIt is easy for many people to be angry Anger is harmful to health. Being angry does harm damage to health. Being angry has ill effects on health. Too much anger is bad for health.3 生氣生氣 adj. & n.4 聽音樂(lè)聽音樂(lè)5 發(fā)脾氣發(fā)脾氣 angry & anger listen to music l

57、ose ones temper1 There is no doubt that many people get angry easily when they come across some trouble. It is common that many people will be angry when coming across something unhappy or unexpected.2 As the doctor reminds, anger contributes to bad health.3 However, they dont realize that not only

58、does anger prevent them from enjoying life, but it also does harm to their health, as the expert warns. 4 How to reduce the angry emotion has become a big concern in our daily life. How to control or release the anger efficiently has become a problem people focus on. 5 We can get over anger in many

59、ways. Doing sports such as running, swimming and playing basketball are of great help for us to relieve ourselves.6 What everyone needs to do is to be calm. Face the problem calmly and dont do any violent behavior because its of no use.7 Thinking of something that will make you feel comfortable is a

60、 practical way.8 In my opinion, a close friend is the best one that we can share our emotion with.9 listening to some soft music, speaking your bad mood out loudly to your friends , all these actions will help you leave the anger behind.范文范文:概括概括( 李韻瑩李韻瑩)The article aims to reflect the fact that anger is alway