2019年高中英語Module3AdventureinliteratureandthecinemaSectionⅤWriting—影評教案外研版.docx

Section Writing 影評一般來說，影評屬于夾敘夾議的議論文。這種文體主要以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)介紹劇情內(nèi)容及發(fā)表自己的看法。人稱通常采用第一、第三人稱。一、基本結(jié)構(gòu)影視評論適宜用“三段式”寫法。第一段：背景簡介(setting)。對電影的名稱、特點、導(dǎo)演等作簡單介紹。第二段：情節(jié)概述(main plot of the film)。包括主要演員及故事梗概。電影情節(jié)介紹不宜太長，只需把自己要評論的內(nèi)容突出即可。第三段：觀后評論(making comments/reviews in some way)?？梢赃x擇性地從不同角度對電影的主題、情節(jié)、人物形象的塑造、語言風(fēng)格、演員的演技、畫面特點及拍攝理念等方面有針對性地發(fā)表個人看法，但不要面面俱到。最后對電影進行總體評價。二、增分佳句(一)背景及內(nèi)容介紹1The film was directed by .2The film tells us a real story.3The film .directed by .is a story about .4The film .is set in .5The film is a love (romantic/moving) story.(二)進行評論1對影片的積極評價This is a very touching film, a mustsee. .give an amazing performance in the film.My favorite part of the film is .2對影片的消極評價However, many people have complained that the film is too .Another common complaint is that the film .Im disappointed with the film because .3總結(jié)性評價或感想I think it is well worth watching.It is a wonderful/successful/moving/touching film.From the simple but moving story, Ive got a lot.題目要求好萊塢電影阿凡達(dá)(Avatar)于2010年在中國大陸上映。請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，介紹該電影的有關(guān)情況及你的感想。短文必須包括以下信息：1阿凡達(dá)在中國大陸上映時，超過了泰坦尼克號(Titanic)，創(chuàng)票房(boxoffice)新紀(jì)錄。2電影的拍攝歷時五年多，是最昂貴的電影之一。贏得了金球獎(Golden Globe)，獲得了九項奧斯卡提名(an Oscar nomination)。3該電影以2154年為背景，講述了一個殘疾(disabled)軍人被派往潘多拉星球(Pandora)去說服那里的人們讓地球人在他們的祖國開采自然資源的故事。4你的感想注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第一步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵一、審題1確定體裁：本文為影視評論，屬于議論文；2確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應(yīng)為第一人稱；3確定時態(tài)：寫影評通常用一般現(xiàn)在時。二、構(gòu)思第一部分，上映時的情況。第二部分，拍攝及獲獎情況和電影簡介。第三部分，自己的感受。第二步：核心詞匯想周全1at_that_time在當(dāng)時2more_than 多于；不僅僅3evident/obvious 明顯的4accompany_with 與同時發(fā)生5be_set_in 以為背景6try_to_persuade 試圖說服7live_in_harmony_ 和睦相處8instead_of 而不是第三步：由詞擴句雛形現(xiàn)1阿凡達(dá)于2010年在大陸上映。(被動語態(tài))Avatar was shown on the Chinese mainland in 2010.2它超過了泰坦尼克號，創(chuàng)造了當(dāng)時的票房新紀(jì)錄。(that定語從句；現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語)It_broke_the_record_that_was_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.3該電影拍攝歷時五年多，很顯然是最昂貴的電影之一。(more than; it作形式主語)It_took_more_than_five_years_to_make_the_film_and_it_is_evident_that_its_one_of_the_most_expensive_films.4它贏得了金球獎，并獲得了九項奧斯卡提名。(accompany)It_won_a_Golden_Globe_accompanied_with_nine_Oscar_nominations.5該電影以2154年為背景。The_film_is_set_in_2154.6該電影講述了一個殘疾軍人被派往潘多拉星球的故事。(who引導(dǎo)定語從句)The_film_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora.7他試圖說服那里的人們讓地球人在他們的祖國開采自然資源。He_tried_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_natural_resources.8在我看來，這是最成功的電影之一。In_my_opinion,_this_is_one_of_the_most_successful_films.9從這部電影中，我了解到不同種族的人們應(yīng)該互相尊重、和諧相處而不是兵戎相見。(that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)From_it,_I_learn_that_different_races_should_respect_each_other_and_live_in_harmony_instead_of_being_at_war.第四步：句式升級造亮點1用定語從句及現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語改寫句1和句2Avatar,_which_was_shown_on_the_Chinese_mainland_in_2010,_broke_the_record_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.2用不定式作目的狀語連接句6和句7The_film_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora_to_try_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_natural_resources.第五步：過渡銜接聯(lián)成篇A_Hollywood_film,_Avatar,_which_was_shown_on_the_Chinese_mainland_in_2010,_broke_the_record_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.It_took_more_than_five_years_to_make_the_film_and_it_is_evident_that_its_one_of_the_most_expensive_films._It_won_a_Golden_Globe_accompanied_with_nine_Oscar_nominations._The_film_is_set_in_2154_and_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora_to_try_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_natural