高考英語求助信公開課課件.ppt

Howtowritealetterforhelp?,Lead-in,WhatdidHarryPottersaywhenheaskedforhelp?,Beforewriting:假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，詢問他是否可以接機。信中需涉及如下內(nèi)容：1.航班號：CA9852.到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:303.李明的外貌特征4.李華托李明帶了一副Peter想要的中國畫給他注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?_Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua,1.我是李華。2.我寫信告訴你3.我叔叔李明將去你的城市開會。4.你能否去接機?5.航班號是CA985(flightnumber)6.他8月6日上午11：30到。7.李明的外貌特征8.我已經(jīng)讓叔叔帶了你想要的中國畫給你。(Chinesepainting),attendameeting,picksbupattheairport,IamLiHua.ImwritingtotellyouthatMyuncleLiMingisgoingto/willgotoyourcitytoattendaconference.Canyougotomeetmyuncleattheairport?Hewillarriveat11:30amAugust6.TheflightnumberisCA985.8.IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepainting(that/which)youwant.,請注意時態(tài)及人稱和數(shù)的統(tǒng)一,Whilewriting,Para1：Purpose:askingforhelpPara2：Body:situationPara3：Conclusion:expressyourhopeandappreciation,1.Paragraph：,2.Linkingwordsorsentences:,3.Politeness:,并列:besides,inaddition,whatsmore轉(zhuǎn)折:However,Onthecontrary,but順序:Firstofall,First/Second/Finally,Politeness:,1.Sendmethebook.2.Couldyoupleasesendmethebook?3.Ihopeyoucansendmethebookassoonaspossible.4.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsendmethebook.5.Youshouldsendmethebook.7.Iwonderifyoucouldsendmethebook.8.Wouldyoudomeafavortosendmethebook?,(IamLiHua.)ImwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingto/willgotoyourcitytoattendaconference.Wouldyoudomeafavortopickupmyuncleattheairport?Hewillarriveat11:30amAugust6andhisflightnumberisCA985.Heistallandhehaslonghair.Bytheway,IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepainting(that/which)youwant.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.,polishthepassage,plexsentences(attributiveclause,adverbialclause,nonfiniteverbandsoon)e.g.IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepainting(that/which)youwant.2.advancedvocabularye.g.:wantbefondof,3.inventsomerealisticandreasonableinformation:askyourselfsomequestionsaccordingtothepassagee.g.HowtomakePeterfindmyuncleeasily?,Iwillsendyouthepictureofmyuncle.Myunclewillweararedhatthatday.,Attention:Itsunnecessarytowritetoomuch.Ifyoucantmakeitreasonableandrealistic,dontwriteitdown.,Checkyourpassage:檢查單詞拼寫、時態(tài)語態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、標(biāo)點符號等。檢查要點是否遺漏。檢查句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否正確。估計字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。,Post-writing,Howtowriteagoodletterforhelp?,Summary,四個步驟,Step1Identifyoverallrequirementsandlistthekeypoints（審題列要點）,Step2Formapassage,Step3.Polishthepassage（成文潤色）,Conclusion:,Step4.Checkthepassage,三段法模式第一段：Purpose:Askingforhelp第二段：Body:Situation第三段：Conclusion:Expressyourappreciationandhope,常用句型：1.寫作目的：Imwritingtotellyouthat2.求助的句型：IwonderifyoucouldIfitisconvenienttoyou,wouldyouplease?Wouldyoudomeafavorto?3.表達(dá)期待或謝意。Lookingforwardto(receiving)yourearlyreply.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.,(IamLiHua.)ImwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingto/willgotoyourcitytoattendaconference.Wouldyoudomeafavortopickupmyuncleattheairport?Hewillarriveat11:30amAugust6andhisflightnumberisCA985.Heistallandhehaslonghair.Bytheway,IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChine