評(píng)高級(jí)模擬上課新目標(biāo)初三英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作課課件

1、 Describe the picture She is used to using a smart-phone before going to bed every day. She uses a smart-phone before going to bed. 智能手機(jī)智能手機(jī) before going to bed Danger be bad for 傷身體傷身體 描述圖片描述圖片 Describe the picture Many people use smart-phones when they cross the street. Many people use smart-phone

2、s when they ride bikesdrive a carwalk. cause traffic accidents 1.eat with family eat with family Describe the picture Some people use smart-phones when they eat with family. Some people use smart-phones. They eat with family. Danger influence the relationship with Opinions 1.好好利用手機(jī)。（make good use of

3、） 2.面對(duì)面的交流勝過(guò)網(wǎng)上交流。 （ face-to-face conversation） Structures: In my opinion I think/believe Wed better make good use of smart-phones. Face-to-face conversation is better than chatting online. We can use them at proper time and proper situations 小組討論發(fā)表你們的觀點(diǎn)：小組討論發(fā)表你們的觀點(diǎn)： (firstly, secondly, besides, what

4、s more, finally On the one hand, on the other hand not onlybut also) （2015，煙臺(tái)）隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，智能手機(jī)（，煙臺(tái)）隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，智能手機(jī)（smart-phone）已）已 被廣泛使用。我們身邊的被廣泛使用。我們身邊的“低頭族低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖隨處可見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖 中所示，結(jié)合表格所提供的信息中所示，結(jié)合表格所提供的信息,以以“Refuse to be phubbers”寫(xiě)寫(xiě) 一篇一篇120詞左右的短文。詞左右的短文。 要求：1. 短文須包含所有信息，語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫,可適當(dāng) 發(fā)揮；2. 題

5、目與開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：1. eat with family 2. cause traffic accidents 3. face-to-face conversation 4. make good use of Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. _ _ _ _ _ _ 小組討論，完成以下任務(wù)小組討論，完成以下任務(wù) 1.1.認(rèn)真審題，

6、認(rèn)真審題， 理清思路。理清思路。 2.2.列出提綱，初步成形。列出提綱，初步成形。 本篇文章應(yīng)分為幾段，每段都寫(xiě)什么？本篇文章應(yīng)分為幾段，每段都寫(xiě)什么？ 應(yīng)選用哪種時(shí)態(tài)？第幾人稱？應(yīng)選用哪種時(shí)態(tài)？第幾人稱？ 需要用到哪些句式結(jié)構(gòu)？需要用到哪些句式結(jié)構(gòu)？ （2015，煙臺(tái)）隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，智能手機(jī)（，煙臺(tái)）隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，智能手機(jī)（smart-phone）已）已 被廣泛使用。我們身邊的被廣泛使用。我們身邊的“低頭族低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖隨處可見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖 中所示，結(jié)合表格所提供的信息中所示，結(jié)合表格所提供的信息,以以“Refuse to be phubbers”寫(xiě)寫(xiě) 一

7、篇一篇120詞左右的短文。詞左右的短文。 現(xiàn)現(xiàn) 象象 弊弊 端端 觀觀 點(diǎn)點(diǎn) 選出每段主題句： 1.In my opinion, we should learn to use our smart-phones properly, and we should refuse to be phubbers 2. With the development of the Internet, smart- phones are widely used among people. 3.Being phubbers has some disadvantages. . 1.現(xiàn)象現(xiàn)象 2.弊端弊端 3.觀點(diǎn)觀點(diǎn)

8、幾點(diǎn)建議：幾點(diǎn)建議： Dont eat fast. Dont eat, fast! I love China. I love china(瓷器瓷器). I very like English.() I like English very much. () He is very young. He knows a lot. ( Good! ) He knows a lot although he is very young. ( Better! ) 1.1.注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)和字母大小寫(xiě)注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)和字母大小寫(xiě). . 2.2.注意句子的結(jié)構(gòu)正確。注意句子的結(jié)構(gòu)正確。 3.3.注意遣詞造句，爭(zhēng)取文采。注意遣詞造

9、句，爭(zhēng)取文采。 Your opinions (1.make good use of 2.face-to-face conversation, ) 現(xiàn)象現(xiàn)象Phenomenon (1.eat with family 2.get together with friends 3.be busy doing cross the street） Disadvantages In my opinion, We shouldWed better I think/believe 4.the relationship with 5.cause traffic accidents 6.be bad for/get

10、 in the way of Exchange your article with your partner , then underline the beautiful sentences and circle the mistakes. 1.用最熟悉、最有把握的句型，短語(yǔ)。用最熟悉、最有把握的句型，短語(yǔ)。 2.用用英語(yǔ)思維英語(yǔ)思維來(lái)表達(dá)。來(lái)表達(dá)。 3.語(yǔ)句要通順，層次要清楚，上下連貫很重語(yǔ)句要通順，層次要清楚，上下連貫很重 要。要。 Some advice for you! Put down the phones, give more time to our families . Homework A組：繼續(xù)改寫(xiě)本節(jié)課作文，使它更加完美。組：繼續(xù)改