初二英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作(教學(xué)課件).ppt

1、潘斌-華科同濟(jì)醫(yī)學(xué)院,初二英語(yǔ)課程,第二講：作文寫(xiě)作精講,作文寫(xiě)作的字、詞、句、段、篇,字：工整、清楚； 詞：不拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤；能適當(dāng)掌握高級(jí)詞匯； 句：不出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤；句子要逐漸使用復(fù)雜的從句句型，為文章添彩； 段：段落內(nèi)容有邏輯性； 篇：合理安排文章布局；要有邏輯與聯(lián)接；,絕對(duì)好用的替換詞,Good wonderful, excellent, gorgeous, fabulous, amazing, magnificent; Important significant, essential, necessary, carry a lot of weight; ButHowever, Sother

2、efore, hence,Primarily, Firstly, one of the most essential reasons, to stress first Secondly, above from the first point, In addition Thirdly, Last but no least, In conclusion, to make a conclusion, to summarize,舉例,For example For instance, to take .as an example, to state a fact as an vivid example

3、,經(jīng)典句型：,1、Its said that 2、No matter what/which/who/where/when/whose+從句 3、It is/was +被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分 +that (who) +剩余部分,4、It happened (chanced) that +從句=sb. Happened/chanced to do sth.= sb.did sth by chance 5、由as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定句從句/由where, when引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,6、It +謂語(yǔ)+時(shí)間段 +before +主語(yǔ) +謂語(yǔ)(before引導(dǎo)的是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句） 7、When/ So long as/ As

4、 long as/ Once +從句，+主句（從句也可放在主句之后）,8、No sooner + had +主語(yǔ) +donethan +主語(yǔ) + did 9、倍數(shù)表達(dá)句型 倍數(shù)+more than,倍數(shù)+as much as. 10、形容詞、副詞、名詞 + as/though + 主語(yǔ) +謂語(yǔ) +主句,句式多變化,要抓住英語(yǔ)高考作文得高分的”關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)”,就需要把好增加句子復(fù)雜性和使用高級(jí)詞匯這兩道關(guān)。 （1）句式要有變化。改變句子的開(kāi)頭方式，不要一味地以主語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭，接著是謂語(yǔ)，賓語(yǔ)，最后再加一個(gè)狀語(yǔ)?？梢园褷钫Z(yǔ)放在句首，或用分詞作狀語(yǔ)等。,原文 We met at the school gate

5、and went there together early in the morning. 修正 Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.,原文 The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news. 修正 Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying.,(2) 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式，要靈活運(yùn)用諸如到裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語(yǔ)從句等。 強(qiáng)調(diào)

6、句 原文 My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. 修正 My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely., 由what等引導(dǎo)的從句，此處的what相當(dāng)于中文中的“所 ”，有很強(qiáng)的概括，如： 原文 We had to stand here to catch offender. 修正 What we had to do was ( to ) stand t

7、here, trying to catch the offender., 由with或 without引導(dǎo)的短語(yǔ)。如： He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. 分詞短語(yǔ)如： Satisfied with the result, he dicided to go on with a new experiment.,倒裝句 Only in this way can we achieve our goal. Never before have I seen such a wonderful film. 省略句 If so, victory wi

8、ll be ours. You can make some changes wherever necessary., 對(duì)比，這在中文中也是常使用的方法如 Failure is not a crime, but failure to learn from failure is. When I play, I feel excited, and after it I feel relaxed.,(3) 通過(guò)分句和合句，增強(qiáng)句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。 原文 He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender. 修正 He stopp

9、ed us an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.,原文 We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. 修正 After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.,歷年上海中考題分析,2007年上海市中考寫(xiě)作題：,Write at leas

10、t 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s)”. ( 以“爸爸 / 媽媽的故事”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。) （ 注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）,我的父親母親,先中文構(gòu)思 盡量避免復(fù)雜的詞句 將中文翻譯成英文 加入適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，組成文章 注意全文用過(guò)去式寫(xiě)作,關(guān)于職業(yè)的單詞,scientist 科學(xué)家 detective偵探 fisherman 漁夫 fire fighter 消防員 journalist 新聞?dòng)浾?lawyer 律師 barber 理發(fā)師 singer歌手 en

11、gineer 工程師,worker工人 painter畫(huà)家 writer/author 作家 businessman 商人 pilot 飛行員 dentist牙醫(yī) nurse護(hù)士 accountant 會(huì)計(jì) waiter/waitess服務(wù)員 librarian圖書(shū)管理員 surgeon 外科醫(yī)生,pharmacist藥劑師 anesthetist 麻醉師 manager經(jīng)理 governor政府官員 President總統(tǒng) policeman 警察 policewoman 女警察 waiter 服務(wù)員 waitress 女服務(wù)員 driver 司機(jī)，駕駛員,真題舉例,1）A Story ab

12、out My Parent; 2) In mums family, there were seven people: mums parents, mums two brothers and two sisters and mum. When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker; 3) At that time, for lack of TV and computer, everyday after school mum along with he

13、r brothers and sisters would go home to help their mother with the housework. For example, they helped to make supper or wash clothes. Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard, she felt happy.,My mum was born in a small village. In her family, there were seven people: mums parents

14、, mums two brothers and two sisters and mum. When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker. At that time, for lack of TV and computer, everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to helped their mother with the house

15、work. For example, they help to make supper or wash clothes. Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard, she felt happy.,比較型作文寫(xiě)作,常用詞組: Prefer A to B I show my strong preference to A. Compared with A, I shed more light on B. In comparison with A, I find that B is more.,文章層次,1、開(kāi)啟段落，指出

16、自己的選擇結(jié)果。 2、列出原因，將一些可比項(xiàng)進(jìn)行比較。橫向與縱向。 3、總結(jié),開(kāi)啟段落,In facing the high school entrance examination, we have to make choices about which school to attend. Between the two choices, I will choose. The reason for that is are as following.,學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)比,南方大學(xué):學(xué)費(fèi)8000/年 招生20人 無(wú)優(yōu)惠政策 北方大學(xué):學(xué)費(fèi)5000/年 招生10人 加20分優(yōu)惠 選擇南方：1、雖然學(xué)費(fèi)貴，但是

17、招生人數(shù)比北方的多；2、自己是南方人，適合南方的生活，離家近。 選擇北方：1、學(xué)費(fèi)便宜；2、有加分政策；3、可以體驗(yàn)不同的學(xué)習(xí)生活，學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立。,如何轉(zhuǎn)折,Though the tuition is higher in the southern University, yet I prefer the ways of living here in the south. The Northern University offers an additional 20 scores. However, I still have a strong inclination to the Southern

18、University.,如何結(jié)尾,Concerning the reasons above, I would not hesitate to choose. In conclusion, concerning the convenience, the tuition and the other reasons, I will choose. In all, to conclude, to put all the reason together,上海2002年的中考英語(yǔ)作文,根據(jù)英文提示，以“我的心愛(ài)之物”為題寫(xiě)話，不少于50個(gè)詞。內(nèi)容必須包括英文提示中的3項(xiàng)要求，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格： 題目：My Favorite Thing(s) What the th