2020-2021年中考英語書面表達(dá)試題和答案

1、2020-2021年中考英語書面表達(dá)試題和答案一、中考英語書面表達(dá)(含答案詳細(xì)解析)1 .書面表達(dá)隨著電子時(shí)代的到來，西方文化如潮水般涌來，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。有人認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課(set up traditional culture classes ),但也有人認(rèn)為沒有必要。假如你是 Mike,請(qǐng)你用英語寫一封郵件，給你校英文報(bào)投稿寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右，談?wù)勀銓?duì)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more

2、about, spread, developYour suggestionDear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays.Yours, Mike【答案】Dear editor,As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the

3、 rapiddevelopment of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it s necessary for schools toset up traditional culture classes.First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As C hinese, we shouldn t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional cultu

4、re classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schoo

5、ls. Let schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours, Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍?duì)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本 文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系 表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： Chinese traditional culture is facing , it s necessary for schools to, we shouldn t, They can raise , it is of great importance to

6、 等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注 意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化面對(duì)的問題，接下來介紹我認(rèn)為開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的必要性的原因，最后號(hào)召更多的學(xué)校開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課。此處becauseof, in one s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call。解這些詞組 的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。2 .安全對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語小短 文。提示：1.體育鍛煉3 .上下樓梯4 .交朋結(jié)友

7、5 .食品衛(wèi)生要求：1.語句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容連貫；2 .短文可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點(diǎn)。3 .詞數(shù)：80100詞。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to usstudents.【答案】 Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially importantto us students. First, we shou

8、ld take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports.Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident.Besides, we should be friendly and get on well

9、 with others, don t quarrel or even fight. Last butnot least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, its important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示，可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，注意圍繞要點(diǎn) 組織材料，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。寫作

10、中注 意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。3.臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是Moonlight小組的組長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員Tommy進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫一份素質(zhì)報(bào)告.NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認(rèn)為看書有很多好處（請(qǐng)列舉2個(gè)好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉一例）。今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠.You

11、r suggestions(根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提2點(diǎn)建議)要求：1、表達(dá)清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；2、要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3、詞數(shù)：100詞左右；4、不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his fri

12、ends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traf

13、fic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year.However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn t have enough sleep.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. I t s better for him to manage his time

14、wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。這篇 作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來寫。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動(dòng)

15、形式的使用，如 He was rewarded by our school this year.o寫作時(shí)注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。短文注意到了長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合，并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達(dá)的連貫。如 He is always ready to help others. He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、 He is good at running. He won the first place in our school

16、sports meeting this year. 等。4.書面表達(dá)共享單車(shared bikes)在蘇州投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國(guó)民素質(zhì)的照妖鏡，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)。1.隨處可見，出行方便諸多優(yōu)勢(shì)2 .有益健康，3 .費(fèi)用不圖，減少污染 負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問題1 .未及時(shí)歸還2 .占道擋路你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為（考生自擬，至少2點(diǎn)）注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須包括表格中所有提示內(nèi)容，要求語句通順，意思連貫。2.表格中 你的觀點(diǎn)”一欄用23句話展開合理想象。

17、作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that

18、 its easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people cant return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shar

19、ed bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, its a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)投稿，談一談自己對(duì)共享單車的看法。題 目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢(shì)；存在的問題 以及你自己對(duì)這件事情的看法。前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達(dá)， 而自己的觀

20、點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達(dá)出來，要求至少兩點(diǎn)。通 過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或 者三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段或前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容合到一段。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不 同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，改變文 章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文 章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成 了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第三段介紹了一 些問題；最后一段作者提出了自

21、己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層 次性。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，語法 規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式富于變化。例如 They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us toget around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so litt

22、le that we can afford it. 這幾個(gè)長(zhǎng) 句；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如 Also, What s more, But, sometimes, After a博 等。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達(dá)流暢。5中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化源遠(yuǎn)流長(zhǎng)，代代相傳。近期各校都在開展學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化活動(dòng)。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化”為題征文，請(qǐng)你用英文寫一篇報(bào)道，介紹你校上周舉辦的 “講中國(guó)成語故事”活動(dòng)并談?wù)勀愕氖斋@與感受。提示詞語：Chinese idioms, story, collect, share,learn from, acient提示問題： What did you d

23、o during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did youlearn from the activity? What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “ Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collectedlots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many s

24、tudents, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. Welearned alot from our teacher.I didots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. Wha

25、t more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity. 【解析】【詳解】1 . 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。2 .例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱來敘述講成語故事活動(dòng)；因?yàn)榛顒?dòng)已經(jīng)舉辦，所以時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)；對(duì)參加活動(dòng)的過程描寫完整且條理清晰。3 .高分亮點(diǎn)：短語： in order to ， take part in ， lots

26、of， learn from ， in the process of， What s more， have a good time 。句型：被動(dòng)句型。6 2019 年 2 月 20 日，中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體“時(shí)代楷模”稱號(hào)。時(shí)代楷模充分體現(xiàn) “愛國(guó)、敬業(yè)、誠(chéng)信、友善”的價(jià)值準(zhǔn)則。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“向時(shí)代楷模學(xué)習(xí)”為主題的英語征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋觯约斑@樣做的意義。提示詞語：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示問題： What should you do in your dailylif

27、e? Whysdoo? you doAs a middle student, I can do alot tolearn from our role models.【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall res

28、pect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫，寫作時(shí)承接短文開 頭，具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例

29、文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式，時(shí)態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn) 在時(shí)，描述具體怎么做時(shí)，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語： protect the environment ; pick up the rubbish ； behave well; be kind to sb ; more and more beautiful 。句型： By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful ； we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so

30、 on。7.隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變，購(gòu)物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。 網(wǎng)購(gòu)”已成為一種時(shí)尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)群體中。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage)1.不需要出門；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁擠、勞累2.價(jià)格通常比較便宜3.可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage)1.只看到圖片， 看/、到商品本身2.容易購(gòu)買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購(gòu) shopping online; 商品 goods;導(dǎo)致 cause注意：1.所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2 .文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱；3

31、 .詞數(shù)：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【答案】 With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It hasbecome fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just wit

32、h the click of a mouse, you can buy what you interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its dis

33、advantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it s very easy for you to buy goods that aren t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That s a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講

34、述網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如convenient ， disadvantage， ingood quality ， figure out ， have the chance to do ， be attacked by， of course， take care of 等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面

35、表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符 合要求。 構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給 出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹?心突出、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞 數(shù)是否符合

36、要求等。8 .假設(shè)彳是Beth,前段時(shí)間曾向英語?？端鸵黄}為My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短詩。近日，又至畢業(yè)季，師生們忙著互致臨別贈(zèng)言。為此，編輯部策劃開“ A Letter to MyTeacher 專欄，邀請(qǐng)你以信件的形式重新投稿。短詩如下： ”My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try, She leads us to a world of why

37、.We all respect and admire her.注意事項(xiàng)：1 . 稿件內(nèi)容須根據(jù)短詩展開合理想象，不得抄寫短詩原文：2 .要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合情境。3 .詞數(shù)在 70 個(gè)左右，稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)：4 .稿件必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上?！敬鸢浮緿ear Editorial Office,I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher She is in her forties Her small round

38、 glasses make her look smart She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours She is kind and helpful ， too She always helps us with our study She loves jogging， so she looks healthy To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001 She has also decided to donate her bo

39、dy for medical research after her death I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular TeacherI hope that you agree with me Yours sincerely， Beth, 【解析】 【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher專欄，邀請(qǐng)你以信件的形

40、式重新投稿。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正 確無誤。 【點(diǎn)睛】 點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每 個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊

41、扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、 段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文 章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9 書面表達(dá)假如你是英語俱樂部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學(xué)們網(wǎng)購(gòu)的英文書籍。俱樂部的同學(xué)們很喜歡網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書這種便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流讀書后的感受。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息, 給 Angel 寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂部的活動(dòng)情況，并說說網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書的好處。寫作要點(diǎn)：1 表達(dá)收到圖書后的喜悅與感激之情

42、。2 介紹活動(dòng)的情況：（ l ）上周五，俱樂部成員們一起讀英文書。（ 2）本周五的下午3 點(diǎn)，大家將共同交流讀書的體會(huì)。（ 3）同學(xué)們將在下個(gè)月網(wǎng)購(gòu)其他的英文書。3 說一說網(wǎng)上購(gòu)書有什么好處。寫作要求：1 不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3 字跡工整、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4 至少 80 詞。 Dear Angel,How are you doing?Best wishes!Yours, Cathy 【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I m writing to tell you tharet cweeived t

43、he books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy 。t go fromLast Friday， we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of

44、buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yo

45、urs, Cathy 【解析】 【詳解】 本文屬于材料作文，向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會(huì)的活動(dòng)，并且告訴外教同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在喜 歡網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書并闡述網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書的好處。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to,be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand.on the other hand, from to 以及 we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room 中 which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫