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1、短文改錯專練（一）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文， 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作 文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的 增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計分。AMarch 29th,Dear Diary,I m writing this at my room. Its almost midnight and I have to

2、getting up earlytomorrow, but I can t sleep. I m thinking about my future! Every day, my parents asks me, “ What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don t know! Mymom always says, “ Be a doctor! ” And she doesn t tuon dbe ras tdanocdt or, you have to study for a long, long time and t

3、hats not her idea of fun. Also I m reat biology at the school. My dad says,“ Be a pilot! ” Is h hea ctrea zy? He knew Iflying!Now I m getting tiring, so I m going to bed. I can think about my future in bed. Iget my best ideas when I m lain down.BI have known my friend Rebecca for a long time. We fir

4、stly met at a friend birthday party five years before. We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place. We listened to the music together and soon became best friends. Three years ago, Rebecca s parents invited me go on holidaywith them. It is great. We spe

5、nt three wonderful weeks in a little cottage. Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach. We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs. Last year, Rebecca s father changed her job, and they moved to other town.Since then we haven t seen each other very much, but weve talked in the phon

6、e andwe ve written emails to each other.CDear Joe,How are you? Thanks to your post good to know when you re OK. I ve got news too. I m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a ffrrioemnd school. We re going to stay on a farm with four days! We re going to look after theanimals and doi

7、ng some horser-iding. I m sure I ll love it. You know how crazy I am about the animals! I want to learn all about the cows or the horses. I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too. Well, right now I m going to finishhomework lots to do before the holiday! I ll write to you when I

8、 get back to tellingyou about my holiday.Yours,NadiaDPeople had always been interested in bees. This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make. In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years. In the more recently past, people were interested in th

9、e way bees made honey. They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard. Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees. In English, for example, we talk with a“ busy bee ” . Now scientists has a new reason tobe interested in bees. They have discovered that bees able to

10、communicate with each other. Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.EYesterday afternoon, I took the No. 6 bus to go home. It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones. Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stopthat I should g

11、et off, so I got off the bus in hurry. When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus. My ID card and ten books were in the bag. I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help. Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag. I wanted to thank the pe

12、rson who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn t left his name. How a good man!FI read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today. According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong

13、way. He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification. Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or describedt heir progress like“ very successful. ” The reason so much failedwas tha

14、t they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way.They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the“ bad things ” what wouldhappen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.GLast weekends, I went shopping by myself. It was a sunny day and I feel ver

15、y happy. When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus. Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop. Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room. I had to wait the next bus. Suddenly, it started to rain. I had no choice but to call a taxi. Half way thro

16、ugh the journey, the taxi was broke down. I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by. Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain. What an unlucky day!HMy name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor. I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going. I enjoy serving others. Additionally, I ha

17、ve vary interests. I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer. I am also a good listener and be alwaysopen to different opinions. I am confident that I can do the job good. Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve thei

18、r studies. For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up. Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students. Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax. I believe I am the right person to this post.答案A1. at my room.at in2. have to getting .gett

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27、for短文改錯專練（二）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文， 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作 文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的 增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計分。ADear Sarah,I m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week. I m re

28、ally sI know we said 8:30, and I would ve gotten here on time if everything eh adn t go wrongly. I was late because my watch broke and I didn t know what the time it was. So you see, I would ve arrived on time if my watch hadnt broken. Then I have towalk because I d missed the bus. And then I fell o

29、ver and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing. Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late. I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone. Anyway, I hope you aren t too angrier with me. Hope to hear you soon.Yours,JackBToday my classmate and I

30、went to a farm for a trip. I get up at six o clock aset off by bus. On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked. We all had good time. Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome. After we were shown around the big farm, they beg

31、an to plant trees. It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time. Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air. Finally, we went home at half past four. Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.B

32、oth my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad. They think that it s natural to master a foreign language in an En-gslipsehaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent. Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, tha

33、t will prepare me for abrighter future. Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn t agree with them. Hethought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners. Besides, the cost is too much for his family. In my opinions, I should continue to study in China. As long as I study hard at now,

34、I ll make great achievements in the future.DAdvertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market. It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars. But there is one serious problems with this. The information are actually very often misin

35、formation. It tells us the products benefits but hides its disadvantages.Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don t need and can t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“ Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you thewhite teeth!the advertisement tells us. And it doesnt t

36、ell us the complete truth thahealth diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.EMy grandfather had had enough of his cat. He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess. So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town. He told his friends that he was gett

37、ing so old to look after her. A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep. My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather. He took the cat

38、 outside and gave her lots of loving attention. He decided he will never give her away again.FBedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society. This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did. People who live in traditional societies has strong ties t

39、o the past. Customs and beliefs have changed very slower. They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better. Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next. Yet changes do take place. All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some period

40、s than at other. In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.GMy uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof. They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in h

41、orrible-smelling matter. Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police. After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to. It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly. The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fe

42、ll towards the ground. Then theresulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit. There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching T

43、V, playing chess, or going to cinema. But I think we d better to have more outdoor activities. Asstudents, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired. But itd idse a tgoo polay basketball, football, table tennis, goswimming, do some runnings, or eve

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53、 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的 增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計分。ADear Sandra,You ll never guess where I m writing this email. A cave! You know were onholidays in Spain. Well, we spend a few days in B

54、arcelona first. We had a good time there, though one day I didn t feel very good. I think I ate too much ice cream the day before. Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada. However, we couldn t get a hot etol o many tourists and not enough bed! Then thehotel owner said,“ Why don